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Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

That was HOTT!! I have a feeling that when these two finally get together, they are gonna break shit! C-ya tomorrow!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 73: Bella

OH WOW...SO good!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

That's great. Who knew phone sex could be so fulfilling. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 73: Bella

That's the scariest time waiting for their answer. Lol

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

awesome chapter.loved it.thatb was scorching phone sex.can't wait till they meet.update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 73: Bella

i think hes speechless lol.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

fab chapter.yey hes got a phone!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

fab chapter.bless em.n hmmm think it maybe someones birthday.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

oh good lord...he would make a mint if he had his own call line for just this kind of conversations. Sigh

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

Well I can't wait for these two to meet face to face!  Been a long time coming!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

LOVE!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

Fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

They are so cute!!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

omg! squeel! happy dance! 2 weeks!!! Yes! yeah... sexting... oh i mean texting can be fun! ;-) lol

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

I knew they would be thinking of going to see the guys!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

Ohh naughty texts nowlol

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

So, we are gonna surprise Sarge for his birthday! Can't wait. Thanks for the updates girls!

Reviewer: Anaztazea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

so cant wait for 'in person'!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anaztazea Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

everybody knows June 20th is Edwards birthday!!!! yay birthday surprise!!

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

well sometimes tomorrow cannot come fast enough heehee. I love that they can text now, so instant & fun! I am really looking forward to what you guys are going to do with this new form of communication. so June 20th? I cannot remember shit in RL & you want me to remember this date in fanfiction?? ugh, it is a birthday? um, shit I don't know & won't waste your time guessing :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

looking forward to Edward's reaction to this email. Bella said a lot & will get Edward hyped up to see her sooner than later :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: mom3270702 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

love it can't wait

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

SO amazing!  YAY!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

SO amazing :D  June 20th is his birthday!  YAY!!

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

Yay. Can'twait for more.

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

So, the sexting begins soon!!  I'm sure dirty pics will be sent:). LOL

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

I hope he got sprint!!! Lol

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

Birthday surprise

Reviewer: Peyton Hemmings Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

I love it. Update soon :-)

Reviewer: Lissacullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

Love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Can they please hurry up and meet??!! lol

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

Another amazing chapter.Keep them coming, please.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

This is another story I wish I had the will power for completion....I hate the chapters to end, want to find out whats next now lol.

Reviewer: hughug Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

2 more weeks..I'm so excited for them.

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

all blue for Edward LOL, too cute! so glad they made it & the girls got gifts to them. the slow burn is killing but at the same time loving it! so glad you guys update so much :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

tattoo huh? my 16yr old has piercings but keeps begging for tattoos. they are so permanent & I just refuse at this point. she is saying she wants to get some when she turns 18 to defy me. I can't really stop her then, so up to her & won't be on my conscience.  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

cookie monster LOL  great chapter :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

nah if she visited Renee then she would have had to spend time with her. now when Bella goes to Florida she will get to spend all her time with Edward ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward

*catching breath* well that PS was, um, well just yeah! Great that they will be able to talk & stuff, but dang that PS, sorry can't focus right now ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 65: Bella

dang you girls making it so they get stateside, in a private residence & we still have to keep waiting?? no fair!! cruel & unusual punishment!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 64: Edward

of course Edward told Bella like it is! he is hers & only hers, awwww. So how soon are the girls visiting them in Tampa??  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 63: Bella

poor Bella. doesn't she know Edward is serious about her? she is not just some woman that is keeping him company until he gets to see other women? HA, he will set her straight, but I imagine he will be worried about her all the same.  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 62: Edward

awww, they got to talk. But what was wrong with Bella?? Is she worried Edward is going ot hook up with some English-speaking German chick? not a chance!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella

well Bella definitely shared her orgasm thoughts in detail with Edward, I bet he will be all over that. Hangovers suck!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

That is really sweet care package. That box must have been huge LOL!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward

Well that was a great surprise!!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 57: Bella

It is sad to think of her sobbing at the end.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 56: Edward

Love your author note at the end.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 52: Edward

He had someone measure him??

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 51: Bella

How will he answer that?

