Date: 20 Jan 2019 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
please update soon...i am really eager to read more! this story has had me enthrolled and i havent been able to drag my eyes away for anything longer than to sleep.
Date: 10 Jun 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
hoping a little nudge might intice you to continue with this amazing story.... i have re-read quite a number of times........
Date: 14 Aug 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
I hope you continue, i always thought this story was getting was good, they were so close to finding out about each other.
Date: 30 Jul 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
Always cockblocked :( 29 chp and nothing happened yet
Date: 30 Jul 2017 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 27
Seriously I dont care about Aunt Char, I just wanna read Edward and Bella get together already!
Date: 24 May 2017 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think I just wasted 2 hours of my time because I didn't notice this was incomplete. It was pretty good while it lasted, but never made it too the core of your story. I would say that's why your review count was so low.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Please finish this story I am really dying to know the ending
Date: 30 Jan 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
Please update
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
I've been drawn in to your story by the colorful characters and underlying theme of self deprecating decisions. I hope you still have the drive to finish this story. You've done a great job so far telling your tale.
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. Please continue.
Date: 12 Nov 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Are you going to continue this story?
Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
Cant wait for the update
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Cockblocked :(((
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Cant wait for our couple to just get together already
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad Edward is getting some
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Cant freaking wait till theyre together
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Damn this is hotttt
Date: 09 Sep 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter! Do you have an idea.....
Date: 26 Aug 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
Hello, love this story I hope you will continue with it and real life doesn't get to much for you. You are a very gifted writer and thank you for sharing your story I hope it doesn't too much Jacob in it I think it is great without him in the story. Thanks again please take care.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29
I can't wait for the barbecue and everyone hanging out. I wonder how things will go at the club with dancing and alcohol...
i love this story and have read it straight through to this point. I can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome story!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think they will find something in each other that will fill their needs like no one else can do. They will fill each others void.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 29
hope their friends get them to come clean soon and hopefully before jake does anything
Date: 18 Jul 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
hoping they get through their issues soon
Date: 18 Jul 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
hoping they get over their issues soon
Date: 17 Jul 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
wondering if the girls will get action before e does - lol
Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
wondering how long it will take rose and ali
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
hopefully progress at the dinner party
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
wondering when they both will get a clue
Date: 15 Jul 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for the update
Date: 14 Jul 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
I was so excited to get this update from you. Thank you for updating. There was a lot on this chapter . I was a little confused on the part with Jacob. I would have thought it would have been more dialogue with Jacob. Rose, Leah, and Emmett may have helped Edward and Bella coming clean with each other. Maybe Rose and Leah can get caughta king out at lunch and make Edward and Bella's conversation a little easier. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I always love your reviews as they are always very detailed. No one reallizes that Jacob knows about Bella’s secret, and how big of a threat he really is to her. All Edward knows is that he's a jilted ex, nothing more. Remember, Jacob backed off pretty quickly at the funeral, and no one gave him a second thought. It will be interesting to see how you respond to what I have planned. Everything i write is for a reason. Lolol As always, thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh please please please update sooooooooon!!!
Author's Response:
I will definitely try!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
glad to see an update but the not having them confess to each other their secrets is mean lets hope the time to talk is the next chapter.
Author's Response:
If only life was really that simple(cue evil laugh). Thank you for reading!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow I'm so glad your back!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm really enjoying your story thanks for putting it out there,
~k
Author's Response:
You're very welcome and thank you veyr much for reading!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 29
They've had enough heartache. I think they should talk and move forward happily. They will need all their strength to kick Jacob's ass later
Author's Response:
You're very right, but sometimes things don't go a smoothly as we would want them to. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 12 Jun 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
Please please please please PLEASE update soon!!!!!! 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hi I really like this story and I hope you will continue with this story, you are a very gifted writer. Thank you again for this story. I hope it not to much Jacob in this story. Thanks Nissa
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it and I am glad that you are enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved this chapter. You captured everyone's emotions perfectly. I don't know what's wrong with Jacob, but Bella must have knocked a screw loose when she kicked his ass. I see things are about to get complicated, can't wait for an update 🙂
Author's Response:
Yes it is. Jacob’s ego will not allow him to face the fact that it's over, that he can't have what he wants. Thanks once again for reading!
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
This entire story is truly amazing. I'd love for Edward and Bella to explore their relationship faster but I get it. The sex scenes you conjure are unreal. I am one of those Edward/Bella purists, or so I thought until I read this ;)
Author's Response:
What's funny is that I was a purist too! Lol This story is a slow burn. Even though they both live unconventional lifestyles, I want their courtship to be somewhat conventional.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hello! I hope you update soon...
Author's Response:
Hi there! I am currently working on the update. Sorry that it is taking so long. My computer crashed, and school has been hectic. I hope to be done with it soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
AAAHHHH I'm in love! I can't wait for the next chapter! How often do you normally update?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I don't have a regular schedule for updating, but I am almost finished with the next chapter. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
So excited to see that you updated!! I hope we get another chapter soon :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying this. As always, thank you for reviewing.
