:)

I wish Edward could have been judge, jury, and executioner for Aro. Dude is one sick motherfucker.

How precious was the Edward and Esme moment. In a lot of ways, he still seems to be that little boy.

Looking forward to Bella and Charlie time.

*sniff* Perfect!

Aro is a sick sick man....Ed is sooo sweet!

Loved it :)

Loved it!

aww that was sweet of him to do send his mom for her great chapter loved it

Loved it!

Edward knew exactly what/who Bella needed

The mom, and what I hope others see as a decent, caring person, wants to wrap Bella and Edward in giant bear hugs. They both need someone to take care of them and just let them heal. I know Edward wouldn't want the hug so I guess I'd have to hug the trust and love back into Bella so she can hug him. ;)

Loved the chapter and can't wait for more. 

oh Bella. A mother's love you wanted and I think your prayer was answered in the form of Edward's mother. lovely chapter.

Awwww. Ask for a mommy and you get Esme. The ultimate, eternal mother. 

Poor thing I feel sorry for her,,,she really didn't deserve all that I still don't get why they did all that to her

Awww she's trying! Please update again soon, I can't wait to hear Bella'S response :-)

Thanks for the update. I think Bella is holding back, but that's understandable. I'm sure she will be better as soon as she talks with Charlie.

Loved, loved , loved it. I can't wait until Charlie get to see and talk to his little girl, and she will always be his little girl. They are coming along quite well but they still have lots of work to do. Can't wait for the next one. 

I'm so glad I favorited this story here too as FFN is a total fail in alerts today!  I love that she's even considering letting Edward back in at all. She must love him. I get that she doesn't trust him yet, but she will.....I know she will. What a nightmare she went through. It's a wonder that she isn't totally fucking bonkers!

Poor Bella...get better :)

Chapter 53, you nearly give me a heart attak! 

You definitely deserve a "Woo Hoo" for this one. They both are fifty shades of fucked up but they have each other (forgive the quote from Fifty Shades, I loved it as FF).  You're story definitely ranks up there with that one on my Best Stories Ever list. See ya next time. 

I'm curious as to WHY Edward says that Charlie has forgiven him, when it was Charlie who wanted him there in the first place?!? What's there to forgive?!? That's like being mad at someone for coming over when you invited them. Makes no sense to me!  

And Emmett...he doesn't need to forgive Edward for shit, IMHO. He already beat the shit out of Edward like the cowardly pussy that he is, waiting until Edward was asleep in bed, & already injured to make his move. Even after all of that, Edward still saved his idiotic ass from being arrested, which he SHOULD'VE been!

If anyone needs to be forgiven, it's Emmett & Bella! She wrongfully put her hands on Edward, just like Emmett did, severely injuring him when he wasn't even fully healed from saving her ass, & then she went off & got herself in major trouble...crying for Edward the whole time. As cruel as it may sound...it kind of serves her right...although I wouldn't wish on anyone what happened to her.

Bella & Emmett's anger & blaming Edward was so very misplaced & WRONG!!! He was doing his job...a job that he done VERY well, seeing as how he saved & protected Bella numerous times - I think he went above & beyond the call of duty, and STILL is! Hell, he saved her when neither Charlie or Emmett did, on more than one occasion. And it's not like he purposefully lied about anything...he was undercover! What choice did he have?! Even still, he told her the truth about things as much as he could, more than anyone else would have in his position.

I think the person that Bella really NEEDS to be angry with Charlie! It's his lifestyle that put her in this danger, & ultimately got her hurt. It is even him who brought Edward into her life, though without Edward around, I'm sure it would've been so much worse - she would've died in that car bombing early in the story, & I honestly doubt Bella would've been found or survived without Edward's help this time. Plus, I wonder if he's known all along that Bella wasn't his daughter? 

Bella also NEEDS to take some of the blame & responsibility on herself, too! She is a big girl, & made her own often foolish choices. No matter who Edward really was, she didn't have to get involved with him, or be so eager to push herself on him like she always was. She also never seemed to listen, or truly take into consideration the danger she was really in, even after Edward was recently beaten & stabbed defending her from the Volturi's, yet again.

She needs to quit mistreating Edward. He's NOT her punching bag! He's been there for her more than anyone. He's still doing all he can to try to help her, & to make her happy, like getting Charlie an extra month with her, yet she doesn't seem to really appreciate it. All she does is fly off the handle & get angry without even thinking logically, which is what got her in so much trouble...which is WHY she's sitting in a hospital right now! Doesn't sound like she's learned her lesson.  

If anything, I feel like Edward is more of a victim in all of this, & I'm glad he stood up to Bella by telling her that he's NOT a piece of shit, & threatening to leave. He needs to do that more - with Charlie & Emmett, too, although I have to admit, Charlie's been pretty decent about everything...then again, he should be, like I said above.

Can't wait for more! ;)

Yeah. Go Bella!

feel weird reading this here...love that she is willing to try with him again. both of them need individual time and healing before that can happen. love this story!

woohoo

Yay for second chances! I'm very glad she's willing to try. Thanks for sharing!

:)

Knew it

Oh, so sad for Edward. I wish Charlie could have told her what happened. She might have taken it better.

Oh dear

Well damn, what a cliffie? These last chapters were insanely emotional. I need to go read something a little lighter but I am also scouring my inbox for the next updates.

Dude! Killing me. Update soon! ;)

She handled that better than I thought. Hopefully she will realize what she did while she was being tortured, she loves him and needs him in her life. She still has so much to work through. See ya next chapter. 

Awww, such a tear jerker!

Glad he told her.  Think the end had to happen that way

Ha ha clarissa...

Welp... she's gonna fly off the handle with that statement.

You are evil!!!

I am proud of Bell for being honest with herself and Edward. They need to talk and clear the air. Edward is giving up everything to be with her. She needs to respect him for this show of affection. He really didn't even lie to her. He is who he said he was. It is not like she doesn't know his soul.

poor B has a long road ahead for sure.

200 chapters, yeah. That means there is lots yet to come. 

Now off to recovery. Now they'll both have trama to recover from and live through. 

I look forwsrd to more.

Love love love! Can't get enough!

Thanks for the update.  Glad to see she is coming around 

Way to go E.  Glad Charlie gets a little more time with B.

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Edward really pulled some string for that to happen. Fortunately, he knew the right people who could angle being the liason and help pull those strings. I loved this chapter. Emmett was hilarious. I can't wait for Bella to wake up although I know it will not be sunshine and roses for a while. See ya next chapter. 

Glad he could get Charlie out for Bella's recovery. I almost hate getting new chapters cause their never long enough. Lol.  Thanks for the great story. 

God for Charlie nice play Ed!

Why would he give up his own daughter to james hands

Charlie is actually a very good man. Bella has to be ok.