Date: 24 Sep 2022 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 34
Holy shit what a wild ride! Brava my friend brava
Date: 28 Aug 2022 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad Edward and Bella chose North Texas for their new home. Of course, I might be prejudiced when it comes to the magic of Texas LOL!
Everyone else seems to be doin' either better or as well as can be expected. Long as they're still copin', they're on the right path. After all, "tomorrow is another day!"
Date: 27 Aug 2022 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
this story really wrapped up well with this ending!
Date: 27 Aug 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 34
:) loved this story
Date: 21 Aug 2022 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Kate's reunion with her parents was such a relief...to her parents, to her and to Bella, Edward and rest of her "family."
Bella's closure with Leah's family and friends was difficult but so necessary for Bella, if not for everyone in that room.
A difficult but ultimately upliftin' chapter!
Date: 20 Aug 2022 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 33
I am sure this was hard to write, but I think you did it justice.
Date: 07 Aug 2022 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'd suggest some serious counselin' for Bella but who would be qualified to deal with such darkness? Also, whoever attempted to dive into her mind would need counselin' themselves LOL! So, more than anything, right now, Bella needs peace, security and Edward's love...not necessarily in that order!
Date: 07 Aug 2022 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 32
This was an absolutely perfect chapter! Excited for them to be back at the bunker and their reunion with everyone.
Date: 30 Jul 2022 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
Everyone else can see Bella clearly but her! As for Caius's invitation to join the FBI, I'd say that was the best place for her as long as it doesn't require anymore field work! The blood on her hands should not go elbows deep!
Date: 30 Jul 2022 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
She is a hero! Great chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2022 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really liked the way caucus handled this! Especially the number of people saved and the job offer. Looking forward to more!
Date: 23 Jul 2022 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to seeing how Caius can help
Date: 23 Jul 2022 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
What Leah wanted was the pain of ultimate release and Bella gave it to her! Our girl's gonna need a whole lot of good therapy once Caius can get the world off her back...if he even can! Gotta trust Marcus and Edward *fingers crossed!*
Date: 11 Jul 2022 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
Marcus is quite the character and Jasper was right to fill him in while Edward and Bella were drivin' to Denali. His insight about Carlisle never plannin' to let Bella go and even forcin' Edward to face up to his role in Leah's demise have at least made Bella reconsider shoulderin' every ounce of blame in the game! It's a good start...now let's get some real resolution!
Date: 05 Jul 2022 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
What Bella needs is for a higher power to give her absolution for what she perceives as her sins *sigh!*
Date: 03 Jul 2022 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm glad she's talking to him and trusting him, and that they reconnected that way and she was okay. Excited for more.
Date: 19 Jun 2022 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh bella. I'm glad they're all together now and I loved the talk with Aro and her recognizing the progress Alice made. Excited for more!
Date: 19 Jun 2022 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
That kind of evil never dies so Bella will always have a purpose in life. She just might have to rethink confrontin' it directly, as in person, from now on!
Date: 18 Jun 2022 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
I read both this sight and fanfiction!
Date: 05 Jun 2022 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
That flash ddrive is gonna prove invaluable...or not! Shit, I forget "important" people never go to jail and, if they do, they "hang" themselves before they can implicate anyone else *eyeroll!*
Date: 02 Jun 2022 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome way to wrap up this chapter with their reunion.
Date: 30 May 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Every damn one of them, especially Edward and Bella, need a serious break from all this madness. Hopefully, Peter/Phil was their last major obstacle...for now!
Date: 29 May 2022 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
This chapter was great. I'm glad that you didn't prolong them getting back to each other. I truly am not understanding why Bella is so hard on herself for killing the people she did but hopefully edward can get through to her. So glad he and Elizabeth were reunited. Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 May 2022 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Lordamercy, I'm not gonna have any fingernails left waitin' to see if the girls get away safely *eeeep!*
Date: 22 May 2022 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG! Elizabeth finally gets her revenge *woo hoo!* Hearin' that her Edward was safe and free gave her back her fire!
