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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2023 2:20 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Loved it 

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Date: 18 Apr 2023 2:11 PM Title: Chapter Six

Loved it 

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Date: 18 Apr 2023 1:59 PM Title: Chapter Five

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Date: 18 Apr 2023 1:50 PM Title: Chapter Four

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Date: 18 Apr 2023 1:39 PM Title: Chapter Three

Loved it 

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Date: 18 Apr 2023 11:06 AM Title: Chapter Two

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2023 10:57 AM Title: Chapter One

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2023 10:46 AM Title: Prologue

Loved it 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2022 11:05 PM Title: Chapter Four

GREAT AND I WOULD RATHER YOU BE WRITING THAN ANSWERING RVIEWS

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2022 8:25 PM Title: Prologue

as a cofeeholic I am intrigued

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2021 9:44 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

So happy there's finally a story where Alice doesn't get away with everything. Glad Bella stood up to her.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2021 9:43 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

So happy there's finally a story where Alice doesn't get away with everything. Glad Bella stood up to her.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:34 PM Title: Prologue

I'm hooked reel me in...

Reviewer: Candytt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:47 PM Title: Outtake

Amazing

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

had tears

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 3:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight


Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2015 9:16 PM Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story.  Thank you for writing and sharing now I need  to get started on the sequel LOL!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 5:57 PM Title: Prologue

That was a good intro. I definitely want to see how their story plays out. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 4:52 PM Title: Outtake

; )

Reviewer: magick23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 2:40 AM Title: Outtake

Cute story, liked it a lot.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Outtake

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 1:06 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Loved it! Alice is a terrible person!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Loved it! Uh-oh!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Great chapter!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Well in Alice's defense she is his PA and Jasper is manager....but as a sister she was out of line

Reviewer: lovetwifics Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 11:16 PM Title: Outtake

Loved this story and can't wait til the sequel in EPOV! Great writing and a great feel-good romance story

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2014 10:31 PM Title: Outtake

that was  an AWESOME story im so glad you are going to write a sequel to this in epov ;D

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:56 PM Title: Outtake

Really good

Reviewer: anthonysmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 12:35 PM Title: Prologue



Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:31 PM Title: Outtake

Awwww, just love this story!! Thanks for writing!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:41 AM Title: Epilogue

Love it, great story!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Love the story!! But this Malice needs to get punced in the face!

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 7:17 PM Title: Outtake

Adorable story! Just happened upon it & was so glad I did. LOVED the song you wrote too, TWO THUMBS UP!! Also enjoyed the celeb stories at beginning of each chapter, nice bonus. Well written and fun to read. Thanks for sharing :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Aw such a cute story!! Love it.

Reviewer: sanreads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 3:21 PM Title: Outtake

Hello! This is my first time reading a fanfiction at TWCS and your "Eddie and Coffee Girl" is a sign that I've come to the right place. I LOVE everything about this story: the characters (ActorWard for the win!), the *minimal* drama, the cafe au lait, and the little bits of Hollywood dishing. Can't wait for the sequel!

Btw, have you ever listened to Landon Pigg's Falling in Love at A Coffee Shop? I totally played that on loop while reading this story :D

Reviewer: greenbabie1289 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Wow lol I'm so not used to reading fics where Alice and Jaspers were utter a-holes lol But I'm still digging the story!! I'm FLYING through it, it's so good lol LOVE!!!

Reviewer: greenbabie1289 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter Four

I found a posting of your story on Pinterest and I finally got around to signing up with this site so I can read it! I am a native to SoCal as well (OC girl) and I'm loving your story!!! Lol 

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:27 PM Title: Outtake

so frigg'n cute! xoxoxo

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 6:06 PM Title: Epilogue

YIPPEEEEEEE!!!!!!! XOXOXO

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 11:41 AM Title: Outtake

Loved it and can't wait for the sequel.

