Date: 20 Apr 2018 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great story I couldn’t stop reading it I was at work reading and talking about it . I had love,suspense,mystery and reality.
Date: 22 Nov 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
One of the absolute best twilight stories I have ever read!!!!!!!
You are an awesome author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 50
Loved it!
Date: 22 Jun 2016 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 49
So sweet!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 47
Father O'Connor is great!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 37
Tears! Precious babies!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love the family dynamic!
Date: 13 Jun 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wahoo! I love that the whole family is together now!
Date: 09 Jun 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 50
I loved this story. So glad I found it. Where are the outakes?
Date: 27 Nov 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 50
enjoyed reading
Date: 19 Nov 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
sweetward love him
Date: 07 Dec 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great reading about the busy, happy life they all deserve! Loved what Bella told Lauren, the skank, and of course all the preperations for getting pregnant! As all your stories that I've read so far, this was wonderful! Now, Off the Beaten Path!
Date: 07 Dec 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 49
That was a beyond wonderful wedding, in every way! I smiled, I cried and enjoyed every last minute!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 48
Needed that tissue you warned about, too! Between what they gave each other, and Masen, what Emmett told his brother and all the preperations, I was awash a couple of times!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 47
Wonderful news to learn that a baby is a possibility. It's all coming together and I'm so happy it's turning out this well!Love Bella and Edward and the twins, hell, the whole family!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 46
Really good chapter, with all they accomplished. Bella was so brave to lay the ghost of her father the way she did! I'll bet they never expected Jake to show up and be as contrite as he was! Running into Victoria was a gift and Bella handled it just right!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 45
The apple doesn't fall far from the tree, I guess. Jane's mother must have had a problem, taking her own life that way, and passed on the unstable mind to her child. That was one sick puppy, thinking it was okay for James to abuse her that way, and thinking her father forgot her for Bella! It almost makes me sorry for her, but not really!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 44
Figured it was about time for Lauren to rear her ugly head again. Maybe we'll find out what she really was up to, showing her skanky face after all this time. Probably money. As for Jane, lock her up and throw away the key! I'm looking forward to the wedding, and think Thanksgiving is the perfect time!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 43
Perfect time to wake up, so she can say yes! Thank God, all the waiting, worrying and praying has paid off and hopefully Bella is on the road to recovery!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
Now we know why Jane would look funny at Bella sometimes! I'm sure not one bit surprised that she took the bullet meant for Edward, that's just what Bella does! Now we have the fight for her life!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
Okay, this is the limit, now this crazy son-of-a-bitch wants to kill Edward, to leave Bella alone? They won't be looking for that angle and won't be prepared for it! The misery caused by this just flows all over this story and really pisses me off! Maybe I need Father O'Conner to calm me down!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 40
Glad they had a great time at Disney and even more glad Jake is gone!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 39
I see now why the police are finally being involved, that was a definite threat! No damn wonder Edward had a meltdown, anyone would have! I hope to God this sicko never gets his filthy hands on Bella or the twins, Edward will kill whoever it is!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 38
It's horrid that Edward punched his own brother, but I can't help a sneaking sympathy for the guy, hell, for all of them! Whomever is doing this to them needs to be strung up and tortured for the misery they deliberately caused! Sure puts a damper on the trip to California!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 37
Knowing how important this moment was to to the kids, Edward, Bella and the rest of the family, made tears come to my eyes as I read ! It was the sweetest thing, ever! Almost enough to make up for the stalker, almost!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
From one extreme to another! So happy for the twins turning eight, so damn scared and angry at the stalker's latest threat! Everyone sure rallied around in a hurry, but they can't help being afraid!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
A wonderful, happy, family holiday weekend, with lots of hot loving!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 34
The fun of a big, happy family who all get along is the best! Life doesn't get any better than that! Tanya is right, though, Edward and Bella need to get serious about their future together!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
I still don't trust Jane, either, she could easily be the stalker! It was awful when Masen got hurt, and Bella, of course. It sure made her and Emmett feel guilty, though it really wasn't her fault! The smoothed out the bad publicity pretty we, too. Now maybe they can all have a nice July fourth weekend!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 32
I would accuse Kate of being the stalker, but working at the clinic with the doctors Cullen, when would she have the time? Whoever it is, seems to hate everyone involved. What a horrible thing to have happened to Masen, poor Em and Bella are just guilt-riddled! I have bad feelings about the stalker's future plans, they bode well for no one!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
That has to have been the most erotic birthday any guy ever had! Bella must love that man of hers more than anything! The kids making his cake was so sweet, too!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
This was a great chapter but for two things, Lauren showing up and manhandling Masen, and that delivery on Father's Day! The scrapbook and portraits were just the right gifts. Making over the kids rooms and adding Edward's things to their room were inspired!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 29
It figures if you had them run into Jane and Bella's old boyfriend, that something bad is about to happen! I wish lightening would strike a few characters in this story, but that's just wishful thinking!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
Jake is a creep, making Bella uncomfortable, Jane is a bitch with an agenda and Kate hates Edward being in love with Bella. These things I know, plus there may indeed be some crazed stalker out there who will try to hurt Bella. That being said, the security team damn well better keep her safe!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
