Date: 22 Sep 2023 5:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
I am truly sad to see these stories end. I loved both of them and I feel like part of my life will be different without reading them every day! I'm going to read A Hard Day's Night next. Loved the STORM series too by the way. LOVE YOU! Reading on...
Date: 21 Sep 2023 4:44 PM Title: Instructions Not Included
Again this is wonderful!
Date: 21 Sep 2023 8:02 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
I thought she was preggers! I know everything will work out. CC is definitely pure evil, but very cute doing it! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!
Date: 20 Sep 2023 7:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
My goodness! That one was fun. He shoulda let Bella kick all their butts! She probably could have. Loved this chapter. I thought maybe Edward would invite Eric to check out Upstate and his practice to get away from Jersey. Just a thought. Reading on...
Date: 17 Sep 2023 8:00 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
Wow! I don't necessarily think what EJ did to Roni was the correct way to handle the situation, but I get that he was really hurt and she manipulated Cecelia into hurting EJ for her own purposes. She did kinda deserve what she got - cruel and unusual punishment. He was correct in saying that he was always respectful with Roni and treated her really well-even tried and wanted to love her. You can't force that. You either love someone or you don't, it's that simple. Roni was very cruel to BOTH Cecelia and EJ and I have to say that I really don't blame him. Roni made him feel cheap which is something he never did to her. He is obviously tired of being "THE WHORE" around town. I think he really wants to find someone he can love, and Cecelia has that potential. I just hope Roni didn't ruin their chances. True colors can be UGLY. GREAT CHAPTER - very real. Some of your reviewers seem to think that the women are just victims and the men are heartless and whores. These girls are immature bitches.The act sweet and then show their true colors. Those boys have ALWAYS been on the level with the girls they are with - no deceit there, but with Roni, SHE was deceitful and cruel. These women (Sheila, Debbie, Roni) are NOT victims. They are just as much whores as those boys and they as JUST as responsible for their own behavior> I'm so sick of women taking the girls' side no matter what, just because they are women! Women can be horrible too- case and point- RONI!
Date: 17 Sep 2023 5:20 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
What are you talking about? That chapter wasn't boring at all. It was actually great perfect filler chapter. Even if it's a set up for the next ones still loving the story after all these chapters and looking forward to more.
Date: 15 Sep 2023 8:05 PM Title: Instructions Not Included
In 1995 I was raising my first child and working on my second literally bun in the oven at the time. You did great as far as the references go and once again great chapter I'm glad the kids aren't being rude to Jake because they really have no reason to even if they know what they know about his past everyone deserves a second chance.
Date: 14 Sep 2023 5:50 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
Wow! That was an unexpected twist. I have to admit I'm really surprised at EJ and his reaction. I truly thought he was in love with Roni and just didn't really know it. I hope Jake's change is genuine too. If he hurts them again that will not be cool, but then again he would go back to prison if he did. Very emotional chapter - I cried a lot reading it.
Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2023 4:58 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
Great Chapter, LOVE Natalie, LOVE drunk CC, GREAT song choices! Reading on...
Date: 08 Sep 2023 7:22 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
WOW! That was the BEST worst Thanksgiving I've ever heard of. I enjoyed that immensely. Can't wait to see what's next! Best line of the night-- "So where are we spending Christmas?" Gotta love CC!
Date: 07 Sep 2023 7:01 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
NO I did not enjoy that! What a silly question! I cried nearly the WHOLE chapter! Thank God that CC is ok. Bella is gonna be VERY upset when shen finds out that he woke up and she wasn't there for him. Still loving this story, just a bit traumatized right this second! VERY REAL!
Date: 07 Sep 2023 5:23 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
I actually DO feel bad for CC, but as a parent I also understand Edward's frustration. But at the same time Edward didn't even bother to get any other persons side of the story.
Date: 06 Sep 2023 6:54 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
Nothing you write sucks! Don't ever say that or think it. Your work is so wonderful. It makes me laugh and cry and feel things I don't get to feel normally. I love the stories and I love this chapter. I love the characters.
Date: 05 Sep 2023 8:43 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
Now THAT was a great chapter. The parents betting on which kids get some! That was hilarious!! Can't wait to find out the results!!
Date: 05 Sep 2023 6:03 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
You are right this chapter was not funny, but it was REAL. Real people having real reactions to real situations. Most importantly, a family acting like a family should be with each other. CC was definitely disrespectful, but it was handled like humans handle things, imperfectly, but with great care. Excellent chapter it felt very real. It was very well written, very well executed.
Date: 05 Sep 2023 4:20 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
So cute! GREAT CHAPTER! I was born in Brooklyn, (live on East 54th street) but was moved away at the age of 4! :( unfortunately I don't think I have much Brooklyn left in me. Maybe just attitude.
Date: 03 Sep 2023 6:57 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
I thought this chapter was GREAT! Plenty funny and enlightening in regards to EJ. Also I LOVED the Twilight Saga references. And I LOVE Debbie even for EJ. Seems he was hit with the Italian Lightening Bolt!(Colpo di fulmine) I hope he doesn't blow it!
