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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

awesome little story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: readheadTanya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great story!  Thank you. 

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for writing and sharing your story!

Reviewer: rosekelly1021 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

Lovely story!

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

What a great story! Really enjoyed it. Thank U. :o)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

That was the best ending and I flat loved it! You did a lovely thing for your friend and I'd bet money she appreciated it a whole bunch! I sure did, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

This has been a fascinating, exciting, edge of your chair story! It has had the best portrayal of Mike Newton I think I've ever read, he was definitely one of the good guys in this! I look forward to the epilogue!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

It's going to turn out to be a very good thing that Edward took home the file on his sister's murder. That will be the thing that convicts Jacob and his dad. Thank God h and mike got home in time to save Bella! When this is over, I sincerely hope someone gets to strangle Alice!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

What a horrifying coincidence, that Bella is where she is because of the crazy bastard that murdered Edward's sister, and fathered Greg, maybe! That poor little thing to have gone through all that and lived, only to fear that he would find her and finish the job! It kind of makes me ashamed that I thought Mike was an abuser, when he would lay down his life for her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

So, they're not married only in witness protection together! You may officially knock me over with a feather! If Bella is in dangerI hope Edward can keep her, and Greg, safe! The robberies could be someone looking for Bella, and Alice planning to meet someone besides Jasper could be a part of it also! I'm at a loss for solutions!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is just getting more and more complicated, and scarier for Bella!I keep waiting for Mike to really hurt her , put her in the hospital or something! I don't like the man at all nor his family!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

So, isn't it cute that Tanya can't work for "common" people? Makes me wonder who she thinks she is? The more you tell us about Mike and how he treats Bella the more he worries me! Definitely something weird going on here!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

It's obvious to me that Bella is afraid of Mike, and Edward can see it too! I also want to strangle Alice Whitlock, what a bitch she is !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

Of course this won't be a poly story, since Mike is an obvious abuser, not to mention an ass! Sort of like Alice, my God that woman is enough to drive a person to drink!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not to pretend to be anexpert, but it sure sounds as if Bella is an abused wife! She has all the signs you raed about and her husband is kind of creepy! Edward jas had a hell of a life,too and is lucky he's not a worse mess than he is! Probably helps to have Greg to care for, especially since he's his nephew.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just found this story and read it in one day-- I couldn't stop!  You did a fantastic job and really pulled it all together nicely.  Thank you! :)

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

I just read this over on ffn but wanted to leave my comment here too cause this story is omg intense!! A real twist and turn wow!

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

Omg! The puzzle pieces are finally starting to fit together now!!!

Reviewer: Tifclark69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just getting around to this one and other older stories of yours, because I love all I have read!  My thoughts on this chapter are (1) he's not a very good officer if he ignored screams from next door, And (2) every state I know of requires by law, adults with knowledge of child abuse, no matter what profession or none, to report it to child protective services.  Shape up, Edward!!

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good story. I like the twist that it was Alice that was checking up on Bella and the surprise that it was Jacob doing the burglaries. 

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

LOVED this story!!  great plot and great execution!

Reviewer: masochistic lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

I found this story yesterday and couldn't put it down. Great story!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really like this one!  I was surprised by how short it is but it is perfect!  Thanks for sharing!

 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

i always love your stories

you keep us on our toes

i love that they all got there happy ever after.

i am glad alice served her time and had counseling and has scene her ways

bella yet won't be best friends with her but is accepting and knows she is now getting her second chance and isn't going to blow it

loved it all thank you

Reviewer: joytome123 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

love this story. tk y for chap 10. Tried to find Isle of Dreams author savannavansmutsmut, had no luck. could y pls email a link to her, wld love to read her stories. thank you
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I emailed you too, but here is a few other links as well just to be sure you get them....

I am also enclosing a few other links to find us...as well.

Savannavansmutsmut's ffn profile where you'll find her stories: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2197940/savannavansmutsmut

Jess2002's profile, where you'll find her stories:  http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1985602/jess2002

TeamAllTwilight's profile on FFN, where you'll find my stories:  http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2240867/TeamAllTwilight


Here is the facebook link to our group page:  https://www.facebook.com/groups/211321218983884/


Jess2002 and I also write together under the name of JessAndTAT, here is our profile page:  http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3252565/JessAndTAT

 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it so so so perfect for them even with Alice thank you for all of it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful end.  Glad Alice tried to appologize.   Woo Hoo for Baby.

 

TY for writing and sharing with us.

ty

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I love that Greg got to help with the delivery. HaHa!!!! I am glad that Alice has realized how mean she was to everyone. Gla that Mike is back in their life. LOVED that Bella proposed to Edward, that was sweet. Excellent job writing ths wonderful story and thanks for sharing it with us. 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful story!
This story is incredibly well written, I never knew what was going on, Mike is now my hero, he was amazing with Bella, I'm glad that they were all so close. I think a person unbearable Alice, I'm glad she changed. I find it funny that I never liked the Alice books of SM, I thought Alice a little abusive.
Kisses, please keep in with incredible stories.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) loved this story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

great ending 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Alice got off easy. She should have served jail time. 

