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Reviewer: drkraez Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 37: In Battalions

Great work... really loved this story. I even shed a few years at the end!

Reviewer: drkraez Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 33: Hide and Seek

Really enjoying this story! 

Reviewer: LacyAnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 10: Choice #3

First time reading California Kat and I am in love with her writing. I love how it goes into vampire blood and what is going on when Sookie drinks it. I love how Eric is acting in this story, and how she is writing Sookie. 

Reviewer: sherry22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 8: Choice #2

univited

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 36: And All Was Said

What an ASS!  

With a relative like him, who needs enemies?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 37: In Battalions

Omg im soooo hating Niall right now.  Hope she makes life hell for him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 36: And All Was Said

Well Niall is the same ole cocky jerk

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 35: Friendship Caught on Fire

oooh Sookies getting more powers.   YEY

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34: The Sun versus the Sludge

Wow  that was an interesting test.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 33: Hide and Seek

Sookie needs to be less emotional and combative with him.  Jeez louise.



Author's Response:

I think that he likes that she questions him about his actions; after all, she realizes that, even as she went to him after Bill disappeared, he was likely thinking that his own kidnapping had worked.  And we see her think things through and settle down when he gets her to remember the difference between how Bill and he used their blood in her.  I have to admit that I would probably react emotionally too--even more so if I truly trusted the person I was with.  I think a little of "me" is seeping into the Sookie in this section of the story. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 32: Immersion

ROFL  Loved the talking and banter in the chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 31: Awakening

Great talk.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 30: Budding

love their banter.  Glad she is feeling better

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 29: Warring Instincts

Great POV shift.  Liked seeing Erics thoughts.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 28: Waking Up

Amelia is such a trip.  Really liked her in the books early on.  not so much later.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 27: All Play and No Work

Scumbill is such a follower.  what a loser.   But of course he is under an psychopathic, master manipulator

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 26: Shell-Shocked

Denial aint just a river in Eqypt, Eric my boy.   LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 25: Cut Wide Open

Wow  as if I didn't already want Scumbill to die horribly.  What a coward.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 24: Hold On

Well I guess that was a good reason for Octavia to do it.    Poor things with the pain.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 23: Torn Down

Dayum.  I surely hope Octavia has a reason for this line of questioning and such.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 22: To Covet

Dear Lord.  Scumbill is such a freakin moron.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Fairy Tale

I liked Scumbill a little in book1, but that was until his nefarious ways made me questions everything about him. I am truly a HUGE hater of him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Emperor's Soldiers

WOW The To Be Killed list seems to be growing by leaps and bounds.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19: A Clean Slate

Silly Sookie for not thinking about the bond to both being broken. They both have much to learn with each other. :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18: Did You Resist

glad Pam got away ok. Hope that Tara does get to kill Mott (although I’m not fond of TB Tara).


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17: Just As Real

Wow just wow. Wonder how long till she makes the connection with her virginity and scumbill’s weaving. Love that Eric is being so open and honest with her.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 16: Little One

Think she really needs all the information available so she can make a most informed decision, but I can understand his reluctance for hurting her.


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Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 15: Beat Up

Glad Eric was able to help and stop it. Glad Sookie realized the Eric is the good guy here.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14: Blood Knight

Sucks that Octavia can’t help. At least Eric recognized it for what it is. Go Bad Ass Eric. Scumbill is a pathetic waste of time. How cruel.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: Dreamer of the Day

Ugh Hope Eric gets to her in time. Can’t wait for Scumbill to die for all the lies.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Minion

omg!!!! as if i didn’t already want Scumbill dead. now it’s a must!!!!


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: The King

Ugh Scumbill and his big mouth along with Skanky Anne.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10: Choice #3

Jeez she asks alot of questions of the guy trying to save her life and liberty. At least she did the right thing in the end.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9: Asset

oh Eriiiicccc. Denial is a river in egypt too. lol Loving this. Glad he is talking with her though.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 8: Choice #2

Well at least he is being honest in what he is telling her. He might be lying to himself though.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: Choice #1

Woohoo glad she made the right choice. Scumbill is such a lying sack of cow dung.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Revolutionary Act

i so hate tb tara, even before the mott thing. Hadley is such a pita. Her big mouth and skanky anne’s greed is to fault for all of sookies woes. love lala though.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Blood

Sadlyt Sookie is still judging Eric by Scumbill’s actions as well as others.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 4: Flight

So glad he got Pam away. Too bad Franklin Mott didn’t completely die. Arse.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Signal

Glad he got Pam out. Hate to think SA or R would use her against him.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Playing Rough

Ugh Skanky Anne is soooo pathetic. Hope Sookie doesnt get hurt too bad.


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Balls

Great start. Hopefully you can correct the mockery that Alan Ball dumped on all of us.


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