Date: 30 Aug 2023 8:56 AM Title: The Story Of Us
OK love al even more now - he's a good guy. Not upset with Tanya, she's VERY hurt. She'll work it out. Hopefully James feels like crap and makes it up to her. And by the way, 5 years is WAY to short to be getting bored with his sex life. He's a douche nozzle.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2023 7:55 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Wow, I REALLY enjoyed that chapter way more than I anticipated. Getting to hear hisPOV was refreshing and it made me like him a lot more than I did. I mistook him for a creepy dude who was trying to steal Bella from Edward (even though I knew that could never happen), but now I see him as a really nice kid whom Edward and Bella could probably be friends with. I have to admit I'm VERY disappointed with James though. It's obvious that he still has feelings for Bella and always did and now he feels it's ok to cheat (even if it's an open relationship, it's fairly clearly defined) and if he'll cheat on his wife, who's to say he won't make another play for Bella, right? It's fair to assume so now. LOVE THIS STORY - can't wait for more and the next one. Good call on the name change too. This name has better 'attraction" than the name of the hospital where they work, especially since Bella only worked there for a couple of chapters.
Date: 15 May 2023 7:24 PM Title: Friends with Benefits
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Great story. I couldn't stop reading. A shirked all my regular duties until I finish this!
Date: 14 May 2023 6:09 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Your writing is lovely, as well as your characters. I'm so sorry someone insulted/bashed you or them. They suck and they're wrong. You're great 😉
Date: 14 May 2023 6:09 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Your writing is lovely, as well as your characters. I'm so sorry someone insulted/bashed you or them. They suck and they're wrong. You're great 😉
Date: 30 Mar 2023 11:02 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 30 Mar 2023 9:02 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 30 Mar 2023 6:10 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it!
Date: 29 Mar 2023 2:21 PM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 29 Mar 2023 10:59 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 29 Mar 2023 9:46 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 28 Mar 2023 8:06 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 28 Mar 2023 7:15 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 28 Mar 2023 5:49 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 12:51 PM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 8:42 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it! I love Esme!
Date: 26 Mar 2023 8:39 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:31 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it! I really don't like Rosalie! Poor Emmett!
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:26 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:22 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:18 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:14 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:10 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 7:02 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:56 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:52 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:30 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:27 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:24 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:20 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:16 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:12 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:09 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:05 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 5:45 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 5:42 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 5:38 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 5:35 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 26 Mar 2023 5:34 AM Title: Friends with Benefits
Loved it
Date: 16 Mar 2023 10:03 AM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 15 Mar 2023 11:19 AM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 15 Mar 2023 10:55 AM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 15 Mar 2023 10:27 AM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 14 Mar 2023 12:25 AM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2023 11:57 PM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2023 11:43 PM Title: La Cantante
Loved it
Date: 05 Dec 2022 5:52 AM Title: A Fresh Start
Loved this story immensely! Starting the Next Chapter right now!! Love ALL of your work.
Date: 28 Nov 2022 5:23 AM Title: A Fresh Start
I want one too!
Date: 20 Oct 2022 3:35 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor
Um... Tyler and Eric live in San Fran... will we be running into them? Ugh!
Date: 16 Oct 2022 11:32 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor
Yes! Charlie IS awesome in this story! I love him too.
Date: 16 Oct 2022 6:44 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor
I know you kinda moved away from the subject and our couple hasn't talked about it yet, but I'm worried about this Jimmy character. Could he be Alice's James. I know he's supposed to be in jail, but people get out early for good behavior. He was way to interested in the resort. Is he gonna stalk Alice there and is Emmett and Jasper gonna kick his ever lovin' ass? Just wonderin'!!
Date: 16 Oct 2022 6:43 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor
I know you kinda moved away from the subject and our couple hasn't talked about it yet, but I'm worried about this Jimmy character. Could he be Alice's James. I know he's supposed to be in jail, but people get out early for good behavior. He was way to interested in the resort. Is he gonna stalk Alice there and is Emmett and Jasper gonna kick his ever lovin' ass? Just wonderin'!!
Date: 16 Oct 2022 6:43 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor
I know you kinda moved away from the subject and our couple hasn't talked about it yet, but I'm worried about this Jimmy character. Could he be Alice's James. I know he's supposed to be in jail, but people get out early for good behavior. He was way to interested in the resort. Is he gonna stalk Alice there and is Emmett and Jasper gonna kick his ever lovin' ass? Just wonderin'!!
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:38 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:17 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:07 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2022 4:52 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 09 Sep 2022 8:41 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 10:32 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:46 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:51 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 24 Aug 2022 9:47 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it
Date: 24 Aug 2022 9:07 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it
Date: 24 Aug 2022 8:41 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it
Date: 24 Aug 2022 8:07 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 24 Aug 2022 7:33 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it! Poor Alice!
Date: 20 Jan 2022 11:28 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it
Date: 20 Jan 2022 10:00 PM Title: Surviving the Teenage Dream
Loved it