Date: 15 May 2022 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow. Just read the first story and now this one to get caught up. A very intense story. Hopefully their happy endings are coming. Excited for more.
Date: 10 May 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Way to go girls, fight to get free
Date: 10 May 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Way to go girls, fight to get free
Date: 25 Jun 2020 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well, well, well...looks like Bella might have some help from Elizabeth! Two against one makes for way better odds!
Date: 14 Feb 2020 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
Please finish this. Please
Author's Response:
I'm working on the next chapter.
Date: 08 Feb 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow was für ene Geschichte. Bin gefesselt. Ein sehr dunkles Thema aber gut geschrieben. Es ist offensichtlich das viele Fehler von Edward gemacht wurden, er kannte den Schmerz nicht. Niemand kann es sich vorstellen. Bitte schreib weiter
Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Please please continue this!!
Date: 30 Dec 2019 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
I forgot this story was even out there. I wish you would update a little more often. You are such a good writer.
Date: 21 Dec 2019 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for the update..Bell a found Elizabeth..Now I hope they find her..Well done
Date: 06 Jun 2019 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
HOLY SHIT!!! I'm scared too!
Date: 23 Apr 2019 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Very hard story line.
Date: 22 Apr 2019 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well, Jasper and Garrett wanted Bella to help find their mole...she bloody well did, more's the pity!
Date: 22 Apr 2019 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh, shit! How did nobody know this about Peter. Except, apparently, Alice knew there was something up with him since she was hiding out.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 22 Apr 2019 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
WHAT THE F......
Date: 22 Apr 2019 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Holy crap! Dont keep us waiting too long.
That's torture... or Bellas... oh my.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Noooooooooo ..
You made one of my fave hunnies the Sandman :(
No wonder Alice was freaked the fuck out ..
She knew !
Argh .. cannot wait for more X
Author's Response:
Sorry not sorry about Peter😂😂😂😂
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good, scary chapter.
Date: 13 Apr 2019 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hope that he finds his sister and that Bella can stay safe. Also hope that whoever ratted them out is not in the little group of theirs. keep up the good work.
Date: 13 Apr 2019 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oooh I’m all caught up. Holy cow what a mind screw my friend!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Garrett's story is so heartbreakin', especially as I'm sure it happens in RL all too often...fuckin' drug addicts!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awww ...
I just want some happy for them both ..
Bella needs to get help, she needs to stop believing she deserves everything ..
Maybe she should speak with Garrett more since he has been where she is where Carlsile is concerned?
I hope that Edward finds his sister and returns to his wife and soon !
Date: 09 Apr 2019 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder what it's going to take for Bella to realize she isn't evil and damned? And, wow, I had not expected that story from Garrett.
PS: Some of us are having issues leaving reviews for Whispered Hope. Sorry. But, it was a great chapter!
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 20 Jul 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Congratulations on the promotion. I hope they figure out who turned Bella in. Dang, they all deserve a break.
Date: 20 Jul 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Who reported them? Wish Bella could forgive herself. She went through hell for her best friend and then had to kill her. All the torcher and abuse she went through was basically for nothing.
Date: 20 Jul 2018 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my. I hope Leah finally finds some peace. Her mind was really warped if her thought what she went through was love. I hope Bella can get some help to help her deal.
Date: 20 Jul 2018 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Maybe Garrett can help Bella deal with what has happened to her.
Date: 20 Jul 2018 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Bella. She needs to find help from someone somewhere.
Date: 05 Jul 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I understand, more than you know. I accidentally deleted one of my stories, instead of a chapter. I had to reload it on here, & I had several chapters posted. It was so frustrating. I am pretty curious about this one. I saw it posted in the STARS group on Facebook. I’m not much much of a C/B reader. Would this one stand alone or do I need to read the prequel to make sense of this one?
