Date: 26 Mar 2024 2:08 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
I loved when Sonny tells Damion he loves him it still makes me cry. I've read this series probably 10 times.
Date: 26 Mar 2024 12:27 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
I loved when Sonny tells Damion he loves him it still makes me cry. I've read this series probably 10 times.
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This will forever be my favorite story. 💜
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This will forever be my favorite story. 💜
Date: 03 Jan 2024 4:32 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
"She curled into a ball on my lap, the perfect bundle to throw out the window..." That's my favorite line everytime I read it...which is frequently.
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...
Thank you.
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...
Thank you.
Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:52 PM Title: Weather the Storm
"Keep my wife's name out your fucking mouth!" I stood from my seat.
Reading this line in 2023 is fucking comical🤣
Date: 23 Jul 2023 7:35 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
OK, THAT was an awesome chapter. Very fun and also important. LOVE LOVE LOVED it!
Date: 19 Jul 2023 7:37 PM Title: Riders on the Storm
I just wanted to let you know that I actually like the different POV's. It seems you worry about whether we are just wanting E/B pov, but it's really a nice change to get ALL of the characters thoughts. Be aware that your writing is VERY GOOD. You shouldn't question yourself so much. If we didn't like what you are doing then most probably wouldn't read. Unless they are anonymous shrews that just want to break you down because they're disgusting cowards and can't let you write how you want to without unnecessary harsh criticism. Don't listen to them. Listen to the true fan who loves and accepts whatever you write and enjoys it thoroughly. It's takes a lot of chutzpah to put your writing out there. Don't forget that you are way braver than those anonymous swine who try to cut you down.
Date: 17 Jul 2023 10:25 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
I have to say I was skeptical about the Sonny/Maggie arc but I'm fully on board with them after those chapters. Loving these characters.
Date: 13 Jul 2023 7:49 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
I am REALLY liking this 3rd installment. It's great to see these kids all grown up. I had a feeling about what sonny would be doing as an adult, but I have to say Damion totally surprised me and I really love him too. I am always an Edward girl, but I gotta say, in this one I'm liking Damion so so much. He's definitely my favorite character in this story. I really love Sonny too. Reading on...
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:54 PM Title: Weather the Storm
Of course, I really love every chapter you write, But I especially loved Bella, putting Esme and her place. I hope she tells Carlisle and Edward what she did, but I know that's not her personality.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:45 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:04 AM Title: Weather the Storm
This time I'm reviewing your authors note at the beginning of this chapter.
Your story is GREAT, true to mob life (as far as we know) and your Edward is great just the way he is warts and all. Bella too! If people criticize you for what you write, they SHOULDN"T READ IT!!!!! It takes a lot of guts to make yourself vulnerable to criticism when you publish your words. You write your stories the way YOU SEE FIT!!! If someone don't like it they should stop reading and SHUT UP!! I hate thinking you as a writer are upset because some bigmouth doesn't like the water thing are being written. If they don't like it maybe they should give writing a story a try and see how they fair with the critics huh?
Just to let you know, YOU ARE DOING GREAT, WONDERFUL, STUPENDOUS!!! Love all of your work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you that you are not doing it right. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE you!! I can't say it enough. Great work, even the scary, angsty parts.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 7:41 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:33 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.
Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee!
I may be in shock!
Date: 02 Jul 2023 8:43 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.
Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee!
I may be in shock!
Date: 29 Jun 2023 9:44 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I can tell you this from reading hundreds and hundreds of these fanfiction stories. Us readers we don't mind a monster word count. I love the longer stories I always read them first. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:19 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:47 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Two words... Amazingly insane! I absolutely LOVED it!
Date: 14 Mar 2023 11:22 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Not entirely sure why people were giving you such a tough time with this story (it's fucking stupid that they were so "offended" that they reported you but whatever)
I love it and I come back to your work like once a year. Maybe it's because I lived in Brooklyn for 10+ years and am from Jersey -- or maybe it's your writing style or maybe it's because I prefer this story over the original material *shrug* - I dont care - love your work and it hits a spot for me! Thanks so much.
Date: 18 Dec 2022 4:30 PM Title: Riders on the Storm
You are such an amazing writer. I am having a very hard time with the Sonny
/Maggie relationship. To some people it will not matter. Unfortunately, it does matter very much to me. When I was 17, I started working. My boss was 29. He played with my head for four years. Yes, we did have sex after my 18 birthday.He took advantage of me. I do not know if I can look past their relationship. It is just so wrong in my eyes. Heck, I had an issue with Maggie and Dame, too. He was only 6 1/2 years older. I guess I must be jaded after what happened to me. I also believe that Lauren should be arrested for what she did to 14 year old Dame. She called him Skip. Her only way yo have sex with Edward was to rape his 14 year old. It was so sick.
