Date: 04 Feb 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 50
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 49
omg that was so hott!!!! and hes not even done
Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 49
OMFG I want one of him lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 49
Chapter so hot, I love the way that Edward cares for Bella.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 49
loving it. He is such a sweetheart
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 48
love me some domward in his geeky Lawyer self
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 49
I loved the chapter!(:
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 49
*strikes match and lights up cigarette* I'm exhausted.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 48
Damn! Who wouldn't want this man to take control like that?
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 47
Renegotiating the FwB rules is a small win for Edward. He's at least getting his cuddling out of it. Bella still seems more-so emotional detached than Edward. I can't wait for her to fall in love with him.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 49
*fans self* OMG! This is fantastic! He is the best friend EVER!!! :)=)
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 49
He's calling her, "baby". That should tell them both something. This story is rocking hot.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 49
Love how kinky your writing Edward with his dirty talk could have more of it
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 49
I wonder if they realize the pet names and tenderness that emerge when their walls come down, and they're together? They're only kidding themselves. 😏
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 49
i would like to have a lover like that. he is sexy the way he focuses on pleasin her instead of worrying about his own release. keep up the ood work
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 49
awemazing!!!!!!!! soo good!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 48
i think...i'm a little....wet... now.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 48
Holly shit Please sounds like a great Idea to me.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 48
at least shes into kinky and willing to try new things. i hope that he doesnt get into trouble for what they are doing in his office. keep up the good work
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 48
Best & worst cliffie EVER!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 48
Looking forward to more
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 47
Edward is already giving into the idea of Bella being his girlfriend! That is SUPER exciting!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 48
Me first - after you, of course!!
Date: 01 Feb 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 47
CHRIST I FREAKING LOVE YOU! I LOVE EDWARD,THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 47
Poor Edward! He NEEDS to speak up & tell Bella exactly how he is feeling. If he doesn't, then how will he ever get what he wants out of life? His inability to voice his opinions, thoughts, & feelings make it difficult to believe that he is a lawyer, who has to speak up for a living! LOL Seriously though...it also makes it possible for Bella to continue to use Edward, & be domineering towards him.
And the both of them NEED to quit with the "friend" bullshit! At this point, it's beyond stupid, immature, & redundant. Yes, they're friends, BUT...it's SO much more than that, if only they'd open their eyes to what's right in front of them! Although I doubt Bella would ever let it come to fruition.
If they keep putting everything off in the "friend" box, hiding behind it like cowards, then it's NEVER gonna happen for them. They'll both just wind up hurt - Edward for sure. :(
And Bella is kind of being a worm...using Panera as a peace offering after avoiding him for a week - all because the guy wanted to cuddle - is pretty pathetic on her part. Even though deep down I'm sure she knows she's wrong, this is her idea of making it right? I don't buy it - Bella is too selfish & cold - there has to be something in it for her.
So in all honesty, I think she was horny after going all week without, & came there to get hers, to get a thrill - have sex in his office. Bringing him food was nothing more than a ploy. She didn't even let him eat it! She acted all concerned that he hadn't eaten all day, but like I said, if she was, she wouldn't be selfishly sitting in his lap wanting to fulfill her selfish needs while knowing that he must be hungry...& that he wants "more" out a a relationship than just sex. It's like she wasn't even listening to him...or that she even cares. :(
I know I don't think like a man, but neither does Edward, really - he's sweet, loving, caring, & sensitive. That being said, he shouldn't allow this to continue. People always want what they can't have...maybe if he ends things with Bella, she will realize a lot of important things...hopefully learn a lesson. Besides, while he's fooling around with Bella, which basically is a waste of his time, he could be missing out on meeting the love of his life...someone who wants what he wants...someone who is normal.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 47
They are compromising :) that is good...now a little action in his office on the desk, can't wait.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 47
hoping no one catches b's eye while in this arrangement with e
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 47
He is going to get his cuttle
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 47
OMG! They are getting closer, Bella let him kiss, he is so sweet.
