Date: 20 Dec 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 37: In Battalions
Great work... really loved this story. I even shed a few years at the end!
Date: 20 Dec 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 33: Hide and Seek
Really enjoying this story!
Date: 18 Sep 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 10: Choice #3
First time reading California Kat and I am in love with her writing. I love how it goes into vampire blood and what is going on when Sookie drinks it. I love how Eric is acting in this story, and how she is writing Sookie.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 8: Choice #2
univited
Date: 15 Aug 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 36: And All Was Said
What an ASS!
With a relative like him, who needs enemies?
Date: 16 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 37: In Battalions
Omg im soooo hating Niall right now. Hope she makes life hell for him.
Date: 09 May 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 36: And All Was Said
Well Niall is the same ole cocky jerk
Date: 07 May 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 35: Friendship Caught on Fire
oooh Sookies getting more powers. YEY
Date: 06 May 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34: The Sun versus the Sludge
Wow that was an interesting test.
Date: 03 May 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 33: Hide and Seek
Sookie needs to be less emotional and combative with him. Jeez louise.
Author's Response:
I think that he likes that she questions him about his actions; after all, she realizes that, even as she went to him after Bill disappeared, he was likely thinking that his own kidnapping had worked. And we see her think things through and settle down when he gets her to remember the difference between how Bill and he used their blood in her. I have to admit that I would probably react emotionally too--even more so if I truly trusted the person I was with. I think a little of "me" is seeping into the Sookie in this section of the story.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 32: Immersion
ROFL Loved the talking and banter in the chapter.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 31: Awakening
Great talk.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 30: Budding
love their banter. Glad she is feeling better
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 29: Warring Instincts
Great POV shift. Liked seeing Erics thoughts.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 28: Waking Up
Amelia is such a trip. Really liked her in the books early on. not so much later.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 27: All Play and No Work
Scumbill is such a follower. what a loser. But of course he is under an psychopathic, master manipulator
Date: 22 Apr 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 26: Shell-Shocked
Denial aint just a river in Eqypt, Eric my boy. LOL
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 25: Cut Wide Open
Wow as if I didn't already want Scumbill to die horribly. What a coward.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 24: Hold On
Well I guess that was a good reason for Octavia to do it. Poor things with the pain.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 23: Torn Down
Dayum. I surely hope Octavia has a reason for this line of questioning and such.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 22: To Covet
Dear Lord. Scumbill is such a freakin moron.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Fairy Tale
I liked Scumbill a little in book1, but that was until his nefarious ways made me questions everything about him. I am truly a HUGE hater of him.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Emperor's Soldiers
WOW The To Be Killed list seems to be growing by leaps and bounds.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19: A Clean Slate
Silly Sookie for not thinking about the bond to both being broken. They both have much to learn with each other.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18: Did You Resist
glad Pam got away ok. Hope that Tara does get to kill Mott (although I’m not fond of TB Tara).
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17: Just As Real
Wow just wow. Wonder how long till she makes the connection with her virginity and scumbill’s weaving. Love that Eric is being so open and honest with her.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 16: Little One
Think she really needs all the information available so she can make a most informed decision, but I can understand his reluctance for hurting her.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 15: Beat Up
Glad Eric was able to help and stop it. Glad Sookie realized the Eric is the good guy here.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14: Blood Knight
Sucks that Octavia can’t help. At least Eric recognized it for what it is. Go Bad Ass Eric. Scumbill is a pathetic waste of time. How cruel.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: Dreamer of the Day
Ugh Hope Eric gets to her in time. Can’t wait for Scumbill to die for all the lies.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Minion
omg!!!! as if i didn’t already want Scumbill dead. now it’s a must!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: The King
Ugh Scumbill and his big mouth along with Skanky Anne.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10: Choice #3
Jeez she asks alot of questions of the guy trying to save her life and liberty. At least she did the right thing in the end.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9: Asset
oh Eriiiicccc. Denial is a river in egypt too. lol Loving this. Glad he is talking with her though.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 8: Choice #2
Well at least he is being honest in what he is telling her. He might be lying to himself though.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: Choice #1
Woohoo glad she made the right choice. Scumbill is such a lying sack of cow dung.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Revolutionary Act
i so hate tb tara, even before the mott thing. Hadley is such a pita. Her big mouth and skanky anne’s greed is to fault for all of sookies woes. love lala though.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Blood
Sadlyt Sookie is still judging Eric by Scumbill’s actions as well as others.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 4: Flight
So glad he got Pam away. Too bad Franklin Mott didn’t completely die. Arse.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Signal
Glad he got Pam out. Hate to think SA or R would use her against him.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Playing Rough
Ugh Skanky Anne is soooo pathetic. Hope Sookie doesnt get hurt too bad.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Balls
Great start. Hopefully you can correct the mockery that Alan Ball dumped on all of us.