Reviews by 4CullensandaBlack
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303327
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I love your story: smut and a plot are my weaknesses.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

memory


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 158929
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I love this sequel! Do you know how I can get alerts to tell me when you have updated?



Author's Response:

I think that if you add this story to your favs that you get an alert but I am not sure :) Thank you for reading:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was so hot...Edward wanting to be a stay at home dad!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I think so too:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Those crazy kids and their mood swings!



Author's Response:

lol, gotta love hormones:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was to funny I so thought it would have been Jasper!



Author's Response:

A lot of people did:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Seth how could you be so narrow minded?



Author's Response:

I know! I expected more from Seth!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

It's going down!!!!!!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Aww :)



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Love this chapter...can we get a sneak at Seth and Tanya ILYs



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I loved Embry but NOOOOOOOOOO, why Rose can't lose the baby!?



Author's Response:

It's going to be ok:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yay she didn't lose the baby!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Fun, sad and sweet...got to love it



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

good!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

The wedding is almost here!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I know!! Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

The guys are always hot and Seth's "no" was too funny.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I knew Emmett was that deep!



Author's Response:

lol, he really is ;) thank you for the review:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

OMG those people better give them the baby. I want Embry and Jared to be happy.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Yay! they are getting their baby. I'm happy Bella just talked to her and did try to sell her on Embry and Jared.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Boy they need a boy in this family and I kind of want him to be Emmett's.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I knew it was a boy...pay up Seth!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I knew it was Emmett's!!!!!!!! Poor Seth:(



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Yes please I would love another story in this series. What about calling it just Awakings? I can't think.

What happened in Starbucks and bathroom and Bella?



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Wait, did Bella go into labor at the party or was that a type-o?



Author's Response:

No, Bella didn't go into labor at the party. Did it read like that? If you an share with me that part because I don't want it to see like that.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Endless Awakenings if it's going to be your last story in the series and Beautiful Awakenings if not.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Carlisle and Bella together would be hot!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I know, right? Just not in this story:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Yeah I voted for Endless!!!!!!! OMG good luck with school and we will be here when you are able to update.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Mary Faith Cullen or Megan Faith Cullen IDK!!!!!!!!!!!

Another baby yay!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Nice guesses:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Yay!! the baby is almost here!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Is Mackenzie for Mason, Edward's middle name? Really good chapter!



Author's Response:

Nice gues but no. Mackenzie if for Alice's family name, McCarty:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Yes, I so called it on Jasper being the bio daddy. I still think that Mac was made on Christmas Day when Bella remembered Jasper, finally! I love this story. :)



Author's Response:

lol, I thought it was obvious but I guess not;) THank you, hon!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Hot as usual if only I had my own Edward, Jasper and Alice or Bella.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

The Great Con by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Carlisle Cullen finds himself tempted by the devel herself, his naughty step-daugher, Bella. NC-17 for language and lemons. One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3833 Read Count: 4647
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2010
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Those bitches, I can't believe they did that to Carlisle but I would to read one where he gets them back.



Author's Response:

LOL, you never know if I will choose to continue with this.

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144536
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Ashley and Jackson?? lol

I really loved Jasper's the most. It was so romantic yet private and intimate.  Not everyone can meet their true love the day they were born so Jasper's proposal is hands down the best.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG please tell me they killed Jacob and that Bella and Edward lived



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: My Boys

He is a crazy as bastard and I hope they kill him.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG I hope they will be okay. I'm happy that you didn't write that Royce raped Rose. And as always I want Jacob dead.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aww they sounded so cute together.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG i hope that will be okay!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LOVED the flashbacks!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

For some reason I did not get an email update. I love the chapter and I'm happy he is awake.



Author's Response:

Hmm, I wonder why that is. I will tell you this, I will be updating this daily as it is already complete. Just to give you the heads up :) Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well I guess Nessie isn't marrying Jacob.



Author's Response:

Nope:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG!!!!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

A little laughing thanks!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love the fun and laughter

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This was a chapter worth crying over.



Author's Response:

Thank you for this, and all the other reviews:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm till not getting my email updates but I knew something wasn't right with that Mattew's guy when they mentioned him. Jacob has a fool for a client.



Author's Response:

Hmm, I wonder why you are not getting the updates.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

At least group went well and hopefully it will help them.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I never had a cabbage patch kid they always freaked me out but yeah I actually got an email telling me about this chapter...woo who!!



Author's Response:

lol, I had a couple of them but never realized how creepy they were. Glad you got the email ;)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was very emotional chapter. I love Em but sometimes. I happy Bella is talking and getting everything off her chest.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG what the hell how do you have a realtionship when you've NEVER had a relationship. Why didn't Jacob ask Emmett or Jasper any questions? I love the banner.



Author's Response:

Thank you for both reviews. Yes, it's good that Bella is talking and, even though it was hard on Em, she needs to get it out.

