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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 30

I can't even tell you how many times that I've read this. Please, please never take this away from me. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 30

I can't even tell you how many times that I've read this. Please, please never take this away from me. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

I can't even tell you how many times that I've read this. Please, please never take this away from me. 

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

I actually really enjoyed this story! Thank you for righting it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2018 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

great story

Reviewer: marysway Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

This is my 2nd time around.  Great story.  I did notice though that Edward is still 28 years old after 4 years.  LOL.  Uh, is he a vampire ;-) Just joking.  I actually thought this story got pulled, so I was glad to see it's still around. 

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

I loved this story and I loved the way you portrayed Edward and bella I loved how they both grew  I would also love to see a sequel I think that would be awesome

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

damn good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

great start

Reviewer: xstoryloverx Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awesome story!  Loved it!  Love the title and the whole plot, so great job!  I totally think that you could sell this as a book!   :)

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

All I can say was wow.... great interesting tears laughs and wonderful lemons. Oh

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved this story, and I loved the imperfections of Edward and Bella and the way they complemented each other, they walked a hard road, but it sure got a better place.
Kisses.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

she didn't remember telling Mike her name was Elena Chambers.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

Wow I can't believe it is over :( This was such a great lemony story. Thanks for writing!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Ha these kids are so funny

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

That's it? It's over? :(
I am greedy. I want more! :P
I really love this story. I do truly wish there was more. :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 30

I think their ending was perfect. Edward's explanation of what was on the usb made sense.

PLEASE notify me when you put this in pdf form.

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

This was an amazingly, well-thought plot! I really hate to see it go 😪

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!! I LOVE THEM FLAWS AND ALL! I LOVED IT,YOUR SO TALENTED ! IM IN AWE OF YOU, WHICH IM SURE YOU HERE OFTEN! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US, LOVE YOU SO MUCH JJ.

Reviewer: belladadiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

After 5 hours in the ER yesterday, I really needed this. Sorry I didn't review each chapter but I was just so wrapped up in the story. Levi is adorable. Roger is someone I'd like to know. Hope Lizzy is okay. Charlie's butt I'd like to kick. Good job and thanks for a great day.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 30

I have completely enjoyed this story & I think it was a great ending!  I think leaving the USB unseen by Edward was perfect too.  I love how they ended up because I think their ending is more true to life.  When we go through trials in real life the problems can be solved but they are still sometmes still lingering.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 30

I completely agree. There is no way to answer every little detail of this story. This couple is perfect, they have issues, some that will never to resolved. You ended it perfectly. 

I'm gonna miss this story. I loved this Edward and Bella, and adored Levi. Thank you for sharing your words.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved this story. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 30

C'est une bonne fiction!

Merci.

Je vais voter pour elle pendant toute Juin et je souhaite qu'elle est bien placé.

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Wow. I so wasn't expecting that. I was still looking for an update until I saw th at it was on a completed story page. I can't believe this story is over.

 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

Really good

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 30

I love this story and I am going to miss it dearly please do the future take soon, it'll still be in the future ;).

Reviewer: sunshinedreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yay! Congrats on finishing this story. I'm glad to be able to see it through. There was just enough angst and all the right amount of fluff. :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 30

=)

Reviewer: atina10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great great story!! thanks for sharing :) xoxo

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for the ride. It was awesome.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved this story from day one. Congratulations on an amazing story. Hope to hear about future stories or maybe a sequel... XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

Very good.  I liked your ending, yeah there were still some questions but in clearing those up more were bound to crop up.  This was a good place to end.  Good Job.

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella is pissing me off. I understand where she us coming from but damn she is being completely unreasonable. Also keeping Levi from Edward...she is going to be in deep shit.

 

However, I can be patient for the happily ever after.

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 30

All good things must come to an end. It is perfect. Loved it.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 30

I so loved this story! It was real and honest. I can't wait for more of your work!

Reviewer: mojoja Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 30

Sad to see it end but love the story

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

THANK YOU FOR SHARING. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

I truly enjoyed your ending to James!
I can't believe it's complete. So sad, but their story is one that will continue on in our minds. Your have left the door open for a sequel if your brain can't seem to let them go. And maybe some day you will share those creative thoughts with us as well.
Great story. Will the PDF be available on your blog?
Keep the stories comin, I appreciate them all!
Thanks for sharing your gift.

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well, I love your story!! I'm glad you didn't give up. I was just searching for a completed story in FF and with the specifics I put in, this story was first on my list. I'm sorry you are getting complaints but like I said, so far I like it. I know someone married having an affair is taboo but its fiction, it is just a story. Good job and I am actually going to start on your others once I'm done with this one.

 

Oh and BTW, I hate spiders and snakes and such. I saw that on your profile.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

It's so sad its over. I don't mind not knowing all the details of whats on the usb. You hinted enough to know its his mother talking to him. Great story.

Reviewer: fprm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 30

I LOVED IT, YOU ARE AWESOME! REAL PEOPLE ARE FLAWED LIKE THAT AND YOU MADE IT SPECIAL AND UNIQUE!

