[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2019 6:40 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 15 Dec 2015 9:49 PM Title: Illumination
Who takes that long to read a damn letter? Lol
Date: 15 Dec 2015 9:39 PM Title: Freedom
Hoping for Bella to find her self esteem. And for Newton to GET HIS!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 9:28 PM Title: Prologue
That's what I'm wondering right now... So how do these two meet? You have my interest. I'll keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue
awesome story even the second time around ;) its a shame that they had 4 miscarriages and no more kids though ;D
Date: 18 Jan 2013 11:38 AM Title: Prologue
me encanto esta historia
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 9:34 PM Title: Epilogue
One of my favorites and one I have read a few times. I can't help but visualize a hotter Eminem with better manners as I read it. Not necessarily the thug-white trash type but his talent. Some may not see that Eminem has talent but I disagree.
Anyway, thanks for putting this out there!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:53 PM Title: Epilogue
great I totally enjoyed it!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:45 PM Title: Completion
thank you for sharing Velvet
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 3:01 AM Title: Paroxysm
you already know what you are guilty of enuf said lol
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 1:46 AM Title: Change
waiting here in Tampa
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 12:33 AM Title: Sanctuary
you have great readers because you deserve them
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 7:29 PM Title: Conundrum
thank goodness these two don't need to make babies just make love and hard sex
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 7:00 PM Title: Confrontation
who is Mike I bet
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 6:27 PM Title: Goodbye
we will miss him
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 5:21 PM Title: Lucky
ok I guess I will have to deal with angst too, can it include Mike getting his just desert along with Tanya
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:44 PM Title: Butterfly
great story
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Redeemed
there should be a date in Florida
Date: 30 Oct 2011 12:08 AM Title: Justice
Edward Cullen being a rapper EC Velvet is as unbelievable to me as Rob Pattinson being Spunk Ransom but I am enjoying the story
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2011 9:26 PM Title: Okhotnichya
I am signed up for the tour
Date: 29 Oct 2011 9:02 PM Title: Tequila
I wonder if Rob ever reads his fanmail?
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2011 8:17 PM Title: Freedom
here, whore, I am passing out rewards to bad girls, good girls are no fun
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:21 AM Title: Epilogue
yay they finally got their happily ever after! that was a hell of a year for them. thank you taking me on the ride!
thank you for sharing your story.
suzie :)
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:09 AM Title: Completion
looks like life is pretty great. everyone and everything pulling in closer and them all just being a family. therap is never fun or easy but so worth it.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:19 AM Title: Realization
life seems to be back to as normal as these two get. glad to see that they talked and decided to work on the big stuff and get closer together.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:11 AM Title: Exacerbation
well fuck that was so not the way i thought it was gonna go down! both the fight and the pill problem! mother fuck so thankful the story is done so i don't have to wait!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:49 AM Title: Paroxysm
oh shit! this is not good. em was right though eddie needs to learn to turn velvet off when he is not needed. plus eddie better figure his shit out before morning. and poor bella it may have looked bad but eddie should have known better. this will definately be an interesting morning after. and what about the press?
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:18 AM Title: Adjustments
love the dress so bella and velvet! obviously some foreshadowing of a sleeping pill problem for bella in the future. time for bella to step out as the wife of a star!!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:55 AM Title: Harmony
wow mtv! so holy shitting! and poor eddie all insecure and not wanting to hurt and corrupt bella, so adorable. i really hope these 2 can move forward to happily ever after soon
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:55 AM Title: Elphaba
tanya is dead. now eddie bella and abby can be the perfect little family they were ment to be. it is sad but this definately makes things easier for them to be happy.
Author's Response:
Hi! I just wanted to pop in and say thank you to you for reviewing each chapter as you read. This story has been complete long enough that most people don't review at all, let alone each chapter so I wanted you to know how much I appreciate it. It's like reading the story all over again through your eyes and that makes each word woth writing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! When you get done, if you would like to read the one currently posted outtake of this story, let me know and I will hook you up! Thanks again! changedbyEdward
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:32 AM Title: Change
wow that was a hot session in the studio, makin some sweet music! yummy. i wonder if eddie had the tapes still recording while they were in there? that would be fucking awesome evidence that eddie and bella were indispossed and sooo not thinking of anything to do with a gun.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 11:01 PM Title: Sanctuary
This shit is getting bad I hope the judge sees through the shit to the trueth.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 10:14 PM Title: Proposition
Wow just wow! What a way to propose! *sigh* so sweet and crazy, bet no one will ever forget it! Tanya seemedm.. Better-ish? Hope court goes well....
Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:43 PM Title: Unstoppable
Oooookkkkkk?! What is eddie up to? Why does charlie have to be there? I smell something fishy goin on here..! The concert was great mad props to the person who wrote ec's rap!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 1:59 PM Title: Conundrum
Glad to see that bella is all right and the baby question is out. Eddie will watch her better now. Wonder what jasper is gonna do to mike?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:29 PM Title: Confrontation
well unfortunately for abby and bella tanya and her family choose to be fucktards again however that definately makes things easier for the court case! back together and on the road again. wonder who is outside the elevator?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:00 PM Title: Goodbye
so sweet and sexy all rolled into one! can't believe bella asked for it hard and fast damn! just what every guy wants to hear.
up next the visit. wonder how bad that train wreck is gonna be?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 11:46 AM Title: Lucky
married?!?! is this really how they wanna take that step? eddie needs to lean that bella is a big girl and oh so understanding. she keeps surprising him.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:17 AM Title: Butterfly
woohoo1 finally! and boy did they both need that.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Sacrifice
wow not really sure if bella knows what she is getting herself into with her offer to take abby. but hey she is and will continue to be a part of abby and eddie's life so as bella said why not?! time to turn on the sexy music because it is time to get it on!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:38 AM Title: Superstar
eddie handled himself pretty well in his meetings, and bella did great in the interview. they keep connecting on deeper and deeper levels. going to the zoo!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 2:10 AM Title: Redeemed
bella is exactly what eddie and velvet need right now. a safe place to ground them and bring them back together as one person. eddie has already seen it happen a little....
