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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 1:57 AM Title: It’s Been A Long Time Coming

Loved it! 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 12:54 AM Title: It Is You I Have Waited For

Amazing! 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 10:19 AM Title: It Starts With Love

Loved it!  Poor Bella!  Carlisle and the Cullens are good for her!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 10:19 AM Title: It Starts With Love

Loved it!  Poor Bella!  Carlisle and the Cullens are good for her!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 9:27 AM Title: To Reach For Something More

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 8:43 AM Title: Nothing Left of Me

Loved it! 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 5:54 AM Title: I Step to The Edge

Loved it! 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 5:16 AM Title: A Moment in Change

Loved it! 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

I'm loving this take on twilight .. Carlisle and Bella are my guilty pleasure stories as is Bella and Jasper ..

I am so looking forward to when Bella is changed and she kicks Alice's arse .. ;)

 

 

Reviewer: mrstroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2019 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

I love this story. Hope that you come back to it. I also enjoyed the feral fiction story. Was it ever published? I don't even remember the author's name due to a head injury from a car wreck.

Reviewer: tammylroberts20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

Will you be updating and finishing this story soon I absolutely love it can't wait for the next update 

Reviewer: Driley67 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 12:02 AM Title: A Moment in Change

This is one of my favorite stories first read this story on fanfiction

Reviewer: sinbad Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

I read this story on another site, but it had less chapters. I am so happy to see that it wasn't abandoned! 💗💗

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

New to this story.  Interesting take on the whole saga.  Enjoying it.

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

Oh cnt wait to read next chapter x

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

Loved it and thank you for updating!  Cabt wait for more!!! And for Brad to join the family, woohoo! !

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

I like the way this chapter was written! 

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

Awesome!!! Please write more chapters. Please. And more chapters for "When I Pretend" and "Wisdom, Justice and Love". It's been so long since WIP was updated, and that fabulous story deserves some love and attention from its author.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

Yea Alice needs a few more smacks on her head.  She's really going to piss off Bella soon with her whining.  Poor Brad.  Glad he'll be ok in the end

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

I loved it; I think that with Brad being able to hear the conversations and that he now knows what he is going to be will help him be more stable. I think is going to be protective of his new sister; and Carlisle will be wary at first more protective but with Jasper's help realize that Brad only see's Bella as a sister.  But hey I could be wrong.  I love this story thanks for the update; hopefully we will get another one soon.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 Long Blinding End

Love Bella coming into her own.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 18 You Lift Me Up

lol for the dig on She Who Shall Not Be Named.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 17 Set The Silence Free

Wow  Jake is really a wanker.  Glad Charlie understands what he's done too.

Reviewer: Southernpur-rica Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 19 Long Blinding End

So glad I remembered you were on this site!!!! I was busting with the need to read the next chapter on AO3!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 Long Blinding End

Yay!  I'm so ready for more! I've missed this story! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:46 AM Title: Dead End Fury

Oh my! King is fixing to have a field day with all of this.

 

Update soon,  please! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:36 PM Title: Dead End Fury

Oooh jacob is really in for it. At least sam tried.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 3:06 PM Title: Dead End Fury

Terrific new chapter. Appreciate that the story is moving forward more significantly. But poor Brad... . Looking forward to future chapters.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 10:48 PM Title: Be In Our Past

This ought to be good! 

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:10 PM Title: Be In Our Past

Terrific new chapter. Again, I'm so happy that you have returned to update this wonderful story. Hope Jacob gets his just desserts, and that Charlie is appropriately shamed for his role in driving Isabella away and not protecting her from Jacob.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 4:31 PM Title: Be In Our Past

Jacob really endangered the entire tribe with his stupidity.  Nice seeing Paul in the calm role for a change.   Charlie has a lot to learn

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 6:45 AM Title: Take Me As I Am

Progress!  Yeah! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 6:31 AM Title: Into Your Eyes

Communication is key! Good job to those two! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 6:19 AM Title: Day Turns into Night

Yay! Esmé is coming back! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 6:11 AM Title: It Held Through

So sweet! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:52 PM Title: Love Speaks in Silence

I would love to be in that tub! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:26 PM Title: I Can See Your Dreams

Two thumbs up! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 7:25 AM Title: Sunlight in Your Universe

He's so sweet!   Okay,  so maybe my first thoughts were right. ......Edward and Esme??? Please just don't let it be Fucking Tanya! Lol!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 7:07 AM Title: It’s Been A Long Time Coming

Sam and Seth was such a wonderful surprise!   So have I picked up on the clues that Edward's mate is Carlisle?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 6:28 AM Title: It Is You I Have Waited For

I like your ideas......very creative! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:46 AM Title: It Starts With Love

Awe! I love the different webs you are spinning in the story so far! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:00 AM Title: To Reach For Something More

Love the connection between them 2!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 4:06 AM Title: A Moment in Change

I'm intrigued! :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 4:05 AM Title: I Step to The Edge

Two thumbs up! 

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:31 AM Title: Take Me As I Am

so glad you updated this story; so ready to see what happens next

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:13 AM Title: A Moment in Change

One of my favorite Carlisle/Isabella stories. So glad you've turned your attention back to it. Enjoyed this new chapter with its citrusy flavor. Anticipating the next chapters with much enthusiasm!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:10 AM Title: Nothing Left of Me

I never thought I'd like anything but B/E.........but you have done a great job of weaving this tale so far! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:08 PM Title: Take Me As I Am

Welcome back!!!    Yummy lime time.  Glad she is thinking about stuff.  Hard to believe we are on ch 14 and its only been 4 days that they know each other.

Reviewer: tabbieebrooke17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 3:38 PM Title: Into Your Eyes

I am so glad i found this story here after reading your last update i was heart broken! I love this story so much and i am glad you are continuing it elsewhere!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 2:28 PM Title: Into Your Eyes

Got so caught up in he story, I forgot to review. Excellent and different. Would live to read more.

Reviewer: YunaNeko Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 10:42 PM Title: Into Your Eyes

I Love This Story! UPDATE! GOOD LUCK!:D

Reviewer: doughty199903 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 5:49 PM Title: A Moment in Change

Not usually a fan a Bella & Carlisle pairing, but I am so loving this story! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 5:26 PM Title: Into Your Eyes

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 5:15 PM Title: Day Turns into Night

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 5:05 PM Title: It Held Through

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:51 PM Title: Love Speaks in Silence

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:30 PM Title: I Can See Your Dreams

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:16 PM Title: Sunlight in Your Universe

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:00 PM Title: It’s Been A Long Time Coming

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 3:23 PM Title: It Is You I Have Waited For

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 2:29 PM Title: It Starts With Love

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 2:29 PM Title: To Reach For Something More

;-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 2:34 AM Title: Nothing Left of Me

lol

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 1:10 AM Title: I Step to The Edge

Google Translate. French.  Montréal, Québec

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:38 AM Title: A Moment in Change

;-)

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