Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
Mmmm 3 fingers
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
:( I'm all out of chapters. I guess I'll just have to do some housework now. :(
I have to agree with Edward about Renee. I wouldn't be able to stay away from my daughter I don't know how she can.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
lol for abandoning Charlie for a bit.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
he has a major cookie addiction
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella
I hope that once Edward is home he can change Bella's mind about once upon a time. It is one of the best shows on right now.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 53: Bella
shamdamn now!! love the dirty talking Edward!!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
awww swoonworthy indeed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
I am with you for the ride :)
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella
How BIG?
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
God that my heart swell and it wasn't even directed towards me :(
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
Finally we're getting to the important questions. I was wondering how long it would take for one of them to broach the subject.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
That was amazing.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
I think you need to send all your readers a shamwow, lol.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
I'm so glad that they all have each other. It's much easier to handle when there are people there to help shoulder the burden.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
I love me some dirty Sarge! I can't wait until tomorrows Double posting. Thanks girls and Deb I hope you get to feeling better!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
I rarely review a story before it is complete. But you girls are incredible! As a prior military member I must say thank-you. Your support is amazing. I can't get enough. XD I'm truely addicted to this story. I beg each day that time will go faster so they can meet. And yet I adore the slow burn you both write so well. It is stories like this that make me want to be an editor someday. Please know that we readers truely adore this amazing gift you have given us. Looking forward to tomorrow, with all my love. <p>HoneyBear0805</p>
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
Hopefully that will be the worst of the injuries that Edward will ever get. My cousin was hurt during a training mission he broke his arm after 2 surgeries they realized part of the bone was dead and had to remove a 6 inch piece of his Ulna. He was given a honorable medical discharge. He did 3 tours overseas and nothing happened, but was hurt at training if it is going to happen at least it was minor. Hopefully that was Edward's one and done.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
i am so addictied to this story your guys are my lil secret on my lunch break at work...lol
xo steph
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
I'm so excited, I can't stand it!! Edward is funny with his ShamWow!!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
The guys really are great.
I'm a little surprised that Bella doesn't have the class make pictures and letters for the guys. My daughters class 'adopted' a soldier and they sent cards and we would all pitch in and send a care package every few months.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
yea for pics and calls
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
poor little guy. Wow they are amping up the emails huh. Glad she is going to see charlie.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
oooh mr bragger. Love it. Naughty letters.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
LOVE strong sure Bella in this one.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
squeeee, OK it wasnt a full lemon so I cant give you the lemon dance yet but a little happy dance is called for.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
lol for the cockblocked phone sex.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
LOVE snickerdoodles. hee hee for pictures.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
sucks on both sides.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
so sweet even when scared out of his mind
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
sweet first call
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 20: Edward
Glad they both decided to answer the call
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
great friends.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
awww poor confused E
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
awww Little B is fallin in love. Sarge is such a sweetie.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Glad he talked to the guys
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
Dayum Bella.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward
ooooh he is a sexy flirty one
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bella
ao sweet her looking out for christopher. Love those movies.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 12: Edward
awww for rare moment pic. Ugh for Tanya story
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bella
awww cute flirting.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward
sweet chapter. I love the honestly and (mostly) realism. Yes I'm retired military so I know how things should be, but your liberties are not that far from center. I appreciate a story that treats military men (and women) in a fair, compassionate way. So special ribbon for ya'
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bella
sheis funny. Naughty little inuendos in there.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 8: Edward
yea pictures. Glad they are exchanging real stuff and he feels comfortable with her.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
sweet letters. Naughty B teasing about food. LOVE Stripes. Classic.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
oh my Poor Edward.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Now that's what I call the long arm of the law. Lol
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
hmm. I would never have the nerve to ask that question, how big are you. Never..
