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Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2024 2:08 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

I loved when Sonny tells Damion he loves him it still makes me cry. I've read this series probably 10 times.

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2024 12:27 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

I loved when Sonny tells Damion he loves him it still makes me cry. I've read this series probably 10 times.

Reviewer: KristynTB926 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This will forever be my favorite story. 💜

Reviewer: KristynTB926 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This will forever be my favorite story. 💜

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2024 4:32 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

"She curled into a ball on my lap, the perfect bundle to throw out the window..."                   That's my favorite line everytime I read it...which is frequently. 

Reviewer: fanficaddict2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2023 5:22 AM Title: Quiet Storm


Reviewer: pixiekat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...

Thank you.

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...

Thank you.

Reviewer: kanergirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:52 PM Title: Weather the Storm

"Keep my wife's name out your fucking mouth!" I stood from my seat.


Reading this line in 2023 is fucking comical🤣

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2023 7:35 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

OK, THAT was an awesome chapter. Very fun and also important. LOVE LOVE LOVED it!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2023 7:37 PM Title: Riders on the Storm

I just wanted to let you know that I actually like the different POV's. It seems you worry about whether we are just wanting E/B pov, but it's really a nice change to get ALL of the characters thoughts. Be aware that your writing is VERY GOOD. You shouldn't question yourself so much. If we didn't like what you are doing then most probably wouldn't read. Unless they are anonymous shrews that just want to break you down because they're disgusting cowards and can't let you write how you want to without unnecessary harsh criticism. Don't listen to them. Listen to the true fan who loves and accepts whatever you write and enjoys it thoroughly. It's takes a lot of chutzpah to put your writing out there. Don't forget that you are way braver than those anonymous swine who try to cut you down. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2023 10:25 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

I have to say I was skeptical about the Sonny/Maggie arc but I'm fully on board with them after those chapters. Loving these characters.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2023 7:49 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

I am REALLY liking this 3rd installment. It's great to see these kids all grown up. I had a feeling about what sonny would be doing as an adult, but I have to say Damion totally surprised me and I really love him too. I am always an Edward girl, but I gotta say, in this one I'm liking Damion so so much. He's definitely my favorite character in this story. I really love Sonny too. Reading on...

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:54 PM Title: Weather the Storm

Of course, I really love every chapter you write, But I especially loved Bella, putting Esme and her place. I hope she tells Carlisle and Edward what she did, but I know that's not her personality.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:45 AM Title: Weather the Storm

I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:04 AM Title: Weather the Storm

This time I'm reviewing your authors note at the beginning of this chapter. 

Your story is GREAT, true to mob life (as far as we know) and your Edward is great just the way he is warts and all. Bella too! If people criticize you for what you write, they SHOULDN"T READ IT!!!!! It takes a lot of guts to make yourself vulnerable to criticism when you publish your words. You write your stories the way YOU SEE FIT!!! If someone don't like it they should stop reading and SHUT UP!! I hate thinking you as a writer are upset because some bigmouth doesn't like the water thing are being written. If they don't like it maybe they should give writing a story a try and see how they fair with the critics huh? 

Just to let you know, YOU ARE DOING GREAT, WONDERFUL, STUPENDOUS!!! Love all of your work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you that you are not doing it right. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE you!! I can't say it enough. Great work, even the scary, angsty parts. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 7:41 AM Title: Weather the Storm

  I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:33 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2023 8:43 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2023 9:44 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I can tell you this from reading hundreds and hundreds of these fanfiction stories.  Us readers we don't mind a monster word count. I love the longer stories I always read them first. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:47 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Two words... Amazingly insane! I absolutely LOVED it!

Reviewer: decayandescape Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2023 11:22 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Not entirely sure why people were giving you such a tough time with this story (it's fucking stupid that they were so "offended" that they reported you but whatever)

I love it and I come back to your work like once a year. Maybe it's because I lived in Brooklyn for 10+ years and am from Jersey -- or maybe it's your writing style or maybe it's because I prefer this story over the original material *shrug* - I dont care - love your work and it hits a spot for me! Thanks so much. 

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2022 4:30 PM Title: Riders on the Storm

 

You are such an amazing writer. I am having a very hard time with the Sonny

/Maggie relationship. To some people it will not matter. Unfortunately, it does matter very much to me. When I was 17, I started working. My boss was 29. He played with my head for four years. Yes, we did have sex after my 18 birthday.He took advantage of me. I do not know if I can look past their relationship. It is just so wrong in my eyes.  Heck, I had an issue with Maggie and Dame, too. He was only 6 1/2 years older. I guess I must be jaded after what happened to me. I also believe that Lauren should be arrested for what she did to 14 year old Dame. She called him Skip.  Her only way yo have sex with Edward was to rape his 14 year old. It was so sick. 

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:34 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:41 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:41 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 5:50 PM Title: Quiet Storm

This is the sleaziest Carlisle ever but I can't help but love him. 

Reviewer: alderjd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2022 7:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm

I've been looking all over for this story and it was well worth the work. I'm already hooked on this story.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.

