Date: 25 Apr 2024 5:23 AM Title: All Alone
Wow I loved your story and I would have really loved to read the sequel. It has been many years though.
Date: 25 Apr 2024 3:18 AM Title: All Alone
Edward needs to immediately go to the police and tell them about about Emily and her death threats about Bella all he said was that she threatened to kidnap his daughter. Hiring more guards is good too. Bella is gonna freak when she finds out about Edward being hurt. The police need to be WAY more involved in this case now, maybe even the Feds need to get involved.
Date: 24 Apr 2024 5:09 AM Title: All Alone
Carmen's story is obviously a one sided exaggeration on Carmen and Emil6's parts. I'm sure Emily left out the part where she was sleeping with Jacob and it was HIS baby. I think Bella should and will give him a chance but I hope she goes slowly so she can learn to trust him again. Her instincts are pretty good as far as he goes but I really hope she doesn't run again when he makes an inevitable mistake. He's a man, he will. He also really disenfranchised Bella by not giving her a chance to not be like Emily. I really don't care what he went through, the girls are NOT the same and he should have talked to Bella instead of attacking her and her character without even really getting to know anything about her. And how about starting with telling her that Tanya was a lying tramp.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 9:44 PM Title: All Alone
I think Edward is just as confused as Bella is and I think he needs a little kick in the pants to get his act together, but it looks like he's moving forward and maybe he'll even do the right thing.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 9:01 PM Title: All Alone
And I am assuming that Kate is lying about having Edward in her bed many times. It was once and he didn't even remember her name. That's probably because he was drunk. But you know whatever she has to tell herself.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 3:56 AM Title: All Alone
I think part of Bella's problem is that she runs instead of stays and talks to people. If she would've waited for Edward and confronted him right, then he would've told her the truth. He might've even told her the history with Tonya and how much he despised her.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 12:37 AM Title: All Alone
The lemon was just fine. Great even. I think Edward is not too concerned with who could be hurt with his actions. I'm not sure I like his attitude about women right now. I know he'll change eventually but for now I think he needs to do a little bit of growing up. He hasn't even asked her how old she is or much more about her. It's like he's just concerned with getting her into bed. I hope he's not so selfish and gets his act together.
Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:58 AM Title: Bound to the Family
Okay, so Bella is the oldest Grandchild.
Make scene.
Looking forward to read what you have planned.
Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:40 AM Title: Bound to the Family
There are some twists and turns.
So James and Bella are half siblings...
And Aro and James are cruel and vicious people.
I hope Michael will live a little longer; Aro and James die so that Alex - who is like Michael - can be the next Don. Both families will be united through blood relationship.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 11:48 PM Title: Bound to the Family
One question, Edward is the next Don but where are his bodyguards? There has to be at least on person. He can't have his own back.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:47 PM Title: Bound to the Family
And here is some drama and a promise from James that more drama will follow!
Great writing style.
Let's see if Emmet and Rose will also make an appearance in the next chapters.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:34 PM Title: Bound to the Family
It gets better and better 🤩
I hope there will also a lot of drama coming.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:16 PM Title: Bound to the Family
Hi,
by coincidence I found your story here.
I already read trust & obey on FF.net (and I'm wondering why you didn't posted these stories there).
I very excited to see where this story is going.
And I saw there is also a second and third installment 😍
Bye!
By the way I love it that you included pictures!
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[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:08 AM Title: Two Blue Lines
That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:08 AM Title: Two Blue Lines
That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:04 AM Title: Two Blue Lines
That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:03 AM Title: Two Blue Lines
That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:03 AM Title: Two Blue Lines
That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:02 AM Title: Two Blue Lines
That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time
Date: 10 Dec 2023 4:23 PM Title: Resisting the Inevitable
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Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
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Date: 28 Sep 2023 11:44 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night
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Date: 28 Sep 2023 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
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Date: 25 Sep 2023 5:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Again hilarious, scary, but hilarious. Loved it. And you'l probably be mad at me, but I've never seen more than a glimpse of Gray's Anatomy. :(
Date: 25 Sep 2023 4:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.
Date: 22 Sep 2023 5:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
I am truly sad to see these stories end. I loved both of them and I feel like part of my life will be different without reading them every day! I'm going to read A Hard Day's Night next. Loved the STORM series too by the way. LOVE YOU! Reading on...
Date: 21 Sep 2023 4:44 PM Title: Instructions Not Included
Again this is wonderful!
Date: 21 Sep 2023 8:02 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
I thought she was preggers! I know everything will work out. CC is definitely pure evil, but very cute doing it! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!
Date: 20 Sep 2023 7:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
My goodness! That one was fun. He shoulda let Bella kick all their butts! She probably could have. Loved this chapter. I thought maybe Edward would invite Eric to check out Upstate and his practice to get away from Jersey. Just a thought. Reading on...
Date: 17 Sep 2023 8:00 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
Wow! I don't necessarily think what EJ did to Roni was the correct way to handle the situation, but I get that he was really hurt and she manipulated Cecelia into hurting EJ for her own purposes. She did kinda deserve what she got - cruel and unusual punishment. He was correct in saying that he was always respectful with Roni and treated her really well-even tried and wanted to love her. You can't force that. You either love someone or you don't, it's that simple. Roni was very cruel to BOTH Cecelia and EJ and I have to say that I really don't blame him. Roni made him feel cheap which is something he never did to her. He is obviously tired of being "THE WHORE" around town. I think he really wants to find someone he can love, and Cecelia has that potential. I just hope Roni didn't ruin their chances. True colors can be UGLY. GREAT CHAPTER - very real. Some of your reviewers seem to think that the women are just victims and the men are heartless and whores. These girls are immature bitches.The act sweet and then show their true colors. Those boys have ALWAYS been on the level with the girls they are with - no deceit there, but with Roni, SHE was deceitful and cruel. These women (Sheila, Debbie, Roni) are NOT victims. They are just as much whores as those boys and they as JUST as responsible for their own behavior> I'm so sick of women taking the girls' side no matter what, just because they are women! Women can be horrible too- case and point- RONI!
Date: 17 Sep 2023 5:20 AM Title: Instructions Not Included
What are you talking about? That chapter wasn't boring at all. It was actually great perfect filler chapter. Even if it's a set up for the next ones still loving the story after all these chapters and looking forward to more.
Date: 15 Sep 2023 8:05 PM Title: Instructions Not Included
In 1995 I was raising my first child and working on my second literally bun in the oven at the time. You did great as far as the references go and once again great chapter I'm glad the kids aren't being rude to Jake because they really have no reason to even if they know what they know about his past everyone deserves a second chance.