Date: 04 May 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 30
I can't even tell you how many times that I've read this. Please, please never take this away from me.
Date: 04 May 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 30
I can't even tell you how many times that I've read this. Please, please never take this away from me.
Date: 04 May 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
I can't even tell you how many times that I've read this. Please, please never take this away from me.
Date: 29 Dec 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
I actually really enjoyed this story! Thank you for righting it!
Date: 17 Sep 2018 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
great story
Date: 11 Jun 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
This is my 2nd time around. Great story. I did notice though that Edward is still 28 years old after 4 years. LOL. Uh, is he a vampire ;-) Just joking. I actually thought this story got pulled, so I was glad to see it's still around.
Date: 19 Aug 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
I loved this story and I loved the way you portrayed Edward and bella I loved how they both grew I would also love to see a sequel I think that would be awesome
Date: 10 Jun 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
great start
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awesome story! Loved it! Love the title and the whole plot, so great job! I totally think that you could sell this as a book! :)
Date: 21 Nov 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
All I can say was wow.... great interesting tears laughs and wonderful lemons. Oh
Date: 14 Aug 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
I loved this story, and I loved the imperfections of Edward and Bella and the way they complemented each other, they walked a hard road, but it sure got a better place.
Kisses.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
she didn't remember telling Mike her name was Elena Chambers.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow I can't believe it is over :( This was such a great lemony story. Thanks for writing!!
Date: 18 Jun 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ha these kids are so funny
Date: 10 Jun 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
That's it? It's over? :(
I am greedy. I want more! :P
I really love this story. I do truly wish there was more. :)
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
I think their ending was perfect. Edward's explanation of what was on the usb made sense.
PLEASE notify me when you put this in pdf form.
Thank you. :)
Date: 08 Jun 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
This was an amazingly, well-thought plot! I really hate to see it go 😪
Date: 05 Jun 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!! I LOVE THEM FLAWS AND ALL! I LOVED IT,YOUR SO TALENTED ! IM IN AWE OF YOU, WHICH IM SURE YOU HERE OFTEN! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US, LOVE YOU SO MUCH JJ.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed reading it.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
After 5 hours in the ER yesterday, I really needed this. Sorry I didn't review each chapter but I was just so wrapped up in the story. Levi is adorable. Roger is someone I'd like to know. Hope Lizzy is okay. Charlie's butt I'd like to kick. Good job and thanks for a great day.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
I have completely enjoyed this story & I think it was a great ending! I think leaving the USB unseen by Edward was perfect too. I love how they ended up because I think their ending is more true to life. When we go through trials in real life the problems can be solved but they are still sometmes still lingering.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
I completely agree. There is no way to answer every little detail of this story. This couple is perfect, they have issues, some that will never to resolved. You ended it perfectly.
I'm gonna miss this story. I loved this Edward and Bella, and adored Levi. Thank you for sharing your words.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 30
I loved this story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 30
C'est une bonne fiction!
Merci.
Je vais voter pour elle pendant toute Juin et je souhaite qu'elle est bien placé.
Date: 31 May 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow. I so wasn't expecting that. I was still looking for an update until I saw th at it was on a completed story page. I can't believe this story is over.
Date: 30 May 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love this story and I am going to miss it dearly please do the future take soon, it'll still be in the future ;).
Date: 30 May 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yay! Congrats on finishing this story. I'm glad to be able to see it through. There was just enough angst and all the right amount of fluff. :)
Date: 30 May 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great great story!! thanks for sharing :) xoxo
Date: 30 May 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks for the ride. It was awesome.
Date: 30 May 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved this story from day one. Congratulations on an amazing story. Hope to hear about future stories or maybe a sequel... XOXO,Cheri
Date: 30 May 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Very good. I liked your ending, yeah there were still some questions but in clearing those up more were bound to crop up. This was a good place to end. Good Job.
Date: 29 May 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is pissing me off. I understand where she us coming from but damn she is being completely unreasonable. Also keeping Levi from Edward...she is going to be in deep shit.
However, I can be patient for the happily ever after.
Date: 29 May 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 30
All good things must come to an end. It is perfect. Loved it. Thank you!
Date: 29 May 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 30
I so loved this story! It was real and honest. I can't wait for more of your work!
Date: 29 May 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 30
Sad to see it end but love the story
Date: 29 May 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
THANK YOU FOR SHARING. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 29 May 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
I truly enjoyed your ending to James!
I can't believe it's complete. So sad, but their story is one that will continue on in our minds. Your have left the door open for a sequel if your brain can't seem to let them go. And maybe some day you will share those creative thoughts with us as well.
Great story. Will the PDF be available on your blog?
Keep the stories comin, I appreciate them all!
Thanks for sharing your gift.
Date: 29 May 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well, I love your story!! I'm glad you didn't give up. I was just searching for a completed story in FF and with the specifics I put in, this story was first on my list. I'm sorry you are getting complaints but like I said, so far I like it. I know someone married having an affair is taboo but its fiction, it is just a story. Good job and I am actually going to start on your others once I'm done with this one.
Oh and BTW, I hate spiders and snakes and such. I saw that on your profile.
Date: 29 May 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
It's so sad its over. I don't mind not knowing all the details of whats on the usb. You hinted enough to know its his mother talking to him. Great story.
