Date: 07 Jan 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue
I loved this story. You tell a great and well written story. Thank you for sharing your wordsπ
Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue
couldn't stop reading it........loved it
Date: 28 Aug 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue
I stayed up a little (*cough* lot *cough*) later than usual in the hope I could reach the end of this story. I failed but I ws up bright and early in order to finish it. I wanted to see it all work out for them and even though I am sad to see it end I'm so happy about the reveal to the Queen.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue
Ohhhhh, I loved this last chapter, even though I'm not happy that it came to an end, that's just sad :-(.
You made the end just perfect, the part of the day walkers was simply amazing, couldn't be better than that!
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue
Wonderful end. Glad Tara got over her hatred. Ha ha for SKanky Anne thinking she's was going to get Sookie anyhow. Stupid.
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 28 Jun 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 40 - So Deserved
Love, love, love all you need is love!!!! Yeah, everything that Eric needed was love, and Sookie, too.
Amazing story, I loved Eric and Hunter and everybody, thanks for sharing our gorgeous Viking and this sweet tale with us.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 40 - So Deserved
hmmm Skanky Anne and creepy Andre needs to be deposed and killed sooner rather than later.
Hmmm with the hybrid/no spark thing explained. I kinda feel a little sorry for Jason.......sorta......maybe.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Yeah
hmmmm wonder if scumbill got ahold of Jason? wonder if SKanky Anne is really on the up and up. Like the idea of hoyt and jess moving there. Home school for all the kids are really smart idea.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Yeah
The pet probably is Hadley, and maybe Jason was taken by Bill to the queen, ohh, so many people to dislike. ¬¬
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Nick of Time
Ohhhh, I hate Bill, he's always a bastard...
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Nick of Time
sounds like a wonderful honeymoon. PA zoo is wonderful. so sad when the apes died in that fire.
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 37 See Daddy Marry Mommy
lol for chocolate cake for breakfast. Reminds me of a Bill Cosby skit.
Loved seeing it from Hunters POV. BACON!!!!
Dance lessons for Hunter in the future? lol
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 36 Moving Forward
Hope the Jason thing doesn't get Sookie hurt more. Don't know if we've heard the last of skanky anne either
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 37 See Daddy Marry Mommy
Lol, Hunter's a weird little guy...
Date: 09 Jun 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 36 Moving Forward
lo, Eric's such a big sweet vampire viking, lol, impossible not to love him.
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Genny
Awww, that's nice, not what happened with Genny, lol, but that Eric sees her as a mother figure. Now Jason and Rene need to be drained by some starving vampires, the bastards, hate Jason, the arrogant idiot!!!
Date: 31 May 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Genny
Wow Jason is really a sadistic scumball. Poor Genny
Date: 25 May 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 34 No Ordinary Miracle
Sookie's a mess, lol, crying all the time, but I understand her motives, and she has plenty of motives to cry of happiness!!
Loved the chapter and seeing the picture of little Hunter just made me more happy!!!
Date: 25 May 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 34 No Ordinary Miracle
Glad everyone is ok. Sweet party too
Date: 25 May 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 33 The Keystone State
Ryan seems like a nice guy. hmm hope letting Rasul know won't be a mistake.
Wedding location sounds wonderful.
Oh no what a cliffy. Glad I have another chapter in reserve.
Date: 25 May 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 33 The Keystone State
Hahahaha, nobody knows how to act close to Eric with a baby.
Awwww poor Hunter, please, don't let him die, he's such a sweet boy!!! :-(
Date: 25 May 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 32 Blood Healing
Horrible houses, just horrible *cue to sarcasm*. ¬¬
Too bad that in real life a billionaire vampire doesn't appear for me, it didn't need to be a vampire, just billionaire, lol.
Date: 22 May 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 32 Blood Healing
Dr Dayan has turned out to be a great asset to them. Wonderful plans eric has made. Mima has spoken indeed.
aww She already has daddy wrapped around her finger. hope you don't mean the Barney I love you song. <shivers>
awww Love that Genny is going too.
Date: 17 May 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Busted
Hahahaha, yeah, babies are only cute and polite in stories, I don't know any, so I'll keep dreaming with perfect and polite Hunter and sweet and non crying Celia. The children of my dreams!!! lol.
And obviously Eric as a family man is just perfect, so that would be something that I would love to have!!!