I'm anxious for more.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 47
Oh, my!! Looking forward to desk sex!!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 47
Ah, Bella. Kiss the man! You know you want to!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 47
looking forward to more
Date: 31 Jan 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 47
Glad they could compromise. Hope she gives in soon an kisses him.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 46
I feel bad for Edward. He is starting to want more. Bella is clueless. She is just happy to have an orgasm. She must not have the desire to have an intimate relationship. Before Edward, all she chose were creeps, who she knew would not be a forever relationship.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 46
Poor Edward. I am in love with this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 46
Think they are both in way deep. Wonder who will break first. Think it will be B and she'll kiss him
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 46
He wants to be in something or someone even deeper!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 45
I can't even get words into my brain to describe how amazing that was and then Edward turning into his super sweet self at the end is the perfect whip cream & cherry atop a lemon tart!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 44
That was FAN-flipping-TASTIC! I so want her to kiss him in the moment. I can tell it's coming. She is already having to remind herself. Maybe there needs to be another work function, so the kissing will be forced.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 46
Poor Edward - but I am sure Bella is having those feelings too
I love this story so much! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 46
Hmm... double dating with the boss, could be interesting.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 46
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 46
He wants it all with Bella and Felix can see it to
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 46
I always love it :$
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 46
Oh Edward!!!! Bella is being difficult just come right over here and I will gladly take her place!!! Lmao love this story
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 46
i think he needs to trick her into going out to different places and to more company gatherings under the guise that even tho they are having sex that they are still friends that can go out and do friend stuff. she will then start to give in to her feelings of wanting more then just sex but a real relationship. keep it coming on pins and needles waiting for the big break through with them.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 46
Edward is madly in love and addicted to Bella's body.
I hope Bella gives room for him in his bed.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 46
lol no single friends that i know of but he sure does want to be deep inside of her. i wander how he will use his bonus when he gets it. keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 46
Bella is such a coldhearted, dumb twat! I HOPE it all blows up in her face, spectacularly! I HOPE that Edward comes to his senses & realizes very SOON that she's only using him, & IS going to hurt him. I HOPE he backs out before it's too late - there is NO sex that's worth a broken heart, or allowing yourself to be used, or becoming someone's doormat for! I HOPE that this doesn't change who he is in a negative way - he's too good of a person for that!
I HOPE that Edward quickly finds somebody who is nice, & who will love & treat him right - the way he deserves to be treated, & doesn't dwell on Bella - she's NOT worth it!!! And I HOPE Bella gets to watch from the sidelines...burning with jealousy...knowing what she COULD'VE had, if only she hadn't been such a STUPID bitch!!!
She DESERVES a dose of her own medicine! And I HOPE that she has to move out & find her a dump to live in on her meager salary - hopefully, good ol' Edward will cut her off completely, & won't be around anymore to support her/wipe her ass, or fuck her anymore. But hey...she could always get back with Paul & shack up with him! A perfect match made in Hell! LOL Oh, I forgot...Paul didn't even want her! Maybe he isn't so stupid after all! LOL That should've been a sign for Edward NOT to get involved with her, if Paul didn't even want her!
I also HOPE that when Esme & Alice finds out about this ridiculous, hurtful arrangement that they drop Bella as a friend, as well. I just don't want to see anyone mollycoddle her, make excuses for her, or make what she's doing/done okay. I mean, it's inevitable that she is going to hurt their brother/son, probably badly. :( So I don't want her to be able to run to Alice or Esme & whine about it, play the victim, or be able to move in with either of them when this is all said & done. She NEEDS to be on the outside looking in, & everyone should treat her as coldly as she's treating Edward. I think it would be a VERY good lesson for her to learn!
Not to mention how Bella - "Miss Independent" ranted & made such a big, ridiculous deal about the rent on the apartment, which Edward has always been nothing but kind & gracious about, which she basically threw back in his face instead of being appreciative! So now she NEEDS to see what it's REALLY like - see how far her money gets her, & see how happy she is living in some shit hole apartment in the ghetto, all ALONE! :)
Such a shame...she "had" a REAL man, a GOOD man in EVERY way...& she's shitting all over him. :( May she get everything that she's got coming to her, & NOT in a good way!
