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Reviewer: Skyrunnerx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue

I loved this story. You tell a great and well written story. Thank you for sharing your wordsπŸ˜€

Reviewer: madmarg Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue

couldn't stop reading it........loved it

Reviewer: gem1n1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue

I stayed up a little (*cough* lot *cough*) later than usual in the hope I could reach the end of this story. I failed but I ws up bright and early in order to finish it. I wanted to see it all work out for them and even though I am sad to see it end I'm so happy about the reveal to the Queen.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue

Ohhhhh, I loved this last chapter, even though I'm not happy that it came to an end, that's just sad :-(. 

You made the end just perfect, the part of the day walkers was simply amazing, couldn't be better than that!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Epilogue

Wonderful end.   Glad Tara got over her hatred.   Ha ha for SKanky Anne thinking she's was going to get Sookie anyhow.  Stupid.

TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 40 - So Deserved

Love, love, love all you need is love!!!! Yeah, everything that Eric needed was love, and Sookie, too. 

Amazing story, I loved Eric and Hunter and everybody, thanks for sharing our gorgeous Viking and this sweet tale with us. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 40 - So Deserved

hmmm Skanky Anne and creepy Andre needs to be deposed and killed sooner rather than later.   

Hmmm with the hybrid/no spark thing explained.  I kinda feel a little sorry for Jason.......sorta......maybe.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Yeah

hmmmm wonder if scumbill got ahold of Jason?   wonder if SKanky Anne is really on the up and up.   Like the idea of hoyt and jess moving there.  Home school for all the kids are really smart idea.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Yeah

The pet probably is Hadley, and maybe Jason was taken by Bill to the queen, ohh, so many people to dislike. ¬¬ 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Nick of Time

Ohhhh, I hate Bill, he's always a bastard...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Nick of Time

sounds like a wonderful honeymoon.  PA zoo is wonderful.  so sad when the apes died in that fire.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 37 – See Daddy Marry Mommy

lol for chocolate cake for breakfast.  Reminds me of a Bill Cosby skit.

 

Loved seeing it from Hunters POV.   BACON!!!!

 

Dance lessons for Hunter in the future?  lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 36 – Moving Forward

Hope the Jason thing doesn't get Sookie hurt more.   Don't know if we've heard the last of skanky anne either

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 37 – See Daddy Marry Mommy

Lol, Hunter's a weird little guy...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 36 – Moving Forward

lo, Eric's such a big sweet vampire viking, lol, impossible not to love him.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Genny

Awww, that's nice, not what happened with Genny, lol, but that Eric sees her as a mother figure. Now Jason and Rene need to be drained by some starving vampires, the bastards, hate Jason, the arrogant idiot!!! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Genny

Wow  Jason is really a sadistic scumball.   Poor Genny

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 34 – No Ordinary Miracle

Sookie's a mess, lol, crying all the time, but I understand her motives, and she has plenty of motives to cry of happiness!!

 

Loved the chapter and seeing the picture of little Hunter just made me more happy!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 34 – No Ordinary Miracle

Glad everyone is ok.  Sweet party too

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Date: 25 May 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 33 – The Keystone State

Ryan seems like a nice guy. hmm hope letting Rasul know won't be a mistake.   

 

Wedding location sounds wonderful.

 

Oh no what a cliffy.  Glad I have another chapter in reserve.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 33 – The Keystone State

Hahahaha, nobody knows how to act close to Eric with a baby.

 

Awwww poor Hunter, please, don't let him die, he's such a sweet boy!!! :-(

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 32 – Blood Healing

Horrible houses, just horrible *cue to sarcasm*. ¬¬

 

Too bad that in real life a billionaire vampire doesn't appear for me, it didn't need to be a vampire, just billionaire, lol. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 32 – Blood Healing

Dr Dayan has turned out to be a great asset to them.  Wonderful plans eric has made.  Mima has spoken indeed.  

aww  She already has daddy wrapped around her finger.  hope you don't mean the Barney I love you song.   <shivers>

awww Love that Genny is going too.  

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Busted

Hahahaha, yeah, babies are only cute and polite in stories, I don't know any, so I'll keep dreaming with perfect and polite Hunter and sweet and non crying Celia. The children of my dreams!!! lol.

 

And obviously Eric as a family man is just perfect, so that would be something that I would love to have!!!