Date: 16 May 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 Vampire Punishment OUTTAKE
I loved this chapter
Date: 16 May 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Busted
Such wonderful families. Glad Hoyt talked some sense into the new Doc. aww for Indira. poor grandma's
Date: 10 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 Love at First Sight
OMG, I love Eric as this family man, a dream man, that's what he is, minus the long hair... lol
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 10 May 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 30 Love at First Sight
wow....just wow. So happy Celia has a new family. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
That's sooooo cute!
M
Date: 10 May 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 29 Familiar Faces
Wonderful end to the chapter. So glad things are going so well
Date: 10 May 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 Familiar Faces
Awwwwww, Eric you big vampire viking, you're such a softy....
Date: 06 May 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Letter
Fantastic story so far. I can't wait for more.
I'm normally a twifan but this story sounded interesting so I gave it a go, low and behold I can't put it down. I've now decided t start reading svm/true blood au fan fic. So thank you for such a wonderful story and for opening up a new world of possibilities.
XoxoxoxoxoxoX
Alia West aka Ashmerlin
Author's Response:
WOW - quite a review. Thank you sooo much!
M
Date: 04 May 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 28 Why would she do that?
Wowser. Go Sookie Bobby and Mustapha. Glad Pam is starting to understand.
Author's Response:
THanks! It's only a start for PAM - an opportunity.
M
Date: 04 May 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 28 Why would she do that?
Great start for Pam, she needs to grow up and maybe this punishment is her opportunity.
Date: 03 May 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 27 Justice
Wonderful chapter. Glad the kids will really get the care and love they need
Date: 02 May 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hope
Love
Author's Response:
Thank you!
M
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12 Something you should know
Eric's so sweet, hahaha, always loved him!!!
Author's Response:
Yes - this is a sweetie-pie Eric for sure. Glad you're liking it.
M
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 11 Remote Wooing
Pam's so fake that not even pretending Eric believes her!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 How many last goodbyes?
Pam's getting on my nerves, she's so self-centered, Eric'll be so mad if she messes things with Sookie, but Pam's asking for trouble!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 8 Brotherly love
I'm hating some many people in this chapter that I can't even talk, I really want Eric to kill Jason, he won't stop till he does something worse with Sookie!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi there -welcome to the story and thanks for reviewing.
Hope you like where I take it.
Jason sucks - you learn more about why in upcoming chapters.
Mags
Date: 28 Apr 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 7 Smitten
Ohhh, Eric, you charmer, I always knew you were a sweet man.
And after almost 3 years without reading Souther Vampires I read about his maker again, ohhh, I always hated that part, it took away something from Eric.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 Hope
What a wonderful chapter. So glad all those greedy evil people will get prosecuted. Poor Kids.
Author's Response:
Greed will be punished in this story. You'll like the next chapter: Justice. All I'm sayin'
Mags
THANKS FOR YOUR HELP!!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 25 Going to the Chapel
Wonderful wedding. Ugh Pam is prob never gonna learn. But of course Jason wont either (sigh). At least they had a judge to witness the abuse/threats.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24 Vampire Punishment OUTTAKE
Poor Eric. Pam still doesn't get it does she?
Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23 Cure
Well I can understand why Claude stole it, but yea, he needs to make it up. Wanker. At least claudine was sweet. House sounds wonderful.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22 That Pam
Wow Sookie is so sweet giving her stuff to Hoyt/Jess/Joh. So glad they are going forward against the rats and the "case worker".
Wow Pam is really going to do something drastic. Hope Sookie/Hunter don't get hurt.
OOOoooOOOooo
Ack Pam!!! OMG She is one freakin nasty biatch. Glad Eric talked Hunter down a bit.
Wow Pam is delusional, jealous, and so freakin petty.
OOOoooOOOooo
Poor Eric. Glad Sookie is being there for him. Glad for the lovin, but for the talking too. LOL for the guards. Just Jason being out there, the rats, the case worker, and the unknown Claude part, they need guards if for nothing else than another set of eyes.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 Stubborn!
Sucks that Ludwig can't get through to anyone across the portals.
Great plan about the manager thing. hope Sookie can get over the whore and kept woman thing. But glad Eric is giving her some time to think. But SOokie is really in avoidance mode huh?
Glad he finally called her on it. aww for proposal.