As for Jacob....He's crazy.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

If I was on that jury I would give Jacob the chair that crazy fucker and I don't trust Billy either. I hope he doesn't do anything to Bella.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Billy should have lived to deal with the horrible things his son did and what he did to his son but I'm happy Jacob is dead at least Bella doesn't have to worry about him calling her from prison or escaping and finding her.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I feel for what Renee and Charlie had to go through/



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Well I'm listening to a Christmas album and that always makes me feel better.



Author's Response:

Love Christmas music :)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I want to fuck Jessica shit up...how dare she after everything that happened with Jacob. You do not try to make people uncomfortable! Was Jacob Aaron's ped? I hope Edward doesn't become weird around Natives now.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) No, Jacob was not Aaron's ped:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

God I love Emmett and you really are tease.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I know I am a tease but this was a big step for Bella and, trust  me, she needed to get some rage out before she saw Jessica...

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Please don't Jessica come back unless to say sorry. Team Bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

She shot him in the ass, classic!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Laurent and James' drama sound really good! I would love to learn more about that.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was so romantic and beautiful!



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

It just get just so good, why are her parents there? I hope they won't be rude to Em. I love that you are switching up the points of view.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

This is why I love Emmet, he is the best! He is so proposing!



Author's Response:

Em's a sweetie.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG I knew it once Charlie openned that door, guess Bella doesn't know everything!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Jasper and Alice in Eclipse was so cute and I loved that scene. Who is Mr. Banner, a case worker?



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Mr. Banner was the teacher that encouraged Alice to apply to Harvard.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Aww Jasper so sweet, kind and caring!!!!!!! I want to be Jasper's wife.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

We still have some really great teachers out there and I wish to have a long life your grandparents.



Author's Response:

Yes, we do but unfortunily you hardly hear about them.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

When I was reading the letter from Mr. Banner and he was speaking of his wife all I kept thinking was if she lived they so would have adopted Alice. This was a tear-worthy chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

This chapter was so funny and E is so romantic, I want that.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Charlie is a dirty old man but I knew that all ready. The boys are so cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

It was so perfect for them and Playground Love should so be their wedding song. I love how E took her down memory lane.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Maybe it's because I'm Team Emmett but that was so sweet. I loved it.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! The sequel has been posted:)

Summary:

Bella reflects on her life with Jasper. AH & NC-17.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3202 Read Count: 1079
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2010 Updated: 28 Jun 2010
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cried at the end of this.

Going Home by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

After a long shift in the ER, Edward goes home to Bella and Jasper. AH and NC-17 for language and lemons:) One-shot, for now at least.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6140 Read Count: 4451
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2010
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

fucking hot!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58179
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It must have been hard to write about the little boy ODing.



Author's Response:

It was very hard.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They are so wrong. LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't think she overreacted, I probably would have cried but than again I hate for people to be all in my business.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG a baby Cullen, yeah!!!!!!!!!!! That would be something id=f the girls got preggers around the same time.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They almost died because of him I hope he gets the book



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Shit, I was crying hard in this chapter. It's just so sad and I feel really bad for his wife cause it's not like she knew what he was doing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So great and funny!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Isle Esme!!!!!!!!!

I would have been so made to if someone came and messed up my plans.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG that was so beautiful but where was James and Laurent



Author's Response:

Shit, I totally forgot about them!! I'll fit in a later chapter.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I kind of want everyone to have their own chapters like the proposal but it's your call.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I am going to write a couple chapters of their honeymoons, I'm just going to do them as a seperate story of outtakes. Like I did with Lustful Awakenings.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So romantic!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She is so preggers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She's pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or she is on her period one or the other!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG their having a baby!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Finally they told the fam and I'm so going to Turtle Island for my honeymoom someday when I have one.



Author's Response:

My hubby and I are thinking about going to Turtle Island for our twenieth in six years. I really want to.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Seriously, why and why does she call her dad Charlie?



Author's Response:

Thank you:) She calls him Charlie cause that's his name.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes, you better go and hide HOW COUD YOU KILL CHARLIE!!!!! HAVEN'T THEY THEY ALL BEEN THREW ENOUGH. %0



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

First Charlie and now this. I really would love for them to finally get some peace and happiness.



Author's Response:

They will, I promise. Have some faith.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I pray for all the people who've lost a child.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I hope B comes back from all the pain she has suffered and has Edward mourned for his lost, as well?

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Okay I wanted to smack Bella in the face talk first before you jump to conclusions please.



Author's Response:

She was scared but I agree, she needs to start talking to him:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Aww this chapter was so heartbreaking but brought a certain sense of peace



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm so sorry for your lost.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG that was so funny good thing they stopped before he started swinging.



Author's Response:

I know, right???

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Bella, how dare you attack Jasper, use your words not your hands. I want to hit you for getting smart with my Emmett, but I won't cause I know you are going through.



Author's Response:

lol, perhaps Jasper shouldn't grab Bella:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Shit, I said before how was Edward handling losing his kid but this chapter had me tearing up.



Author's Response:

Me too, BB, me too!