Date: 25 Feb 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG!!!! I have so many questions and much anxiety right now after reading that. Running hands through me hair, biting nails, etc. waiting for the next update.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG, James is out of control, sick, violent funk. I hope Heidi does something to help the girls before Victoria or Bella get hurt further.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
HOLY SHIT!!!
I knew the chip was going to be how they found Bella and Victoria. How did Edward not hear anything though?! They had to have made some noise in their escape. So Laurent was somehow connected to Aro...hmm? I am so curious to find out whether Aro is good or bad. Though I think James will definitely suffer for using Aro's name. Laurent got what he deserved for his involvement in all of this. How will Bella and Victoria escape now?!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Holy crap! Not that Laurent didn't deserve it, but wow! Something tells me that Aro is going to exact his revenge for using his name. He obviously has a connection to Heidi. WOW!
Lindyp :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Wow another great chapter. I knew the chip as going to be what lead James straight to them. But now I cant wait to see what they are going to do to find them and what is going on the Aro and Hiedi. I am not surprised to see James lose it with Laurent. Now how is he going to get the cock cage off. lol I bet he didnt think of that one. Cant wait for the next update to see where you take us next.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
very good chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
oh crap
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
thank you for your site
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
umm okay hmmm
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
yay Jacob to the rescue
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
good chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMFG....Did Edward forget to set the alarm...he's a rich boy, wouldn't he have an alarm.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22
awe shit
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22
I just cant stop reading this story
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 63: Edward DAY 21 & 22
yay Alice is back
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22
hope he doesnt get morning wood hehe
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
great job
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21
Ireally lik her
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21
okay that was funny
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21
god i love this story
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
way to go Rose
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
uh oh
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
uh oh
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
WOW!!!! I hope we don't have to wait too long for Edward's POV....I'm dying here.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!!!!!! How the hell did he find them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need the next chapter OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGG!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
I dont know how I should feel about what happened to Laurent. I am intrigued to find out how this plays out for Bella and Victoria and now Heidi and what role Aro plays. I think he is the ring leader of the whole sex slave thing and I think he is going to make James pay for messing with his business. IDK maybe?
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
who is going to save bella and victoria from james now cant wait for the next update
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
You two are so fucking evil. I LOVE it!!! mwahahaha. I hope that Bella and Vicki being in the trunk together managed to untie each other and use that hidden cell Bella's gotta have in her pocket to call Edward. And then somehow tuck and roll out of the trunk without the rest of the car noticing and without hurting either of them. I love this story more and more with each chapter of pure evil awesomeness.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
oh my, oh my. Hurry, I can't wait for more. Just for the record, this story is fantastic! I love it, and all your stories!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
ok i'm officially freaking out here!!! how is E gonna get B & V before J does some major damage (as if he hasn't done enough) UGH!!!! B,V,& H better come together and realize he's a scary lil bitch that can be taken down, especially by 3 females.....
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
wow that was intense cant believe edward didnt notice seriously he just got fired from watch patrol hope they get rescued before james has his merry fucking way with them
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B
woo hoo Emmett
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward DAY 20 PART A
wow just wow
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A
BEAT THAT SCUM
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 47: Edward DAY 17 PART B
awe poor Edward
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 45: Edward DAY 17 PART A
yeah jackass is right
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17
oh please no little James
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
why would you ruin this story by having him show up and take bella she just started to trust and you do this i thought this would be a good story with a good ending but you are taking it the sick way where is there any good ending for edward and bella
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Holy Crap!!! I am dancing around in suspense! I cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Well I have to say that James is totally unhinged to the point of having little to no self-preservation. He has his two girls and a couple who will take them all out of the country with no problems, and he kills one of them and beats on the other? If he ever did make it onto the plane (which is unlikely now), it wouldn't surprise me if he killed off the pilot mid-flight in one of his tantrums.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
well i didnt see that one comming...
another great chater! this story should be turned into a movie! it would be fantastic!!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Wow, what a story! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon, I NEED more. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
wow, this is really getting scary. i kinda had a hard time reading this... cant wait to see what happens next. holding my breath..
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Wow, I wonder what fate has in store for Heidi.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B
yes Mike got what he deserved
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B
boy he is a dick
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 39: Edward DAY 16 PART A
Lauren yuk
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 38: James DAY 16 PART A
smooth talker
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward DAY 14
wow nice
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 35: James DAY 14
still great job
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
well, it may sound very unlike me, but I'm glad Laurent is dead. He always had James' back and is the one among the two with a brain. So, without him, James will make mistakes very soon, and those mistakes will Bella bring back where she belongs - and this is not tied down in James' bed.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh no! Obviously he had to come back at some time, but ...
