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Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2020 3:40 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

I love the first five chapters. I'd love the rest of the story also. I can see violence and great sex. Edweird and Malice bashing, new ruler creating. But all in my mind... What do you see? And will you write it?

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2020 2:59 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Dying to see an update it’s been so long since there was one.

Reviewer: tammylroberts20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2018 1:28 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Will you be updating and finishing this story soon I absolutely love it can't wait for the next update 

Reviewer: smurff88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2018 9:53 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

I have to tell you I have been reading through all your stories and they are all really good my only complaint is that you don’t finish some of them. I know real life must get in the way but some of theses stories you should check back on and maybe add to.          I can’t write for shit ,just read a lot.but you have a real talent.Good luck

Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 3:45 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

I like this story I hope you continue to write more?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:11 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Loved hearing her inner beast. Dayum your Peter is f’hawt

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:10 PM Title: Gonna Be Ok

She took that well

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:10 PM Title: Set You Free

LOVE that song!!! Cool Pic too. DAYUM that was a hawt chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:09 PM Title: Condescending Talk

oooh loving it already. Cant wait for more!!! E and A need to pay!!!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2016 9:23 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Amazing story! Can't wait to read what comes next and get some answers to the why of things.

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 8:51 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

ooohh when is this gonna be updated oxoxoxo

Reviewer: darlin miss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 6:58 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

I really hope you update soon. I'm really loving your story.

Reviewer: Kaiirine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 2:49 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Wooohoo....awesome! So can't wait for more updates.

Reviewer: twilight-obssesed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 9:00 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

I can't wait 4 the next update....... love it n hooked!! Well done! 😁

Reviewer: cathy29jes Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 7:23 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Bonjour,

I love, impatient de lire la suite, 

cathy

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 10:56 PM Title: Condescending Talk

Since I've left reviews on FFn and your website for this story, thought I'd be consistent and leave raves here too (3 for three, although it's actually more because I've left several glowing reviews on each of the other sites :-). Anyway, I love this frigging story!!!It rocks!!! You've created an interesting mythology with a true and bonded mates, and the differences they present. Look forward to reading more about Jasper and Isabella's spspecial abilities; the evil one's (Eddie and Alice) evil purpose and plot; why and how Carlisle fell down on the job so to speak since he was preparing to interrogate the evil ones when last we read about them; and, how often Peter checks on Maria's pieces and how much distance they travel in between checks (evil smirk). Strong, sexy Jasper is awesome. New chapters are highly anticipated.... I've read the extant chapters numerous times. Trying to be patient while recognizing that you're a talented, albeit busy author in addition to your daytime job :-)

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 5:08 AM Title: Condescending Talk

I've noticed that you have updated several of your stories and I was wondering if you were ever going to get back to this one and also what if I really enjoy reading them; I have even gone back and re-read them.  Please update soon. I also really like your new site.  :)



Author's Response:

I do plan to.  I am trying to get rid of alot of stories by updating them. I am also in the midst of editing everything I have written and not published.  My facebook group begged for me to publish them all.  Thanks for inquiring, and huge thanks for the comment on the site!

Reviewer: Emeraldiiz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 5:32 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Now. I've followed you here hoping to read more. Please write some more for this story.

Reviewer: Hahaha12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 2:07 AM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Please update u love it

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:25 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

great story love it cant wait to see what happens next hope you update soon

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 4:18 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

I loved it please update soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:24 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

You have an amazingly luscious and wonderful fiction here!  It draws he reader in and makes her ask, " But what if...?"  Personally, I can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 6:56 PM Title: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

can't wait for ch 6

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 5:58 PM Title: Condescending Talk

can't wait to read moer then ch 5 hope ch is soon

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