Author's Response:
To get the true impact of Bella's life, you need to read the first one of the series.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’d really like to read this, but I’d rather read it on FFN. If you ever decide to post it over there, I’ll put you on alert. Thanks!
Author's Response:
The only reason it's not on FFN is because when I had all my other fics on there, FFN yanked them twice. I just don't have the energy to repost them again, as I have like 50 fics and most of them are 30+ chapters.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella and Edward certainly have a lot to recover from. I wonder if Bella will ever really come back from this mess. But, at least, Edward is being very supportive.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 03 Jul 2018 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the chapter
Date: 03 Jul 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
This group needs a staff psychiatrist 'cause Bella needs help and none of them is qualified! At least they are safe for the moment...I hope!
Date: 03 Jul 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella and Edward ..
They both need this to be over with .,
They need to heal her more so then Edward..
Is there going to be a HEA for them?
Date: 03 Jul 2018 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you for the update..well done...I wonder who it is?...until you post again
Date: 04 Jun 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow! Good Chapter!
Date: 04 Apr 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
thank you for the update...I wonder who tip off cops...until you post again
Date: 02 Apr 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter . Keep up the great work !
Date: 28 Mar 2018 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Aw, hell! There's not enough bleach in the world to wipe those movie scenes out of the guys' heads...especially Edward's! And I hope they find and shut down that rat real soon!
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the update. Hopefully they will get away safely. If the authorities have any idea the sighting of Bella was true, they may need to leave the country entirely. Will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever it is ready for us.
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope they make it to the bunker! Who would know where she was?
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella and her kill shot!
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
The characters she keeps meeting get better & better! Garrett is awesome! If leah makes it back to forks is she going to lose it when she realizes charlie is dead?
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad her and rose talked.
Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder if jake & seth planned to meet up with her?
Date: 26 Mar 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more X
Date: 26 Mar 2018 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, man, Bella's got a long road to finding forgiveness for herself. As much as the others, except maybe Edward, are pissed at her for going rogue and killing Leah, I think Bella truly thought she had to be the one to kill her.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 26 Mar 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Heartbreaking but she has to get beyond this or they win. They Carlisle and Charlie mostle
Date: 26 Mar 2018 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
"She didn’t hate me because I couldn’t stop her from being hurt. She hated me because they wanted me more than her!" It's what I was thinking, Leah ended linking it and obssessed, maybe even in love, that's why she hated Bella, she took them away from her.
Date: 18 Mar 2018 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
How could I have lived without reading this story? It's AMAZING!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Thank you for everything!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2018 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
you are doing a great job, can't be easy to write this typeof story especially the first but you are so pat yourself on the back and keep moving ahead
Date: 23 Feb 2018 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella was probably right to confront Leah by herself, knowin' death was the only way out for her poor, deluded, former best friend *sigh!* Hopefully, Edward gets to her before her shoulder bleeds out!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
It was inevitable.... Either Leah died or she would've ended up exposing them all. I feel sorry for her, she was broken beyond repair and all thanks to Psycho Carlisle. Thanks for the update, hon. Can't wait to see how pissed Edward is going to be! YIKES!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that's taken care of. It was a mercy killing.
Date: 23 Feb 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well shit ...
I didn't think it would happen that fast ..
Did she die from being shot? Leah that is ..
But Bella didn't get off lightly either she was shot too ..
So cannot wait for more X
Date: 23 Feb 2018 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really wanted to yell at Bella when she decided to go where she knew Leah would be. But, that is what had to happen. Like Bella, I wish she could have done more for Leah, but as Leah said, she was already dead.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 23 Feb 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. 1 nightmare over.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love all your stories. Please update soon. Thank you.
Date: 06 Nov 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
If I recall correctly, it wasn't Bella that started this mess but Leah herself when she thought herself too good for the rez, so I say find her and kill her to put her out of her misery.