Reviewer: Mikaelv Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

I would love to get a pdf copy so i can read again and again. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hate to see it end

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

Well congratulations on any amazing story I enjoyed everything about it 

 

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 30

Fantastic story, Thanks for sharing your talent

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 30

loved it. from the beginning to sadly its end. cant wait to see what you come up with next. :)

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

Hope you decide to write an epi and he sees the USB, and Bella gets preggo again lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 30

loved this story :)

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 30

:-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

I've loved every word of it.  I'm so glad it morphed from that one-shot into thirty chapters.  Brilliant writing.  Thank you.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

Ty for writing and sharing

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

LOVED IT!  Yes they were flawed and had tons of issues but it was real!  Thanks for another great story!

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 29

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 29

:-)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hummmm he needs to watch that tape. I hope bellamakes him soon.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 29

I guess I missed something.  I don't remember his mom being sick. I'll need to go back and look for that in the previous couple of chapters.

 

But they do seem pretty normal.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 29

I am so happy for them. Things seem to be calming down, so they can be a family.

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it!!!!! Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 29

The dogs names is great!
I hope Edward doesn't wait too long to view the memories his mother wants to share with him.
They are becoming more and more normal as the days roll on by. What kind of wedding will they have? A quiet and private family ceremony or will the press catch wind if it? Turning it into a media circus.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 29

Levit and his dog was cute. Edward and Bella trying to be 'normal'. What or who defines what's normal?

Edward saying goodbye to his mother... kinda sad he's closes that chapter in his life, but I liked it that he told her he was getting married and about Levi.

Hopefully paying off Tanya will get her out of their lives for good now.

Bella needs to get pregnant again. Levi needs a baby brother bear.

Reviewer: MiaClassic Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loving it so far! <3

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 29

THANKS!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

=)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 29

this is life.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 29

LOVED IT AS ALWAYS! WHATS ON THE USB,OH IALSO LOVE THE DOGS NAME SO CUTE!          LOVE YA 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

Edwards mom, what can be said?  Sad. I love the dogs name. My family and I just got a new puppy this weekend and we are still working out a name. She has had several names. Still working it out. 

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loving it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 29

:):)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

more please :)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 29

Finally getting it together

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 29

I think Levi needs to go see his grandmother because I think he could break through to her. Oh, and take Cappuccino with him. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

Wow levi got a dog Edward said goodbye to his Mother and now they are going to relax and watch a movie yeah totally normal hehehe I loved it and hell yeah they are going to get married now how small will it be and will they invite his family update soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

ah so they paid Skankya off.  Kinda was wondering about that.

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

great chapter

things starting to improve them maybe

they are still the same people just better

well done

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 27

Bella should have known this was going to come back and bite her in the butt. Bella was the one who considered herself a whore. Edward did not call her this term. She needs to be ready to deal with her mess. She is so lucky that Edward has always loved her. She has made a mess out of his life, but he is making the best out of it because he loves them.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

bet Joy was not happy she did not get the story she wanted... Such quick thinking on Bella's part...

Reviewer: Blueflowers Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

Hey, I am really enjoying your writing! I read the Suburgatory sneak peak and really enjoyed it, I hope you will continue it! Good luck for finals.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

i was really looking forward to bella spillig her guts but i guess it is for the best that she let everyone think her book is fiction.

 

it kind of is her dirty little secret and her and edward and his family know the truth

tanya knows but it seems she is okay to keep it quite

 

this too are volitile together but yet they are so good and in love

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 28

Without giving off your new story. I went and read it omg. THis is going to be good I think you should go with it. It will be interesting. I will say someone is totally sick but I am curious who and what all the why is all going to be involved. I love shooting in the ----------------- the giggles. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 28

Omg, love your books,can't wait for next chapter on this one.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

A white German shepherd? Awesome!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh I loved it hot damn Bella was flawless she shut everyone up now will it start to calm down for them will they be able to focus on the family now update soon

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 28

Will hate to see this story end.  Love this Edward!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella handled that interview like a pro. Didn't expect her to lie her ass off, but it worked out well for all.

Edward gave up the information on the dog real quick. lol

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

Woah!  Didn't see her lying like that!  Fast thinking!  Hot in the limo!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!  will suburgatory be on this website  as well?

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 28

I can't believe how much Edward has changed.

My 1st thought about their interview was to claim it as a fiction story. That's just a no brainer.

I'm keeping my fingers & legs crossed, hoping to win your signed book.

Congratulations!

I almost have an addiction with signed books. I currently have a series of books by five authors. I hope I can be honored with one from you.

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

can´t wait for the new story, sad this is ending though

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

good luck with finals. read you soon.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow wwell that was a turn around ps your New tic sounds intriguing

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

No way i did not see that coming, darn you are good, you are really good. loved it as usual.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 28

Well played Bella!!!!

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 28

I loved it update soon!!!!

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