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Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 5:10 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

As I said earlier, she's in no shape or form to attend school, not to mention the fact she is 6 years behind everyone else. What school would accept a severely traumatized 17 year old with the educational level of a 12 year old?

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 2:05 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

If she was taken at the age of 12 there's no chance she could score high enough to take senior year, who would have taught her - the kidnapper? Don't think so. Further the judge was irresponsible releasing her without a court order to have psychiatric assessment and care before returning to school.

Reviewer: redgirl2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 5:38 PM Title: You Own Me

Love it 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2018 2:15 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

amazing

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2018 9:27 AM Title: Fighting For Love

Great story

i did think it was ripe for a sequel so I’m so glad to hear you are writing one 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2018 9:26 AM Title: Fighting For Love

Great story

i did think it was ripe for a sequel so I’m so glad to hear you are writing one 

thank you

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2018 7:00 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Bella kind of pissed me off with her behavior. She's always the one preaching then she acts like this.

Reviewer: Lelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2017 8:35 PM Title: A Pale Fire

Sorry, freezing jeans does not adequately kill the germs on them, at least according to the Smithsonian Institute. https://www.smithsonianmag.com/science-nature/the-myth-of-the-frozen-jeans-129092730/

Other than that, I am enjoying the story, although I am not certain how far you get before the chapters stop. We are still reading it, years later. Maybe you would consider finishing it? Thanks. 

Reviewer: Maudlss Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 12:09 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Okay but have none of y’all seen greys anatomy?

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 2:28 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Loves it 

 

Reviewer: nesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2017 7:28 PM Title: You Own Me

Where could I read your story you own me?

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 5:53 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 2:40 AM Title: Planet Twilight

The details you put into this story is so fantastic.  How you came up with them and where I have no idea but if I had a choice I would of loved to live there. 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 3:42 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 12:47 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 12:40 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!  Poor girl! 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 2:00 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

I'm still in love with this.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 6:02 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:53 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:44 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:31 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 10:47 PM Title: My Boys

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 10:36 PM Title: My Boys

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 10:25 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 9:17 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 8:59 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 12:18 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 1:44 AM Title: My Boys

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 1:36 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2017 3:25 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2017 6:18 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2017 3:10 AM Title: To Have and To Hold

I've had this one on my TBR list and decided to give it a try. I knew he probably was involved with someone else, but didn't expect it to be her best friend's finace.

Sherry

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:47 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Did Emmett start the trail of chlamydia?
Rosalie is better off not getting involved with Emmett at this time. He needs to grow up.
Who was Edward meeting?
Poor Jacob.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:58 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:55 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:55 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.
Does Renee survive?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:54 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:54 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:53 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:53 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

What made Edward hesitate to explain his abrupt stop of the conversation regarding his apartment? Does he still have remnants of Tanya's life sitting around the place?
Bella's bad day was just a small piece of what can go horribly wrong at a hospital.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:01 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Did Carlisle push Edward's buttons intentionally? Or was he remotely interested in Miss Isabella Swan?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:59 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Does Carlisle have any idea of his son's attachment to one of his interns?
Tell me that Alice found a way to keep Jasper on the pleading end of their new found hook up.
Rose is funny. Will she ditch her boyfriend that lives two states away?
Poor Jacob will need the day off to sleep away his hangover.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:31 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Jasper almost cost Edward a future without Isabella.
Will Bella tell Alice what she saw as she made her escape?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:15 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Does Jasper continue his manwhore ways even after selecting his pixie stick?
Wondering if Emmett will survive his internship?
Poor Jacob will never get a foothold where Isabella is concerned.
What does the Chief of surgery think of Dr. Whitlock's shannigans?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 3:52 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

I've been wanting to read this for quite some time now but found it had been pulled from Fanfiction.net.
Then I found it at my favorite site that now has a new name. Things are constantly changing.
Any way, so glad it's here.
Must read on.

Reviewer: lia01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 3:15 AM Title: Behind The Images

Geez can we say bitcherella!

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 5:59 PM Title: My Other Brother

She is every fucking thing to me, Emmett.  She's earth, water, air, and gravity.  She's what keeps me grounded and sane on this rock of a planet, and it's been that way since we were ten, even if I wasn't able to admit the full extent of it.

That's soooo sweet!! I mealted when I read this!!

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 2:21 AM Title: Playing With Fire

great frist chapter, liking this so far, but one thing Emmett has 2 t's not 1

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:01 PM Title: The Maiden Swan and the Cullen Domain

I really enjoy reading this story. I absolutely love these two, they're too cute :)

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:00 PM Title: The Maiden Swan and the Cullen Domain

I really enjoy reading this story. I absolutely love these two, they're too cute :)

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2017 5:33 PM Title: The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition

Love this!! 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 12:19 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

I read this story several years ago and reading it again was just as wonderful as the first time!!! It's an interesting, realistic, extremely funny and erotic story!!!!!! You really rocked it!!!! I've always loved your Jasper characterizations and I loved the "Mallet" in this one!!!

You've not written anything in a long time so I hope all is well and healthy for you and yours. You're an amazing writer if you've gone pro then I'd love to know so I could check it out and buy what you've written!!!!!

Take Care I love you for writing Fan Fiction!!!!


As it was the first time, AHDN's is still an incredibly excellent read!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 9:24 PM Title: Shared Lips

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 3:26 AM Title: The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition

I love it!!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:23 PM Title: Breaking Swan

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:18 PM Title: Breaking Swan

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:09 PM Title: Breaking Swan

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:57 PM Title: Breaking Swan

Loved it!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 3:33 PM Title: A Perfect Love

She has no business being in a relationship or having a baby. She is very immature.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 8:45 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 7:59 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 6:55 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 4:32 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 4:16 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 3:34 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 3:25 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 3:18 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 3:09 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!  Poor Edward! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 2:57 PM Title: My Boys

Yay!  Edward woke up! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 2:47 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!  Sweet chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 2:40 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 2:30 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2016 2:20 PM Title: My Boys

Awesome chapter!  Poor Alice! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 10:27 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 9:05 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 8:49 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 7:32 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 6:30 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 6:17 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 6:02 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 5:53 PM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 6:12 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 5:58 AM Title: My Boys

Loved it!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 11:56 PM Title: Breaking Swan: The Tour

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 8:52 PM Title: Breaking Swan: The Tour

Colt Mccoy

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 2:06 AM Title: Breaking Swan: The Tour

Thought it would be Erik yorkie

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 10:43 PM Title: Breaking Swan: The Tour

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:42 PM Title: Breaking Swan

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:02 PM Title: Breaking Swan

:):)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 2:58 AM Title: Fighting For Love

I loved it thank you 

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2016 12:21 AM Title: Fighting For Love

this is insane

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 11:34 PM Title: Fighting For Love

they never learn

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 11:09 PM Title: Fighting For Love

this fiction is so unrealistic

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 10:29 PM Title: Fighting For Love

I dont know if Im going to read the sequel after this one

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 10:01 PM Title: Fighting For Love

they acting like a brag

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:06 PM Title: Fighting For Love

that was a surprice

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