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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2023 3:46 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm going to assume that pregnancy prevention steps were taken?

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2023 10:52 PM Title: The Art of Love

I just found this story and read it so fast. I cried though so much of it! It was soooo good!

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2022 12:44 AM Title: Taking Chances

I don't know how I missed this one but I love it!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 11:41 AM Title: Taking Chances

Great story 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 11:40 AM Title: Taking Chances

Great story 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 11:40 AM Title: Taking Chances

Great story 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 8:47 PM Title: The Art of Love

Why hasnt anyone called the cops or campus security on Newton??   NYC is large with lots of doctors.  Carlisle isnt the only one!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 8:47 PM Title: The Art of Love

Why hasnt anyone called the cops or campus security on Newton??   NYC is large with lots of doctors.  Carlisle isnt the only one!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2020 3:01 AM Title: Taking Chances

Loved the wedding.  Now off to find Moving forward on your profile.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 11:26 PM Title: Taking Chances

I was afraid Bella was going to have a nervous breakdown before she gets to the park.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 4:31 AM Title: Taking Chances

Emotional chapter.  You did a great job writing.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 3:43 AM Title: Taking Chances

Love how Bella reacted to meeting the three men with Aro. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 2:33 AM Title: Taking Chances

Love this chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 2:10 AM Title: Taking Chances

Perfect.  I knew he would adopt him. Love the boys plotting for a little sister or two or three. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:23 AM Title: Taking Chances

A little sister!!!!!!!! The boys always get what they want. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 8:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Loved Brody's letter. I'm glad Aro shared it with her. Love what Marcus and Didyme did to the boys room. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 1:40 PM Title: Taking Chances

Awesome lemons

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 2:27 AM Title: Taking Chances

Esme just throw them out of her house. Lol!!!!!! And no dessert!!!!!! Lol. I guess they will get dessert when they get home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 1:57 AM Title: Taking Chances

Perfect!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 10:25 PM Title: Taking Chances

Ooooooo!!!!!!! Edward!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 9:09 PM Title: Taking Chances

Sounds like they found their house.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 6:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Wow, Tyler has had a horrible past too. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 2:28 PM Title: Taking Chances

Oh no, is Lauren going to cause problems now??? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 2:02 AM Title: Taking Chances

Very emotional chapter 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 10:45 PM Title: Taking Chances

I'm so glad that Alex is ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 8:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 7:54 PM Title: Taking Chances

Beautiful love scene between them. I am a little worried about Edward thinking he heard Bella's cell phone ringing.  Who would be calling that late?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 4:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Lol. I love going to the spa. Of course I've never gotten waxed. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:35 PM Title: Taking Chances

Another great chapter.  I am really enjoying this story.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:09 PM Title: Taking Chances

Glad Lauren showed up at the park. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 4:36 AM Title: Taking Chances

Glad Bella's meeting with Lauren went good. Loved the end of this chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:47 AM Title: Taking Chances

Sexy times!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:08 AM Title: Taking Chances

Who is at Edward's?  Anthony's aunt???? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 2:56 AM Title: Taking Chances

They are becoming a little family.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 2:37 AM Title: Taking Chances

Wow,  alot going on in this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 2:36 AM Title: Taking Chances

Wow,  alot going on in this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 1:18 AM Title: Taking Chances

What the heck is Lauren Mallory doing at the party?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 8:44 PM Title: Taking Chances

I think that is about as normal as Edward's family gets .lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 7:56 PM Title: Taking Chances

I'm laughing at the end of this chapter.  Lol. Love it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 5:03 PM Title: Taking Chances

I knew he would send her flowers.  Loved that Anthony "whispered"  Dad you know what to do. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 2:33 PM Title: Taking Chances

I think Bella was a little harsh with Alice but at least she was honest. Love little Alex and his conversation with Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 1:57 PM Title: Taking Chances

Loving their date 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 4:03 AM Title: Taking Chances

Finally,  he asked her out!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 3:48 AM Title: Taking Chances

I think the zoo was their 1st date.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 3:24 AM Title: Taking Chances

Anthony is wishing hard that Bella was his mom. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 2:22 AM Title: Taking Chances

Everyone sees it but Bella and Edward.  Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 1:09 AM Title: Taking Chances

Glad Bella talked to the girls about the uncomfortableness. Now maybe things will seems normal now.  Glad Edward offered for Alex to spend the night.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 12:22 AM Title: Taking Chances

Glad the girls included Bella in they night out.  Glad Charlie seems to like Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 3:09 PM Title: Taking Chances