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

loved every word :] you guys rock !

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

great job, awesome ending!! :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

I loved it they are safe and Jacob and his crew are dead or put away now  Bella is staying I think her life will become in time much better update soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wowzer wowzer wowzer.   Alice is such a moron.  Wonder if she even realizes/understands what she's done, not only to Bella, E, Greg, but even to Jasper. This is going to affect him as well.   I agree that B needs to be better for herself before she can be better forE and G.  Great job ladies.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

Looking forward to to more

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

I swear I will shoot Alice myself. ....omg how stupid can you be. Freaking nosy ass bullying bitch. .grrrrr!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

OMGosh!!! I can not believe that Jacob got into the hospital. I am thinking Mike's crew need more training. HaHa!!! Glad that everyone is safe. I can not believe that Alice was still fusing with Mike after everything that she had done. I have to admit, I laughed when Mike arrested her. HaHa!! Glad Bella got to say goodbye to her parents. Can't wait to see what happens with Bella, Edward and Greg. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) loved this

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 8

Stupid self righteous bitch Alice is beyond words she needs her ass beat now will they ca5ch Jacob before its too late update soon

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

I HATE ALICE!  I hope she suffers a horrible date. Just who the hell does she think she is??

Nope - Jacob didn't find crap.  The file is at Edwards. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

i have no idea where jacob would go hiding. i assumed he was looking for bella and wanted her. so i am surprised he left her for dead and took off

so i am curious what was it he wanted.

i am so mad at alice for butting in. she was too noisy neighbor for me. she needed to back off of bella she tried to hard

 

love it

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

I think that Jacob may be looking for Chris...I also think that Jacob will be dead meat very soon.

Reviewer: mimi2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

fuck me!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

I knew Malice was going to get someone hurt/killed.   What a stupid biatch.  Poor Bella.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

loved this

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

What in the world is Jacob looking for? If he was in the control room how in the world did Bella get in there and hide? Who is it in the department that has been helping Jaocb with the break ins? I know that Alice helped Jacob get into Bella's house. She is so stupid. I can not believe she did that. Thanks for the update. I am not ready for this story to be over. 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

God Alice you're such a stupid ass nosey bitch!!!! Like seriously dont believe everything someone tells you!!!! And why the fuck would you make a copy of someone's house key without their permission!!!! Are you fucking stupid!!!! God if something bad happens to Bella it's all on Alice's stupid ass head!!!! How did Jacob get access to the control room???? And what did he find and or take???

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Crazy chapter. I'm so glad they are all getting along.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think Bella is going to get a beating

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG Greg's sperm doner is EVIL and wants to kill Bella.  But I bet he goes after Greg and Bella!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

What is he thinking lol  Bella is what he needs

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

of course it's always jacob who's the bad guy not that i care cause i hate that douche!!!!!! i'm glad mike isn't bad but i still don't like him and damn bella's only 18 well damn! how old is edward??? they better catch jacob!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update tomorrow!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

We have had Jake be the bad guy in a couple of our other stories, but we have also had Renee, Phil, James, Tanya, Harry, Alice, Rose, Siobahn, Aro, Marcus, Caius, just to name a few be bad guys too.  We love changing it up, and do things out of the norm, it just fit with the story for Jake and Billy to be the bad guys... But Alice is not super lovable either.  We like to shake things up and not be the same as everyone else, otherwise our stories would be the same stuff told a slightly different way.  Edward is 30 and Bella is 18.  Glad you're liking the story.  Thanks again for all the love, we are grateful!  :)  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can't believe its almost over. A really great story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved this

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

i am glad mike is the good guy. he is a protector

blown away how the same person who took his sister is mixed up in this crap and hunting for bella

how the web is weaved. sorry she lost her parents. and hoping the bad guys get caught and are held responsibe and somehow bella can somehow learn to live in the world with people.

wow hell of a story

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

i'm so glad he isn't abusing her......but the connection with his sister and Jacob/Billy is freaky, such a small world

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Okay is she in witness protection or something? Something is definetly going on

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

OMGosh!!!!!! Wow, I can not believe that the same person after Bella is the someone that killed Edward's sister. What a small world. I hope that Edward and Mike find Jacob and something happens Edward has to shoot Jacob and kill him. :) Glad that Mike is being nice to Edward now. 

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well Alice is a bitch and a hater lol okay Im really getting into this story. Someone should tell Edward that Its not what it looks like is the guiltiest line ever

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

I hope Bella is fine

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start his poor nephew losing his mother before he got to know her

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

looking forward to more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

oooohhh   Illinois.... I wonder if Malice is working for the devil?!?!?!     Glad Mike isn't a wanker.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

ok this answers a lot of questions but what is with all the injuries?? is she hurting herself??  and why was mike being so hostile towards edward??  its not like he is really married to her.  no jealous husband here.  what is with all the "fear faces" when mike is around?  why is mike trying to keep them apart?? why did bella leave greg?? so many questions still!! love this story so far!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow! I did not see that coming!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well, to be honest, I was not expecting that!!!!!!! I was really beginning to wonder if Mike was beating her. I was having my douts. Because he was not possessive enough. I was thinking that she was hurt in her past and he became her savior and that was why she married him but she did not truly love him. I was also begining to think there was link between Mike and the robberies.