While I sympathize with Edward, I also want to kick his ass! Strange, I know but he is acting like a damn jerk! Bella is just as miserable as he is over being apart all week, but it's not making her an idiot! I hope they can come to some kind of understanding over this problem.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
So sweet when Carlisle talked to Bella on the deck! Now the family is grown by four more! It was kind of sad for them to close up the house and go back to real life! Peobably not the best place to have the conversation they did, but I'm glad they talked it out!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella really is such an amazing person, but she fits right in with the rest of them, since they're pretty amazing, too! The more I learn about her, the more impressed I am!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
Too bad all this family togetherness must come to a halt soon. Of course, the news of the increased hatemail is much worse. Good thing there is a security firm in the family! Bella and the twins was awesome, as was that connection between Bella, Jasper, Seth and Rosalie!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
Isense what you are goping to do to them and I wish you wouldn't. Hasn't that poor woman been through enough misery, danger and heartache for the next ten people? No fair making bad things happen to her , and possibly Edward! It was gut-wrenching enough to listen to what Jasper told them! Thank God for the support of all these wonderful people!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Waiting for all the past to be revealed has been similar to peeling an onion, and has caused many more tears! This gathering at Bella's place must be the final step in the healing process for her and for Jasper, Rose and Seth. The blending of the families is perfect!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
You are right to be proud of this chapter, it was terrific! I was so touched that Edward cried after reading Charlie's letter. Hell, I did that, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
I just knew that letter would tear up Bella and Seth and still be healing! Thank God Edward was able to send her strength, electronically if not in person. I eager for them to be alone for a while, but look forward to everyone being there forthe weekend! It ought to really be fun!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ben and Angela are one thing, but talk about a small world! What are the odds of Carlisle and Esme knowing Bella, Seth, Jasper and Rose before Edward ever met them? To hear Charlie is dead is very sad but I'm guessing that won't be the worst of it. No doubt Renee the bitch from Hell will have something to do with it, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
This was just a really great chapter! It's beyond wonderful that Bella is getting on so well with Tanya and Alice, and so cute that the girls seem smitten with Seth and Jasper, respectively! I hope Alice takes Aro and Jane to court if they try anything with Bella's contract!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
It figured to be as earth-shattering as it was, when they finally got together! What a welcome home!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
It's a lot like ivy twining around an arbor, the way their love is wrapping itself around their hearts! It's just about killing both of them to be seperated for two whole weeks, plus the kids hate it too!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
He's right, this should have been their first date experience. However, things happen the way they're supposed to happen and not much we can do about it! The two weks Bella must spend in California are going to be hard on both of them, not to mention Maddie and Masen!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
That staring thing in public places has to be the worst part of celebrity! Love how this story is going!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
A lot better morning thn it might have been had Seth not set Edward straight and sent him back to Bella. I think that a night holding each other was just what they both needed. Now we'll see what Jasper has to say about all this!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
I feel as you did, that Edward had a right to be upset, just not rush out like he did. I also wonder who it was that told him to get a grip and sent him flying back to Bella?
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Just what she's been afraid of, and the reason she has put off telling him! Poor Bella, in tears and poor Edward jumping to erroneous conclusions!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Suck it up, girl, because they are in love with you too! It's awful when your pet if sick, nearly as bad as achild who can't tell where it hurts, either!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh dear, something is not right!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
They are learning so much about each other, but she still hasn't told him the big item. I don't think it will bother him too much, but you never know! Now all her friends know about him and all his know about her. This should just keep getting better!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
So, like Bella has Seth, Edward has Tanya! They really are a lot alike! I wondered if he would bump into her at the shelter when she dropped off the cookies, but they just missed each other.
Date: 30 Nov 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Kind of makes a person believe in love at first sight, for sure! I can see where there may be problems and obstacles, but I'm crossing my fingers and hoping for the very best!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Lightning has struck them both, I'm thinking! The kids being all for it certainly doesn't hurt, either!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
The end result of a harrowing experience, Edward's twins sound darling, and I'm sure are worth what he had to go through to get them. Lauren and Renee should have met and become friends, they sound like soulmates!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
So, family has dwindled since they were younger, and only Sue is left. Wonder what happened to Charlie? Don't give a damn about Renee, what goes around, comes around! Quite the meeting in the park, by the way!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was an ideal childhood, except for the bitch of a mother! What in the hell was her problem?
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
Don't blame Edward for being a bit apprehensive, this sounds like pretty heavy stuff is about to be told! With all this support system, he should be okay.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 50
Another perfect chapter. I am so glad that Edward and Bella had their say with Lauren. I just kind of wished that Bella had gotten to slap Lauren for some reason. Lol.
This was a truly great story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I am off to read the outtakes now.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 49
PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT! !!!!!!!!! That is really all I can say. Love love love it!!!!!!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 48
I finally went to your blog today. I did not want to know who the stalker was until I read it. I was afraid that if I went to the blog before that I would ruin it. I realized today tgat I could go. Love it by the way.
