Date: 10 Jul 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
One can only hope that Rosalie will make better decisions.
Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
Looks like they are getting their rhythm down with work, home and the kids. I'm crossing my fingers that Rosalie is deciding to be a part of a family that includes Bella!
Date: 09 Jul 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad the kids are all coping well. Nice of Ben and Ang to take Jasper. Hope Rose is being genuine.
Date: 09 Jul 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
The story got a little confusing for a second when you switched from his perspective to hers but otherwise I enjoy your work.
"Edward reached down and picked me up, laying me on the bed as he continued to tell me about his day. “I told Jasper about the game next Friday and he’s really excited, and Alice has a new friend at the daycare. She’s the daughter of one of the girls in accounting.”"
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
One big family, indeed.
Sherry
Date: 06 Jul 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
Rosalie is such a brat and I think Bella fell into her trap. She knows she is loved by Edward. If he didn't why would they be living with him. She just likes the attention. Plus now she has everyone's sympathy. Poor unwanted Rosalie.
Date: 05 Jul 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thank goodness for Bella being able to communicate with Rose and help him through things and get back to a places where Rose and he can be once again like it use to. I love Garrett.
Date: 30 Jun 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Bella is a lucky woman to have someone like Edward. I hope Carlisle and Esme come around soon. They are being quite childish about something that really doesn't concern them.
Sherry
Date: 30 Jun 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
Edward needs to quit threatening to send Rosalie away.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
Boy Edward was busy getting everything replace. Loved that he got some extra things for Bella.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
I really like the way he considers Bella's views on everything and incorporates them into family decisions, real proof of his love, I think! There are still things to work through and I know you will be sending solutions to us soon. It must rankle, and hurt his feelings, at his brother and sisterinlaw's attitude. Oh well, first things first, get Bella healed, the kids squared away and get married!
Date: 26 Jun 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
It feels like things are finally starting to come together for Bella and Edward. It is always interesting to hear how Edward thinks of things. And hopefully Carlisle and Esme will come around by realizing how much they are losing.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad Garrett was able to help him out. The gifts were really sweet.
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love Charlie already! Yes, please sic Leah on little princess bitch, Rosalie.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yeah. Carlisle answer Esme need to realize that Bella is a grown woman, who is old enough to make her own decisions. She chose Edward.
Date: 31 May 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm so happy you didn't drag this part out. A lot to take in, in one chapter, but well done. Rosalie needs an attitude adjustment, pronto. I adore Jasper and Alice, they just go with the flow. I'm amazed at Charlie and Sue in accepting Edward's relationship with Bella so easily. And I'm extremely disappointed in Esme and Carlisle in their behavior. Though, I'm excited that Edward decided to propose and not put it off any longer.
Sherry
Date: 30 May 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
So glad that Bella is going to be ok. I knew,Carlisle and Esme would be upset but I did not think they would be that upset. Glad Charlie and Sue are supporting them. Can't wait for more.
Date: 29 May 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
So the only ones with a problem with this is Esme, Carlisle and Rose they all better pull there heads out of there asss all that matters is that they are happy and not hurting anyone.
Date: 29 May 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
That went realy well with Tanya she is very cool with it she trust Bella with her kids and they love her so why not. Now Edward is going to lose his mind.
Date: 29 May 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
He has so much hope love it
Date: 29 May 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad Bella will be ok. Random acts of violence do happen. I'm also glad they have the support of most people, especially Charlie. I can't believe that Carlisle and esme are willing to give up those relationships just because they don't agree with their choices. Once people are adults, they need to live life for themselves. And Bella and Edward are not hurting anyone. Hopefully it will be fixed at some point. And Rosalie is just being a bratty teenager. Maybe therapy?
Date: 28 May 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
That chpter was a toughie! Made me smile and made me cry! Charlie was so sweet about Edward loving Bella. Funny that Carlisle and Esme are the only ones being stupid about it! Thank heaven this turned out as well as it did, and Bella said yes!
Date: 28 May 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
Carlisle and Esme need to get over it and accept that they're together. Aww the kids are too cute wanting to see her right away. Loving this story. Rose needs to be handled and not let her get away with what she has done. Sending her away won't help I believe.
Date: 28 May 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hope Carlisle & Esme wake up
Date: 28 May 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
Not liking Esme and Carlisle much right now. Glad Charlie is being supportive and Tanya is backing Edward up regarding Rosalie.
Date: 28 May 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
Esme and Carlisle are being assholes. They visit Bella but talk badly about her, want to fire her, & say something to upset her as soon as she wakes up. They should stay away until they get an attitude adjustment. I'm glad Charlie took it well & defended Edward & her relationship. Rosalie is a self absorbed bitch she knows Bella is in the hospital hurt badly and that her father and siblings are going to be upset but all she cares about is that asshole boy who invited her nanny in for a 3 some in front of her.
Date: 28 May 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
I get that both Carlisle and Esme are upset how they found out about Edward and Bella being a couple. But the way they're treating them now and worse in front of Charlie and his family is so uncalled for!
And it's not only about not in the loop from the beginning but about who's taking care of the medical part? How could Bella even trust them now as they did everything she feared they would if they knew?!
Charlie was very nice in meeting Edward, having his back instantly was a nice surprise.
