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Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:28 AM Title: Letters to a Stranger

Thank you for writing another interesting story xo

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:27 AM Title: Letters to a Stranger

Thank you for writing another interesting story xo

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:27 AM Title: Letters to a Stranger

Thank you for writing another interesting story xo

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:27 AM Title: Letters to a Stranger

Thank you for writing another interesting story xo

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 3:14 PM Title: Virgins & Villains

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 2:20 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fantastic

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Date: 06 Sep 2020 2:02 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 8:07 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Excellent

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:39 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Awesome

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:25 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Amazing!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:25 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Amazing!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:09 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Excellent

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 6:37 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Great

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 6:21 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Terrific

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 5:38 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fantastic

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 5:22 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:59 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Awesome

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:42 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Go Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:14 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fantastic

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 3:59 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Great

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 3:31 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Awesome 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 3:10 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fabulous

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:43 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fantastic

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:28 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Great

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:14 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Terrific!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:00 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fantastic! Carlisle is an amazing father!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 1:52 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Uh-oh! Poor Bella!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 6:26 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Great!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 6:08 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Excellent

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2020 6:00 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Wonderful

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:52 PM Title: Things Least Expected

I don't like Jane!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:41 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Terrific

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:29 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Great!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:10 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Excellent

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 3:26 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fabulous

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 2:48 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Fantastic

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 2:01 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Awesome! Poor Jake!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2020 1:48 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2020 1:30 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Sweet

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:46 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Terrific

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:36 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Excellent

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:21 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Great!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:11 PM Title: Things Least Expected

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 8:16 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! Edward likes Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 2:56 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2020 1:14 PM Title: Finding Love Through Music

I loved it but if Edward never went down on Jessica it may be why she cheated, lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2020 1:53 AM Title: Finding Love Through Music

great start

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2020 5:59 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Oh just great ... he is gonna find Bellas elementry tormentor stil living in Forks .... right?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2020 5:59 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Oh just great ... he is gonna find Bellas elementry tormentor stil living in Forks .... right?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2020 5:58 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Oh just great ... he is gonna find Bellas elementry tormentor stil living in Forks .... right?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2020 5:58 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Oh just great ... he is gonna find Bellas elementry tormentor stil living in Forks .... right?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2020 5:58 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Oh just great ... he is gonna find Bellas elementry tormentor stil living in Forks .... right?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2020 5:57 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Oh just great ... he is gonna find Bellas elementry tormentor stil living in Forks .... right?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:25 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:24 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 11:24 PM Title: A Nerd Story of Love

Edward always says that he would do ANYTHING for Bella but shies away from a tat?

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:37 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

It's obvious Edward won. But what I don't get is Bella. It seems Edward has run a successful shop for a good long while now, and is now expanding into CALIFORNIA. So his brand is only gonna get bigger. 

I don't get Bella giving up him up the first time, I know you framed it as a mutaul break up, but that's a farce. This Edward would take several bullets for Bella, in no way would he want her to leave him, but he would never keep her against her will.  I understand her ambition played a major factor.

Also I don't like how you have  Edward talk like their first break up was mutual and then the communication break off was as well. It wasn'tand Bella stop the long distance cause she cared for him too much. Also I remember Emment about say how Edward was after Bella left him, the break up wasn't mutual. 

I realize now that this is probably one of those angst free stories, but I gotta say, this could have a used it tbh.  With the way you wrote Edward. superb, but if only he didn't have Bella on this pedestal and maybe played hard to get for a couple of chapters before he finally showed her gentle man she remebers and they reconnect. It would have improved my opinion on this fic. 

But as I see it now, 6/10. Edward is great, and their interactions weren't bad either. Emment was too overbearing and pushy, seems like the sort of thing that Rose wouldn't go for, there's playful and then theres the guy that barges into your home as soon as you crack open the door and won't stop talking. Still hate that argument with Bella and James, she started it, don't get violent cause you can't handle words. And the break WAS NOT mutual. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:16 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:16 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:16 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:11 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

So even tho we know Bella broke them up cause of her career... Edward fee;s no type of way about anything?

 

Also for him to not ask about her previous relationships or vice versa or anything.. At this point I don' think many questions are gonna get answered. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:05 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

I mean.. I guess I expected Edward to at least be more caustious with Bella.. or at least ask exactly how many more men she has been with... But nothing at all? 

 

Also Emment is overbearing and pushy. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:55 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

I mean if she loves Edward.. It sure doesn't feel like it.. And why would say that? I hope that isn't the only it's brought up..

 

But Edward is too much of a gentlemen and obviously loves Bella so I doubt he is gonna ever bring that subject again or even be harsh with Bella. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:49 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

That Bella and james arguement, it stinks of 'if you can't handle the heat, don't come into the kitchen.' She took a serious shot at him first. 

 

What makes him a asshole when she decided to belittle him? She started it and couldn't handle the heat afterwards. Using any BJJ or Boxing skills taught to her just because she can't take a few words is hella immature. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:43 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:43 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:43 AM Title: Pressing My Luck

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 3:55 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

I knew that wouldn't be his kid, but she kidnapped the baby?!?! YIKES.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2020 4:28 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

The trifecta from HELL! May they all rot in jail/prison.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2020 4:27 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

The trifecta from HELL! May they all rot in jail/prison.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 9:04 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Love it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2020 2:45 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Wonder why he didn't take Marcus in Rio up on his offer to design her rings. Loved this chapter

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2020 2:45 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Wonder why he didn't take Marcus in Rio up on his offer to design her rings. Loved this chapter

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2020 5:28 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Good chapter

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2020 5:28 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Good chapter

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2020 3:22 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

It’s a good start. Poor Bella it’s sad to get dumped on the wedding day. Well, she’s a little silly because there were signs her Tyler was gay.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2020 3:21 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

It’s a good start. Poor Bella it’s sad to get dumped on the wedding day. Well, she’s a little silly because there were signs her Tyler was gay.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2020 11:43 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

he must be Alice's Jimmy how did he end up in Seattle

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2020 5:00 AM Title: A Prescription for Love

I might of read this years ago I had forgetten it. This was hard to read and was crying at the end for the closure but also Charlie knowing he screwed up. Glad Jacob email her in time to keep Charlie's body. On to your next one I might of missed. 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2020 4:59 AM Title: A Prescription for Love

I might of read this years ago I had forgetten it. This was hard to read and was crying at the end for the closure but also Charlie knowing he screwed up. Glad Jacob email her in time to keep Charlie's body. On to your next one I might of missed. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 2:30 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Bella is being such a bitch. No job is worth treating the ones you love like shit. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 7:38 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Bella lied to Paul. Edward has always spoiled her. Did she already forget Rio and Isle Esme? 

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Date: 09 Jun 2020 12:56 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

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Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 2:34 PM Title: A Ilha do Amor

I'm thinking Jimmy is Alice's abusive ex

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 1:23 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Bella already knows that there is some bizarre connection between them already.
Rose didn't get the chance to meet up with the girls.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 1:22 AM Title: A Ilha do Amor

Bella already knows that there is some bizarre connection between them already.
Rose didn't get the chance to meet up with the girls.

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