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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

thanks for writing and sharing.

ty



Author's Response:

no worries. glad you liked it.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

i love this story thanks for writing it and shareing it with us keep the great job your doing



Author's Response:

thanks sweets

I am glad you like it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

yey wedding.   Alice and Alec???



Author's Response:

Yeah, i picked upon that myself. sorry. I was thinking of doing something for him but totally forgot she had felix.

I will fix that and you wont need to worry then. Sorry

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

Glad Esme is doing well.  lol for ALice and Felix.    Go Bella with the shield



Author's Response:

I fixed the mix up between this and ch 8.

 

new chapter is up now.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

i thought  that carilise is dead?



Author's Response:

Yes, between chapters 6 & 7. Why is that? I have reread chapter 8 but find nothing referring to carlisle. Did i miss something

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

i wonder who sent them?



Author's Response:

Dunno!

But chapter 8 and then 9 and i am finished.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

SHould have killed Carlisle right then and there.   Aww for Esme.



Author's Response:

I know, but i wanted to see if i would change him in to someone good

i couldnt, pity

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love that they have started a new family.



Author's Response:

Thank you, i wanted Bella and Jasper to have the sibling bond that isnt smothering like Emmett's would be.

Net chapter is going up now, then not many left to upload.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

i wonder what aro seen in his mind



Author's Response:

I didnt bother with details on tht as i figured there was enough mind reading and details already. sorry

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

awww poor girls.  Hope the V sort out Carlisle and Aro doesnt start more trouble about Wendy.



Author's Response:

You never know what will happen in anything i write. But i was asked in one review what is on the papers Carlisle was after. The paper he was reading was Robert's client list. His vampire client list at that.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

love the first chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

i still don't know what he whated with the papers



Author's Response:

It said it in the chapter.

Robert's client list. His vampire client list at that too.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

You must admit, when Bella lets loose, she let's loose!  Nice!



Author's Response:

Yep!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

what's carlisle up to can't wait to see



Author's Response:

Is he up to anything, or just being nosy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Go Jasper and RObert.  yummy time.   Hmm Carlisle was snooping?



Author's Response:

Yes, Carlisle is a very bd boy at the mo'.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

boy legs???  Did you mean boy shorts?     Aro is such a wanker.



Author's Response:

The last time i saw them was when daughter had to have them so i went looking in Target and found they had boy leg shorts and briefs. i had to go home and drag her down to pick. her being 16 means parents never choose right when it comes to clothes. lol

Yes, Aro is ather a you know what in this, i am sorry for any volturi lovers out there. I personally have nothing against the volturi, but we needed a man who could be... redeemed... for lack of a better word. but Carisle is going to be a shock to ppl.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

god who don't love a dom jasper lol



Author's Response:

Oh my god! I know, but then we would have to fight every woman and their pet to get him to ourself. lol.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful!  I find the characters of Wendy and Robert fascinating.  Wendy especially is a real caution!  She could give Jasper a real run for his money!  I look forward to finding out more about them and reading more.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review

This is one of my much older stories and i thought since we are always reading much heavier stories from many excellent writers, i would put up a romance one with a little humour and a touch of drama. Carlisle is not nice in this one.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

awww sounds like B might get a HEA now.  



Author's Response:

Wonderful, thank you for reviewing.

She most definately will ger her HEA, as will Jasper.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

great ch



Author's Response:

Of course it is. lol ;D

 

Thanks for reviewing it, sweets, you have a good one, bye

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

glad your back writing



Author's Response:

Thanks doll, i am glad to have edited what i can to the best of my ability, just so i can put this old one up onhere for everyone.

 

Will be putting another one up soon, short story

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  Let's see where u go with it.



Author's Response:

2nd Chapter is being put up now.

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