Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good story, sequel??
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edwards family are total assholes
Date: 02 Mar 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Date: 25 Dec 2015 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hello I loved this one I couldn't stop reading well now it's 4 in the morning so good night and merry Christmas
Date: 21 Nov 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome story. I truly enjoyed reading this one. Great job! !!!!
Date: 21 Nov 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
So glad everything was ok with the baby. Glad Mike and his sheep got what the deserved. Also, glad that Emmett is getting help. I wonder what Carlisle thought of the video Jasper gave him?
Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am lady they are back together, finally. Thanksfor sharing with us what happened to Bella's parents. Can't wait to read what they do to Tanya. Lol
Date: 21 Nov 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Another cliffy, I am so off to the next chapter. Edward is going to be pissed when he finds out what his family has done.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMGosh! I am soooo glad I can go on to the next chapter right now, so glad I do not have to wait for an update.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well, Emmett and Jacob were both assholes in this chapter. I truly hope Jacob does not kill himself. Bella would definitely fill quilty about it.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, Renee is being a real bitch. Hope Alex doesn't get any more bulling.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am so glad that they finally were able to talk and get things worked out.
Date: 20 Nov 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is getting on my nerves the way he is treating Bella. Off to read the next chapter to find out if she is pregnant or not.
Date: 20 Nov 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved the cake fight. When what Edward said about giving him more time because of his family, that sounds like he is ashamed of their relationship. I would definitely be upset.
Date: 19 Nov 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well at least the end of her day was good!!!!!!
Date: 19 Nov 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is giving me whiplash.
Date: 19 Nov 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
What is Edward's deal? Why is he running hot and cold?
Date: 19 Nov 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Edward. Lol!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Nov 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, hot hot sex and a drunk dirty talking Edward.
Date: 19 Nov 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad the girls won. What did Tanya mean about her parents?
Date: 18 Nov 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok love them bantering back and forth with each other.
Date: 18 Nov 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 20 Aug 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
this story was really cute!
i loved the song bella sang at the wedding
walking down the aisle, just the whole idea...kooky but in a good way.
wasn't too sure about edward's "stick up his ass" attitude
in the beginning but he came into his own...better late than never (for his age,
that is)
all around, well done!
Date: 15 Feb 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well with her doing stuff like that. Know wonder Edward doesn't touch her again.....Yes they may be friends but you are at Edwards house parading men around
Date: 11 Jan 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
I sure do love a happy ending and they definitely got one! You guys hit another one out of the ballpark with this story, keep up the good work!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looks like even stuffy Dr. Cullen came around in the end. I'm not real surprised Bella had to have the baby by c-section. All the stress she's been under, plus being a small woman having a fairly big child, it was probably inevitable. Sure glad things turned out okay for everyone. Maybe Carlisle can mend fences with Esme. too. And who cares about Rose and Tanya? I figured she was accusing Bella of what she did and sure enough!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
How horrifying, what happened to Renee and Bella's parents! Now that Edward has learned what went on while he was in the icu, things are about to be rectified, big time!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hope those assholes are happy now, they have probably caused Bella to lose her baby! People like that are so mean it's unbelievable!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope they put that nasty little bastard in prison for shooting Edward, and he finds out what happens to guys in there! Don't let Edward die, please! Bella and their daughter need him too much!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Jacob is just a young fool if he thinks he has rights to Bella! At least Charlie, Alec, Jasper and Edward's folks are okay with everything! Guess the rest of them can change their minds or stay out of it! Emmett telling those foul excuses for jokes was sickening. I can't believe a father would do that to his child!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
I wanted to cry for Bella over Renee trying to get her to sign away her baby! Is the woman crazy or what? Thank God Edward showed up when he did, so he can be there for her and their child! It's the pits, too what Mike Newton is doing to Alec! I hope someone beats him to a bloody pulp!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Okay, now the basics are out in the open, he knows and she knows and Renee has been a twit. I just hope they can come together and build on this, if only for the babie's sake. It would be nice if the two of them work things out between them, too!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
Riley being Bella's baby doctor is going to backfire on her, I'm afraid! I just want to kick Edward's ass and choke Miss Bitch Tanya until she's a little blue! Thank heaven for Alec and Jasper!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Alec and Bella are now a lot closer, but I still see this as not turning out well! Tanya will poison the well if she can and Edward can be such a jealous jerk at times!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya is going to cause as much trouble as she can. Too bad Edward didn't hear her nasty little rant about him and how she would make life miserable for Bella if she could! Still and all, it was a pretty good birthday!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
I also noticed that no mention was made of a condom! Oh my!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sure, if your idea of getting closer is two steps forward and one step back! I'm starting to wonder what Edward's problem is! Bella is going to give up one of these days if he keeps up this routine. He only seems to have sex with her when he's been drinking!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
I realize their personalities are polar opposites and then there's the age difference, but could these two sit down and talk to one another? What would it hurt?
