Date: 03 Mar 2021 3:22 AM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
A lovely story and its ending, but sad to hear that Esme and Carlisle have both passed away. Thank you for writing
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2017 2:32 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Sweetest story
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2017 2:31 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Sweetest story
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 10:57 PM Title: Return of the King
thanks so much for sharing this cool and exciting little story with us ;D
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 4:23 AM Title: Return of the King
Great story. The only thing I wondered about was the agents who were killed while guarding Rose. If I was reading correctly Jacob should have been on duty. Yet there was no mention of his death.
Again, great story! Thanks!
Date: 17 Oct 2015 9:50 AM Title: Return of the King
That was a fitting end to Caulfield's trial. Good to know he paid for his many crimes, just too bad they couldn't kill him twenty-eight or so times! Pretty exciting for Bella and Edward, too, having their son pop into the world in such a rush!
Date: 17 Oct 2015 9:28 AM Title: Return of the King
That turned out much better than it might have, with Rose and Bella both safe and not too hurt!
Date: 17 Oct 2015 9:14 AM Title: Return of the King
Here's to her finding a way out of her restraints! Plus, good for Rose, at least they got her back!
Date: 17 Oct 2015 8:51 AM Title: Return of the King
This is the part I always hate, when the good person goes up against the really bad guy! Things do not always go well!
Date: 17 Oct 2015 8:27 AM Title: Return of the King
Just what I was afraid of, that this sick bastard is fixating on Bella!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 11:29 PM Title: Return of the King
I smelled a rat as soon as Bella started questioning Victoria, something was just off about her story!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 11:17 PM Title: Return of the King
Poor Rosalie and poor Emmett! God only knows what that monster is doing to her! To have survived the first assault , only to fall into the same horror again is just hideous! They must find and rescue her!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 10:58 PM Title: Return of the King
The twin thing would be a huge break in the case andthe possible solution! Boy, the team really is smart and relentless chasing clues! It's great that Edward finally asked if he had a chance with Bella, too!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 10:33 PM Title: Return of the King
Since we know there's no magic involved in this, there somewhere has to be a rational explanation! It may well be twisted and devious on someone's part, but it will be there! Poor Bella, this is all falling on her like a ton of bricks!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 12:11 AM Title: Return of the King
Hmm! Jake and Bella in a comforting embrace, a hurt look on Edward's faceand the plot thickens! Looks like maybe he has feelings for his boss, perhaps! I loathe Jane already, by the way, what a bitch!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 10:36 PM Title: Return of the King
Jane the pain, huh? Sounds like there's interesting history there! Seems to be a mutual admiration society going on here, between Bella , Edward and his dad!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 10:14 PM Title: Return of the King
This is starting out as gripping as any episode of the television shows you mentioned! What a ghastly crime scene! You are sure getting it right!
Date: 21 Sep 2015 11:20 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
i think this is the first ww2 fanfiction i have read and let me say brava! it was brilliant. i know a little bit about what happened then from my grandparents. living here in alaska things were a little easier to deal with as my grandmother found a job out of high school and met my grandfather. i cant even imagine how it was to be alive during those times. thank you for making it like a movie for me.
Date: 10 Jun 2015 1:20 AM Title: International Relations
Loved it!
so sweet...the guy abstained for 4 years for Rose!
That's a miracle! Is there such a dream guy?
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:33 AM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
awesome little story ;) thanks so much for posting it on here ;D
Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:56 AM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
awesome start ;) i loved how he is 'uncut' ;D
Date: 06 Feb 2015 6:00 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
I loved this story. Good read!
Date: 02 Feb 2015 10:26 PM Title: Return of the King
enjoyed this story!!