Date: 21 Jan 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
So glad you are back. Love the conversation with Bella and Aunt Char. Plus the one with Charlie. So glad that Edward is headed to see her.
Author's Response:
Thank you! They were two of my favorite parts of the chapter. Thank you for hanging in there with me.
Date: 20 Jan 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
Bella better stay close to Edward and the rest of the group for support. Jacob is crazy, but he can't get through Edward, Jasper and Emmett.
Author's Response:
I very much agree with you.
Date: 20 Jan 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yay! So excited to see you update this story. Glad Edward and Bella are moving forward, and anxious to see what trouble Jake will try to cause. Hope real life is better for you, so you can find time to write. Looking forward to future chapters!
Author's Response:
Hi there! I'm glad that you are enjoying my story. Things are slowing down, so I hope to be able to dedicate more time to writing. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
So much for them all still to admit to each other....
Author's Response:
Yes, definitely and it will with time. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope you update soon. I'm interested to see how their relationship develops and how they handle their other partners
Date: 11 Oct 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well that progressed quickly.
Date: 10 Oct 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
an old chapter doesn't equate to a second post ?(
Author's Response:
I have no idea what you are talking about? Where is there a duplicate chapter?
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
cock block tease
Date: 10 Oct 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Finally!! Good background information...on with the show for the couple...next chapter please 😁. Thank you
Author's Response:
Lol! I'm glad that you are enjoying this!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good lord these two need to talk. If they only knew. It will be so much better.
Author's Response:
Yes, this is a very tangled web, and things going to continue to get interesting. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
about time
Author's Response:
It was only a matter of time. Lol Thanks for reading!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMGosh! I was surprised that the other girl was Leah. But I understand that she totally understands were Bella is coming from.
Author's Response:
I was waiting for your review in particular! Lol I had that bombshell planned since I first started writing this story. These two ladies definitely understand each other inside and out. Things are going to get interesting. Thanks for reading as always.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
so good
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate that!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
hot
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
update quick
Author's Response:
I will try. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG I CANT WAIT !!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying my story. I am already working on the next chapter.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hey there! I've been following this story and normally don't write reviews but this story has me hooked and I'm extremely interested to see how these characters develop and how they deal with a poly relationship. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am truly flattered that you are enjoying my kinky little tale. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. Thanks again for your review!
Date: 09 Aug 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
Finally they have admitted they are attracted to each other. I am sad about Leah's aunt.
Author's Response:
I know, at long last! I am working on the next chapters as we speak. I'm sorry that it takes me so long to update. I am something of a perfectionist when it comes down to my storyline. I don't want to have any regrets when I post chapters. As always, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
Terrible cock blocking writer! ;)
Author's Response:
Lololol! I can't even be mad at you for your response! I'll make it up to you. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Seriously you cock block them with this sad drama you better have them together after this. Maybe have bella have edward go console her where she is going
Author's Response:
Trust me, I have it all planned out. Just sit back and enjoy what's to come. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Aug 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Can't wait to read more!! Great story!😎
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 07 Aug 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
So excited to see this update! Another great chapter! I am a little disappointed that Bella is taking off with Leah though, just because it means it will still be awhile before Edward and Bella can continue getting to know each other better and move their burgeoning relationship further. Looking forward the next update!
Author's Response:
Not to worry, I have plans for that. Trust me, I have it all planned out. Thank you for reading!
Date: 06 Aug 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Nooooo! Not the phone call, damnit. Oh I want them to talk some more.
Author's Response:
Oh not to worry, they will. They just got a little side tracked. It's not over by a long shot. Thanks for reading!
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella is definitely a mess, but Edward is just what she needs.
Date: 18 Jul 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
It is getting good....I want the next chapter!!
Thank you for the update..
Author's Response:
Yep, things are heating up big time. Thanks for reading!
Date: 17 Jul 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for sharing with us Bella and Jacob 's past. Boy, Jacob is a real asshole. I can't believe that he would treat that girl like that. That is just wrong. If I were Bella I would never speak to him again. I do not blame Bella for beating the he'll out of him in the other chapter.
Author's Response:
I know. I had to show why Bella wants to have nothing to do with him. I will try to update soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: 16 Jul 2015 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Although the flashback shed some light on her past I found it too long and the bigger question I have is that the breakup was only 10 months ago but from all the other chapters its seems like the relationship she has with Paul and Leah has been going on much longer and there has been enough time for at least a very good friendship to develop. I think the start of that relationship is much more important to the story then the breakup with Jake. Just my thoughts its your story to take where you want it to go. Still looking forward to the big reveal on both sides
Author's Response:
I respect your opinion, I truly do, but everything that I have written thus far is for a reason. I will find it interesting to see the reactions once it all comes out. Thanks for reading.
Date: 09 Jul 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope they will be honest with each other. They both feel this attraction. It's to special to throw it away.
Author's Response:
I agree...Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love your story can not wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 06 Jul 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
i was so excited when i saw the update! love this story, looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Jul 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to have it done soon. Thanks for reading!