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:45 AM Title: Decompensate
wow eddie kinda flew off the handle there for a bit. but hey who can blame the guy? tanya is all kinds of fucked up and she is just causing more and more trouble. the only up side will be when they go to court for abby....
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:23 AM Title: Sailing
the control is slipping and these two are about ready to just say fuck it and give in! oh yummy things to come!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 11:40 PM Title: Fuse
well hot damn!eddie sure does have some sexy dreams. the concert sounded great and eddie is so far gone it is funny. big bad rapper man needs his honey to keep him sane. so sweet!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:48 PM Title: Mockingbird
Yay she is going! And abby seems to have just opened her heart and let bella in. They are gonna be such a good little family. So cute together. Now all we need is for tanya to od or get locked up for good to keep her outta the picture. So bad I know
Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:06 PM Title: Breathing
Wow already with the declarations of love! What will they do about eddie leaving? Will she go with?
Date: 27 Jun 2011 6:54 PM Title: Velvet
Bella likes him as a whole! Both edward and velvet. These two are just so right for eachother but alas life isn't always sunshine *nd roses. And soon eddie will have to move on to the next town..
Date: 27 Jun 2011 6:22 PM Title: Infatuation
Oh so romantic! Eddie is a darling but what will bella think of velvet?
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:05 PM Title: Justice
He got her! Thank goodness! Time for them to meet I wonder what eddie and alice have cooked up?
Date: 27 Jun 2011 1:33 PM Title: Threshold
What a gong show! And with all of this poor eddie is expected to keep going as usual?! No wonder he is reaching out to bella she is his sounding board anda true friend
Date: 27 Jun 2011 12:18 PM Title: Okhotnichya
the tour has started eddie is hyped to meet bella. finally asked for a pic wonder what he will think? heehee sucks about abby but she has granda e and grandpa c to love her while eddie's away.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 11:54 AM Title: Tequila
holy shit they are gonna meet! and they have finally moved on to the phone...
Date: 27 Jun 2011 11:32 AM Title: Daddy
poor eddie! to the outside his world seems pretty awesome on the inside his world is just like everyone else's fucked up in it's own way. and that poor baby girl!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:57 AM Title: Venom
love how eddie has split himself into him and ec. signs of definate drama ahead...
Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:42 AM Title: Illumination
hot damn! mike's gone with a good ass kicking to send him off, the letter was sent and now the reply....!!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:29 AM Title: Freedom
love the letter and the fact that it is framed and mounted in a place of honor in their home
Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:18 AM Title: Prologue
i started reading this on ffn way way back and decided it was time to reread and finish it. so excited!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2011 3:48 PM Title: Epilogue
great story, really loved it !!!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Epilogue
thanks for the story!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:58 PM Title: Butterfly
finally and it was HWOT!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:17 PM Title: Superstar
cool glad they are getting their crap together but you are lulling us something BIG is going to happen in know it!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:03 PM Title: Fuse
that was evil very evil of you and f-ing Hot!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:49 PM Title: Threshold
complete bitch.. wow to do that with your child in tow! wow just wow!! i got an idea take bella on the tour to watch abby.. she is out from school!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:38 PM Title: Okhotnichya
poor abby that is gotta suck!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:27 AM Title: Venom
cool dream come true. as always bella is a lucky girl!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:14 AM Title: Prologue
hum looks like it is going to be interesting
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:48 AM Title: Epilogue
Ok. Now normally I never have difficulty finding words, but SQUEEE! This story is just, just, just so fucking grown up. Perfection and High School plotlines have become so passé. Your tale is quite the breath of fresh air. Brava.
Author's Response:
Hahahahahaha!!! I'm loving your reviews! Thanks so much for them! I'll never be able to sing John Jacob Jinglehiney Shit again without laughing my ass off!! I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying this story!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:17 AM Title: Realization
Hmmm...pale Italians. Well, at least the Volturi has mad crazy bling yo. Gah! Where the hell did THAT come from? Oh yeah, I live in NYC. *snicker*
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:11 AM Title: Harmony
Picture this, a livingroom full of overstuffed family members lounging about after a Thanksgiving feast. Your Niece *my Niece*, whilst dragging her very own Playskool step stool, announces to the room that she wants to share the song she learned in pre-school. After gushing grandparents and proud puffed up Poppa begin to ohh and ahh, your sister, looks over st you shrugging her shoulders as if to say don't blame me 'he's the outgoing one' helps said Niece to stand on her stool. After getting settled she begins a rousing version of “John Jacob Jingleheimer Schmidt.” However, apparently her preschool is VERY progressive and she sings “John Jacob Jinglehiney Shit.” Yup. Did you know that throw pillows aren't very tasty.
Love they story. Funny, sexy as hell, snarky and a fresh plotline. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:02 PM Title: Epilogue
I truly enjoyed reading this story. It was a roller coster ride, but so enjoyable. Looking forward to reading more stories. Thank you.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:49 PM Title: Epilogue
That was an awesome story. Sorry me reviews are so short but I read on my PS3 and it is a pain to write longer reviews without a keyboard.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 9:06 AM Title: Epilogue
Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading your story The Letter. Hope all is well in your life and I look forward to reading your next story.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:19 AM Title: Confrontation
hmm who could it be