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 49: Bella

It is funny to think Bella the sweet teacher saying hyper as fuck.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 48: Edward

He is so damn sweet!  Spoil me!!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 47: Bella

I am curious about Bella's questions too.  Will he just move to Washington?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

I WISH BELLA WOULD SEE THAT HER MOTHER SHOULD SEE HER MORE BE WILLING TO PUT SOME TIME ASIDE FOR HER DAUTHER AND SHOW HER SHE LOVES HER.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

I STARTING TO FEEL LIKE EDWARD AND BELLA WELL NEVER GET TOGETHER SHE'S GOT A JOB NOW FOR THE SUMMER WHEN SHE COULD BE SPENDING THE SUMMER WITH EDWARD WHY DON'T THE GIRLS GO AND STAY IN THE HOUSE WITH THE GUY'S FOR THE SUMMER WHEN THEY GET HOME AT NIGHT THE GIRLS WOULD BE THERE TO GREET THEM WITH THE DINNER MEAL AND ALL THE LOVE THEY WANT AT NIGHT IN THERE ROONS.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

OH WOW...SO amazing!  YAY!!!!!!!!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

OH WOW!  That was amazing!  Love that tattoo...not the story, but the tattoo is great.  Wonder if he has anything pierced and what she wants to get pierced?  Hehe ;)

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

The care package was extremely sweet.

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

Getting closer.........

YAY!!!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward

That would be terrifying for both of them.  I loved that she demanded to see it for herself.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella

I would freak out if my friend was in my house in the middle of the night!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward

That would be scary.  

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward

I love Emmett!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella

This Mike is awesomely douchey!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella

I wonder who will say it first?

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward

Good think Edward didn't make too much noise with his dream!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella

I like a bold Bella!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward

Interesting that he switches to Isabella here.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella

Charlie seemed to take that well. Bella is really upping the sexual innuendo here!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward

You are creative with these 20 questions.  I wonder what Charlie will say.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella

That is a really bad embarassing moment!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

yey their back in america.fab chapter.update soon.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

poor bella bless her.fab chapter glad shes got her hunky sarge.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

Nice neighborhood

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

You should meet my mother in law. She has a 5 yr. Old grandson who she has never bothered to meet. He is only an hour flight away.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

yeah for being in the states. Aww for special care package.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward

I wonder what else he is sending besides a tshirt.  I am really curious what that debriefing was about.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

Oooh wonder if he has a piercing. Aww for her tattoo.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella

I liked how Edward consoled Bella.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

Ooh, I wonder what he is gonna be thinking about laying on those blue sheets, or should I say who....Thanks for the updates ladies!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward

I dated a guy in the Marines, so I know all about those sexy pics.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella

These are going to drive eachother crazy!  I am glad Christopher is in a safer place.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward

I know I should be kind enough to review each chapter, but I am so anxious to see what is next.  I loved his suggestion to use two hands!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

I love how the girls thought of what the boys would need, it was so sweet!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

I just love their flirting back and forth!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

Awkward conversations or not, they will combust in a big pile of goo. Looking forward to the next chapters. Love the story

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

Ah the girls are the greatest. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

I'm surprised the girls haven't had a pow wow about how they are going to surprise the boys. There is no way that I would wait. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

This chapter was great. I loved all the teasing. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

Being on a training base I would think they may have a little more free time. A friend was a drill sargent at Ft Bragg. He had almost a normal swing shift job. Sure there would be 72 hours where he never made it home but for the most part he was home every day. I hope the guys realize this and the girls get to spend time there. 

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

Sarge is so sweet.I wish he was real. Lol  

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

Bella's mom is a BITCH. Till tomorrow .

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

enjoyed both chapters. why dont the girls just leave tonight and be there when the guys get there?

 

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

I think I would just get on a plane and start walking at this point!!  LOL

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

I am sure he can get her a ticket!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

ugh....so ready for the meeting!! do you know i had to wait until almost 9:00 tonight to read this *sigh* i do not like lunch meetings! lol

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

She is getting really brave with the dirty talk. Lovin it!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

He is so sweet!!  I'm getting ready for their meeting face to face!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

Lol for blackmaing the boys.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

Renee is so pathetic. Yea for job. Rofl for middle names.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

I love this!!

Well, the girls are not aloud to meet the boys at landing but who says they can't meet them at 'home'? Hmmmmm? ;)

I am really enjoying this story!! :)

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