Date: 01 Oct 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can't believe how quickly she got over the fact he was married and didn't even tell her before he took her virginity. If she were told she may not have went through with it. She believed she was his one and only but she wasn't. It seems Bella is always way to forgiving. The rest of the story I really enjoyed though. It has been really well written.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
it's rather disappointing and unbelievable that bella got over
him being married and having a mate with him so quickly.
i would have thought it would have taken her some time for that
at the least esp since they are best friends and are still so close
to each other...
Date: 28 Aug 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
of course, bella being bella doesnt listen to jasper and
just had to be there and distract him while fighting instead of
running away as instructed.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
5 years?
surely not..
that is a very unrealistic number.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok..kinda dragging at it is just like twilight
Author's Response:
Well, you'll be pleased to know, then, that from this point it becomes drastically different to canon. It's one of those things where if you change only one detail, some things will stay the same. Because Tyler's crash happens regardless of who Bella is with. But the things that WILL send them off on a completely different path are when it comes to choices being made. Like a "Choose your own adventure" book -- it always starts off the same, but the choices you make dramatically change the storyline.
Thanks so much for all your reviews! Sorry I haven't replied to each one individually :)
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Trouble ahead I am sure
Author's Response:
You'd be right about that :) :) Both in the immediate future and later on.... :)
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jasper...sooo sweet
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah but what about Ed? What about Alice?
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting...lets see where it goes
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 4:19 PM Title: Epilogue
loved your story-and will be excited to continue with your story about Alice!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! (oops -- didn't see this review to reply to it until today)
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
I can't believe you would leave it there! So will Bella feel when she finds out about Alice? I don't think she will be too happy that he didn't tell her before the took her virginity. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm mean to leave that cliffie. If it helps, it's the worst cliffie left. The rest of the chapters have much less stress-inducing endings. :)
Date: 30 Aug 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love the fact that your Jasper and Bella talk so much - I mean. They really talk, discuss, share. Feelings and ideas. Usually this not the case in FF. usually Jasper is fairly silent and speaks when he needs to. Your Jasper remains in character yet shares his soul. I Adore That!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Huh, I'd never really thought of it like that, but I can see what you mean. I just always have two things in my head -- what is necessary to be revealed for the plot? and what feels natural for the characters? I just hope that it all comes out working okay :) :)
Date: 28 Aug 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
So sweet! She just made Jasper's millennium! I do enjoy the tentative way they have with each other - which, at this point, would be totally natural and normal. Yet, suddenly - BAMN! - there it is, "I love you. Again, completely normal. I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
:) Thank you so much! :)
It is always that fine line between going too fast and too slow, isn't it? -- And it's often hard to remember that they've known each other for less than three weeks! :)
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sorry not to have reviewed in a bit, but there was vacation, a bathroom redo going on, and basically RL! I love what you have done with Bella and Jasper's relationship. They fit. Poor Jasper is really pulling a tough one here. N going home because of Edward, yet all the angst has simply drawn the two of them ever closer. I look forward to the coming chapters! Thank you for all your hard work!
Author's Response:
I know all about RL taking over right now! :) Glad that you came back, though!
SO happy that you're enjoying it!
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ahhh...you know I was a greedy whore and went to FF to read this story in completion...I LOVED IT. Thanks so much for sharing...I'm glad that I stumbled upon this gem...it would be awesome if you continued it...(cough, cough, wink, wink) Love your style of writing...and your vision of Jasper...I puffy heart him. ;)
Corina
Author's Response:
Haha. I figured you might do that :)
Yeah.... while I'm not keeping this story going (except for a potential one-shot because I realised something I missed out), I'm keeping the characters alive with the companion fics -- My Faith in Fate, which is already posted on ffn, and My Morality, which I'll be posting in a few months (want to get a bit ahead so I don't leave people waiting too long). Different relationships, but part of the same world....
-- Louise
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor, Bella. Well, Jasper, too. This "bond" is truly different than canon. It will be interesting how this all takes place.
Author's Response:
Yup -- it's much stronger than canon. Well.... all the other relationships are the same strength as canon (including Jasper/Alice at the start) and this is a whole different level. :)
Date: 25 Aug 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awww! What a sweet ending. It was nice that she didn't spazz out when she found out the truth, but I suppose she may of been coming up with some other options like the Bella in the movie had considered super powers or radio-active spiders. lol. Thanks once again for the speedy update. Looking forward to another update soon..you're spoiling me...wish all authors cranked them out daily. Do you have this posted somewhere else complete? Just wondering...
~Corina
Author's Response:
I don't think that even Bella knows exactly why she is so accepting of what Jasper is -- it has a lot to do with their unusual bond.
Yup -- the whole fic is posted on fanfiction.net. Haha -- yeah, you have it a lot better than those people did. They had to wait months between updates :) :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is just such an awesome Bella & Jasper story. You need to post this on fanfiction site. There are so many fans of Bella/Jasper pairings and so few posted. I'm loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your support! It means so much to me!
FYI -- it's already posted on ff.net and Archive of our Own under the same penname. It's already complete on ff.net. :) :)
Date: 24 Aug 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ahhhh! Another well placed cliffie...oh how I love those. ;) I'm trying to figure out what has her panties in a bunch? Was it the actual fighting or the fact that Edweird was trying to eat her? I guess I just thought she'd be more "OMG, you're my hero!" instead of all emo in the fetal position..but I guess that will come next. Thanks for these quick updates...moving right along. Great story!
