Thank you!!

Aww what a relief for them 

But if Aro can't have kids then who is Renata's father?

oh yes! I am so glad to hear this!  I knew that Charlie was her father in every way that counted, but now to hear that he is truly her biological father is like icing on the cake!  I knew Aro had no balls....LOL!!

love it :0)```

Sorry to hear that you got pulled off FF. :( They've unfortunately been doing that to a lot of writers, so try not to take it too personally, although I do understand your frustration.

You are one of my favorite authors, & I'm glad that I could come here & get your stories! ;)

As for Bella...I'm still aggravated with her! I know she's been through a lot, but she still don't look at things the right way. She still isn't treating Edward right, & I feel that she doesn't deserve him. She seems so ungrateful most of the time. Edward has the patience of a saint, that's for sure!  

Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)

loved it! Thank God she is charlie's daughter!

Can't wait for more

Thank goodness that one was cleared up. Aro is a piece of scum!!

Oh thank heavens for that result and ewww, that's too much info about that gross jerk, Aro. Thank the lord almighty he's sterile. He doesn't need to reproduce. The scumbag! Thanks for sharing! 

SOO GOOD!

:)

Great chapter!  We are getting there!  I am anxious to see the paternity results  :)

great job!!

Another great chapter. I loved Carlisle's comment that he was in the mood to arrest someone. They have hall come a long way already but there is still a long road ahead. I love seeing the alert in my inbox that a new chapter has posted. Keep Em Coming!  :)

I see that this time I got no alert for this chapter from FFN. Did they take this story down?  No matter, I like reading it here better anyway!  She is getting her trust for him back, and that's good, but she may have nightmares for a while to come from the horrendous experience she went through.  I look forward to each new chapter from this engrossing story. Thanks for writing!

At least she is somewhat home!

great chapter loved it

I don't know, maybe I just missed it. But having a decoy didn't make much sense to me if Bella and Charlie were suppose to go to their mansion anyway. So why go to Edward's? The media wouldn't be able to get into their home to harass them.

Anyway, I like Rose's threat to hug Edward. And Edward's nervousness for his new houseguests. He has no need to be anxious, he's already told Bella everything there is to tell about himself... no more secrets, right?

Favorite word of the chapter...."weaseliest"...LOL!  Love how Rose threatened to hug Edward....I'm so happy that all is out in the open so now everyone can be their real selves with everyone else!

What unmean she is aros?

well it went better after she got it off her chest and cant wait to see wat happens next update soon

Oh.....

Glad to didn't prolong that talk to long, and that Charlie is contesting it. I'm hoping Aro lied and faked it all. But proud of Charlie for reassuring Bella that no matter what, she is his principessa.

Thank God Charlie has some sense.

I think Charlie already knows. I think Renee told him. I think Bella was a product if rape.

I'm so glad they're back in Seattle.  I wonder is Charlie has known all along....

Poor Bella I keep repeating myself but it is sooo true

Yes! 

It's sad to say, but yes, this could happen in any hospital enemy with the best intentions.  Edward to the rescue was great. She needs a hero. 

:)

I love that she said it back!  I love how he cherishs her and shows her with more than words how he loves her. 

great chapter loved it

I have a feeling E is going to have to break the news to Charlie.

Wow poor edward...he was supossed to have a calm dinner w es...

Poor Bella! Just when Edward thought he was gonna be able to take one night and get a good nights rest. Bella needs him more though. I can't imagine that setback this ordeal will cause her. 

Dr Shaw is so pathetic. Poor b

Oh crap!  You go Ed!  Take names and kick some ass!

Those fuckholes. I hope they lose their jobs for that one. As a doctor he should have read her chart. The ordeals are just as stupid because I can guarantee with the gossip in hospitals her situation would have been known. Good update!

I'm not a fan of doctors or hospitals. I think this scenario is entirely within the realm of possibility. Scary! 

I'm reading this now on TWCS. I got both alerts, one from here and one from FFN and they both say chapter 159. This one is really 159 but the one on FFN is 158.

Anyway, its a good chapter and shows how Bella really loves Edward despite everything. How does Charlie not know the truth already?

I was hoping the DNA test woukd show another lie by Aro. Too sad that scum has to be her sperm donor. It would be nice to see him get his own kind of justice/treatment. 

oops!!

I am still hoping Aro lied. Please?

No puking on someone is sooo embarrassing!  Been there done it too.   Poor Bella :(

Wonderful chapter. They're connecting again at that deeper level required for trust to rebuild. She's finally going to get her Daddy back. Biology doesn't mean a thing, it's the Dad that raised you that matters. Ask anyone who was adopted, has a step parent or even a family member not their biological sperm donor that raised and loved them. It's the one that loved you unconditionally that makes a Daddy. Yep, I'm a Daddy's Girl. ;)

Edward in a cheerleader outfit would be so worth seeing!  Wonder if there's a manip queen who could make that happen?????

:)

Looking forward to Bella and Charlie reuniting and bonding after the ordeal she went through and what all Charlie has to say about being her father.

its weird, I got this chapter here and the previous one on FFN....anyhoo...It seems that it will take a very long time for them to heal after this ordeal. I see that they are in it together, whatever that looks like and becomes, and love will triumph after all. I know it!  Maybe time with Charlie can help her start.

Poor Bella :(

Loved it :)