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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 29

One can only hope that Rosalie will make better decisions. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 29

:-)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

Looks like they are getting their rhythm down with work, home and the kids. I'm crossing my fingers that Rosalie is deciding to be a part of a family that includes Bella!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad the kids are all coping well.  Nice of Ben and Ang to take Jasper.  Hope Rose is being genuine.

Reviewer: dopey5of6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 29

The story got a little confusing for a second when you switched from his perspective to hers but otherwise I enjoy your work.

"Edward reached down and picked me up, laying me on the bed as he continued to tell me about his day.  “I told Jasper about the game next Friday and he’s really excited, and Alice has a new friend at the daycare.  She’s the daughter of one of the girls in accounting.”"

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 29

One big family, indeed.

Sherry

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 28

Rosalie is such a brat and I think Bella fell into her trap. She knows she is loved by Edward.  If he didn't why would they be living with him. She just likes the attention.  Plus now she has everyone's sympathy.  Poor unwanted Rosalie. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thank goodness for Bella being able to communicate with Rose and help him through things and get back to a places where Rose and he can be once again like it use to.  I love Garrett.

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 28

great chapters!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 28

Bella is a lucky woman to have someone like Edward. I hope Carlisle and Esme come around soon. They are being quite childish about something that really doesn't concern them.

Sherry

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 28

Edward needs to quit threatening to send Rosalie away.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

Boy Edward was busy getting everything replace.  Loved that he got some extra things for Bella. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

I really like the way he considers Bella's views on everything and incorporates them into family decisions, real proof of his love, I think! There are still things to work through and I know you will be sending solutions to us soon. It must rankle, and hurt his feelings, at his brother and sisterinlaw's attitude. Oh well, first things first, get Bella healed, the kids squared away and get married!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

:):)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

It feels like things are finally starting to come together for Bella and Edward. It is always interesting to hear how Edward thinks of things. And hopefully Carlisle and Esme will come around by realizing how much they are losing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Glad Garrett was able to help him out.  The gifts were really sweet.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love Charlie already!   Yes,  please sic Leah on little princess bitch, Rosalie.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 27

Yeah.  Carlisle answer Esme need to realize that Bella is a grown woman,  who is old enough to make her own decisions.  She chose Edward. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 27

I'm so happy you didn't drag this part out. A lot to take in, in one chapter, but well done. Rosalie needs an attitude adjustment, pronto. I adore Jasper and Alice, they just go with the flow. I'm amazed at Charlie and Sue in accepting Edward's relationship with Bella so easily. And I'm extremely disappointed in Esme and Carlisle in their behavior. Though, I'm excited that Edward decided to propose and not put it off any longer.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27

So glad that Bella is going to be ok. I knew,Carlisle and Esme would be upset but I did not think they would be that  upset.  Glad Charlie and Sue are supporting them. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 27

=)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

So the only ones with a problem with this is Esme, Carlisle and Rose they all better pull there heads out of there asss all that matters is that they are happy and not hurting anyone.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 26

That went realy well with Tanya she is very cool with it she trust Bella with her kids and they love her so why not.  Now Edward is going to lose his mind.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 25

He has so much hope love it

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad Bella will be ok. Random acts of violence do happen. I'm also glad they have the support of most people, especially Charlie. I can't believe that Carlisle and esme are willing to give up those relationships just because they don't agree with their choices. Once people are adults, they need to live life for themselves. And Bella and Edward are not hurting anyone. Hopefully it will be fixed at some point. And Rosalie is just being a bratty teenager. Maybe therapy?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

That chpter was a toughie! Made me smile and made me cry! Charlie was so sweet about Edward loving Bella. Funny that Carlisle and Esme are the only ones being stupid about it! Thank heaven this turned out as well as it did, and Bella said yes!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

Carlisle and Esme need to get over it and accept that they're together. Aww the kids are too cute wanting to see her right away. Loving this story. Rose needs to be handled and not let her get away with what she has done. Sending her away won't help I believe. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 27

I hope Carlisle & Esme wake up

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

Not liking Esme and Carlisle much right now.  Glad Charlie is being supportive and Tanya is backing Edward up regarding Rosalie.

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

Esme and Carlisle are being assholes. They visit Bella but talk badly about her, want to fire her, & say something to upset her as soon as she wakes up. They should stay away until they get an attitude adjustment. I'm glad Charlie took it well & defended Edward & her relationship. Rosalie is a self absorbed bitch she knows Bella is in the hospital hurt badly and that her father and siblings are going to be upset but all she cares about is that asshole boy who invited her nanny in for a 3 some in front of her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 27

I get that both Carlisle and Esme are upset how they found out about Edward and Bella being a couple. But the way they're treating them now and worse in front of Charlie and his family is so uncalled for! 

And it's not only about not in the loop from the beginning but about who's taking care of the medical part? How could Bella even trust them now as they did everything she feared they would if they knew?!

Charlie was very nice in meeting Edward, having his back instantly was a nice surprise. 