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella may have to tell Edward what it is exactly that she wants from him! The relationship she has with her boys is different, and I don't think Edward cares for it very much!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
How cliche, having clandestine sex at the wedding reception! Pretty hot sex, at that! Who knew Edward had it in him? I guess drinking really must loosen him up! Tanya and Rose couldn't even be decent at the wedding, what a pair of bitches!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
That paintballing sounded like a lot of fun, except for Tanya's nasty comments. I don't get what her gripe is, but someone needs to pop her a good one! Bella and Edward seem to be getting along a lot better, too!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
They may argue a lot, but they also always have a lot to talk about. Of course neither one has noticed that, yet. I'm wondering which one figures it out first?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like Charlie and Renee, Bella and maybe Edward, also his parents. Not so much the rest of them, especially Alec and Tanya! This ought to be quite the experience for all concerned!
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this story.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Carlisle seemed to soften, once he saw his grandchild. I hope it lasts.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
i loved it!!!!!(:
Date: 22 Jan 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful! So wonderful I hate to see the end, though I know we must. Your characters were the best. Fully dimensional and each uniquely flawed - as are we all. Thank you for a wonderful adventure! I wouldn't have missed a syllable!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! So it seems Carlisle is coming around! Nice touch! Perhaps losing Esme made him see the light of day!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful chapter! If I were Tanya, I'd start running now! I can't wait to read the next chapters! I've been sick, and whenI was feeling well enough, these were like a special gift for getting better. Thank you!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. I want Tanya to get hers!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the story.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
I didn't like it, I LOVED IT!! Opposites attract, yada yada.....but seriously, going to be one of my go to rereads!!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved this story
Date: 21 Jan 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Will miss reading about them u did a great job
Date: 21 Jan 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Glad there was justice but would love an outtake of the Tanya/Rose debacle! Cannot believe Tanya actually had the audacity to try and pin her whorish ways on Bella!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks so much that was a great story and a family I would like to be apart of some of them anyway lol. So much love its a good thing
Date: 21 Jan 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! Thank you! So glad you posted more chapters! Cannot wait for the explosion. Tanya?? Yes!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
So most of them are pulling there heads out of there ass. Carlisle steped up to be the dad and granddad he should be.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank god he is awake and went to her the family what family he doesnt have much he will claim. I want someone to beat Tanya.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
ROFL for Rose being cut off and Skankya being a porn start. Yey for wedding. Jacob needs to be neutered.
