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Reviewer: classicshawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2020 4:42 PM Title: Insecurities

"I had loved him once and still would hate to have something bad happen to him; but if it came down to a choice between his life or Jasper's? Sorry Edward, I'll save a nice place on the mantle for your urn." 


 


Lol the last line had me dying laughing.


 


 


 


 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 10:42 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Just wondering,  isnt Major the God of War, the most feared vampire?

W/his gift, he could flood a large area w/fear or whatever emotion...isnt that how he 

dealt w/so many newborns/vamps during his time w/maria....and, his powers have expanded.

So besides other gifts they have...have bella shield everyone in marias army and have 

the major flood inside that shield w/an emotion...besides the physical shield bella can use...

Ofc, they need to kill the one who can negatee their gifts...

I've been reading this story for 3 days...cant seem to stop 😊

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 9:16 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Another thing... i thought w/bellas mental AND physical shield, she could practice to

just decapitate all of the newborn heads herself w/ her power...she can practice to do that...

Chelsea can break all of bonds to maria and bond them to them to fight against maria...

Instead of actual physical contact w/marias army, they can do a lot of their work w/all of

the gifts they have, they can kill most of them before needing to physically fight whoevers left...

just thinking out loud 😊

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 9:05 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

I agree w/your comment regarding peter, alice and jasper...

They are being total douches...but i hate that bella constantly leaves...

Yes, she's stressed but so is everyone else...yes, she feels pressure bc she's the 

one who's to save everyone....but...there has to be a better way than to just leave...

Plus, it feels like her "love" or connections seem conditional... makes her appear fickle 

when it comes to her feelings which should be unconditional love for family and mate...

Afterall, just bc you dont like the behaviors of the people you care about, does it mean you care 

for that person any less? ie.. for family, friends, mate as a vampire, not necessarily as

human feelings in this case...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2020 12:21 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

This has to be one of the craziest, most entertaining,  awesome twilight fic I've ever read 

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I cant stop reading it...and im only halfway thru...

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👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2020 11:54 AM Title: The Perfect Wife

Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.

Althouh I must admit, it had some quite terrible scenes in it.

But I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you!!!

Greetings from Germany,

leinchen

Reviewer: AtalantaCerelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2020 2:49 PM Title: Worth the Burn

So, I am reading this story again. It has been years but I still remember all of the plot points and all of the pain. But wow... it still hits me in the feels. I try not to be a crier, I'm not good with emotion, but this story hits me. 

I don't know if you still check this account. But, if you do, please know that there is a woman in Australia who thinks you are an amazing writer.

Thank you for writing this story.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2020 1:13 AM Title: Worth the Burn

Damn girl needs therapy.

Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2020 4:39 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

I enjoyed this story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:58 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

oooh for the Alice memories.  ROFL for the cop car plans.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:34 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

awww for Lilly.   ROFL for jailbreak story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:22 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

aww for the presents

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 10:10 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

wow Lots of info to mull over.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 9:56 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

ooh guessing this is why B was made human in this iteration.  punishment I bet

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 5:01 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

dun dun dun...Petey 's got lots of secrets.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 4:49 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Glad she got to tell off Edward.  At least Alice is being more reasonable.  Guessing she can't see Alice because Alice doesn't remember?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:53 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Yea I'm guessing the dreams are important.  ROFL for E&A getting arrested.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:40 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Awesome Vegas time!!!!  Woo Hoo for married.   Buhahahah for E&A showing up.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:19 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

ROFL for drunk Bella causing an almost orgy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 1:57 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

You go Bella.... get your man!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 4:22 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

Awesome first date and first time too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 3:50 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

Love Em's idea for the first time.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 3:30 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

Glad Rose and B got some things straight.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:54 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

The dream thing would be very disconcerting.  Hmm Wonder where Alice went?  LOL for the diner events.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:26 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

ROFL for cops interupting again!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2019 2:17 AM Title: An Imperfect Love

hmmm Wonder what the dream really was about?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 10:53 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

lol for drunk bella

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 10:41 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

ROFL First Felony and Getting interupted by cops.    Another?!?!?!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 10:05 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

oooh dark jasper indeed. Yummy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:55 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Think Bella is going to have separation anxiety for awhile.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:49 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Sounds like an awesome drive. Glad he made her feel better about what that waitress said. hmmm sharing a bath.... almost. LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:35 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Glad J got to her in time.  they both have lots to work through.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 9:26 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

Wow  Renee is one nasty biatch.

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2019 8:24 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

What a beautiful wedding! Loved the visuals!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2019 11:45 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Glad Trevor is gone! What a horrible man!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2019 11:45 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Glad Trevor is gone! What a horrible man!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2019 5:13 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

The proverbial shit is about to hit the fan for our lovable couple!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:46 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:46 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:46 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:45 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:45 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!