Thanks for sharing this exciting story with us. Can't wait for you next update. 

It kind of worries me that she has gotten that close to Greg and she is in the witness protection program. Hope nothing happens to Greg.

But I still do not understand the medicine.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

why is she in witness protection????????? i still don't like mike he's an ass and bella better not be really married to hiM!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well some of you guessed right in the Witness Protection idea. So now I wonder if they are even really married ? I don't think so. Could Mike be meeting Alice ? Or the bad guys found him that are after Bella.

Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow so i wasn't expecting that

i did think mike was in the robberies.  now i am thinking the robberies are maybe staged to get information on bella. she must have witness something bad

 

now i am thinking maybe alice could be involved or is not as good as we think. i am so confused. but i know with your stories things are not always what they seem. you are very good at throwing us off the marker and pulling the wool over our eyes. look forward to more. thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like the twist. Great chapter.

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

did not see that coming! good job! its why I love your stories

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Even if he is a U.S. Marshall, the way he handles her is abusive! those robberies must have to do with whoever is looking for her since it's only new homes

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

loving this

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh God please another chapter!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Alice is the bad guy!!!  Great twist. Witsec never crossed my mind!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

hmmmm   I guessed part of it for sure.  I was beginning to worry about the robberies too, but prob the people looking for B.    Hmmm still HATING Malice.

Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wasn't expecting that. I hope Carlisle can find some marks on Bella when he examines her. Knowing what Edward knows now will he be listening to Bella's screams a bit differently?

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

God I hope that Edward can get Bella away from that asshat!!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well I wasn't expecting Bla to be the one to make a move first lol. I'm sure this can't be good..mike will never let them be around each other now.

see you soon

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

GOD MIKE IS SUCH A DOUCHE NOZEL AND NO ONE BELIEVES EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!! AD OF COURSE MIKE'S DADDY WOULD BE THE CAPTAIN OR SOMETHING AND FORCE EDWARD TO STAY AWAY FORM BELLA!!!!!!! WE ALL KNOW THAT MIKE IS AN ABUSIVE ASSHOLE BUT DOES ANYONE SEE IT NO THEY SEE THE COOKIE CUTTER HAPPY COUPLE BUT NO THE POSSESSIVE DERANGED MONSTER THAT IT  THAT ASSHOLE AND ALL EDWARD WANTS TO DO IS PROTECT BELLA BUT CAN HE NO BECAUSE NO ONE WILL FUCKING LET HIM INCLUDING BELLA!!!!!!!! GOD SHE NEEDS TO TRUST HIM AND TO LET HIM HELP HER!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon can't wait!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Very twisted. Something is off....maybe the screams Edward hears each night are nightmares and the meds are antidepressants??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMGosh!!!!!!!! There was so much in this chapter. Mike is drugging her???? I am beginning to wonder if he is abusing her or not. I am thinking something very bad happened to her in her past and Mike was her hero that saved her. I was surprised that Bella kissed Edward. I am glad that she made the 1st move. What is the deal with Marcus and Mike. Are they family? Can't wait for the next update. Hope it is soon. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmmm  Mike and Marcus in on it now?    You are either hiding the fact that Bella is in the witsec program......or Mike is really just a controlling arsehole.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

I can't believe we have to wait until tomorrow for another chapter. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

love this story.  Too many questions in my head.  If she is in Witness Protection, Mike is a real dick!!!!!  Maybe he thinks he 'owns' her literally!!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

what the hell is wrong with Emmett!? no freaking filter i swear! Mike is going to make it impossible for Edward at work......

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

I have a feeling that its going to get worse before it get better

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

i am still baffled

i am curious why she asked him to teach her to fight. if he beat her she wouldn't be asking him on how to protect herself

 

but mike is a strange character. something is off not sure what

thank you

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

man i almost want to give mike the benefit of the doubt cause we really have no idea what is truly going on

 

noone has scene any bruises or mike is good at covering or hitting where noone can see

bella covers for mike so good.

i am puzzled

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

alice is alot to handle.

i am surprised noone has any cause to worry yet

i know it is all new but something has to feel off

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

What in the world is really going on with Bella?? Is Mike beating her or not?? Some times I think he is and then there are othe times that Mike does not react like someone who is beating their wife. 

Wow, I can't believe that Mike and Alice were going at it like that at a party. Also, can't believe that Jasper just sat there and let Mike talk to his wife like that. 

I was wondering when Mike would start warning Edward. I am surprised that Mike has not started messing with Edward's work schedule.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

New reader to your work and enjoying it.  I think In this story Mike is not really her husband but her protector in a witness protection program waiting for rgd trial.

Could be way off but... will see.

 

 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Im really frustrated with Bella and Mike.

Tanya ia such a whore.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

Mike is a creep.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

loving this.  Is Bella in something like Witness Protection?

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