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 – Vampire Punishment – OUTTAKE

I loved this chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Busted

Such wonderful families.  Glad Hoyt talked some sense into the new Doc.  aww for Indira.  poor grandma's

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 – Love at First Sight

OMG, I love Eric as this family man, a dream man, that's what he is, minus the long hair... lol



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 30 – Love at First Sight

wow....just wow.   So happy Celia has a new family.  Wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

That's sooooo cute!

 

M

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 29 – Familiar Faces

Wonderful end to the chapter.  So glad things are going so well

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 – Familiar Faces

Awwwwww, Eric you big vampire viking, you're such a softy....

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Letter

Fantastic story so far. I can't wait for more.

I'm normally a twifan but this story sounded interesting so I gave it a go, low and behold I can't put it down. I've now decided t start reading svm/true blood au fan fic. So thank you for such a wonderful story and for opening up a new world of possibilities.

XoxoxoxoxoxoX
Alia West aka Ashmerlin

Author's Response:

WOW - quite a review.  Thank you sooo much!

 

M

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 28 – Why would she do that?

Wowser.  Go Sookie Bobby and Mustapha.   Glad Pam is starting to understand.



Author's Response:

THanks!  It's only a start for PAM - an opportunity.

M

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 28 – Why would she do that?

Great start for Pam, she needs to grow up and maybe this punishment is her opportunity.

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 27 – Justice

Wonderful chapter.  Glad the kids will really get the care and love they need

Reviewer: mamasebring Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 – Hope

Love



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

M

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12 – Something you should know

Eric's so sweet, hahaha, always loved him!!!



Author's Response:

Yes - this is a sweetie-pie Eric for sure.  Glad you're liking it.

 

M

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 11 – Remote Wooing

Pam's so fake that not even pretending Eric believes her!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 – How many last goodbyes?

Pam's getting on my nerves, she's so self-centered, Eric'll be so mad if she messes things with Sookie, but Pam's asking for trouble!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 8 – Brotherly love

I'm hating some many people in this chapter that I can't even talk, I really want Eric to kill Jason, he won't stop till he does something worse with Sookie!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there -welcome to the story and thanks for reviewing.

 

Hope you like where I take it.

 

Jason sucks - you learn more about why in upcoming chapters.

 

Mags

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 7 – Smitten

Ohhh, Eric, you charmer, I always knew you were a sweet man.

 

And after almost 3 years without reading Souther Vampires I read about his maker again, ohhh, I always hated that part, it took away something from Eric. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 – Hope

What a wonderful chapter.  So glad all those greedy evil people will get prosecuted.  Poor Kids.



Author's Response:

Greed will be punished in this story.  You'll like the next chapter:  Justice.  All I'm sayin'

 

Mags

 

THANKS FOR YOUR HELP!!

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 25 – Going to the Chapel

Wonderful wedding.   Ugh Pam is prob never gonna learn.  But of course Jason wont either (sigh).   At least they had a judge to witness the abuse/threats.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24 – Vampire Punishment – OUTTAKE

Poor Eric.  Pam still doesn't get it does she?

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Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23 – Cure

Well I can understand why Claude stole it, but yea, he needs to make it up.  Wanker.   At least claudine was sweet.   House sounds wonderful.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22 – That Pam

Wow  Sookie is so sweet giving her stuff to Hoyt/Jess/Joh.  So glad they are going forward against the rats and the "case worker".

 

Wow  Pam is really going to do something drastic.  Hope Sookie/Hunter don't get hurt.  

 

OOOoooOOOooo

 

Ack Pam!!!  OMG  She is one freakin nasty biatch.  Glad Eric talked Hunter down a bit.  

 

Wow  Pam is delusional, jealous, and so freakin petty.

 

OOOoooOOOooo

 

Poor Eric.  Glad Sookie is being there for him.  Glad for the lovin, but for the talking too.   LOL for the guards.  Just Jason being out there, the rats, the case worker, and the unknown Claude part, they need guards if for nothing else than another set of eyes.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 – Stubborn!

Sucks that Ludwig can't get through to anyone across the portals.  

 

Great plan about the manager thing.  hope Sookie can get over the whore and kept woman thing.  But glad Eric is giving her some time to think.  But SOokie is really in avoidance mode huh?

 

Glad he finally called her on it.  aww for proposal.

