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Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

I wish you would finish this story. I really love it.

Reviewer: jasonsbrat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

I have recently found your series on Swan Lakes Ranch and have fallen in like every with them. I don't normally leaves reviews but had to with this story with the hope that I could encourage you to finish this story. I understand how real life can get in the way but hope to read more of this story soon. 

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2016 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

bonjour a Quand a suite stp merci

 

Reviewer: writergrl321 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

This is seriously one of my favorite fanfictions on this sight. I hope you haven't given up on it. The storyline is interesting and inspiring and your writing style is concise. I truly appreciate this story.

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 5:38 AM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'

are you going to update this story, it has been awhile.

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

it is 10/20/2014 i am dying here waiting for updated story i love this one i await excitedly for the next chapter

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Wouldn't it be awesome to have and island house!
Heidi has melded into the family so smoothly.
So many Christmas trees to decorate.

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

are you ever gonna update im dying here i love this story it is now 9/8/2014

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Love it, looked to be a picture perfect thanksgiving. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

I love the big family atmosphere of the ranch.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Excited to see you back and I do hope RL has calmed down for you. I hate the stress that I get when everything goes out of whack. 

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

love it

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

What a pleasant surprise when I opened my email today.  Hope all is well and looking forward to more.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Yay! I lived the new chapter. It was cute and I loved all the bonding. Emmett and the turkeys was freaking funny

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

:)

Reviewer: Mart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

oh, I understand RL happens but I am so glad you have posted another chapter here. LOVE this story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

So very excited to get this update.  Love reading about these characters again. I busted out laughing at Emmett.  Lol. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Good to have you back. I enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Wonderful return.   Love the Marina owner.  He is a font of knowledge.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

I agree with Bella's gift buying philosophy. I try to do the same thing with my family. Sounds like a great start to an amazing holiday season for them.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

I would love to live a life with all the loving people they have in there lives.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

hell of a chapter

love it

thank you

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

What a chapter! Love it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

looking forward to more

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

So glad to hear you are feeling better! I hope RL will be smoother for you now. It is nice to be back on the ranch. Glad to see that Bella's recovery is going well also. Maybe next time we will get to hear about how little Miracle is doing.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

Love it!

It sounded like a great night.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

sweet chapter.  Edward is so good with Cassie.   Great idea with the boat.  Woo hoo for great charity night.

Reviewer: JaMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

That what was a great chapter, I really liked when Edward went to the boat and asked why they needed a house when they had one the water, for a minute I thought he was going to suggest sailing to see if they could find a house for sale on the coast. I’m glad that you are feeling better and hope you get to enjoy the summer. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

What a fun night? I wish I was there.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

WOW! I loved reading this chapter. Im glad everything went off without a hitch for the event. Cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

:)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

What a delightful chapter. It left a smile on my face!

As an avid fan of your stories, I will patiently wait for each chapter to unfold at the pace that is right for you. Life has a way of changing our course of action. But, we always manage to find our way back to the things we love!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

AWESOME chapter! !!!!!!!!!! I am so glad that you are feeling better.  Hope you continue to get better.  Love how Edward steps in with Cassie.  Glad the fundraiser went off without any problems. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Edward needs to marry Bella and soon. Life is too short not to be happy. They need to get the repairs done on the house and go have some family time. Bella has plenty of family and friends to take care of the ranch for awhile.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Glad to see that everyone came out relatively ok and what was lost can be rebuilt. You really scared me there for a minute. Here is to Miracle having a long, healthy life. Hopefully these nice folks can get a break now.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

She is home and I love the baby foal very cool in all the sad the ray of hope and love. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

OMG so much pain thank you for killing Jane to bad she didnt suffer.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Fabulous chapter!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Miracle at Swan Lake Ranch. Perfect name for the journey to recovery.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

I so want to go on vacation with them.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

So glad to read that they are all doing well considering. Love this story and thankful for the update to settle my nerves. Looking forward to reading how the next month goes.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

That is kind of scary they need to get Jane and find out what her deal is.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

well i am glad jane and embry are gone and can no longer be a thorn in this family side. they sure did expierence alot of loss

now they can all move forward and build new and expand and be better

the skys the limit. they all have alot to look forward to. they also have another miracle to make sure she does well and grows up nice and healthy

love it

thank you

 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Great chapter! 

It's amazing how strong Bella is.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Wow they have all been through a lot. So Jane is dead. What about the the guys that she was working with? I hope some good times are headed their way. Loving this story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Nurses are def angels.   So glad B is ok.   She has such a great family around her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Let's backtrack a bit.....
Esme's vehicle had a tire blow out on their departure from Seattle. Jane rigged that.....wow.
Embry is not dead, correct. Jane left him in the barn to burn.
Did Bella's horses make it out unharmed?
So much loss for everyone to grasp.
Where is the Life Flight going to take Bella? What is the closest trauma hospital hear them?
How will Cassie deal with her mother being gone?
Very intense chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Exciting chapter.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Great chapter! 

Even though you mentioned character death's I didn't think that Bella would get in the crossfire. 

More please. 

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Lousy place to stop....but I still love the story.

Catherine

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Ready for the next update - please

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

OMGOSH! !!!!!!!!!!! I hope Jane is the only lyrics character death here. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as you can.