Beautiful ring
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 A Visit from Saint Eric
Awww Santa Eric and Elf Bobby are wonderful. Hmmm is claude stealing the letters to help Sookie or hurt her. hmmmm So happy for Hoyt and Jessica
Author's Response:
Deja vu - or are you copying comments from WP??
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 19 I Smell a Rat
Glad Eric is able to help with Mickey. Wonder if Mott is going to show back up? Ugh for the Rats.
Your baby is such a cutie
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18 Bond
pathetic Jason getting off so easy.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 17 Distraction
LOL for her telling him no. But love Jessica standing up to her more.
Poor Hunter. Glad they were able to be there for the test. Hunter is so sweet. Yea Claude always was a selfish thing. Glad Ludwig isn't making instant promises.
ROFL for old farts movie. I'm with him though about that.
Wow for the Alcede and Sam part.
(how did I miss this chapter on WP????)
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 Damn lemons
oooh Ludwig figuring something out. Cool twist. Poor Marjorie. hmmm you are scaring me about Pam.
Author's Response:
You are tearing through it - Thanks for all the reviews. I'm so far behind in responding to comments - trying to catch up - I'll thank you for ALL of them through this chapter right here! You have a few more to go before you're all caught up.
M
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 15 Almost
Sookie is such a nice person thinking the best of people.
Wow you are making me nervous about what Pam is going to do in revenge/retribution.
Maxine is so hilarious. I so love her.
Oh no Poor Sookie. Hope someone examines the car. I have a bad feeling.
Go Ludwig!!! Wow Bobby is such a great guy in this one. Glad they got her cleaned up before Hunter saw her. They’ve got such a wonderful extended group.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 An Opportunity
Woo hoo Yummy. You get a happy lemon dance.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 The Obligatory Date
Wonderful date. Love all the little things. Indira seems nice too
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 Something you should know
Ah the fairy part comes out. Ugh hope they can keep Niall and others away.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 11 Remote Wooing
wow They really need to get that “case worker” and “foster family” disbanded. How disgusting. Glad the doctor supported Sookie. Pam is going to hurt Sookie or get her hurt I fear.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10 How many last goodbyes?
Cute pendant. Hope Pam doesn’t get to hurt Sookie or Hunter. Beginning to get worried. She is such a spoiled brat. Love that Jessica and Hoyt and all help her out. She never was one to handle help graciously. Hmmm Maybe Sookie could do Eric’s books since its too much bother for Pammy.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 Taking care of business, again
Glad he got her to go to the ER. Think its smart considering the stupid loophole that corrupt Judge used to let Jason out and lock up Bobby. Aww for the Mine conversation. :-). I’m still scared of Pam showing up at the hospital before she and Eric leave for the Summitt.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 Brotherly love
Oh wow. Hope that judge get whats coming to him. Hate those prejudiced lawyers and judges. Why do I get the feeling that either they never contacted the person who documented Bobby’s injuries or he’s been bought off or has “disappeared”. Jason really needs to be put away for a long time.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7 Smitten
Love that Maxine is so cool. Yey for Eric getting to surprise her with her stuff. Wonder if she’ll give the guns to Jason just to get him to go away.
What is Furnan up to? Just a greedy developer or something else?
Great Eric story. SOOOO freaking happy Appius is dead. Although Pam need to grow the hell up. Like that Eric is still taking care of the Were families that helped him out
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 A Good Start
Wonderful meeting. Poor Hunter. Sucks that someone stole his stuff. Wonder if the rats or the sleezy case manager have something to do with it. Should be camera’s in the halls thought. LOL for Eric shopping in Walmart.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 Taking care of business
Wow Jason is more of a delusional dick than normal. Glad Bobby is ok. Arlene is such a selfish thing. Ah Claude. Looking f for the CD I bet.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4 Its just stuff
Wow a Bobby I actually like!!! Hope Jason pays dearly. What a jerk he is about Hunter. So sad. Now I forget how gran died. Gonna have to go find it. Sounds like Pam is gonna be in trouble.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 I dont wanna
Oh wow. The “needs to die” list keeps getting longer. Rats, Social Worker, Jason….. So happy that Maxine, Jess, and Hoyt are there to help her out.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 Caught!
Kinda nice seeing Maxine in a nice role rather than a snotty one. Poor hunter stuck with the rats and greedy social worker.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Letter
Sounds like a wonderful start. Sadly some kids have to grow up faster than necessary.