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
OMG! Now Edward, Emmett and Jasper are going to have 5 odd months to plan and sceam on what they are going to do to Mike when they get home. There could be a whole lot of fun had at Mike's expense.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
He's calling her love. *Swoons*
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
Mmmmm! Broccoli cheddar soup. I think I am going to have to go to Panera's to get some soon. They make the best and their rolls are really good too. Tgere goes my diet. Lol
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
It's so sad that Edward has had no body for so long.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
Edward really is sweet. I want one just like him. You know where I can find one but a little older you know between 30-40 would be great.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
Don't know what to say except awww
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
Sweet letter and reply
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:45 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Aww sweet chapter. Girls are all cool
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
Poor Christopher. Thank god he had someone who cared and didn't look Tge other way because it was easier on them.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
Skankya rides again. So pathetic. Great start ladies.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
8 1/2 inchs :0 i can understand sore lol
Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
OH MY GOSH! YES!!! Cannot wait for more!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 51: Bella
OH WOW, SO amazing! I cannot wait for the answers too, Bella ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
Well then I hope that these months fly so that he can make those places sacred. Thanks for the updates. I was so happy to see them when my power came back on...it was off for 24 hours..:( But I am back up and reading now!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
8 1/2. hmmmm damn, do we get a pic of that tooooooo????
Date: 30 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Very sexy dirty talk.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
wow id be a puddle of goo after that email.fab chapter.when they finally meet the sexual tension is gonna be on fire!!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
I have a feeling Bella's dream of being pushed up against the front door just might come true.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
oh god I have just started reading this story and I lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvve it.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
Oh yeah!!! Love the dirty talking sweetness of this story. I hope you will continue to post daily! Love it
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
Oh my....that PS left everyone squirming. Thanx for updating!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
I CANNOT STOP READING! THIS IS Awesome
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
Ugh.... It gets good Thrn stops :(
I love this story but so ready for a time jump!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
Yeah! She admitted it to herself and others. That is the first step. Lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
Holy Mary, Mother of God!
I'm speechless.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella
fab chapter.go bella lol.update soon
Date: 30 Jun 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
I didn't find any translation for "Rumpelstiltskin". I read your fiction on your blog, because I have the alerts, it don't work with TWCS.
I love COMING HOME more and more. You are an amazing story teller. Thank you.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
It's really sweet that he is taking into account how hard it would be on Bella if they start something.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
Awww edward so hot no matter which mood
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
dang....bring on the consequences! ;0) please :P
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
OH WOW, that was amazing :D Loved it!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bella
Okay whenever anyone writes about a song I am obsessed with finding it and checking it out. But I couldn't find Fall. Does it have another name or is it published by someone else as well.
Author's Response:
Nope. It's on YouTube. You can find it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWp7tPe77Jk
:)
Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 49: Bella
SO amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
This was awesome I loved it!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
I'm hooked on this story!! Its really good!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
hoping the timeline speads up a bit, but, I am trusting the magic of your creative maddness. Love this and look forward to more.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
OH WOW, that was amazing! Go Edward! I really loved it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
Thanks for the updates!! Love this.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
Oklahoma??? Met my husband at school there on a blind date....about 30 years before you met yours. Thirty eight years of marriage to an Okie; wouldn't change a minute!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 11: Bella
Wow. Bella has really uped the game.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
"Are you sure you're asking how big my...piano is"...should she ask how big his ORGAN is? ....LOL
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
I can't wait for October.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
This is adorable! Bless you for thinking of the guys over there.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
He is so sweet!! I can't wait for him to get the photos!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
ooo think bella will deal with whatever consequences he throws at her lol.fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 49: Bella
aww bless christopher so glad hes at a better place.fab chapter ooo think the pics are gonna cheer up sarge lol.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
I wonder what the consequences will be when he sees those pictures.
My daughter has gotten me started on that Once Upon a Time, I saw the last couple episodes of the season and was completely confused, but can see how easy it is to get absorbed in it all.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
I'm bracing for the consequences, LOL!!
Holy hell!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 49: Bella
Edward will go certifiably insane when he sees those pictures of Bella in blue. I cant wait.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
Cheeky Bella.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
OH WOW...amazing! Loved it!