If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why?  Instead of cryptic comments.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.

If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why?  Instead of cryptic comments.

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2021 2:20 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2021 5:07 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2021 1:18 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: The Moon Writers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2021 7:59 PM Title: Quiet Storm

This is my FAVORITE story!!!! 

Reviewer: atouchofcitron Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2021 1:23 AM Title: Quiet Storm

i'm so happy i sought this fic out! these mob fics are always so fascinating to me, and god, this one has been such a ride. these last few chapters have been such a nail-biter. i keep skimming it just to make sure nothing happens between edward and bella, or that edward isn't unfaithful to her, and so far i'm just glad. i love their crazy asses so much. i'll be back near the end to review but holy shit, carlisle is so fucked here. 

Reviewer: rachel625 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2020 1:46 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This has been great! Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: rachel625 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2020 1:24 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This has been absolutely fantastic! Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: GiggleSnortBlush Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2020 3:20 AM Title: Quiet Storm

7 years later and I'm back. I love this story so much :) thank you for putting it out 

Reviewer: katstooldforthis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 6:53 AM Title: Quiet Storm

omg I so love this story, I have read it before a long long time ago loved it then and I still love it today. Thank you for your writing talent

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 8:16 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Edward likes Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 2:56 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: Gemm13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm

our shy ones are getting somewhere :)

Reviewer: Gemm13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm

our shy ones are getting somewhere :)

Reviewer: Gemm13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm

our shy ones are getting somewhere :)

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 11:28 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Edward is very intriguing!!

Peel those layers back Bebella!!

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 9:17 AM Title: Quiet Storm

I can't believe this is my first go round with the Storm series!

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: snowbutterfly32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 6:53 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2020 12:20 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! 

Reviewer: blueeyedbrit Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 9:43 PM Title: Weather the Storm

Definitely not a boring chapter! 

Reviewer: Sullysnonna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2020 2:18 AM Title: Quiet Storm

The dialogue was hilarious! I laughed so much! I'm really enjoying this story. Thank you.

Reviewer: blueeyedbrit Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 8:53 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved all of this! Wow!! The realist mafia twilight fic I have ever read. And my favourite!!! Going straight to the sequel! 

Reviewer: WilyArmadilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2019 11:29 PM Title: Quiet Storm

I’m sorry if you weren’t trying to be funny, but I LOL’d the fuck out of the last scene.  Kudos if you were going for the funny!!

Reviewer: WilyArmadilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2019 11:28 PM Title: Quiet Storm

I’m sorry if you weren’t trying to be funny, but I LOL’d the fuck out of the last scene.  Kudos if you were going for the funny!!

Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2019 9:53 PM Title: Weather the Storm

Hope Aro has enough sense to drop Gina, because she has the potential to be a problem. She seemed put out that Edward didn't remember her and was trying to stare him into recognition.  Lucky Bella didn't peep that out. But Aro does seem like the type that would go for the Skip's sloppy seconds, where as most other guys wouldn't.  He seems desperate for attention.

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2019 4:20 AM Title: Quiet Storm

He's a hard ass but he's also so sweet....I want a Mobward

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2019 4:19 AM Title: Quiet Storm

He's a hard ass but he's also so sweet....I want a Mobward

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2019 9:45 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: egwynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 4:35 AM Title: Riders on the Storm

There are no words for how much I love this series. I've lost track of how many times I've read it. If you ever decide to publish I would be all over it! Thank you for writing, sharing and leaving it up for me to read over and over ... and over again! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 7:00 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! 

Reviewer: egwynne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2019 12:21 AM Title: Quiet Storm

I absolutely love your writing. This series being my favorite. I have read it several times now and I cannot get enough! You've probably heard this a million times but you NEED to publish it. Thank you for putting your stories out here for all of us to enjoy. :)

Reviewer: Tami101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 11:38 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Lol. A mother's work is never done. I love you and your writing. 

Reviewer: Tami101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 11:37 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Lol. A mother's work is never done. I love you and your writing. 

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2018 2:17 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 11:05 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Aww so sweet 

Reviewer: Kirb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 4:57 AM Title: Weather the Storm

I need to tell you I've just read this story for perhaps the 10th time, if not more (yeah, probably more).  Every so often, I come back and read the Storm series.  They satisfy every craving: drama, romance, comedy, action, romance... They are just magnificent and never get old, thanks to your talent.  I'm so grateful you still have them here for us to read. Thank you!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 1:59 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 10:15 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 7:14 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 5:05 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 3:56 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 3:10 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 1:17 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 11:18 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 10:39 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 3:01 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 3:01 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 8:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 9:39 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 8:42 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Poor Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 7:43 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2018 11:38 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2018 10:22 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Go Bella!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2018 7:02 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2018 5:49 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2018 7:02 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2018 8:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2018 5:36 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2018 12:34 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 6:48 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 5:59 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:58 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:56 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:55 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:54 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:48 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:14 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 2:45 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

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Date: 14 Oct 2018 5:35 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

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