Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:25 AM Title: A Shifter's Heart
I like the story, I like where it's going. Having said that, some of the conversations seems "awkward". I think what is throwing it for me is how they refer to each other as mates when talking to each other, it feels unnatural. I can see it the first few times they speak, but it feels out of place at this point and make the interaction between the characters feel less personal.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 5:52 AM Title: Holiday Road
Interesting friendships, I actually like that for once Lauren isn't bad like she usually is in some stories, well not in yours actually, I like that you have many stories where she is actually nice to Bella, even though it was comes after she had been a bitch to her at first.
Date: 10 Jul 2015 1:04 AM Title: Hear Me
thank you so much for keeping your stories posted for us to read as many times as we can ;) i loved reading this one again and having charlie become a vampire with tanya as a mate!!! wow!!!! i hope your rl is continuing to get better and your in my prayers ;D
Date: 05 Jun 2015 5:47 PM Title: Holding Back the Years
Ugh Jake just has to try something. Surprised he didn't just order the Pack to help him. ah he wants to fight E. Moron.
EVIL CLIFFY. Glad the next chapter is there to read.
I hate Jake. He's abusive and manipulative just like he was in New Moon and Eclipse.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 5:19 PM Title: Holding Back the Years
Don't blame Beth for not wanting her father in her life. He's a jerk. Will be more of one if he tries to pull Beth under his thumb.
hmm Beth living with Leah huh? what is she up to I wonder.
awww glad they are engaged again. LOL for Alice sceming on the cave stuff. Woo Hoo for first lemony goodness for the kiddos. Happy Lemon Dance
Yey for Leah. Glad she's going to have someone. LOVE the Hobbit House. Hope Billy calling isn't Jake manipulating him.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 2:38 PM Title: Holding Back the Years
Hope Leah gets an HEA for helping support Bella. Wow Jake was a piece of work. Setting up a divorce without telling her anything. Sucks that Billy needs to be around Jake. What a wanker.
Glad the family, esp Rose, are being nice.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 1:40 PM Title: Holding Back the Years
Wow Jake is a real piece of work. Poor Charlie. Wonder what started the fight? Did bella find out about his lies? Oh wiait She mentioned a Hilary.... Jake's real imprint I assume.
Wonder how she'll be received. Think Rose will be esp nasty.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 12:41 PM Title: Well I'll be Damned
OMG! Thanks so much for all your kind words, support and love. I really did not think this story would get this much love when I first posted it. I wanna say thanks to all those who read, followed and kept up with me even though I didn't post as often as I wanted to. You all rock!
Thanks again for reading as for those follwoing Blood Trails, it's with a beta and chapter 3 is gonna be posted this weekend.
Lots of love
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:01 PM Title: Haystack
Cant wait for the sequel!!!! Hope you update and continue the sequel very soon!!!!!
The sequel is not coming soon but, definitely this year. In the mean time tomorrow I'm posting Alice and Jasper's outtake I hope you like it. :D
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:47 AM Title: Haystack
Please continue and update this story hopefully very fast and very soon!!! Please!!!!!!
Don't worry, tomorrow I'm going to post the last chapter and then the day afther tomorrow the outtake. :D
Date: 25 Feb 2015 1:28 AM Title: Well I'll be Damned
Happy that Edward and Bella had a family. If I were Bella I would have destroyed Aro and been done with him. I am sad that this story is ending. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I will miss reading about your characters.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:01 AM Title: Well I'll be Damned
I really look forward to Blood Trails, but am sorry to come to the end of this! It was such fun and so different for Bella to be a witch! I also loved the Cullen version of family planning! I suppose when you have eternity, you can really space those pregnancies out! I will say once more how much I enjoyed this story, from the intriguing title right on down the line!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:12 PM Title: Holding Back the Years
great little novellet ;) bellas' power was interesting but not what i had hoped for ;) and beth,leah and seth were cool!!! i'm not too sure on edward having a perminant hearing disabillity though but it enjoyed the story nontheless ;D
Date: 09 Dec 2014 12:28 AM Title: Well I'll be Damned
That was a lot of fun! Bella sure left Sorin and his pack better off than when they started! Her powers just continue to grow and evolve! As her aunt and mom said, she will be quite the queen of witches, and Edward a worthy consort!
Date: 21 Nov 2014 10:17 PM Title: Well I'll be Damned
Great chapter! It was a surprise that Eleazar is a protector of Danu, but it pretty much makes sense. Poor Irina, I kind of felt sorry for her, but Bella really didn't hurt her and did show her the happy future in store for her and her sisters! No need to have a confrontation with Tanya since she wasn't the one with issues!I'm going to hate to see this story end, but am looking forward to the continuation of Blood Trails!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 11:37 PM Title: Well I'll be Damned
Loved the whole thing! Too bad Bella restrained herself, I would have enjoyed seeing something slightly injurious happen to Lauren and Jessica! I look forward eagerly to Bella meeting the Denali family! See you soon, I hope!
Date: 06 Oct 2014 6:30 AM Title: Well I'll be Damned
Good for you! I couldn't kill off Charlie either so I'm thrilled there was magic to save him, and destroy Victoria! Bella sending fire inside her was really neat! Face it, it was no more than what that evil bitch deserved! I loved this chapter, as always when the good guys win!