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Date: 20 Apr 2018 2:47 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Great story I couldn’t stop reading it I was at work reading and talking about it . I had love,suspense,mystery and reality.
Date: 22 Nov 2016 11:53 AM Title: The Path We Choose
One of the absolute best twilight stories I have ever read!!!!!!!
You are an awesome author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:02 PM Title: Off The Beaten Path
Loved!
Date: 23 Jun 2016 7:01 PM Title: Off The Beaten Path
Loved Masen as a 17 year old. Although I didn't curse around my momma.
Date: 23 Jun 2016 1:24 PM Title: Off The Beaten Path
Loved it!
Date: 23 Jun 2016 10:48 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
So sweet!
Date: 22 Jun 2016 12:58 PM Title: The Path We Choose
Loved it!
Date: 22 Jun 2016 12:09 PM Title: The Path We Choose
So sweet!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:42 PM Title: The Path We Choose
Father O'Connor is great!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 7:24 PM Title: The Path We Choose
Tears! Precious babies!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 5:02 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Love the family dynamic!
Date: 13 Jun 2016 2:38 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Wahoo! I love that the whole family is together now!
Date: 12 Jun 2016 10:42 PM Title: The Path We Choose
Loved!
Date: 09 Jun 2016 6:10 PM Title: The Path We Choose
I loved this story. So glad I found it. Where are the outakes?
Date: 06 Dec 2015 4:13 AM Title: Black Diamond
wow, loved your story. thank you for posting it.
Date: 27 Nov 2015 12:33 AM Title: The Path We Choose
enjoyed reading
Date: 19 Nov 2015 2:04 AM Title: The Path We Choose
sweetward love him
Date: 30 Sep 2015 2:31 PM Title: Black Diamond
He got what he deserved.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 3:49 AM Title: Black Diamond
I've read this before and it's better 2nd time around! ;o) Great story!
Date: 06 Jan 2015 6:58 AM Title: The Greatest Gift
This chapter is so heartbreaking!!! *sobs*
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:23 AM Title: The Greatest Gift
*fanning myself frantically*
Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:19 PM Title: The Greatest Gift
My teeth are hurting!! This chapter is so sweet and it's giving me cavities!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:35 AM Title: The Breakers
Such a child you have given us to be amazed by and wish we knew!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:29 AM Title: The Breakers
An absolutely perfect story, with a family I wouldn't mind joining and one awesome, madly in love couple, Edward and Bella! I loved this so much as I do all your stories I've read so far!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:51 AM Title: The Breakers
That was about the most original proposal ever! I keep thinking life can't get any better for them, and then it does!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 8:53 AM Title: The Breakers
New car, new permanent address, custom key chain, what more clould a gut want? This was such a great chapter, tears and all when it came time to move to Bella and Peyton's!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:56 AM Title: The Breakers
Fabulous Valentine weekend complete with amazing sex! Peyton's special valentine from Brody was adorable, but I understand how it made Bella and Edward feel, too! With him moving in, life is good, but I'm curious about him going out on the boat again. If that doesn't happen, what will he do?
Date: 03 Jan 2015 4:41 AM Title: The Breakers
That was rather gut-wtrenching for all concerned! Boy, am I glad that Bud shot Aleksei and he can't hurt anyone any more! Bless Charlie's heart, that scared hell out of him, for both Bella and Edward! I hope the relief outweighs the guilt for Edward, it wasn't his fault Aleksei was wrong in the head, thinking his miserable life was Edward's doing!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:45 AM Title: The Breakers
This is going south in one big hurry! After all this time, for that piece of crap to reappear in Edward's life is the most horrifying thing! It's bad enough Aleksei murdered Wayne, now he's about to do something awful to Edward and Bella! I don't like this one little bit!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:27 AM Title: The Breakers
Loved the Christmas gifts, especially Brady! I felt a cold chill, however, when I read about the cold, calculating eyes of Bella's visitor! No doubt in my mind that somehoe, Alexsei has found where Edward is and has come to cause trouble. That warning about what can happen wasn't spoken by accident!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 9:41 AM Title: The Breakers
Oh yes, Edward is going to have a most excited little girl on Christmas, Peyton will love a puppy, especially one from her best friend! Can't wait to see how that goes! Now we have to see how going back on the boat affects everyone!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:28 AM Title: The Breakers
Thank heaven they got him out of the icy water in time! God bless Jasper's roping skills, they most likely saved the day! Frankly, this chapter made me cry, several times! I was almost as glad as Bella when Edward opened his eyes and spoke!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:53 AM Title: The Breakers
What the hell, if they were saints, they both would wear halos, right? There are bound to be bumps in the road and bad days, but love and family will get them through. As for Tricia being that hateful, some people just can't help the poison in their hearts from leaking out! Bella told her what was what, anyway!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:16 PM Title: The Breakers
I just plain loved this chapter. It was fun when they all went to the boat races and Edward giving Peyton that charm bracelet was adorable!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 2:27 AM Title: The Breakers
Edward may be Peyton's best friend, but she can manipulate all the mwn in her life, not to mention most of the women! It was cuter than all get out when she got his phone and asked her mom if Edward could spend the night, and the comment about him being her dad if he married her mom was perfect Peyton!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 1:08 AM Title: The Breakers
