[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 149
I like Charlie in this one too
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 149
I really hope that nothing happens to Charlie in prison because Bella couldn't handle that. I also hope that Charlie gets to explain what he did to Bella
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 149
Poor Charlie..poor Bella!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 149
Glad they at least let charlie come to the hospital. Poor B. Riley and james got off wayyyyyyyy too easy.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 149
You are so right. Charlie might be a criminal but he's still a good person. He loves his family and only wants the best for them. You can't ask more of him than that. I can't wait until Bella and Edward can talk to each other. Bella has a very long road ahead of her, both mentally and physically. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 148
I didn´t quite understand something, my mother tongue is not English so maybe it´s my fault because I don´t know as much as you do, since English is your mother tongue.
When you say "I shot him three times.one in the chest and one in the head. He slumped off the table, dragging one of Bella´s legs off of it."
Does that mean that James ripped one of Bella´s leg from her body? I mean, what do you mean with off of it? What is that IT?
Please answer me! I would really apriciate it. I love your stories and keep on writing!
Best wishes!
Author's Response:
Bella's legs were splayed on the table. When he fell off the table, he dragged her broken leg off the table with him. Now ONE leg is on the table and the other is hanging off the table, over James' dead body.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 148
Can't wait for the next chapters. I hope they can fix her legs. I am so glad Edward found her before she was raped.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 146
Aro is definitely sick
Date: 17 Sep 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 148
It's a pity Edward had to kill Riley and James. They got it easy. I hope Aro gets a suitable punishment.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 148
James and Riley got off way too easily, but under the circumstances, it couldn't have went down any other way. At least Aro got arrested.
Poor Bella. Maybe she and Edward can heal emotionally together now, while her body heals from the physical abuse.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 147
I have chills.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 146
I agree, Aro is a sick motherfucker.
I didn't expect Bella to be Aro's child. I'm hoping Aro lied about that.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 145
I hate James. I'm so looking forward to his death, I just hope it's not quick.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 144
Please tell me Renata isn't Charlie's daughter. That'd be so fucked up.
Can't wait to find out why Aro is holding Bella.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 148
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 146
What I don't get is if Isabella is really Aro's daughter...why would he kill his own flesh and blood???
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 143
This could be interesting.
Let's add Renata and Alec to the list of dead mo-fos. As well as Sulpulcia.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 148
Oh so so good!! I can't get enough! Love every part of it! Awesome!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 146
update son plwase
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 142
What James did was a form of rape. He's a disgusting magnot. I can't wait for Edward to kill the bastard.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 141
Poor Bella. James and Riley are dead men walking, when Edward finds her like that, they're all good as gone.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 148
Holy crap!!! Three realllllly intense chapters. Whew! Glad that part is over. Nice work writing difficult, but necessary subject matter. Can't wait to see where everyone ends up.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 148
All I can say is WOW! great chapters.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 147
Bella ought to be dead after all that.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 146
So why is Aro killing his own child?
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 148
poor B. Hope she'll B ok. James and Riley got off too easily, but whatever. At least Aro is in custody,
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 147
James and Riley better not have gotten off that easily.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 146
OMG I hope they all get horrible, painful, LONG deaths.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 148
I'm so excited that they are back together but I hope Bella can survive this both mentally and physically. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 147
I. Strain,y hope Edward shot James and Riley. Heaven help Aro, although I truely believe that he will rot in help for this. Can't wait to read the next chapter so I must go right now.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 146
Aro is one sick bastard. I'm off to read the next chapter and I hope that Edward and Charlie get to end Aro, James and Riley soon.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 148
Thank god. I didn't think my heart could handle more. Bravo to you, that was awesome.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 148
WOW what a twist is Aro is really what the test says!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 148
Reunited but she is totally F-ed up!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 147
Finally...darn I was really beginning to think that you hate Bella
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 146
I hope we are getting closer...but I am at my limit with her getting beat on for no reason except they want to.
Date: 16 Sep 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 145
James is so disgusting. I can't wait until Edward finds him and makes him pay for hurting Bella. Then he can start hurting each and everyone else.
Date: 16 Sep 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 145
She is going to have such physical scars and internal trauma. Can't wait until Edward finds her.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 145
What a bunch of b******s!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 145
Very ready for her rescue.
Date: 16 Sep 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 145
Okay...I am about at my limit with this as I am sure Bella is....