So glad that Cassie has Heidi to play with now. Edward will be a good dad. 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Omg, you have to stop the story here? Really? that is freaking cruel. You have be kidding. Please post soon!!!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Omg I trust u on this. I wonder will they find out she is pregnant. I wondered if jane would rear her head again. Please update when you can. Tearing up yes.

Reviewer: HelsBells Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

No, no no, no! That is a cliffy-and-a-half!!!!! Next chapter pls.....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

EVIL women with the cliffy!!!!!   Glad they are sleeping together.  Sweetness.   Jane got off way too easy.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

God no! Poor Edward and Cassie. Please tell me they are gonna be alright. Did the horses survive? And was it Embry that died in the fire, at least it sounded that way, please tell me it wasn't Zack? Jane is one crazy Bitch!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

wow they are both all in

a house that is theirs thrilled for them

big move but they are ready. they are so ready for the family and the new adventures

love it

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

Wow, Bella's finally living outside the Ranch. Will all the employees have access to the home on Dauphin Island?
The diving sounds amazing. It has rekindled the desire to get back into the sport.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

Yes, he said it!  Wonderful chapter, little Cassie is such a water baby.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

Wonderful chapter. Glad he finally told her.  House sounds wonderful

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

So just one question about their first time, were they not afraid someone would catch them being out in the open like that. Not that it wasn't totally romantic but just saying. I mean Jasper and Billy I assume would see them sleeping on the deck. But maybe they were sneaking enough to get away with it. Either way, it's nice to see their relationship moving forward. It sounds like they are both getting what they needed from each other.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

Great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22: Ready to Love Again

LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter.  They finally admitted that they love each other.  I am so glad that they are having a good trip.  Live the interaction with cassie. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

Wow Jane and this other Call kid really wanna get shot huh?   wonder what Skankya or whomever promised Jane for her to do this?

Glad they are having fun though.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

I hate that they set the fire. Glad no one was hurt. I am a little surprised that Bella and them are still going on their trip with everything going on. I can understand still doing the camp but to be away from the ranch. I am just surprised that she would do that. Love this story. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

So Embry and Jane are behind the vandalism. Will Eli be let off the hook for his initial involvement?
Cattle rustling holds serious consequences!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

That sounds like an amazing couple of days on the water.
It sounds like Carlisle and Jasper will both become licensed boat operators. What about Emmett?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

This is an expensive adventure.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

I'm really enjoying their sweet yet intense banter. There is no question that their desires are building but they both need to slowly move on that direction so neither one feels pressured.
The scavenger hunt designed by Rose is a brilliant program.
Jasper's rebuild wagon is a hit.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Everyone can see the love radiating from Edward towards his two special girls.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Bella's full of surprises.
My husband was a certified instructor. In my younger days he taught me how to scuba dive in murky water, shipwreck and deep water. These dives are all very exciting.
I have yet to dive a coral reef.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

Nothing like having a crazy person after you to keep things interesting. If we are going to lose some people, I would say that they are not stopping Jane anytime soon. But I look forward to hearing about the dive trip. At least they will get a break from the stress for awhile. Hopefully nothing awful will happen while they are away.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Casanova did a great job with the first date and kiss!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Ha, what are large families for; there a very few, if any, secrets!
Poor Esme. Her family has been under attack for so long.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

You just has to reintroduce Jane into the equation, argh!
Hope Bella get a chance to stand up to that witch.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

Can't wait to see what happens next with the farm

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

I absolutely adore this story AND the original.  I found it this morning, read it completely, then started this sequel.  One of the best I've read in a very long time!

 

I'm looking forward to much, much more!

Catherine

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

Yeah, Edward gets his dream girl to go on a date.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

This chapter is a great expression of a families values.
Will Bella make Edward wait very long before she answers his request?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old

It seems another trait Edward shares with Bella.
Jessica and Seth have a house!
Bella's so generous.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch

I'm unfamiliar with the signs and symptoms of lupus.
Bella's the sun that the ranch and all its inhabitants revolve around.
Sarah is very in tune with Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes

I had a feeling that Seth was picking up rings after dropping Cassie off at school.
Will the old hay barn be a problem since there us no alarm system?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess

What are the boys stealing from Bella's property?
The subtle flirting is gradually increasing between Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business

They all officially belongs to the ranch and Texas.
The owner of that car dealership had a bonus style day!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds

Cassie tried to call Edward, Dad?
Bella and Edward work so well together.
The new hierarchy will smooth over Bella having to make all the immediate calls.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest

I really like your Rose. She is a much deeper character than most storylines portray.
When do the camps begin?
Will Edward begin to create glutten-free recipes for a restaurant setting?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul

Cassie has found a new set of friends with Lleu and Edward.
Do Seth and Jessica ever get together?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’

Will Edward ever open another restaurant?
Hoe does the ranch stay in business with all these expenditures?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 9:22 PM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'

What about all the items the Cullens had shipped?
Dasher is one fierce protector!
Bella's feeling the pull just like Edward.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

:)

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Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 21: A Spark Makes a Flame

Oh Jake you really can be stupid sometimes. Lot of stuff happened here, I hope they get caught soon. Im scared to see which characters die.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

This sounds like so much fun.

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