Date: 26 Apr 2020 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it! Great ending!
Date: 25 Apr 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 25 Apr 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
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Date: 25 Apr 2020 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 10 Oct 2018 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 10 Oct 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 10 Oct 2018 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 14 Apr 2018 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have looked very hard but I can't find the plot anywhere..
Author's Response:
In the first chapter in author notes or chapter notes is written that describing what it is like and this is what else was also placed there
Date: 11 May 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Freaking hilarious with the old lady starting.note me guess Jasper is gonna go to a book store and buy her all the book titles she had at the lib r Ray instead.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I found sometimes life's little experiences can be helpful.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Author's Response:
I am glad you loved it.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Bella is an amazing person!
Author's Response:
thank you, glad youenjoyedit.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it!
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 31 Oct 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!
Author's Response:
thank you. I like doing my version of Bella different to that which Meyer had in the bookd or the one inthe movies.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
I truly enjoyed reading this story and all the sexy times!! You did a really interesting and imaginative piece!!!!
Thanks for writing it!!!
Author's Response:
thank you
I like doing things out of character
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
thank you for writing this and all your story's and can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your support.
Others are up now.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
bad tonya she anit going to like what happens
Author's Response:
New chapter and it is the final chapter as well, is up now.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
well that's one way to claim her hot dam that's hot
Author's Response:
Why thank you. Thank you so very much. Just for that, here is chapter 14
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
alice anit going to have a mate if he don't leave bella alone i think he should change her so they can have lot more sex lol
Author's Response:
Be set for something else to throw a spanner in the works.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
they do like there sex
Author's Response:
Yep! I warned everyone about that, too, so they should've known not to read it if they are not us. ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
poor rose she will hate herself if she hurt anyone
Author's Response:
I know, but i thoughti would give you a little drama.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
fuck in space niddle i wood have never thout about that
Author's Response:
I had it suggested by a young writer who so happens, apparently, to be deaf. She expressed her ideas on where they can fuck and they are good so i used them.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow love all those senes what about a three way with jasper and caius lol
Author's Response:
Nooo. Not a 3way. This is J/B hot and delicious. ;D
Date: 03 Dec 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
The gassy lady is SOOOO funny! A perfect place for a comic relief & her not having any teeth was priceless!
Author's Response:
Thank you, and you are welcome.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm so excited to see who Edward has met! I know you said J/B can only get frisky so much before it gets boring but so far 7 chapters in & you are still coming up with some really creative places. I was thinking the piano bench was just to make Edward jealous, but you surprised me by Alice's text.
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweets. I appreciate the positive reviews
Glad i caught ya off guard with the Alice phone call.
I like how Bella stands up and faces the consequences for whatever she does.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh how I hope Edward will want to be a prt of Bella & jasper! The names you have the family calling Edward are hilarious!
Author's Response:
No can do, sweets
Eddy boy has a date with another outcome for him.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another winner! Please don't edit! I love it just the way it is! I think the reason Jasper and Bella fit so well is because they are both individuals who feel deeply. Always. Jasper, as an empath, can't avoid it, and Bella is quite simply an earthy, emotional, exuberant, being who revels in being cherished. You write them both astoundingly well. Again, thank you for all the hard work and happy moments! I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Finally!
Finally someone knows how i see these two. I have never liked Edward, but in some of my ideas i do try and be nice to him. Alice... i can take her or leave her, it doesn't really matter.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have to tell you incredibly hot and wonderful this piece of work is! Sorry not to have reviewed each chapter, but honestly, I was always too anxious to read the next chapter! Each one has left me hot and bothered. Thank you! Finally, Bella has someone who can appreciate her and someone that she truly respects. Their interaction is luscious!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I certainly hope you have gotten a laugh out of the story so far. Edward will wise up on his own. He doesn't stay much in the house as he has someo.. somewhere to go to spend time. Don't worry, it is J/B. But things get better, although we have a slight hiccup to look forward to, it will turn out alright.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
i now who don't what jasper that wood be eddie anyhow i wood take anyhow anywhere and anytime
Author's Response:
???
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
i still what jasper
Author's Response:
Really? Who wouldn't though.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
OOHHHHH I LIKE, I LIKE
Author's Response:
Good, 'cause i have put another chapter up
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
can i be bella and let him fuck me that way wow
Author's Response:
Nope! If you were Bella then who would be reading this in your place? :D
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow you got to love jasper
Author's Response:
Yep!
chapter update in a few minutes
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
omg thats realy hot
Author's Response:
next chapter coming up