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 145
She is one strong woman to put up with all that abuse and I can't wait until Edward, Emmett and Charlie get their hands on James and Riley. And Aro since he is apparently retraining Sulpulcia in how to act and I think she is in love with Charlie and Bella is their daughter. Did I guess correctly? Can't wait until the next chapter.
Date: 16 Sep 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 145
Well at least Alec is dead....now just James, Aro, Renata, and Riley to go....
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 145
update again soon please.
Date: 16 Sep 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 144
Crazy! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 144
Omg...she's her mother!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 144
What the fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 144
Holy crap! She loves Charlie? Were they together before Renee and Charlie got together? Wow! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 144
hmm wonder if Picia is telling the truth or not. Is she really helping her? hmmmm
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 144
holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!! what the fuck just happened!!!!!!!!!!! like holy hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor bella no one deserves that type of treatment no matter what!!!!!!!!!!! like it's just fucking terrible and god i hope all those bastards die!!!!! especially riley james and renenta!!!!!!!! hope they die a long torturous death and go through exactly what bella went through!!!!!!! like its just fucking terrible!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 144
Did I see that coming
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 144
more more more
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 143
I hope she is genuine
Date: 15 Sep 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 143
Hope they all pay dearly for hurting b
Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 143
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 143
I am not sure what she will...say.. When is B getting out of here? When she is dead?
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 143
Poor Bella Edward is going to kill them all!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 143
I think Bella should probably be dead from internal injuries from all those beatings.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 143
All of them better pray that Emmett and Charlie find them before Edward. If Edward gets his hands on them, they will wish they were dead. Bella is so strong and is a fighter. She just has to hang on a little longer. As for Sulpulcia, she was probably taken and forced to marry Aro. That would be my guess can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 143
Sulpicia must have been forced into her place. Maybe she'll be some small relief for Bella.
Date: 14 Sep 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 142
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 14 Sep 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 142
Awe, she if finally coming around to wanting Edward.
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 142
Ed hurry....he is so disgusting!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 142
Definition of rape?? "Rape is a type of sexual assault "usually" involving sexual intercourse, which is initiated by one or more persons against another person without that person's consent." I'd definitely say she was raped.
Great chapter, hurry Edward.
Author's Response:
I guess what I want to say is that she won't be 'taken' against her will. By your definition, yes, she was 'raped.' However, she will not be violated in that manner (having penetrative sex without her consent). Thanks for staying iwht me...
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 142
James needs to pay.... slowly.....painfully. Stay strong B
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 142
O.M.G!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 141
James and Riley are dead they just don't know it yet.
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 141
Grrr f'ing James. Poor b
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 141
I'm bracing myself
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 141
I can't wait to read more. I hope Edward finds here before they torture her beyond what she can stand.
Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 141
i love this story so much
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 141
I can't wait to see what happens next and why the have B. Please update soon.
Date: 13 Sep 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 141
I love that subconsciously she knows that Edward is coming for her.
Date: 13 Sep 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 141
Oh crap...this is going to suck for her! Hurry up Ed!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 140
He is deadly when he wants to be. Aro is gonna be sorry when Edward is done with him.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 139
Love the pic of Edward with the gun.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 138
Really aro will call him with Bella right there oh the nerve of that guy.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 137
I am glad Emmett is seeing things clearer now. They just need to find her now.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 140
I hope Edward destroyed the computer, so no one else gets that information. It is a good thing that Bella is tough. Edward will save her.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 140
Please! UPLOAD! Reading this is turning to a necesity now!! I NEED TO KNOW THE END!!!! AAARRRRRGH!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2013 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 140
The last paragraph gave me chills. So, looking forward to some action.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 140
Well she fought them. They did not just take her and her give in. When the drugs wore off she vomited then they went at her.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 140
Poor Bella. James and Riley better say their prayers because Edward is going to unleash one hell of a ass whooping on them. Can't wait for more
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 131
Well someone got her because she was alone. Charlie and Emmett will beat him perhaps kills him. Then again they might not as they need his help to find her.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 140
Great chapter can't wait for the Bella's POV.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 140
Go E. Go get your girl!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 140
Definitely looking forward to the next 10 chapters to hurry right along. I am waiting to speed read through them lol
I just dont like reading Bella getting tortured. But I will endure it for this awesome story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 140
Looking forward to to the next update