~Corina
Author's Response:
Hehe. Maybe it's just me putting myself into the character, but Bella is very introverted and I know that my reaction to something traumatic would be to turn in on myself and try to work things out in my head. No real mystery with her quietness, really. SHe's just overwhelmed. :)
No cliffie in the next chapter! :) :)
Date: 22 Aug 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy! So, I "should" be reading these tantilizing chapters for my "Employee Development" class (snore), but I cannot help it. These chapters of yours are good...wish I was getting graded on this story! I liked this chapter too, it was sweet with the whole kissy kissy deal...and then you dropped that Edweird bomb...hoping Jasper gets there in time...yikes.
Author's Response:
I fully agree -- reading fic is much more interesting than work stuff! :) I want to clap excitedly like a little kid every time I re-read the kissing bit :)
Date: 21 Aug 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really enjoying the story can't wait till you continue :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 21 Aug 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Aww...what a sweet chapter. Glad to read that Bella isn't freaked out. "I know what you are" and all that...or that she isn't being a biotch for him not telling her straight out. I can so picture that conversation in my head and his uber cute face making those facial expressions...too much yum in my head when I think of Jasper.
I skipped a chapter because I just read them in succession...I couldn't take the time to stop!! I loved them both....fo'sho
Author's Response:
:) Thanks so much! :) I've always liked that chapter, too. One of my favourites. Well.... not quite as much as I love chapter 11. And chapter 21. :) :)
I might post another chapter sometime tonight (it's middle of the afternoon here right now). We'll see how it goes.... :)
Date: 19 Aug 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 19 Aug 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder what's going through Bella's mind at the sight of Jasper. Next chapter please! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'd be scared out of my mind! But Bella's pretty good with weird..... :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Uh oh! It seems that those explanations are coming up soon. Poor jasper - so much to deal with. Great chapter. Thanks for the fast updates. This is like a movie on pause. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Yup, explanations of a sort are close! Bella's a smart girl, after all! :)
Since everything is all written, it's just RL that keeps me from posting chapters (seriously -- my BF is getting annoyed because I'm never home. Like he can talk).
Thank you SOO much for the review (and the rating!). I get so excited when I see them come through!
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Gah!! Cliffies are the worst! Thanks for responding to my last review. I felt so special :) super cute chapter...how often do you update?
Author's Response:
Haha. If you don't like cliffies, then you might not like the next couple of chapters :P Although I think of the 24 chaps, there are about ten cliffies or something (I haven't actually counted). I'm trying to update once a day, but that isn't always happening -- sometimes it's been two days.
I am SO happy that you're enjoying the fic :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awww, I really love this story. Its both sad and hopeful. I'm for sure adding this to my favorites, and I hope that you can update again soon. Thank you so much for sharing.
Corina
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It makes all the hard work so worth it when I see people enjoying the story. Hopefully when things change and get a bit more action-y you'll still stick with me! :)
Date: 17 Aug 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry to take so long reviewing these two last chapters. My family was on vacation. I love the depth that Alice has in her heart. Her wedding ring is not just a symbol of that, she can see it as a future symbol of devotion,friendship, and caring. That deeply moved me. Her sobs did as well. Bella here is an awakening spirit. I don't think the person she is becoming because of Jasper has ever existed in entirety. She is like a flower slowly opening. Always a revelation. Jasper, he is strength and commitment in the flesh. He also does not take Bella for granted given his long past. The pain he has seen, experienced, and lived through has tempered him like steel. Alice added the glisten and polish with her loving devotion. Again, I loved both chapters. Rose's help here is also lovely. Great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I still sob every time I read Alice's breakup. Her selflessness and care for Jasper regardless of the situation warms my heart.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
The concept of a true soul mate is a luscious thing. I love that here, you show the family as being totally accepting and understanding. With the exception of Edward, I'm guessing. Jasper and Alice's relationship is stunning. If more people lived love this way the world would be a better place. Alice wants the most for him he can have - totality in someone else. And Jasper? Jasper's worry and feelings ore Alice are what love is about as well. Emmett is bound to want what will make Jasper happy. That's just Emmett. Now Edward.... Loved the chapTer! Thank you for making my day brighter!
Author's Response:
Yes, I adore Jasper and Alice's relationship here and how much they care for each other's happiness. Which is why I bawled my eyes out when writing.... um... I think it's either the next chapter or the one after (it's been a while since I read this :P ).
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!! As my heart swells with joy for Bella and Jaspef my heart breaks for Alice and Jasper. Love this story!!
Author's Response:
Exactly how I felt writing it!! :)
Date: 12 Aug 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
love it
Author's Response:
That makes me very happy! :)
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love seeing the real Jasper come forward. A gentleman, and careful being, he is doing his level best to seem reticent while within his soul is crying aloud with joy. It was also touching seeing the change in his relationship with Alice. For all his happiness, he is careful of her feelings and understanding of her knowledge of his connection to Bella. Thank you for the update! Another winner!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Ha... you describe him better than I ever could! :)
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the premise here! Talk about torn! Jasper is a being of such honor that. Seeming to act dishonorably will be a real tough one to deal with. Catchy....very, very catchy! I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
EEE! I just did a little happy dance. First review on this site! :) Yes.... J can't stand the idea of hurting Alice, even though both of them know it's inevitable. Poor things. :(
I would say that since the fic is all finished I'll update daily, but .... every couple of days will probably be more likely.