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:52 PM Title: Outtake

That was so good!! I loved EPOV!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:40 PM Title: Epilogue

That was awesome!!  I have loved this story so much!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

That was a gorgeous wedding!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I loved it! That was some wonderful advise!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

That was great!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

That was awesome!! But I just wonder if Bella is already pregnant because of how emotional she has been lately. Of course that could be stress!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Oh tha was wonderful! I love Esme and Renee!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

That was awesome! Although a part of me wanted to see her drag Malice through the mud like she would hav drone to Bella withou hesitation, I think Bella handled it the best way. Bella took the mature way out and it shows how much of a good person she is! It was awesome!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Wow that was awesome!! I am shocked at what Malice did to her on brother!! But I loved it!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I loved it!! The house sounds gorgeous!! I can't wait to see what is up with Alice!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

That was so awesome!!!!! The proposal was completely perfect! I married my husband of over 16yrs 1 year and one month of knowing him. So I thing their story is perfect!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

That was awesome! I was wondering about Malice and jasper as well glad Bella brought it back up!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

That was so good!! Poor Edward and Bella! They will miss each other!

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:06 PM Title: Outtake

loved it

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

So awesome!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

That was great!! I would love to visit Paris one day!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

That was great! I love how they greet each other after being apart!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh I loved it!!! That song was beautiful too!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

That was so awesome!! That was a beautiful lemon!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Yay Bella! Edward came home forValentin's day and she got rid of Riley!  

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Ha!!! I loved how she handled everyone!! Those girls and Eric are all just jealous!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen

I loved it!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

That was so awesome!! I love to hate this Alice and Jasper!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

That was so good! I love their presents to each other! I have to tell you I love Alice in this role! I love it when authors change the characters up a bit and I love a nice Rose as well!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

That was so good!!

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Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Tha was awesome! I think Riley might be in deep smit with little Bella! James seems like an all around creep and I haven't decided about Victoria. 

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

That was so good! Renee completely rocked in this chapter. She was slightly annoying in past chapters but when it counted she was there for her daughter!! And Bella! Oh! I was so proud of her and Edward for following her out! Them wanting to take her out to make up for Alice was awesome!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

I love it!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Oh that was great!! I loved Charlie!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter Nine

That was so good!! I love Emmett!!

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Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter Eight

That was so good! I loved the reunion!!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter Seven

That was really good! And very realistic in my opinion. My hubby and I have a fantastic relationship but that isn't too say we don't each occasionally mess up and say or do something stupid. The important thing is to step back think about what you have done and then talk it out and apologize if necessary. Oh and always give the other person a chance to talk and actually listen to them.

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter Six

That was one of the best first dates I have ever read about! It was perfectly sweet and romantic!

Reviewer: cullenfan524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Five

Okay fanfic is being a fail so I found you over here heheh! This chapter was awesome! I want to hit Renee but Bella took care of her nicely! I loved their date!!

Reviewer: Twinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:15 AM Title: Outtake

This was so much fun to read.  It was a welcome break from the last angsty fic I just read!  So, thank you for that.  Bella was spunky and Edward was charming.  Alice was hard to take but still ok.  The star stories at the beginning of each part was a great touch.  I live in Nashville and see them all the time so I am bait immune to them now, but I love hearing about them.  I will be looking for more of your stories to read.

christy

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:21 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story. I am so happy that the journey of these two will continue. Thanks for sharing your story with me.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:42 AM Title: Outtake

Adorable take from Edward's POV.

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2014 11:27 PM Title: Outtake

awww that was awesome :) can't wait to hear more from Eddie!!

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2014 10:02 AM Title: Outtake

I am so glad u decided to a sequel awesome story can't wait for the rest.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:03 AM Title: Outtake

I enjoyed getting Edward's POV of the first meeting between him and his Coffee Girl!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:00 AM Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed your story about Coffee Girl and Eddie. It was very sweet, and yet it had drama and tension to keep things exciting. Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 12:37 AM Title: Outtake

Excellent! I loved Edward's perspective. Thanks for posting. Can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 9:05 PM Title: Outtake

Wonder outtake from his POV.  Loved it.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:49 PM Title: Outtake

Awe such a cute mama's boy he is too sweet

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:37 PM Title: Outtake

Can't wait to read his side of the story

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 8:48 AM Title: Outtake

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:36 AM Title: Outtake

loved this story :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:29 AM Title: Outtake

Loved this!!  Can't wait for the sequel, but will try.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 5:52 AM Title: Outtake

That was so cute so loved this story Thanks so much

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 4:26 AM Title: Outtake

sweet!!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 3:36 AM Title: Epilogue

great story

loved it looking forward to eddies pov

well done

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 1:52 AM Title: Outtake

Loved it :)

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