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:34 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 25 May 2022 5:50 PM Title: Quiet Storm
This is the sleaziest Carlisle ever but I can't help but love him.
Date: 08 Mar 2022 7:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm
I've been looking all over for this story and it was well worth the work. I'm already hooked on this story.
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:47 PM Title: After the Storm
Não li suas histórias, comi, engoli, adorei sua escrita, você é muito talentosa, parabéns
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:47 PM Title: After the Storm
Não li suas histórias, comi, engoli, adorei sua escrita, você é muito talentosa, parabéns
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:47 PM Title: After the Storm
Não li suas histórias, comi, engoli, adorei sua escrita, você é muito talentosa, parabéns
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:47 PM Title: After the Storm
I didn't read your stories, I ate, swallowed, loved your writing, you are very talented, congratulations
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:46 PM Title: After the Storm
I didn't read your stories, I ate, swallowed, loved your writing, you are very talented, congratulations
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:46 PM Title: After the Storm
I didn't read your stories, I ate, swallowed, loved your writing, you are very talented, congratulations
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:46 PM Title: After the Storm
I didn't read your stories, I ate, swallowed, loved your writing, you are very talented, congratulations
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:46 PM Title: After the Storm
I didn't read your stories, I ate, swallowed, loved your writing, you are very talented, congratulations
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.
If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why? Instead of cryptic comments.
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.
If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why? Instead of cryptic comments.
Date: 28 Aug 2021 2:20 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2021 5:07 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 09 Aug 2021 9:56 PM Title: After the Storm
Almost 10 years after starting to read QS and this is my millionth time reading the series. I just want to let you know how much I've loved your tale and how much I appreciate the world you've built. Even after all these years, I sometimes dream that one day you'll add some more outtakes or another installment. But even if that never happens, I'll still keep coming back to read the whole series again and again
Date: 09 Aug 2021 1:30 AM Title: After the Storm
I can't believe it's been over 7 years since you have updated... I loved this story when you first posted it and still love it today. One of the best twilight fanfiction out there, let alone Mafia fanfiction. I hope you are still writting! I hope we can have a Skip update at some point. We all miss you! Thank you for a wonderful story!
Date: 09 Aug 2021 1:30 AM Title: After the Storm
I can't believe it's been over 7 years since you have updated... I loved this story when you first posted it and still love it today. One of the best twilight fanfiction out there, let alone Mafia fanfiction. I hope you are still writting! I hope we can have a Skip update at some point. We all miss you! Thank you for a wonderful story!
Date: 30 Jun 2021 2:45 AM Title: After the Storm
I love these characters so so much! I still can't get enough of them. This was my 3rd time reading the whole series! I'd love to see more of them. Just an awesome group of stories a s I honestly can't get enough of them! I've got my fingers crossed that you'll add the Skip chapter. I'd be I. Heaven if you decided to make a 5th part!! Just saying...! I love your stories. Thanks for sharing them.
Date: 30 Jun 2021 2:19 AM Title: After the Storm
I love these characters so so much! I still can't get enough of them. This was my 3rd time reading the whole series! I'd love to see more of them. Just an awesome group of stories a s I honestly can't get enough of them! I've got my fingers crossed that you'll add the Skip chapter. I'd be I. Heaven if you decided to make a 5th part!! Just saying...! I love your stories. Thanks for sharing them.
Date: 30 Jun 2021 2:19 AM Title: After the Storm
I love these characters so so much! I still can't get enough of them. This was my 3rd time reading the whole series! I'd love to see more of them. Just an awesome group of stories a s I honestly can't get enough of them! I've got my fingers crossed that you'll add the Skip chapter. I'd be I. Heaven if you decided to make a 5th part!! Just saying...! I love your stories. Thanks for sharing them.
Date: 02 Mar 2021 1:18 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 22 Feb 2021 7:59 PM Title: Quiet Storm
This is my FAVORITE story!!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2021 1:23 AM Title: Quiet Storm
i'm so happy i sought this fic out! these mob fics are always so fascinating to me, and god, this one has been such a ride. these last few chapters have been such a nail-biter. i keep skimming it just to make sure nothing happens between edward and bella, or that edward isn't unfaithful to her, and so far i'm just glad. i love their crazy asses so much. i'll be back near the end to review but holy shit, carlisle is so fucked here.
Date: 05 Nov 2020 1:46 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This has been great! Can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 05 Nov 2020 1:24 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This has been absolutely fantastic! Can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 20 Oct 2020 3:20 AM Title: Quiet Storm
7 years later and I'm back. I love this story so much :) thank you for putting it out
Date: 10 Oct 2020 6:53 AM Title: Quiet Storm
omg I so love this story, I have read it before a long long time ago loved it then and I still love it today. Thank you for your writing talent
Date: 20 Aug 2020 8:16 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it! Edward likes Bella!