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow Skankya is really a piece of work, Rose too. Glad Em appologized. Go Esme!!!!. Awww for baby
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Soooo glad E told off some of the family. Yey Jazz for getting the film and giving to Carlisle. What a dick he is.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
NNNOOO ok im better now I LOVE this story can't wait for more.
angel hall
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
omg please dont loss the baby bella! ugh i hate Rose, Tanya and Mr.Cullen! i cant wait to find out what is going to happen
Date: 16 Jan 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow that is so shity Rose Tanya need the shit beat out of them and they better hope that one day Edward will talk to them again when he finds out how they have treated Bella he will disown his family.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
She better not sign those papers. They have no right to ask her to give up her parental rights. She is an adult. She needs to send messages of her love and support through Charlie and Alec. Once Edward can state his views, she will be let into the room. She also needs to tell him what his family was trying to force her to do.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Edward is going to be livid when he finds out what his family has put her through. Not only not letting her in, but now causing her so much stress that she collapsed. You know a story is good when you want to jump into it to personally beat up some of the characters. I hope Edward's up and about soon and kicking some major ass.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for not killing Edward.
I am appalled at Carlisle's, Rose's, & Tanya's behavior
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for Edward to wake up and give it to his family.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hate Rose and Tanya. I hope Dr Cullen finds out the truth about their false allegations against Bella. It's time for Edward to put an end to this mean crazy behavior from his family. Thanks for the good chapter.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ugh, what a cliffee!!! I hate Rosalie and Tanya in this story!! Keep posting
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't these two get a break? Oh my gosh! Let's gang up and kick some Rosnya ass!!! (Rose/Tanya)
Can't wait to see how you take them down and bring our two love birds together.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please don't leave us hanging to long please
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella. Edward's family are nasty and evil
Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
omg! more please :)
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for having the next chapter almost ready! I don't know if I'd still have nails if it were any longer! This was a truly intense, unsettling, yet highly realistic insight into families that don't get along. Someone always has an agenda, someone always think they know better. I feel for poor Edward in this! When last he saw her, the woman he loves, who is carrying his child had a gun held to her belly. Until he sees her with his own eyes he won't believe she is safe - that's if she is now given what just happened. You handled the drama and angst perfectly and kept upping the fevered pitch till you knocked it out of the park. Kudos! I'll be trying to hold onto my nails until your next update! Thank you!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
If you guys don't destroy/hurt/maim/ruin Tanya, Rosalie, Carlisle and every person that has been evil to Bella, I will climb through ff's vortex and do it myself!!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG Dr Cullen, Tanya and Rose all need to get run over by a bus. SMH at their bullshit.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
i just started reading this story today. and i have to say i couldn't stop reading this. and that's pretty damn inpressive, i cant keep my attention on most fanfics for a long time but, this story was really good so far. i can't wait for the next chapters ^^
Date: 10 Jan 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward's family is a piece of work. I am glad Renee came around and can't wait for the update. I assume Edwaard willl make it but l suspect his family will blame Bella. I am also curious to see what happened to Alex.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Holy Moly! Edward has to live and Mike and his crew must go down. What did they do to Alec? I'm worried about himalso.
Date: 09 Jan 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Omg!!! I hope somebody helps. I loved the charter(:
Date: 09 Jan 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG! NOOOOO....HE CANT DIE!
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG you stopped there, really??
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm shocked! I did not expect this story to take a turn in this direction. Not only do we not know if Edward survives but after dealing with this catastrophe Alec still needs to be found.
Date: 09 Jan 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Omg that was evolving. His family are mostly psycho .
Date: 08 Jan 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
No not going to let him go where is everyone . Life is going good not this shit
Date: 08 Jan 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh no! I wonder what Emmet will think of Mike and his Dad now - real tough guys 4 against 1 then 4 against a pregnant girl - wow what "men"
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is so sad. I hope he is alright
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
See, I just knew things were going too well for too long in this chapter! My Dad, two cousins and an Uncle were cops. In and out got me right away. I loved the chapter and the growth of some of the characters here. Even Bella finally opens upa bit on what happened to her years ago. I look forward to your next updates. - I'll be the one in the corner biting her nails! Thank you again for all the hard work you put in!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
omg!!! more please :)
Date: 08 Jan 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't even guess how Edward will react. It could go either way.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Possessive Edward is always hot!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
Please tell me he hadn't been drinking!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
i just want to scream! The communication between these two is maddening!