Beautiful ring


Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 – A Visit from Saint Eric

Awww Santa Eric and Elf Bobby are wonderful. Hmmm is claude stealing the letters to help Sookie or hurt her. hmmmm So happy for Hoyt and Jessica

Author's Response:

Deja vu - or are you copying comments from WP??

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 19 – I Smell a Rat

Glad Eric is able to help with Mickey. Wonder if Mott is going to show back up? Ugh for the Rats.

Your baby is such a cutie

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18 – Bond

pathetic Jason getting off so easy.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 17 – Distraction

LOL for her telling him no.  But love Jessica standing up to her more.  

Poor Hunter.  Glad they were able to be there for the test.  Hunter is so sweet.  Yea Claude always was a selfish thing.  Glad Ludwig isn't making instant promises.

ROFL for old farts movie.  I'm with him though about that.  

Wow for the Alcede and Sam part.

(how did I miss this chapter on WP????)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 – Damn lemons

oooh Ludwig figuring something out. Cool twist. Poor Marjorie. hmmm you are scaring me about Pam.

Author's Response:

You are tearing through it - Thanks for all the reviews.  I'm so far behind in responding to comments - trying to catch up - I'll thank you for ALL of them through this chapter right here!  You have a few more to go before you're all caught up.

 

M

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 15 – Almost

Sookie is such a nice person thinking the best of people.

Wow you are making me nervous about what Pam is going to do in revenge/retribution.

Maxine is so hilarious. I so love her.

Oh no Poor Sookie. Hope someone examines the car. I have a bad feeling.

Go Ludwig!!! Wow Bobby is such a great guy in this one. Glad they got her cleaned up before Hunter saw her. They’ve got such a wonderful extended group.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 – An Opportunity

Woo hoo Yummy. You get a happy lemon dance.

Lemon Dance

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 – The Obligatory Date

Wonderful date. Love all the little things. Indira seems nice too

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 – Something you should know

Ah the fairy part comes out. Ugh hope they can keep Niall and others away.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 11 – Remote Wooing

wow They really need to get that “case worker” and “foster family” disbanded. How disgusting. Glad the doctor supported Sookie. Pam is going to hurt Sookie or get her hurt I fear.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10 – How many last goodbyes?

Cute pendant. Hope Pam doesn’t get to hurt Sookie or Hunter. Beginning to get worried. She is such a spoiled brat. Love that Jessica and Hoyt and all help her out. She never was one to handle help graciously. Hmmm Maybe Sookie could do Eric’s books since its too much bother for Pammy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 – Taking care of business, again

Glad he got her to go to the ER. Think its smart considering the stupid loophole that corrupt Judge used to let Jason out and lock up Bobby. Aww for the Mine conversation. :-). I’m still scared of Pam showing up at the hospital before she and Eric leave for the Summitt.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 – Brotherly love

Oh wow. Hope that judge get whats coming to him. Hate those prejudiced lawyers and judges. Why do I get the feeling that either they never contacted the person who documented Bobby’s injuries or he’s been bought off or has “disappeared”. Jason really needs to be put away for a long time.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7 – Smitten

Love that Maxine is so cool. Yey for Eric getting to surprise her with her stuff. Wonder if she’ll give the guns to Jason just to get him to go away.

What is Furnan up to? Just a greedy developer or something else?

Great Eric story. SOOOO freaking happy Appius is dead. Although Pam need to grow the hell up. Like that Eric is still taking care of the Were families that helped him out

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 – A Good Start

Wonderful meeting. Poor Hunter. Sucks that someone stole his stuff. Wonder if the rats or the sleezy case manager have something to do with it. Should be camera’s in the halls thought. LOL for Eric shopping in Walmart.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 – Taking care of business

Wow Jason is more of a delusional dick than normal. Glad Bobby is ok. Arlene is such a selfish thing. Ah Claude. Looking f for the CD I bet.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4 – It’s just stuff

Wow a Bobby I actually like!!! Hope Jason pays dearly. What a jerk he is about Hunter. So sad. Now I forget how gran died. Gonna have to go find it. Sounds like Pam is gonna be in trouble.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 – I don’t wanna

Oh wow. The “needs to die” list keeps getting longer. Rats, Social Worker, Jason….. So happy that Maxine, Jess, and Hoyt are there to help her out.

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Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 – Caught!

Kinda nice seeing Maxine in a nice role rather than a snotty one. Poor hunter stuck with the rats and greedy social worker.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Letter

Sounds like a wonderful start. Sadly some kids have to grow up faster than necessary.

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