Things are going along swimmingly indeed! They both are smart to try and take it slow, not rush things along! You can kinf of tell they would like to hurry just a bit, and be together all the time. I can see it happening soon. Emmett is slowly being forgiven, even by himself, and Peyton, of course is wonderful!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:12 PM Title: The Breakers
Though it was a scary thing to confess to a seven year old, Edward should have just trusted what Bella told him! Peyton is a truly amazing child, like a gift from God, just meant to help Edward! Boy, do I love this story!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:07 AM Title: The Breakers
That was nearly overpowering! They are so good together, just as I suspected they would be! That was a sad story about Evan and her, but look what it produced, Peyton! If this chapter had background music, it would have to be Etta James, singing, At Last!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:21 AM Title: The Breakers
Poor Emmett, he just did what a lot of people do when they hear that word, prison. Too bad he didn't hear everything so he could judge fairly. Well, Rose will straighten him out, but good! I can just picture Bella running to the docks and Edward catching sight of him, and then them embracing each other tightly!Whooee!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:39 AM Title: The Breakers
I think I really do see that light at the end of the tunnel! I just hope Bella and Edward can see it too! I'm holding a very good thought for them!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:58 AM Title: The Breakers
Truly, life is what happens while you make plans. That sure wasn't the way he wanted to tell her about his past. Naturally he has put the worst possible spin on her words, but that's probably the low selfesteem talking. The guy sure doesn't cut himself any slack.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:16 AM Title: The Breakers
This was tough for Bella and I'm thinking the next chapter is going to be worse! It's time to suck it up and bare all, I'm thinking! At least Xavier and Bella have made peace which should help. Her mom really laid it on the line about Edward being a fisherman. Sounds like a tough life and a dangerous one!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:42 AM Title: The Breakers
Xavier is going to cut his own throat if he keeps on at Bella like that! I think Edward did the right thing, telling him to take it up with him and not Bella! This was a great chapter, especially them making out in the parking lot like a pair of teenagers!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:54 PM Title: The Breakers
I'm so glad Charlie told Edward he's not the bad guy he thinks he is, and I'm happy he has started talking to Carlisle, too. It took a lot to talk to Charlie, but I imagine he's glad he did!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:09 AM Title: The Breakers
Everything about dinner was just right, even the stopping and leaving, when neither really wanted to! They have a lot to tell each other and it looks like it will happen pretty soon.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 10:21 AM Title: The Breakers
It's so easy to see why Edward loves Peyton, and I guess she sees him clearly so returns the sentiment. They are quite the pair. He and Bella are doing a lot better, too, for her to invite him to Sunday dinner. Now he just has to survive telling Bella about his past!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:36 AM Title: The Breakers
Evan must be Peyton's father, and from Bella's nightmare, he must be dead. I'm hoping you elaborate on that story later on. It sounds like Edward is fitting in and doing okay learning his new job and is at least friendly with Bella now. It was kind of obvious that they needed to at least be civil.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:01 AM Title: The Breakers
Has it not dawned on Bella that her reaction to Edward borders on bizarre? She seems to be scared to death to get to know him. This despite her daughter , dad and brother all seeming to like him, at least a little.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:20 AM Title: The Breakers
I think Edward is under Peyton's spell, like the rest of her friends and family! So, he has his second chance and must now begin the hard work of re-entering society. I'll bet he can do it, too!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:41 AM Title: The Breakers
Instant attraction, mixed with fight or flight! Must be hard on the nerves to feel that way! Bella and Edward are both hiding things from their past that will probably need talking over in the near future. Can't wait to hear Xavier's history with Peyton and Bella, why they are so close.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:04 AM Title: The Breakers
There truly are good people in this world, willing to help give a second chance where deserved. I still want to know more about Edward's background, but more about his future.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:34 AM Title: The Breakers
Really curious as to why he spent seven years in prison for something he supposedly didn't do. There has to be a hell of a story there, I'll bet! His lawyer is guilty for not getting him a better deal and now thw parole officer hands him a hundred grand! From where comes that kind of money?
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:15 AM Title: The Breakers
Not too promising a start her, woman, having Edward pitched into the icy waters to his death! WTF? I hope that's not really how it ends, because that would just be mean!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 7:58 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
I'm going to miss this wonderful family, Bella, Edward,their kids, and all the rest! I feel like they are neighbors or friends or something!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 1:35 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
Children know more and are smarter than we give them credit for, and this chapter illustrates that quite well!