Date: 29 May 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
I LOVED IT, YOU ARE AWESOME! REAL PEOPLE ARE FLAWED LIKE THAT AND YOU MADE IT SPECIAL AND UNIQUE!
Date: 29 May 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
I would love to get a pdf copy so i can read again and again.
Date: 29 May 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hate to see it end
Date: 29 May 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well congratulations on any amazing story I enjoyed everything about it
Date: 29 May 2014 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 30
Fantastic story, Thanks for sharing your talent
Date: 29 May 2014 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
loved it. from the beginning to sadly its end. cant wait to see what you come up with next. :)
Date: 29 May 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hope you decide to write an epi and he sees the USB, and Bella gets preggo again lol
Date: 29 May 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 30
loved this story :)
Date: 29 May 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
I've loved every word of it. I'm so glad it morphed from that one-shot into thirty chapters. Brilliant writing. Thank you.
Date: 29 May 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ty for writing and sharing
Date: 29 May 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
LOVED IT! Yes they were flawed and had tons of issues but it was real! Thanks for another great story!
Date: 22 May 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 29
i loved the chapter(:
Date: 20 May 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Hummmm he needs to watch that tape. I hope bellamakes him soon.
Date: 19 May 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
I guess I missed something. I don't remember his mom being sick. I'll need to go back and look for that in the previous couple of chapters.
But they do seem pretty normal.
Date: 16 May 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 29
I am so happy for them. Things seem to be calming down, so they can be a family.
Date: 16 May 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it!!!!! Update soon!!!!
Date: 16 May 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
The dogs names is great!
I hope Edward doesn't wait too long to view the memories his mother wants to share with him.
They are becoming more and more normal as the days roll on by. What kind of wedding will they have? A quiet and private family ceremony or will the press catch wind if it? Turning it into a media circus.
Date: 15 May 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
Levit and his dog was cute. Edward and Bella trying to be 'normal'. What or who defines what's normal?
Edward saying goodbye to his mother... kinda sad he's closes that chapter in his life, but I liked it that he told her he was getting married and about Levi.
Hopefully paying off Tanya will get her out of their lives for good now.
Bella needs to get pregnant again. Levi needs a baby brother bear.
Date: 15 May 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loving it so far! <3
Date: 15 May 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 29
LOVED IT AS ALWAYS! WHATS ON THE USB,OH IALSO LOVE THE DOGS NAME SO CUTE! LOVE YA
Date: 15 May 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edwards mom, what can be said? Sad. I love the dogs name. My family and I just got a new puppy this weekend and we are still working out a name. She has had several names. Still working it out.
Date: 14 May 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
Finally getting it together
Date: 14 May 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think Levi needs to go see his grandmother because I think he could break through to her. Oh, and take Cappuccino with him.
Date: 14 May 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow levi got a dog Edward said goodbye to his Mother and now they are going to relax and watch a movie yeah totally normal hehehe I loved it and hell yeah they are going to get married now how small will it be and will they invite his family update soon
Date: 14 May 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
ah so they paid Skankya off. Kinda was wondering about that.
Date: 14 May 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter
things starting to improve them maybe
they are still the same people just better
well done
Date: 14 May 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 29
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 01 May 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
Bella should have known this was going to come back and bite her in the butt. Bella was the one who considered herself a whore. Edward did not call her this term. She needs to be ready to deal with her mess. She is so lucky that Edward has always loved her. She has made a mess out of his life, but he is making the best out of it because he loves them.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
bet Joy was not happy she did not get the story she wanted... Such quick thinking on Bella's part...
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hey, I am really enjoying your writing! I read the Suburgatory sneak peak and really enjoyed it, I hope you will continue it! Good luck for finals.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
i was really looking forward to bella spillig her guts but i guess it is for the best that she let everyone think her book is fiction.
it kind of is her dirty little secret and her and edward and his family know the truth
tanya knows but it seems she is okay to keep it quite
this too are volitile together but yet they are so good and in love
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Without giving off your new story. I went and read it omg. THis is going to be good I think you should go with it. It will be interesting. I will say someone is totally sick but I am curious who and what all the why is all going to be involved. I love shooting in the ----------------- the giggles.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Omg, love your books,can't wait for next chapter on this one.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
A white German shepherd? Awesome!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh I loved it hot damn Bella was flawless she shut everyone up now will it start to calm down for them will they be able to focus on the family now update soon
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
Will hate to see this story end. Love this Edward! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28
Bella handled that interview like a pro. Didn't expect her to lie her ass off, but it worked out well for all.
Edward gave up the information on the dog real quick. lol
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
Woah! Didn't see her lying like that! Fast thinking! Hot in the limo!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it! will suburgatory be on this website as well?
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 28
I can't believe how much Edward has changed.
My 1st thought about their interview was to claim it as a fiction story. That's just a no brainer.
I'm keeping my fingers & legs crossed, hoping to win your signed book.
Congratulations!
I almost have an addiction with signed books. I currently have a series of books by five authors. I hope I can be honored with one from you.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
can´t wait for the new story, sad this is ending though
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
good luck with finals. read you soon.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow wwell that was a turn around ps your New tic sounds intriguing
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 28
No way i did not see that coming, darn you are good, you are really good. loved it as usual.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well played Bella!!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved it update soon!!!!