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Reviewer: vampyregurl09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2022 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

I can't wait to read the rest of this story

Reviewer: Mist13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2021 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Is there going to be a sequel to this???????

Reviewer: I like the cullens Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 Long for the Unseen

Great chapter.

Reviewer: vampyregurl09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

i can't wait until the next one

Reviewer: vampyregurl09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

i can't wait until the next one

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2019 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Very good story. Sorry that there is more and this is not a completee ending. If you write more, I hope I will enjoy reading that the Cullens and the Volturi get their just rewards.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 A Fighter, Dancing Through the Flames

I guess I missed some daytime drama not having seen the show. Still, I can't stand these non-mature vamps and witches. When thay put these books and shows in the Young Adult catagory, they're not kidding.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone

Demetri seems pretty damn sure of himself and unwilling to learn. I'm guessing that it is Jasper who is coming, but no-one will get between Bella and Damon.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul

So there will be a showdown with the Volturi AND the Cullens? At the same time? Can't wait to see that!

It seems everyone over the age of consent finds Edweird to be a controlling ass. Inever read the books & only saw a couple of the movies. He makes me too mad to see him as a hero. It must have been a damaged woman who invented him. Damaged by a severely patriarchal religion.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 Will Give You The Strength To Go

Exciting chapter! So much to learn. Stephan and Elena seem to be parallels to Bella and Edward. How to get Elena free of him and with Elijah?

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect

What a hateful group of characters. I'm glad I never watched the show.

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Date: 08 Jun 2019 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 I’m Bared Boned and Crazy for You

It would be perfect to end it here. No angst, no tears, no drama. But then it's not a novel without an arc.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 6 Made to Never Fall Away

I love these two together. Fast - but when you know, you know.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 8:00 AM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls

Yay Bella!

Reviewer: vampyregurl09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2019 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

i can't wait for this story to continue

Reviewer: tammylroberts20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2018 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Will you be updating and finishing this story soon 

Reviewer: SonjaSemeleCorvinus Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2018 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

What will the seqeul be named?

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2017 8:15 PM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls

Loved it!  Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Keka Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Eu quero dizer que eu amei a história e estou contando os dias para a continuação da serie.  Parabéns você com uma emoção, eu posso imaginar as suas palavras ganhando vida. Obrigado por essa história maravilhosa. 



Author's Response:

Muito obrigado! Estou usando o Google Translate, mas eu aprecio você me avisar. Eu continuo tentando voltar a este, mas Damon simplesmente não está soando bem.

Reviewer: SpIdErBiTe20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Loved it. 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 Long for the Unseen

Loved it! Great chapter!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:17 AM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls

Loved it! Go Bella!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

this stpry deserves many more reviews and I am hoping the sequel has already been started

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love

so so good

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Date: 21 Nov 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 20 You’re Dead Alive

ok I am a little confused but I am loving this

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 Everything That Kills Me Makes Me Feel Alive

lots of questions

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone

swesome

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 15 All Systems Go

wow

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 Whenever I Feel Lost

ride is going to continue I think

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul

such a great tale

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 I’m Bared Boned and Crazy for You

so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time

you write really well

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 Getting Back What I Gave

very good so far

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 17 I’m Sorry I Hurt You

Poor confused Jasper. Yay for Bella getting a big brother.

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone

I wonder who the man that's coming is?

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 All Systems Go

Love the ring it's beautiful.

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12 Whenever I Feel Lost

Why can't my hubby make dinner for me and grilling is so not just dinner. I want my own Damon.

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul

I would like to say I luv this Damon the sweet, caring, protective side of him.

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 9 Dream of Paradise

I think I'm falling for Damon also. He is so sweet... Does anyone have a glass of milk for me ??? Anyone at all....

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect

Who knew Damon can be a sweetheart....

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time

Damon does seem like a stalker but not like Edward he takes the cake with stalking. I'm really likeing Damon & Bella together.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Oh, and you finished it with a cliffie! Don't mind, this was such a great story and I enjoyed reading this Damon/Bella fic so much. Thank you for sharing it and looking forward to the sequel! xoxo Mina

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

Oh man. I was so excited that this Tory was complete. I however let out a very loud "hell no!" When I realized this was just the first part. This sTory was excellent. I can't wait for the next part. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 27 Still Fight While I Can Fight

I totally forgot about Daddy Dearest. I kept expecting Edward to crash the party. Great chapter. 