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I Think.Edward.needs stop Being so easy.Bella using him for sex and Edwards going to get hurt. Sorry You don't cuddle with your friend after sex.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 46
I want to see jealous Edward of bella. Pleaseeee update soon. I Need It!!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 46
Edward seems to be way more emotionally attached then Bella...I hope that isn't going to be bad for him.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 46
Love this Edward.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 46
LOL, poor Edward ;)
Date: 30 Jan 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 45
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 45
They're so good together! I'm curious whose going to slip into kissing first, because Bella was missing that before;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 44
Demanding Lawyerward? That would be a YES!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 45
Tourcher is so good. She wants him to kiss her as bad as he wants to kiss her
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 44
OMFG that is hot he is good
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 45
FYI it's a great part of my day when I check for updates and see this fic or any of your others has been updated it. You've fast lay become one of my favorite writers right up there with robshandmonkey and nyddi :)
Date: 30 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 45
Love, as always! And I agree, one of them needs to break that no kissing rule! I can't wait to see what kind of mess Rosalie is going to get into. Can't wait for next update! :-)
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 45
God these two are smokin HOT together !! Edward had a bit of a Dom moment there. They just don't realize it's the love for each other that makes the sex what it is...KEEP IT COMING
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 45
THIS. IS. AWESOME!!! I love it!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 45
I love it. But I want them kissing too!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 45
oooh sooooo niceeeee
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 45
The sofa is definitely ruined, they are so addicted and unnoticed, the rule of no kissing is not preventing involvement.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 45
How can they not realize they are perfect for each other? That was freaking awesome!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 45
That sounded more like making love than fucking... J/S
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 44
WOW! Bella is very lucky, I think Alice will notice the change when you see them, they are very touching.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 45
mmmm...WOW! What more is there to say. I do wonder when they are going to start showing their true feelings for each other.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 44
I would definitely make sure I had a friend with benefits if he looked like Edward. I love this story.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 44
That's just kick ass....I wonder just how adventurous our boy is gonna get
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 44
Lawyerward is the shiznit!!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 44
yumminess indeed!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 44
I absolutely LOVE Lawyerward, but I can't stand Skankella the weirdo. She truly does NOT deserve someone as wonderful as him! Paul was way more her speed/caliber, & is EXACTLY the type of guy she deserves! Too bad she can't get back with that mangy mutt, & leave Edward alone before he gets too deep with her. Sadly, he probably IS already in too deep! :(
And I think that he was trying to "mark" her in any way that he could because deep down, he doesn't really trust her to stay faithful or hold up her end of the bargain...& I DON'T blame him! But, he should know that you can't make a housewife out of a ho! LOL
He deserves someone SO much better than Bella! If Esme or Alice knew what Bella proposed/suggested & is doing with Edward, I don't think that they would be so gung-ho for her & Edward to be together. They'd probably tell her how ashamed or disappointed they were with her, & rightly so. I know if Edward was my brother or son, & I knew the truth about how Bella really is, I wouldn't want her within a 10 mile radius of him, let alone living with him, being friends with him, & certainly NOT fucking him! She's honestly NO better than Rosalie!
She's lucky enough to be one of the rare few that get's the privelege of meeting/knowing & being with someone like Edward, yet she's the type of "woman" that takes what few genuinely good men that there are left out there, & ruins it/him.
Most likely, she'll eventually cause him to turn as cold & selfish as she is. :( Instead of being sweet, sensitive, caring Edward, she'll cause him to only expect sex without love or commitment, & be totally detached. He'll try to hurt or use people as he had been. :( This is unfortuantely what happens most of the time...a good man will meet the WRONG woman, & it will change him for the worst. And then women want to complain, or don't understand WHY they can't meet a good man, or wonder WHY men aren't loving, faithful, kind, sensitive, or caring. More than likely, they have some tramp like Bella to "thank" for that! So I ask...WHY is it that women like Bella always seem to meet the good ones?! It's NOT fair! LOL
Honestly though, what Bella is doing with Edward is demeaning, & boils down to nothing more than playing games - playing with someone's heart, mind, & emotions. Sure he's enjoying himself right now because the weight of it hasn't sunk in yet, but eventually when it does, Edward will come to think of himself as nothing more than a "fuck", or someone to use for good sex, & he will feel used & unworthy of love. He's the type that will get just as hurt as any normal woman would by thinking this, or being treated this way, whether he allows it, or not. :(
Looking forward to more...where maybe Bella gets run over by a bus or something, & then Edward meets Miss Wonderful. LOL ;)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 44
Nodding head in total agreement of your A/N!
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this chapter, story, characters!!!! :)=)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 44
looking forward to more