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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

This could be an interesting and entertaining story.

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

I thought Alexander was older then reneesme? U put Alex was left at home at 3 while reneesme was one ???



Author's Response:

 

 

Hello, I'm sorry for the inconsistencies. It has been months since I even thought about this story. I guess as a writer I should have checked my facts before I posted. I'm not going to change the chapter because this is my first story. And well if you don't like then don't read it. I'll try to stick to the details and pay attention to the story. Thank you for the review. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

GOOD STORY KEEP IT UP  !!!!

Reviewer: AylaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

I noticed that you changed the kids from being 2 years apart in the last chapter, to now being twins in this one. Was this an error?

The chapters also seem to be rushed. I don't know if that is because you are trying to keep to a word limit or time factor in writing the chapter. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

He doesnt remember her??



Author's Response:

 

 

Hello, I'm sorry for the inconsistencies. It has been months since I even thought about this story. I guess as a writer I should have checked my facts before I posted. I'm not going to change the chapter because this is my first story. And well if you don't like then don't read it. I'll try to stick to the details and pay attention to the story. Thank you for the review. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 9:48 PM Title: Prolouge

Confused about the kids ages and if they are really twins. The first chapter indicates they are two years apart. But I am dying to know what's on the third floor!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

excellent, can not wait to read more

Reviewer: searching4myedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

How can edward be in high school with bella? Edward met Tanya when she was in college.  Previous chapter,  Tanya taking online classes. Not to be rude but your story a bit confusing. 



Author's Response:

Hello, I'm sorry for the inconsistencies. It has been months since I even thought about this story. I guess as a writer I should have checked my facts before I posted. I'm not going to change the chapter because this is my first story. And well if you don't like then don't read it. I'll try to stick to the details and pay attention to the story. Thank you for the review. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

I thought they were twins, Alex is 3 and renessme is 1

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

So glad to you are back to writing.  Can't wait to see where you take this story. 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 10:24 PM Title: Prolouge

please keep going. I am tearing up at this 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

ooo interesting. I hope you can update soon. liking this. 

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:58 PM Title: Prolouge

Update!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to see what you are going to do with this story. Hope you update soon. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 7:00 PM Title: Prolouge

Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:53 AM Title: Prolouge

sounds good

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