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Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

So.... Their paths cross for the first time;)

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Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like that he went to have a sleepover at his parents home, even being married and a mother myself by now, I still love to stay at my parents home from time to time, too. It's just very nice to be pampered instead of doing the pampering;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm pretty sure Rose did say the things she said out of love, but it sure as shit as a bitter after-taste...

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Date: 02 Jul 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Seems like he has a nice group of back up guys, he just needs to realize it...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Bella is in a relationship with James? A married James? Old enough to be best friends with her father....

boy, you're putting an interesting plot out here;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting way to start;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

yeah, that was way sad.



Author's Response:

Sowyyyy!

it'll get sadder, though :D

thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

His needs to go home to his mommy and heal himself....parents are usually always there when you need them...

Author's Response:

well, i second that!

let's see what happens next ^_^ 

thanks for stopping by <3

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

well she is going after another womans husband

Author's Response:

i know that, and you know that..

for her, he's the only one she's ever loved, and he's never loved her back.. she wants him, and she hate his wife for having him while she doesn't have anything at all.. got it?

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

So Bella is his mistress. If she wants to hate someone it should be James not Victoria she seems to generally care for bella

Author's Response:

well, you know what they say about jelousy...

Thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was a sad chapter can not wait to read more

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

His hurt truly runs deep!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG such a sad beginning...to find out his wife was dead and that he's not really coping or living. I'm looking forward to see were you take this. I hope he meets someone to help him through his pain and loneliness.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting <3

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Did she died or left him?



Author's Response:

Died :/

you'll know more about that in the future chapters, though :)

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