Everyone is trying to fix them up with each other,  even the kids. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 2:25 PM Title: Taking Chances

That was interesting and a little awkward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 1:45 PM Title: Taking Chances

Anthony is thinking ahead. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 1:24 PM Title: Taking Chances

Bella and Edward are falling into a easy friendship.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 5:12 AM Title: Taking Chances

Loved this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 4:59 AM Title: Taking Chances

I'm guessing Emmett helped Bella out. I am guessing from the conversation with Lauren is that Brody is the father of Bella's son, hence his name.  But is Lauren Brody's sister or who he was cheating on Bella with?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 4:39 AM Title: Taking Chances

Poor Edward.  So he lost his wife. I wonder how long ago it was. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 4:22 AM Title: Taking Chances

Sounds very interesting.  Can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2018 11:22 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 9:12 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

What about all the other men who raped Bella, and the so called doctor who performed the operation, has the police tried to find them?

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 8:20 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

So the judge wasn't all that irresponsible, good that someone keeps a level head.

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 6:10 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

As I said earlier, she's in no shape or form to attend school, not to mention the fact she is 6 years behind everyone else. What school would accept a severely traumatized 17 year old with the educational level of a 12 year old?

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 3:05 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

If she was taken at the age of 12 there's no chance she could score high enough to take senior year, who would have taught her - the kidnapper? Don't think so. Further the judge was irresponsible releasing her without a court order to have psychiatric assessment and care before returning to school.

Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 2:52 PM Title: The Art of Love

I found this story a few days ago and fall in love with it.  Thank you for sharing this story.  I love way they both found each other and are so happy.  Everyone was so happy and loving. I’m glad that Esma came around and seen how all her children were was happpy with their loved ones.   Great story. Thank you. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 1:23 PM Title: Taking Chances

I loved, loved reading this story again. It was just what the fic-doc ordered after the ridiculous angst I got sucked into prior. You are a good writer. You took Moving Forward down?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2018 3:15 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

amazing

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:56 AM Title: The Art of Love

Rereading

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:56 AM Title: The Art of Love

Rereading

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 4:42 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:47 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:40 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Loved it!  Poor girl! 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 5:16 AM Title: The Reunion

Just wonderful. What an amazing story. Loved it.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:56 AM Title: The Moment

Love vamp stories. Loved read this one. Thank you.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:50 AM Title: The Moment

Sweet. Not saying anything about Jerkob. He's such a little prick

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:44 AM Title: The Moment

Good fight scene

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:11 AM Title: The Moment

I like how you've twisted BD into this storyline as well as all the associated characters.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:04 AM Title: The Moment

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Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:34 AM Title: The Moment

Oh!!!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:28 AM Title: The Moment

Good one

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:18 AM Title: The Moment

Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:34 AM Title: The Moment

This really has turned into a compelling read. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:11 AM Title: The Moment

Enjoyable read. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:49 AM Title: The Moment

Oops. Looks like he caught her afterall. 🤓

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:23 AM Title: The Moment

Gees. She can't catch a break at the moment. Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:55 AM Title: The Moment

Lol. You know I'm so hypocritical. If canon Jerkob came out and said 'she's mine' that would be so repulsive and icky. But when Eddie says that well let's just say there is a lot of swooning happening around here. LOL

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:23 AM Title: The Moment

Oh. Didn't expect Eleazar. Edward is so sweet. Confused but sweet. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:03 AM Title: The Moment

Good backstory and Edward is always Hawt

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:32 AM Title: The Moment

This is really interesting. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:16 AM Title: The Moment

Oh. Wow. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:06 AM Title: The Moment

Nice mystery developing. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:25 PM Title: The Moment

Nice one. Thanks

Reviewer: NPattz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:17 AM Title: Taking Chances

So many tears.

such a lovely story.

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 11:44 AM Title: The Reunion

this is one of my most favorite ffs ever!!! i just love ever word of it...i know how hard it is being so busy and finding your mojo but one day you will do a future shot or something for this. as for me i cant wait to see what it brings...flove ya girlie!

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:00 PM Title: The Moment

Diferent I like it

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2016 4:52 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Really a great story!  Thanks for sharing with us. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 11:26 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a delightful escape from the angst and a great reconnecting for Bella and Charlie. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:03 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

Bella is definitely wise beyond her years. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:48 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

That was a great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:22 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

It was good of Bella to stand up for Lauren and Jessica. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:08 AM Title: Living Through the Pain

Another great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 12:51 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

So, they finally showed their true colors. What hateful people!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:02 PM Title: Living Through the Pain

I'm glad she gets to confront those horrible men!  

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