Date: 08 Dec 2014 9:11 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
I loved Masen in this chapter also! What a great kid he turned out to be! Then again, look who his parents are, and his whole family! It was so cute when Bella kept saying, "such a Cullen", because he is!
Date: 08 Dec 2014 5:14 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
Oh yes, the joys of parenting teens, worrying about boyfriends and girlfriends! Having nearly twelve years between the twins anf Eli, that's quite a span, too! It's so nice that the family is still happy and healthy, and having lots of babies, except Seth and Tanya, of course.
Date: 08 Dec 2014 3:50 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
My hat is off to Bella for the way she labored and delivered Callie! To do that without any drugs was pretty damn impressive! Of course, the whole family was thrilled, but most of all Edward, Bella and the twins!
Date: 08 Dec 2014 12:09 AM Title: Off The Beaten Path
I had to laugh at all the Cullen women showing up to Bella's appointment! That was just too funny! This has been a great pregnancy, with a lot of sweet and tender moments, leavened with humor!
Date: 07 Dec 2014 5:45 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Great reading about the busy, happy life they all deserve! Loved what Bella told Lauren, the skank, and of course all the preperations for getting pregnant! As all your stories that I've read so far, this was wonderful! Now, Off the Beaten Path!
Date: 07 Dec 2014 4:02 AM Title: The Path We Choose
That was a beyond wonderful wedding, in every way! I smiled, I cried and enjoyed every last minute!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:00 PM Title: The Path We Choose
Needed that tissue you warned about, too! Between what they gave each other, and Masen, what Emmett told his brother and all the preperations, I was awash a couple of times!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 10:46 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Wonderful news to learn that a baby is a possibility. It's all coming together and I'm so happy it's turning out this well!Love Bella and Edward and the twins, hell, the whole family!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 9:30 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Really good chapter, with all they accomplished. Bella was so brave to lay the ghost of her father the way she did! I'll bet they never expected Jake to show up and be as contrite as he was! Running into Victoria was a gift and Bella handled it just right!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 6:47 AM Title: The Path We Choose
The apple doesn't fall far from the tree, I guess. Jane's mother must have had a problem, taking her own life that way, and passed on the unstable mind to her child. That was one sick puppy, thinking it was okay for James to abuse her that way, and thinking her father forgot her for Bella! It almost makes me sorry for her, but not really!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 5:46 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Figured it was about time for Lauren to rear her ugly head again. Maybe we'll find out what she really was up to, showing her skanky face after all this time. Probably money. As for Jane, lock her up and throw away the key! I'm looking forward to the wedding, and think Thanksgiving is the perfect time!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:16 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Perfect time to wake up, so she can say yes! Thank God, all the waiting, worrying and praying has paid off and hopefully Bella is on the road to recovery!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 2:10 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Now we know why Jane would look funny at Bella sometimes! I'm sure not one bit surprised that she took the bullet meant for Edward, that's just what Bella does! Now we have the fight for her life!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:53 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Okay, this is the limit, now this crazy son-of-a-bitch wants to kill Edward, to leave Bella alone? They won't be looking for that angle and won't be prepared for it! The misery caused by this just flows all over this story and really pisses me off! Maybe I need Father O'Conner to calm me down!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:54 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Glad they had a great time at Disney and even more glad Jake is gone!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 7:52 AM Title: The Path We Choose
I see now why the police are finally being involved, that was a definite threat! No damn wonder Edward had a meltdown, anyone would have! I hope to God this sicko never gets his filthy hands on Bella or the twins, Edward will kill whoever it is!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 6:20 AM Title: The Path We Choose
It's horrid that Edward punched his own brother, but I can't help a sneaking sympathy for the guy, hell, for all of them! Whomever is doing this to them needs to be strung up and tortured for the misery they deliberately caused! Sure puts a damper on the trip to California!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 1:05 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Knowing how important this moment was to to the kids, Edward, Bella and the rest of the family, made tears come to my eyes as I read ! It was the sweetest thing, ever! Almost enough to make up for the stalker, almost!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 11:00 PM Title: The Path We Choose
From one extreme to another! So happy for the twins turning eight, so damn scared and angry at the stalker's latest threat! Everyone sure rallied around in a hurry, but they can't help being afraid!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 10:18 AM Title: The Path We Choose
A wonderful, happy, family holiday weekend, with lots of hot loving!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 7:19 AM Title: The Path We Choose
The fun of a big, happy family who all get along is the best! Life doesn't get any better than that! Tanya is right, though, Edward and Bella need to get serious about their future together!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 6:00 AM Title: The Path We Choose
I still don't trust Jane, either, she could easily be the stalker! It was awful when Masen got hurt, and Bella, of course. It sure made her and Emmett feel guilty, though it really wasn't her fault! The smoothed out the bad publicity pretty we, too. Now maybe they can all have a nice July fourth weekend!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:44 AM Title: The Path We Choose