Date: 19 Sep 2014 4:41 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
I just found your story the other day & started reading it. I don't review often, but have to say I am loving this story. Also, I love that Edward's ship is the USS Ranger. My dad was in the Navy during Vietnam and was stationed on the Ranger. Brings a smile to my face. :)
Date: 29 Apr 2014 5:49 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Enjoyed this story!!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:34 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
Thank s again for a really great story! Everything about it, happy and sad, miserable and terrifying, delirious and sweetly tender, was an absolute joy to read!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:10 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
Brings back a lot of lovely memories, this chapter! Nice to read about Bella and Edward and their new baby, and Carlisle and Esme.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:43 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
What a painfully romantic gesture, to ink their names on their ring fingers like that! It was kind of cute, too, for Bella to remember the blackout kiss, which made Edward remember also. Funny what gets lost in a drunken fog!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:41 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
So close but no cigar. Too much to drink didn't help matters either. Well, as you said, things are about to get better soon!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:25 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
Sometimes the interaction between these two makes me think of Jekyll and Hyde! Andy was so sweet to beat up Damon for hurting Bella like that, and I had to laugh when all the guys found out, except for Edward!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:08 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
Kind of like Edward, I'm a bit confused. If the guys are so sure he and Bella have feelings for each other, why are they threatening him like that? It is a really twisted mess they find themselves in, that's for sure! I feel bad for the both of them.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 2:41 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
That last scene on the beach almost made me sad, thinking how it will still be a couple years until that song can come true!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:59 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
I like that Edward has got his head out of his ass and decided to be Bella's friend again. This summer trip to the beach house was a good one just because of that fact.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:37 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
Quite a dance these two are doing around each other, and not a real happy one, either!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 11:42 PM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
No reason for anyone to hate on this look back to Edward and Bella's history. It is what happened and it took all this to get them to better times.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 10:53 PM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
The tingling hum was the sign, I guess, that there was a connection between these two right from the beginning. I wonder how hard Edward had to work to convince himself that she was too young and too innocent? That's quite a facade to maintain for the better part of seven years!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:53 AM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
I don't know whybi didn't see this before?? But improved it!! I've missed these two!! I've missed the whole bloody gang!! Beautifully written as always!!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:48 PM Title: Return of the King
Great, quick read!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:19 AM Title: International Relations
What a great story! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:01 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
:) loved this story
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[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:06 PM Title: Return of the King
:) loved this story
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:47 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Loved this story!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
Loved to see all the summers :)
Date: 01 May 2012 2:16 AM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2012 7:13 PM Title: Bella's Summer Knights
I have so loved this story from the begining to the end thanks so much an amazing story.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 9:04 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Loved this story as well!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:21 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
O my gosh! Wow! Two awful, awful James in your story! Lol!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2012 10:51 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Loved the story! Great job. I prefer ff.net over twcs, but I love how you can add pictures in the story, as opposed to adding links.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 8:58 AM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
You definitely captured the emotions. I have been there... It's one of the worst things I've ever had to do.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:58 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
What a neat and precious tale. I am a bit sad here to see that Esne and Carlisle were stolen away much too soon. This story was so well-written and done in a way that transports the reader back in time.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 8:43 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
The slow communication and the lack of technology that we take for granted today, must have truly made lives miserable during this time. You have done a great job of staying with the historical period here. Cigarette advertisements in women's magazines promised benefits to digestive health with smoking! I have a few of those old magazines in my collection and they are a hoot to read. LOL.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 8:10 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Great chapter!! And I was surprised at the baby's sex.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:52 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
Love it when the bad boys get their comeuppance! Can't wait to see what's next in store!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 3:42 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
This story rocks. You have a great story plot going here and I am just reading away to find out what happens next. Kind of like a good cheesy movie-- I absolutely can not pass one of those up. This story is adorable.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 1:49 PM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy
I have cried so much since the beginning of this story and have used a whole box of tissue and started on my 2nd box...
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:54 AM Title: Return of the King
Great story. Good luck with your new book. I'll be waiting for more stories.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:26 AM Title: Return of the King
Great ending.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:04 AM Title: Return of the King
Wow. great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:26 PM Title: Return of the King
I loved it I really hope after your break that you will write more fro these two great story!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:04 PM Title: Return of the King
I knew Bella could take James down that was really good
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: Return of the King
I hope her team finds her soon
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:42 PM Title: Return of the King
Oh crap I hope Bella can stop him and still be safe .
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:32 PM Title: Return of the King
I knew that he was going to come after her I just hope Edward is as good as Bella thinks he his and gets to him fast.