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 26 Eye of the Storm

:)

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 25 Hide No More

:)

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 24 Why Don’t We Go

:)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love

:)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 22 Diamonds From Black Dust

Awe. I just love the sweet moments between Bella and Damon. 

Interesting take on the Twilight future after the volturi anti-climactic battle in the clearing. That ending makes total sense. More sense thN the volturi running off with their tail stuck between their legs and never bothering the Cullen's again. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 It’s Now or Never

I have a feeling Stefan is going to be more pissed when he wakes up. I'm so glad I don't have to wait for a chapter update. That would drive me crazy right now. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 20 You’re Dead Alive

So glad to see Jasper has fallen in line. I just love this plot you have come up with. I'm still dying for Bella to get some justice against Edward. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 A Fighter, Dancing Through the Flames

It's about time jasper got it through his head Bella's not his mate. 

I love how you are developing this story. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 18 Everything That Kills Me Makes Me Feel Alive

Oh jasper. You have met your match. I think I would enjoy watching Bella rip him apart and have a bonfire. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 17 I’m Sorry I Hurt You

ROFL! Jasper thought he was meant to evellas mate. That one has had me laughing this whole chapter. Ideally lost it when he called Alice a pixie bitch. Awesome name for her. Seeing this protective Damon has me dying for him to get his hands on Edward. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone

Now you've got me curious who the hell is coming. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 All Systems Go

Loving the mated connection they have. Can't wait to see it in action to protect one another. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14 Light Start to Tremble

Damon is so awesome wanting to be sure she's ready and that she enjoys every moment of it. 

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13 Lives In A Dream

Yay for Elena shutting vamps out of her house and not calling Stefan. 

Nothing better than a bubble bath with Damon ;)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 12 Whenever I Feel Lost

They are so sweet together. Yeah I can't see either I e waiting much longer. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul

I can't wait for the confrontation with the volturi. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 Will Give You The Strength To Go

I like the thought of Elena with Elijah. Stefan is so broody he always pisses me off. I would love to see Damon kill victoria with a lightning bolt. That would be epic. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 9 Dream of Paradise

I think Elena is a wee bit jealous of Bella. Too bad so sad. She screwed that up all on her own. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect

I think I love Caroline. It was aesesome how she stood up for Damon. Bonnie definitely deserved the backfire she received. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 7 I’m Bared Boned and Crazy for You

Of course their happy bubble will be burst. I'm sure Stefan and Elena both will have way too much to say about Damon and Bella. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 6 Made to Never Fall Away

They are so awesome together. 

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5 Uphill Struggles over Years, The Fear.

That's the Damon we all know and love. Now I'm dying for him to meet Edward. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 No, I’m Not Alright.

Oh snap. You go Damon. Tell her all the truth. I can see Bella actually appreciating that. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time

I just love Damon. Glad Bella finally spoke to him. Can't wait for her reaction when she finds out he is a vamp 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 Getting Back What I Gave

I love this Bella. Nothing better than her confidencea d the way she handled Damon was great. It makes me so sad that Charlie is pulling away like that. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Long for the Unseen

Interesting new life for Bella. I can't wait for her to meet Damon. That should be very interesting 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 10:53 PM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls

I'm really starting to like stories where Bella doesn't fall apart when Edward leaves or picks up the pieces quickly after he leaves. I can't wait to see what you have in store for Bella. 

Reviewer: xXxSn0wAngelxXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

I absolutely love this story !!!

Can't wait for the sequel :)

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day

loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 27 Still Fight While I Can Fight

loved it!

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 Eye of the Storm

loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 25 Hide No More

Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 24 Why Don’t We Go

Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love

Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 22 Diamonds From Black Dust

Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 21 It’s Now or Never

Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 You’re Dead Alive

Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 A Fighter, Dancing Through the Flames

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 Everything That Kills Me Makes Me Feel Alive

Loved it!

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone

Great chapter!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 I’m Sorry I Hurt You

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 All Systems Go

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14 Light Start to Tremble

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 Lives In A Dream

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 Whenever I Feel Lost

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul

loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10 Will Give You The Strength To Go

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 Dream of Paradise

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect

Loved it! Go Bella!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 I’m Bared Boned and Crazy for You

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 6 Made to Never Fall Away

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Uphill Struggles over Years, The Fear.

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 4 No, I’m Not Alright.

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 Getting Back What I Gave

Loved it!

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 Long for the Unseen

Loved it!

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