I would accuse Kate of being the stalker, but working at the clinic with the doctors Cullen, when would she have the time? Whoever it is, seems to hate everyone involved. What a horrible thing to have happened to Masen, poor Em and Bella are just guilt-riddled! I have bad feelings about the stalker's future plans, they bode well for no one!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 9:49 AM Title: The Path We Choose
That has to have been the most erotic birthday any guy ever had! Bella must love that man of hers more than anything! The kids making his cake was so sweet, too!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:15 AM Title: The Path We Choose
This was a great chapter but for two things, Lauren showing up and manhandling Masen, and that delivery on Father's Day! The scrapbook and portraits were just the right gifts. Making over the kids rooms and adding Edward's things to their room were inspired!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 3:50 AM Title: The Path We Choose
It figures if you had them run into Jane and Bella's old boyfriend, that something bad is about to happen! I wish lightening would strike a few characters in this story, but that's just wishful thinking!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:15 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Jake is a creep, making Bella uncomfortable, Jane is a bitch with an agenda and Kate hates Edward being in love with Bella. These things I know, plus there may indeed be some crazed stalker out there who will try to hurt Bella. That being said, the security team damn well better keep her safe!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:49 PM Title: The Path We Choose
While I sympathize with Edward, I also want to kick his ass! Strange, I know but he is acting like a damn jerk! Bella is just as miserable as he is over being apart all week, but it's not making her an idiot! I hope they can come to some kind of understanding over this problem.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 9:34 AM Title: The Path We Choose
So sweet when Carlisle talked to Bella on the deck! Now the family is grown by four more! It was kind of sad for them to close up the house and go back to real life! Peobably not the best place to have the conversation they did, but I'm glad they talked it out!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 8:16 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Bella really is such an amazing person, but she fits right in with the rest of them, since they're pretty amazing, too! The more I learn about her, the more impressed I am!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:57 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Too bad all this family togetherness must come to a halt soon. Of course, the news of the increased hatemail is much worse. Good thing there is a security firm in the family! Bella and the twins was awesome, as was that connection between Bella, Jasper, Seth and Rosalie!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 10:55 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Isense what you are goping to do to them and I wish you wouldn't. Hasn't that poor woman been through enough misery, danger and heartache for the next ten people? No fair making bad things happen to her , and possibly Edward! It was gut-wrenching enough to listen to what Jasper told them! Thank God for the support of all these wonderful people!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:53 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Waiting for all the past to be revealed has been similar to peeling an onion, and has caused many more tears! This gathering at Bella's place must be the final step in the healing process for her and for Jasper, Rose and Seth. The blending of the families is perfect!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:45 AM Title: The Path We Choose
You are right to be proud of this chapter, it was terrific! I was so touched that Edward cried after reading Charlie's letter. Hell, I did that, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 7:56 AM Title: The Path We Choose
I just knew that letter would tear up Bella and Seth and still be healing! Thank God Edward was able to send her strength, electronically if not in person. I eager for them to be alone for a while, but look forward to everyone being there forthe weekend! It ought to really be fun!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:12 AM Title: The Path We Choose
Ben and Angela are one thing, but talk about a small world! What are the odds of Carlisle and Esme knowing Bella, Seth, Jasper and Rose before Edward ever met them? To hear Charlie is dead is very sad but I'm guessing that won't be the worst of it. No doubt Renee the bitch from Hell will have something to do with it, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: The Path We Choose
This was just a really great chapter! It's beyond wonderful that Bella is getting on so well with Tanya and Alice, and so cute that the girls seem smitten with Seth and Jasper, respectively! I hope Alice takes Aro and Jane to court if they try anything with Bella's contract!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:57 PM Title: The Path We Choose
It figured to be as earth-shattering as it was, when they finally got together! What a welcome home!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:36 PM Title: The Path We Choose
It's a lot like ivy twining around an arbor, the way their love is wrapping itself around their hearts! It's just about killing both of them to be seperated for two whole weeks, plus the kids hate it too!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:01 PM Title: The Path We Choose
He's right, this should have been their first date experience. However, things happen the way they're supposed to happen and not much we can do about it! The two weks Bella must spend in California are going to be hard on both of them, not to mention Maddie and Masen!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 12:41 PM Title: The Path We Choose
That staring thing in public places has to be the worst part of celebrity! Love how this story is going!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:49 AM Title: The Path We Choose
A lot better morning thn it might have been had Seth not set Edward straight and sent him back to Bella. I think that a night holding each other was just what they both needed. Now we'll see what Jasper has to say about all this!