Reviewer: wizardsrealm Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2019 7:34 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

OMG I was LMAO with the way you ended this chapter!!! 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2019 9:59 PM Title: Insecurities

Loved it! Great job!

Reviewer: majorsdarlin26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2019 9:06 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

I absolutely love this story and it only took me like a month to find it again.

Reviewer: majorsdarlin26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2019 9:06 PM Title: An Imperfect Love

I absolutely love this story and it only took me like a month to find it again.

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2019 5:09 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

😁

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2019 5:09 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

😁

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2019 9:23 PM Title: First of the Month

I loved it thank you 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2019 9:23 PM Title: First of the Month

I loved it thank you 

Reviewer: pumba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:47 AM Title: The Perfect Wife

Probably very late to say this but I was wrapped with this story! The plot, twists n turns were great and well thought out. Loved reading! You didn’t go over board like a lot of others and just ruin characters for the rest of the story.Thank you for putting the notes on FF so I could find it here. Amazing job 😊

Reviewer: pumba Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:46 AM Title: The Perfect Wife

Probably very late to say this but I was wrapped with this story! The plot, twists n turns were great and well thought out. Loved reading! You didn’t go over board like a lot of others and just ruin characters for the rest of the story.Thank you for putting the notes on FF so I could find it here. Amazing job 😊

Reviewer: pumba Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:46 AM Title: The Perfect Wife

Probably very late to say this but I was wrapped with this story! The plot, twists n turns were great and well thought out. Loved reading! You didn’t go over board like a lot of others and just ruin characters for the rest of the story.Thank you for putting the notes on FF so I could find it here. Amazing job 😊

Reviewer: ForOneMoreNight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2019 7:38 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

This is by far one of the best stories I have read! I read on every break and lunch at work and when I could at home when real life and motherhood weren’t calling me. Thank you for taking the time out of your busy life to write this amazing story. 

Truly,

ForOneMoreNight

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 3:50 AM Title: Married to the Enemy

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 3:29 AM Title: Married to the Enemy

Loved it! Poor Bella! Edward is a jerk!

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2019 8:46 AM Title: Married to the Enemy

I love this Story. It reminds me of a part of my life. Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2019 8:43 AM Title: Married to the Enemy

Love this Story! It some what reminds me of a part of my own life with my man.

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2019 8:43 AM Title: Married to the Enemy

Love this Story! It some what reminds me of a part of my own life with my man.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2018 3:14 PM Title: Resisting the Inevitable

LOVE THE STORY BUT THESE LEMONS ARE GETTING BORING THEY ALL SEEM THE SAME

Reviewer: Acampbell77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2018 7:03 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

Wonderful story!

Reviewer: jamielynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 7:28 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

I read it at work. I couldn’t help it. Loved it

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2018 6:54 PM Title: "Timing Is Everything"

Enjoyed your story.  I'm glad they got their happily ever after

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 8:01 AM Title: Resisting the Inevitable

Good story 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 8:01 AM Title: Resisting the Inevitable

Good story 

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:44 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 4:54 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 4:20 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Awesome!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 3:43 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Uh-oh Jasper is in big trouble!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 2:55 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 1:58 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it! I really hate Alice!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 3:15 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 2:49 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 2:23 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 1:45 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it! Poor Bella! I hate Amanda!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 1:09 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 12:32 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 11:36 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 11:04 AM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 5:01 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 4:34 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

I hate Edward and Alice!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 3:35 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 3:10 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 2:56 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 2:31 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 2:15 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 1:59 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 1:40 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2018 1:33 PM Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It

Loved it!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:57 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

I am so happy that Jasper and Bella are both so at peace with themselves and each other.  :)     I loved this story.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:48 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

That sounds like a sexy and wonderful honeymoon.   I am officially jealous of fictional characters.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:36 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

I'm glad that Bella got to go make peace with her dad, family and the wolves.  That was really sweet of Jasper.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:23 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

Aro is almost like a creepy stalker in trying to wrangle out Jasper and Bella's phone number and where abouts.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:04 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

I would love not to have to go through any planning bull crap.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 7:22 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

Dam!   It sounds like a week was way too long to agree to.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 7:11 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

I definitely agree with all of Bella's worries and her hurry to get Jasper alone away from the crazy.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 6:57 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

Well it sounded really tough on Alice and Edward, but their dumb asses CHOSE it.   All of the others who had a rough life didn't have a choice.   sigh......

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 6:48 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

I don't know if I could have been as mature as Bella.   I would probably be like Garrett, ready to kick some ass.  And what the hell is up Tanya's ass?   That hussy has no pony in this race, so to speak.  ugh..........

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 6:01 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

The olturi kings are being very thoughtful and nice.   Carlisle's attitude about Edward and Alice is kind of annoying.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 5:47 AM Title: Heroin ain't got nothing on you

I loved how they dealt with Vicki, the body swapper and the hordes.   Aro better play nice.   They won't fall for his bull shit.

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