They're engaged 😃

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to the next hcapter 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh man cat is out of the bag. Glad he told Tanya and she supports him. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 26

I bet Edward is freaking out. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

Glad Tanya is being adult about this.   My ex and I are trying to be grownups about our divorce and kids too.   Sadly too many don't think about the kids.

ACK for the CLIFFY!!!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

=)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

OMGosh!!!!!!! I am glad that Tanya is supporting them. What in the world happened with Bella and Rose??? What happened in the last voice mail?? Was Bella attacked??

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for the heads up on the updates! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

This chapter from EPOV gave me chills. I really hope Bella is okay.

Sherry

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bless Tanya for the level headed woman she is. I was hoping she would be okay with this new situation and sure enough! Edward's phone being turned off makes sense now, but I'll bet he wishes he hadn't done it now! He must be in a panic about what has happened to his Bella!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well hopefully those guys got scared off and were content to steal the car. But at the very least Bella will have on heck of a headache. Talk about a bad day...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 26

I hope she is alright

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 25

I am so happy for them. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25

Glad Rose is behaving at least.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

:-)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm not sure the conversation with Tanya is gonna go well.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love reading Edward's POV of this story.  Can't wait to see how Tanya reacts to them being together. 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 25

Nice to hear from these two again. It sounds like they are ready for what is ahead. Hopefully it won't destroy the new found peace with Rosalie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 25

I picture him taking a deep breath and preparing to tell Tanya the big news! Then his brother, sister-in-law and the children! That would be enough to make me a bit nervous! I'm crossing my fingers that everyone will be okay with the  news.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

People are going to be pissed when the truth comes out (esme) lol then she will be happy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

So Bella had some bad boyfriends I can't wait till they tell everyone 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

I can't wait for the big reveal.  I'm surprised that Esme hasn't figured it out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Glad they wont have to hide for much longer.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

LOVE THIS STORY IT ALWAYS BRINGS A SMILE

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

OHHH love it, been looking forward to this one for awhile.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 24

St. Pat's is lovely at xmas but also easter time too. Lol Esme hasn't figured it out yet. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

Excited about getting this update. Can't wait to see what everyone thinks of them being together. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

I feel like this is the calm before the storm.

Sherry

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

I can't wait to find out how everyone takes their news.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 24

It must have made Edward's heart rate accelerate when Esme talked about his girlfriend and Bella's boyfriend ! Lucky she didn't make the connection! I'll bet they both will be so happy to tell everyone and finally quit hiding!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

I do think it's interesting that none of their friends have put two and two together yet but this just means that they can do their announcement on their own schedule.

Reviewer: Momomegm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Your story is really awesome. I am waiting the next chapter :)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

It's been 1 month since last update could u please update this truely captivating story A.S.A.P..

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

This has to be the longest couple of weeks for them. There new beginning is so close.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

This should be the last holiday season they are seperated. I actually think its good that they are waiting till after the holidays to tell people because the holidays can be stressful enough for some people. Adding to that might not help their case. This was when they talk to people, there won't be lots of other things going on at the same time. Well at least not as hectic probably.

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

<3 LOVE *.*

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE!!! <3 *.*

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

:-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

So happy to get your update on your stories. Can't wait to see what everyone thinks of them being together.  

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter

 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

Getting a puppy for Christmas, the kids will love it.

Yep, I think Rosalie's change in attitude is only temporary. She's gonna hit the roof when she finds out about her dad and Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awwww He's getting a puppy. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 23

I guess Edward is thinking about the same sort of things Bella is. It probably weighs on both their minds, there will be so many affected by their decision! Here's hoping for a happy holiday!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

so it seems stuff is going to hit the fan

put the big girl panties on and get ready for the ride

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

I love how supportive and sweet Edward is to his kids, Tanya, and Bella. He is a very caring man and hopefully everyone will see how much he loves  Bella.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella needs to completely confide in Edward about her past.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

I can't wait until Charlie finds out.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22

Excited getting all these updates.  Glad Seth is on their side. Can't wait to find out about Bella's past. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love reading Edward's POV. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 22

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm crossing my fingers that they get to tell the family their news before something happens and it ends badly! All the people who care for Bella are upset because they don't know the truth. Now it seems is the time for Bella to tell Edward her past history.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 21

While not a major hurdle, the first of the family, on either side is on board with their news, it seems. I loved Edward's reaction to Bella's efforts with the tree.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

hmmm Esme is gonna scalp him when she finds out. LOL.    Glad he gets along with Tanya esp for the kids sake.  That is a scary cliffy woman!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 21

He handled Seth very well.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

oh no.. here goes a tough conversation but at least they have a good grounding and it is better than Edward has all the facts. Sounds like he will have to do more than average work to show he is better than all his predasessors.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 22

This should be interesting. please post soon

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

And so it starts, but at least they have one family member down. Maybe takling them one at time is better anyway. They seem to be able to convince people once they get them to listen.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 20

 im dying here are you gonna update both stories soon it is now 7/30/2014

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! They make a really cute and sweet couple!

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