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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2023 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2023 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2023 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Woo hoo for Jasper and B making up.



Author's Response:

They are the main couple, they have to make up

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow  With the way Carmen thinks/talks, no wonder Irina and Skanya were such biatches.



Author's Response:

life in a big coven, huh?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Have a feeling that Irina isn't going to let it go.



Author's Response:

Now to find that out means you need  to read the next chapter :D

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

Surprised Irina wasn't involved with the lies as well.   Buh Bye Skankya



Author's Response:

I am thankful you are  edng this still, thank you.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well Dayum.   Go explorin Bella!



Author's Response:

that she did

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm Blond yummy cowboy.......can he come over to my house to play?  :-)



Author's Response:

Yeah, but i had images of him kicking husband out and lying on the bed and allowing me to do what B did. lol

Nearly any woman would

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

ROFL for him throwing her in the river and vice versa



Author's Response:

I know, i laughed my ass off whilst writing it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

I can kinda understand about the carlisle thing.  Esme just  died.



Author's Response:

Exactly!

I can see her view, but i can also see theres as well, you know? Anyhow, Esme was not his one true other half, his true mate. Kate is though, and now that he has no other filling his heart, he is able to see it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wonder if Skankya and Irina will let it go or not?



Author's Response:

Good question, can they?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow.   You're on a killing spree.



Author's Response:

Well, it had to start somehow and i wanted it slightly grieving, but more than just newborn and vicky ash.

I reckon there should have been more than that, so i went all out.

thank you for reading this one itis one of my own faves.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hell of a situation for them to be in, all the family gone but Carlisle , Jasper and Bella! Good to have friends in Alaska to help with Bella's transformation.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. i must warn you, though, it may get confusing as i was going through an emotionally trying time when i wrote this. I did not wish to stop writing just because i was going through real life shit, so i do apologise if anyone cannot get the flow or meaning of the story.

Reviewer: sabrina michaels Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey Wendy...yes your stories are always enjoyable...perfect length...



Author's Response:

thank you and i do have another old one i am putting up one chapter at a time if you wish to read it. three times the mystery four times the charm.

next chapter is being put up now.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

i love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll, i am happy you love it. I am working on some of my other older fics, but it takes time. will have them ready after new year.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

don't be sorry you can wait for how long you what to//// but so far it's great keep up the great job



Author's Response:

Thanks doll

Reviewer: Ariah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, please continue good job 



Author's Response:

No worries, doll.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

hot



Author's Response:

Of course. Would it be anything less

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like how things are going between them  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, i am glad you are enjoying this as much as i did when i wrote it two years ago.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

god i love her ?'s for jasper/major nice ch.



Author's Response:

I am glad you like it. Update is up now.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love them together!  Jasper's experience - both sexual and vampirical - makes him the perfect teacher and lover for her!  Also, the emotions make total sense to me.  Loss is an interesting thing.  It brings you places you had no. Idea of going.  When my mother-in-law died, my young niece would suddenly go from laughing and joking one moment to sobbing the next.  Things made sense in their own time for her.  Again, an amazingly rich and fascinating work here!  Kudos!  I, for one, don't intend to kiss a bit of it!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you, i appreciate tha review, and i mean very much so.

I am hoping people understand her as it is had at times to write about someone who is grieving and going through being a young impressionable eighteen year old as ell as being a new made vampiress. Yet keep the story light enough to not go in to the angsty category.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

with no clothes on i will have  a few of him please



Author's Response:

Oh i know you would, younaughty woman, you ;D

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

i love it when jasper all man



Author's Response:

I know you do

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely, you should continue it!  This Bella is at the outset different.  She teases, she gets tough.   Now, after losing so many that she loves, there is no telling how she will react.  I loved it!



Author's Response:

I know, it is a mixed up bag of emotions

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well that was different but she did deserve it



Author's Response:

To some it would be nothing for them to ignore such behaviour, but not even my friends across the road, who is more laid back than any i have ever known, with their kids, would never let her daugter get away with that. She was not being newborn, she was being hasty and undisciplined. she has just been given what all newbies go through at some point. a punishment. she only got spaned, thank god. Anyway, thnk you for reading this.

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes please continue  I like it so far



Author's Response:

No worries

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

yes continue please can't wait to see were this goes



Author's Response:

Okay, new update is coming up

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