I also realized today that you also wrote THE BREAKERS. I LOVE that story. You did an awesome job with it. This story here is another GREAT story. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing all your wonderful stories with us.
Live all the gifts that they gave each other. This was another perfect chapter.
Date: 11 Oct 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 47
Well it seems like Bella is making closure with everyone. Love her little talk with Masen.
Date: 11 Oct 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 46
I am glad that Bella was able to move on. She has made her peace with Charlie, Jacob and Victoria. Can not wait to see what happens between her and Lauren.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 45
Jane really was crazy. Wow she was hooked up with James while in college. Crazy crazy! !!.
Thanks for sharing Jane with us.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 44
So glad that she woke up and is now at home with Edward and the Wonder twins! !!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 43
OMGosh! !!!! My heart is breaking for Edward and the Wonder twins. I am so happy that she is finally waking up. Can't wait to find out what happened to Jane.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 42
OMGosh! !!!!!!!! So Jane was the stalker. I hope they got her. She was one messed up person. Poor Edward. I can't imagine what he is going through. I am off to read the next chapter!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 41
I hate that they are having to send the kids away. Love how protective little Masen is of Bella. Whoever it is is really sick. I have not been to your blog yet because I was afraid of spoilers. I will check it out after I get through reading.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 40
I am so glad that the Wonder Twins had a good visit to Disney World. I can not believe that Jacob tried to kiss Bella. What was he thinking? Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow. The stalker is getting braver. At least edw and Bella are getting closer and not pulling a way from one another.
Date: 05 Oct 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 38
Lauren is a piece of work. I knew Edward was going to lose it.
Date: 05 Oct 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love the Wonder twins! !!!!!!! Perfect
Date: 04 Oct 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved what Bella did for the Wonder Twins birthday. Aro creeps me out. With him calling Bella his it makes me wonder if he is the stalker. Can't wait for more.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 35
Love love love this chapter. Perfect
Date: 03 Oct 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a fun chapter! !!!!!! Edward and the Wonder twins are wanting to watch soccer films of Bella I am betting.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved hearing from Masen. Too cute!!!!!! Can't wait to see what their plan is.
Bella really let Jacob have it.
Jane sure changed her tone real quick.
I am wondering if Ian is the stalker. If he still has feelings for Bella.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 32
I hate that Masen got hurt. But loved that he called Bella mommy.
I can not believe that Kate tried to attack Bella. How stupid can she be?
I am dieing to know who this stalker is.
Great chapter! !!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
Glad Emmett is going everywhere Bella will go. I am thinking it is Jacob. He knows her schedule. What really scares me is that he knows the security of her building. I don't think it is Lauren. She just wants money I think. Can't wait to read more.
Loved the whole birthday weekend. Perfect! !!!
Date: 02 Oct 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
So glad to be able to go on to the next chapter.
Lots going on in this chapter. Loved it all!!!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
Can't wait to see what Bella thinks about Jacob being in her loft. Why did Seth not go to California with Bella and Rose? ? Glad she had Emmett.
Date: 01 Oct 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ok now I am wondering about Jacob being the one taking the pictures. Glad they are spending more time with each other. I was wondering why Edward and the Wonder twins didn't spend the night with her.
Date: 01 Oct 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward is definitely acting like a spoiled brat. He would not like Masen or Madden acting like he was acting. I am a little suspicious of Kate. I am wondering if she is the one who wrote the letters. I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to read the next chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
Back to the real world for them.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
I hate that they have to live with so much fear.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love the whole chapter but especially love love love the parts where Bella is spending time with the kids. Perfect! !!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for giving us Bella's side of things. Thanks for explaining how she got into modeling. I hate Charlie died. Can't say the same for Renee. I was afraid that you were going to tell us that Renee hired James to hurt Bella so she could not play soccer. Glad James can't hurt her now.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love love love this chapter! !!!!!!!!!! Awesome! !!!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it. But Bella really needs to tell Edward everything. I thought that was why he came up earlier than everyone else. Can't wait to read more. So glad that I do not have to wait for an update.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Renee is a bitch. Why would she blame Bella for Charlie having cancer? Can't wait to find out more answers.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I figured Charlie was dead. But what about Renee? ? Still can't wait to see what made Bella get into modeling. How did Bella or her crew not make the figure out that Edward was Dr. C ' s son or some type of relation since they had the same last name.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ok I meant to mention that Carlisle sure did act funny when talking to Edward about Bella and her friends. Does he know them??
All the friends are starting to come together. Now we just need Emmett and Rose to get together.
Loving this story.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love love love it!!!!!!!!!! They have finally been together.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
They ate breaking my heart with their goodbyes. So sad.
Date: 28 Sep 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hot Hot Hot!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Sep 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love a dominant Edward too. He could spank me anytime. Lol. Glad he is so accepting of her job. Love little Masen. Glad he did not get in trouble in math class and with Esme. Lol
Date: 28 Sep 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved this chapter! !!!!!!