Date: 06 Jan 2019 11:57 PM Title: Judas's apprentice
I’m really not trying to be mean here, but do you speak english as a second language? There are so many grammatical errors and missed pronouns it was hard to read. I highly recommend a beta or a re-edit if you plan to continue this. The basic idea of the story has merit.
Thank you for your comment and reading.
I'm sorry for the mistakes, I'm not so good in English. It's not my native language, and I have no one to check it out. I will be glad, if you have time, you will write me mistakes and how to correct them.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 4:03 AM Title: An Original Family Christmas
Such an amazing story! Though a huge fan of Jasper and Emmett, I can also understand why you went in the direction you did. It would've made no sense for her to be compelled and them to allow it if they were on her side. I also loved the Mikaelson's family dynamic, it didn't change drastically just shifted more towards how they were before only now they're vampires.
Date: 02 Jul 2015 2:41 AM Title: Bad Medicine
Oh damn. Loved it! Bella leaving Edward is always an AU that I LOVE :)
Jane cowering down to Crowley and calling him sir was awesome! Dean, sigh, what can I say but damn that boy is awesome. Bella needs a real man like that.
Can't wait to see how Dean deals with the rest of the cold ones and for him and Bella to formally meet :)
Date: 18 Mar 2015 6:45 AM Title: An Original Family Christmas
aawwww that was a very sweet ending and it sucks that james victoria and laurent were here friends and he had them killed! but i like very much how the twilight version was all killed off to edwards twisted mind
Date: 17 Mar 2015 8:24 PM Title: Thirsty for Your Love
I can't wait for the sequel. I really liked this story. I love Damon and Bella together in this story. It was nice to see Bella with a backbone. I'll keep checking back for the sequel. This was the 1st crossover I've read and you did a great job!!