Let's see if Bella is so brave and strong as Vicky makes her out to be
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG I just read this story pretty much straight through (with maybe 4 hours sleep) and I don't know when you update. aaaahhhhhh. this is such a great story. I love it love it love it. keep it coming...PLEASE.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Your an ass!
Next chapter better be in Edward POV! I dont wanna hear was James is doing to Bella! Lets just skip that, shall we?
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Oh Crap! Laurent's dead (one down, one to go).
Please don't let James hurt the girls...
Update soon....
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh god no!!!! How did he find them? Where's Edward????
:(
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
I'm glad Edward didn't go with them...
Poor Leah -- sounds like a familiar scenario huh???
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Good chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
One down, two to go!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B
awe
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
Ooooh, maybe the wrath of Aro will come down on the bastard as well...
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
sneaky bastard he is
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
oh my god you guys do you pretend I go to sleep with all this questions in my head???
well I hope they scape and sooner rather than later...
oh lord help me hehehe
love ya guys!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG....i'm biting my nails again....come on girl, you're killing me. Now James has the girls?! NOOOOOOO!!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Seriously?! OMFG!!! Can he just be killed off yet? Please? I seriously hate that sick bastard. And I really REALLY hope that he gets what is coming to him.
Oh, and I totally knew how he found them. Yes, it took me a minute to remember though.
Can't wait for the next chapter. And seriously considering saying the one thing that is considered a sin in the fic world. LOL
Until next time. Great job ladies.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A
uh oh
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A
he is an asshat
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11
ouch
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 26: James - DAY 11
grrrr someone should plug him
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B
awe he was so sweet
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23: James - DAY 8 PART B
he is a prick but nice job
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A
lol payback
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A
job well done
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
way to go Edward
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7
that was hot
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
wow....omg...i hope they find bella soon! shes been through so much..please update soon!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7
goodness that was awesome
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A
wow
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Loved the chapter, =)
Best wishes, Linda
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6
still going great
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5
still very good
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
this is insanity!!!! He has to die soon!!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
excellent job
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A
Okay I am having to go backwards here because I dont remember this part from before but good job
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
...this is unbelievable!
This mad James!
Go on.
With best wishes
Bussy
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
I can't wait for James to die, but I really hope edward doesnt do it!!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG...HE KILLED HIM!!!!!what will happen when Edward and teh girls find out their gone??!!!!!
~Tiffany
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
oh my god james is a very sick evil man i just hope edward gets to them in time loved it
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
HOLY F-ING COW!!!! First of all, I can't believe James got Bella & Victoria again. I hope y'all are planning on writing FAST!!! Thanks for this quick update BTW. :) The good that I can find in all of this is that I think I'm going to get my wish & that Edward is going to get his chance to take James OUT!!! " :) Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG...So James just killed Laurent!?!?!?
I have so many questions I don't even know where to start *sigh* I really can't believe that it was that easy for James to get tthem out of the house...why why why was it so easy...
How are they going to find them...????
OMG you really really have to update soon....your killin me here
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
OH MY GOSH!!!!! I as so scared for Bella and Victoria. James sure got there quick. I hope to goodness that Edward comes upstairs, SOON!!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Ladies.... I'm speechless!!! I am on the edge of my seat and dying. I can't believe that they managed to get both Bella and Victoria out of the house unnoticed!!
OHHHH what a cliffhanger!!!!
I must tell you that you ladies are awesome
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Ack! You can't do that! Well... I guess you can, but it's cruel. :) j/k You're awesome as always. I'm just really glad that I'm behind and the next chapter is already up.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Oh shit. I totally forgot about the microchip!!!! What the hell does Aro have to do with all of this? There is alot more to this than we all know. Unless Aro is being taken for a ride also. I remember the phone call he had with Carlisle. He said that they had both been played. I hope they find Bella and Victoria soon. Bella just needs to bite his dick off the next time he shoves it in her mouth. I' not sure Victoria has it in her to put up a fight.
Wow, thanks for sharing. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Take care and be safe. BG24
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
"I watched in ecstasy as she used the restroom and then moved back to wash her hands" dirty fucker!
Ok, my mouth is literally hanging agape here! He killed Laurant...?
Please, please let Edward find her before James can hurt her? : (
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh no, no, no, NO!
Who the fuck is that?!
Laurant... James. James... Laurant?
*whimpers*
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
I'm sorry, but I HAVE to do this...
"THIS IS MADNESS!"
"Madness? THIS IS SPARTA!!!"
HAHA, omg, i'm sorry but I couldn't help myself... *giggles*
Holy shit! Laurant is the mastermid behind all this? No fucking way! I never saw that one coming! And he did the very same thing to Leah...? I wonder who her master was... James?
Loves it as always ladies <3
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
I swear you two get more and more evil by the day! Someone has got to stop James! Damnit!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Jesus....How much are you guys planning to put poor bella thru? Insanity!