Date: 20 Aug 2020 2:56 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 02 Aug 2020 6:28 AM Title: After the Storm
Still waiting to hear from Skip and Bebella
Date: 02 Aug 2020 6:28 AM Title: After the Storm
Still waiting to hear from Skip and Bebella
Date: 02 Aug 2020 6:28 AM Title: After the Storm
Still waiting to hear from Skip and Bebella
Date: 02 Aug 2020 6:28 AM Title: After the Storm
Still waiting to hear from Skip and Bebella
Date: 02 Aug 2020 6:28 AM Title: After the Storm
Still waiting to hear from Skip and Bebella
Date: 31 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm
our shy ones are getting somewhere :)
Date: 31 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm
our shy ones are getting somewhere :)
Date: 31 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm
our shy ones are getting somewhere :)
Date: 15 May 2020 11:28 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Edward is very intriguing!!
Peel those layers back Bebella!!
Marie
Twicrazreader
Date: 15 May 2020 9:17 AM Title: Quiet Storm
I can't believe this is my first go round with the Storm series!
Marie
Twicrazreader
Date: 23 Apr 2020 6:53 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 02 Mar 2020 9:43 PM Title: Weather the Storm
Definitely not a boring chapter!
Date: 02 Mar 2020 2:18 AM Title: Quiet Storm
The dialogue was hilarious! I laughed so much! I'm really enjoying this story. Thank you.
Date: 01 Mar 2020 8:53 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved all of this! Wow!! The realist mafia twilight fic I have ever read. And my favourite!!! Going straight to the sequel!
Date: 01 Dec 2019 11:29 PM Title: Quiet Storm
I’m sorry if you weren’t trying to be funny, but I LOL’d the fuck out of the last scene. Kudos if you were going for the funny!!
Date: 01 Dec 2019 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm
I’m sorry if you weren’t trying to be funny, but I LOL’d the fuck out of the last scene. Kudos if you were going for the funny!!
Date: 30 Jun 2019 9:53 PM Title: Weather the Storm
Hope Aro has enough sense to drop Gina, because she has the potential to be a problem. She seemed put out that Edward didn't remember her and was trying to stare him into recognition. Lucky Bella didn't peep that out. But Aro does seem like the type that would go for the Skip's sloppy seconds, where as most other guys wouldn't. He seems desperate for attention.
Date: 23 Jun 2019 4:20 AM Title: Quiet Storm
He's a hard ass but he's also so sweet....I want a Mobward
Date: 23 Jun 2019 4:19 AM Title: Quiet Storm
He's a hard ass but he's also so sweet....I want a Mobward
Date: 22 Mar 2019 7:18 AM Title: The Eye of the Storm
Loved it!
Date: 15 Mar 2019 9:45 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Mar 2019 4:35 AM Title: Riders on the Storm
There are no words for how much I love this series. I've lost track of how many times I've read it. If you ever decide to publish I would be all over it! Thank you for writing, sharing and leaving it up for me to read over and over ... and over again!
Date: 06 Feb 2019 10:36 PM Title: After the Storm
I just love these characters and especially Damion!
Date: 06 Feb 2019 10:36 PM Title: After the Storm
I just love these characters and especially Damion!
Date: 01 Feb 2019 7:00 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 26 Jan 2019 12:21 AM Title: Quiet Storm
I absolutely love your writing. This series being my favorite. I have read it several times now and I cannot get enough! You've probably heard this a million times but you NEED to publish it. Thank you for putting your stories out here for all of us to enjoy. :)
Date: 05 Jan 2019 11:38 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Lol. A mother's work is never done. I love you and your writing.
Date: 05 Jan 2019 11:37 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Lol. A mother's work is never done. I love you and your writing.
Date: 10 Dec 2018 8:11 PM Title: After the Storm
I love this story and I can't wait for the Skip's outtake. Thank you for writing and I hope all is well with you.
Date: 10 Dec 2018 8:05 PM Title: After the Storm
I love this story and I can't wait for the Skip's outtake. Thank you for writing and I hope all is well with you xxx
Date: 10 Dec 2018 8:05 PM Title: After the Storm
I love this story and I can't wait for the Skip's outtake. Thank you for writing and I hope all is well with you xxx
Date: 28 Nov 2018 2:17 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 21 Nov 2018 11:05 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Aww so sweet
Date: 09 Nov 2018 4:57 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I need to tell you I've just read this story for perhaps the 10th time, if not more (yeah, probably more). Every so often, I come back and read the Storm series. They satisfy every craving: drama, romance, comedy, action, romance... They are just magnificent and never get old, thanks to your talent. I'm so grateful you still have them here for us to read. Thank you!
Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:48 AM Title: The Eye of the Storm
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2018 1:59 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 28 Oct 2018 10:15 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 28 Oct 2018 7:14 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 28 Oct 2018 5:05 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!