They're engaged 😃
Date: 27 May 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
looking forward to the next hcapter
Date: 27 May 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh man cat is out of the bag. Glad he told Tanya and she supports him.
Date: 26 May 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
I bet Edward is freaking out.
Date: 24 May 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad Tanya is being adult about this. My ex and I are trying to be grownups about our divorce and kids too. Sadly too many don't think about the kids.
ACK for the CLIFFY!!!
Date: 24 May 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMGosh!!!!!!! I am glad that Tanya is supporting them. What in the world happened with Bella and Rose??? What happened in the last voice mail?? Was Bella attacked??
Date: 23 May 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the heads up on the updates!
Date: 23 May 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
This chapter from EPOV gave me chills. I really hope Bella is okay.
Sherry
Date: 23 May 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bless Tanya for the level headed woman she is. I was hoping she would be okay with this new situation and sure enough! Edward's phone being turned off makes sense now, but I'll bet he wishes he hadn't done it now! He must be in a panic about what has happened to his Bella!
Date: 23 May 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well hopefully those guys got scared off and were content to steal the car. But at the very least Bella will have on heck of a headache. Talk about a bad day...
Date: 22 May 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope she is alright
Date: 04 May 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so happy for them.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad Rose is behaving at least.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm not sure the conversation with Tanya is gonna go well.
Sherry
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love reading Edward's POV of this story. Can't wait to see how Tanya reacts to them being together.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 25
Nice to hear from these two again. It sounds like they are ready for what is ahead. Hopefully it won't destroy the new found peace with Rosalie.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
I picture him taking a deep breath and preparing to tell Tanya the big news! Then his brother, sister-in-law and the children! That would be enough to make me a bit nervous! I'm crossing my fingers that everyone will be okay with the news.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
People are going to be pissed when the truth comes out (esme) lol then she will be happy
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
So Bella had some bad boyfriends I can't wait till they tell everyone
Date: 03 Feb 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't wait for the big reveal. I'm surprised that Esme hasn't figured it out.
Date: 02 Feb 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad they wont have to hide for much longer.
Date: 25 Jan 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE THIS STORY IT ALWAYS BRINGS A SMILE
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
OHHH love it, been looking forward to this one for awhile.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
St. Pat's is lovely at xmas but also easter time too. Lol Esme hasn't figured it out yet.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
Excited about getting this update. Can't wait to see what everyone thinks of them being together.
Date: 22 Jan 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
I feel like this is the calm before the storm.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't wait to find out how everyone takes their news.
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
It must have made Edward's heart rate accelerate when Esme talked about his girlfriend and Bella's boyfriend ! Lucky she didn't make the connection! I'll bet they both will be so happy to tell everyone and finally quit hiding!
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
I do think it's interesting that none of their friends have put two and two together yet but this just means that they can do their announcement on their own schedule.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Your story is really awesome. I am waiting the next chapter :)
Date: 27 Dec 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
It's been 1 month since last update could u please update this truely captivating story A.S.A.P..
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
This has to be the longest couple of weeks for them. There new beginning is so close.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
This should be the last holiday season they are seperated. I actually think its good that they are waiting till after the holidays to tell people because the holidays can be stressful enough for some people. Adding to that might not help their case. This was when they talk to people, there won't be lots of other things going on at the same time. Well at least not as hectic probably.
Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
<3 LOVE *.*
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
LOVE!!! <3 *.*
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
So happy to get your update on your stories. Can't wait to see what everyone thinks of them being together.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Getting a puppy for Christmas, the kids will love it.
Yep, I think Rosalie's change in attitude is only temporary. She's gonna hit the roof when she finds out about her dad and Bella.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awwww He's getting a puppy.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
I guess Edward is thinking about the same sort of things Bella is. It probably weighs on both their minds, there will be so many affected by their decision! Here's hoping for a happy holiday!
Date: 27 Nov 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Aug 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
so it seems stuff is going to hit the fan
put the big girl panties on and get ready for the ride
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love how supportive and sweet Edward is to his kids, Tanya, and Bella. He is a very caring man and hopefully everyone will see how much he loves Bella.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella needs to completely confide in Edward about her past.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
I can't wait until Charlie finds out.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
Excited getting all these updates. Glad Seth is on their side. Can't wait to find out about Bella's past.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love reading Edward's POV. Thanks for the update.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm crossing my fingers that they get to tell the family their news before something happens and it ends badly! All the people who care for Bella are upset because they don't know the truth. Now it seems is the time for Bella to tell Edward her past history.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
While not a major hurdle, the first of the family, on either side is on board with their news, it seems. I loved Edward's reaction to Bella's efforts with the tree.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
hmmm Esme is gonna scalp him when she finds out. LOL. Glad he gets along with Tanya esp for the kids sake. That is a scary cliffy woman!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
He handled Seth very well.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
oh no.. here goes a tough conversation but at least they have a good grounding and it is better than Edward has all the facts. Sounds like he will have to do more than average work to show he is better than all his predasessors.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
This should be interesting. please post soon
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
And so it starts, but at least they have one family member down. Maybe takling them one at time is better anyway. They seem to be able to convince people once they get them to listen.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
Looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jul 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
im dying here are you gonna update both stories soon it is now 7/30/2014
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! They make a really cute and sweet couple!