Date: 28 Jul 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 104
Sad! Terrible to know those types people are out there. They don't often have children that turn out so good. Edward is one of the lucky ones. But one can only imagine the burdens he carries.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 104
Awwww that was sweet of his mom to take him to have fun for a day. His dad was such an ass.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 104
Crying like a baby here.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 103
It won't suck in a bad way hehehe. I think he did enough sucking for the both of you.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 103
Edward is one good lover let me tell you! Wow, the ASS Edward, damn your good!!!!! Great update.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 103
woo hoo Go Sexy E
Date: 26 Jul 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 103
Very good chapter!
Date: 26 Jul 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 103
That is a wonderful shower ;)
Date: 26 Jul 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 102
sounds like fun
Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 101
i cant wait lol
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 102
Loved the chapter. They are really working everything out. Now if they can make through him telling her the truth. See ya next time.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 101
I spent part of my honeymoon in Venice. You can't drive into Venice. You take a water taxi or vaporetto. Love the story. Love all things Italian. xxx Joey
Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 102
they are too cute together.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 101
Glad B stood up to daddy.
Date: 24 Jul 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 102
So sweet, I see lots of crap is yet to come. So for now, I'm enjoying the fluff.
Date: 24 Jul 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 102
What a perfect birthday snuggled up in bed.
Date: 24 Jul 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 101
Very pretty. The cat is funny revenge for leaving him. I am sure if Charlie knew who the guy was that attacked Bella he would be dead by now.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 99
Wow Angie is being an insensitive biatch.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 100
good times to be had and love is in the air now they just need to say the words to each other with out hinting at it.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 99
I hope Angie flys back to seattle on her broom lol.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 100
Love these two chapters. Angie is a real bitch. And can I just say Go Jessica and Charlie! Maybe Angie will learn from her mistakes, but if she is as spoiled as she appears, I'm doubtful. They technically said I Love You to each other and I know they both knew what the other meant. I'm looking forward to reading more and checking out the pictures. See ya next time.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 100
That was cute.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 99
Yeah nearly being raped takes the fun out of things. I understand why Angie is the way she is.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 98
What a thing for a kid to go through. I am so glad he has Bella and she wont let him pull away.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 97
it is a good think he can go Ed bot.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 96
She is naughty lol
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 95
she can handle that and more
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 94
Emmett can see it the love they both have.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 93
what a great present he is going to get
Date: 22 Jul 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 92
Edward is trying to keep Charlie clean
Date: 22 Jul 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 91
lol fun is over or is it
Date: 22 Jul 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 90
he is having fun good for him and her lol
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 98
I truely look foward to each & everyone of ur UPDATES!! U an amazingly talented writer who truely is gifted in their writting ability. This story is truly captivating & truly has intriguied me very much!!! I definatly give this story a 10 star rating in plot development & intriguie!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 98
I can say I am glad Edward killed him he deserved to die.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 98
So brutal. Would love to think this only happens in books but it would be delusional to believe that. Or maybe wishful thinking...
theirs I read thus story the more I want Charlie & Emmit to turn out to be good guys. I hope the both of them together brought Edward in as undercover to get the Volturie and more importantly, protect Bella. They all need out.
Love the drama in this story.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 98
OOOOH, that was a good chapter. Edward really had a hard life. I'm so scared for him because when he tells her that he is F.B.I. he is going to be soooo screwed! Those are going to be few emotional chapters. I have my kleenex ready!
Date: 22 Jul 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 98
poor E. Crazy flashback
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 89
No shit he is a fan of blowjob lol
Date: 21 Jul 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 88
that was some hot stuff i want some lol
Date: 20 Jul 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 97
Poor Bella. This mob thing has to break soon so poor Edward can be himself with Bella. He is going to go nuts with all this pressure.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 87
Good boy very good boy lol
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 86
How much is he going to beat himself up for this
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 85
I think she will be pissed when she finds out but she will know it is for the best
Date: 20 Jul 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 97
What an asshole can get a woman on his own it takes 3 goons to help him capture a woman then rape them I am glad he was arrested.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 96
He shocked her for sure. Bit she seems to recover well. I wonder what happened with rose.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 97
It seems the elements are against them. First he tells her she can't cum until they're back home, then he agrees to make her cum on the dance floor, then shit, Bella's attacked. Now they're traumatized. Been a hell of a lot of emotion in the last two chapters.
Ready for more :)
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 97
oh wow. poor Bella. go bad ass e.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 96
aww poor lonely em.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 97
I think that was a perfect moment for him to tell her that he loved her and vise versa. Good chapter
Date: 19 Jul 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 95
oooh E is such a tease.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 94
Em is too funny
Date: 19 Jul 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 95
Yes you torture us.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 94
I love that bathroom it is amazing I want that shower. Emmett is so funny.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 84
He is sure she will leave him when she finds out who he realy is
Date: 19 Jul 2013 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 83
wow that was hot hot hot
Date: 19 Jul 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 95
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 19 Jul 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 95
Whoa, full of confidence aren't you Edward. You're like a regular porn star now. I'm Loving it!!!!!!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 93
LOVE Limoncello!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 93
aww for protective em.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 92
em is such a lovable goof
Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 93
Lemon drops are yummy. Some alone time away from Charlie's watchfull eye what a good way to spend your b day.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 92
He is a cat-parrot daddy. I think Edward is quite fond of Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 93
Either, Angie, Jessica, one fo their boyfriends, or both of them, are working for Aro.
My money is on the girls.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 91
She has turned him in to a sex monster. He is being very naughty.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 90
He is cute when he want to cuddle. The kitty is cute loving it on Edwards shoulder.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 91
Oh pervy Edward. One little blowjob and he's going crazy! Oh how I love him.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 91
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 17 Jul 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 91
those two are too cute together with the teasing and all. He is def getting more purvy.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 90
oooh She did creat a monster. lol
Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 82
its good he loves her
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 89
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Jul 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 89
Mmm yummy I want some mobward he is so sweet. What a huge step he took he should be very proud.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 89
woo hoo....getting closer to the big deed.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 89
AWWWW, sooo fuckin' HOT is all that I can say. If I was a man I would love blowjobs to!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 89
Ain't love grand! Another (hot) milestone conquered!
Thinking maybe Charlie and Emmitt know Edward is FBI and they are the ones who asked for the help.
Date: 14 Jul 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 88
THAT WAS HOT! LOVE YOU!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 88
Oh yes that was hotttt !!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 88
Go E Get your girl
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 88
Oh my... ungh
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 88
Sweet heavenly father, that was so sexy. Honestly, like it's been a while (T.M.I. I know, oh well)so that a was ultra hot for meh! Eddie boi really knows what he's doing. Goooooo Eddie, Get it, get it! Ok I'm done now ;p