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Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2018 7:08 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I absolutely loved this story.  I read it quite awhile ago, but decided to read it again.  Thank you!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2018 7:08 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I absolutely loved this story.  I read it quite awhile ago, but decided to read it again.  Thank you!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:37 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

thanks for posting this on here ;) i've read this before and still enjoyed it ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 38

i thought they met in 2009?



Author's Response:

You're right. That's a booboo on my part. :) Thanks for pointing that out!

Reviewer: Kreitlow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:56 AM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

Love it.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Finally Ed got him some!  :) lol!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

Lushes!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Bella :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Ed all he gets is self love :( I hope you get him some soon!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

Lets get it on!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

They are very sweet

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

Nice date!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Lets date!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16

Fun

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

They seem good together

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

Ed is smooth!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

Sweet sweet sweet 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

Make your move Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sweet

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Fun!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

Sweet edward

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yeah!  You go Edward!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

Yum love the jasper love!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Again what good friends

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a good friend

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor bells...but you are going to get Edward!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lets see what happens

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 5:46 AM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

Awesome story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Readersheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 11:58 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I loved this beautiful story and this last additional look into their future was perfect! :-)

Reviewer: fadedwranglers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Hello JenRar,    

I just wanted to thank you very much for a very enjoyable story.  I am looking forward to reading your other stories and future works. Thank you again.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) You can find a new fic I'm in the middle of posting on FFn or Twilighted. :)

Reviewer: Ahndraya Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Did Phil and Renee die?



Author's Response:

Yes...  heh

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

My BEST friend moved to Florida this past September. I know how Bella feels only i didn't have an Edward shoulder to cry on. Sometimes I'm like I want to go see a movie or i come up with one of my crazy plans and i have no one to call my other friends are married wiith children or have "real' jobs and don;t have a lot of free time to hang out with me. This was a very hard chapter to get thru for me. But i think that your doing an amazing job with this story thanks 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:33 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

Good way to end it, and thanks for the little inside peek into their lives with kiddos. Great job, I cant wait to see what your going to do next.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 12:32 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

Thanks for the future outtakes I love those. And congratulations on finishing this great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 5:05 AM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

great Christmas! 7 kids between them, so sweet!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 1:58 AM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

Great conclusion.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 12:54 AM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I enjoyed this so much. Although I am so sad that it's over, I am incredibly glad with the way it ended. I will miss them all, but @ least I know I can come to visit them all again!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  :)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 11:28 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

Great story.....Great ending!!!!!!!   :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 11:00 PM Title: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I thank you so much for all your hard work on this story... I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 2:47 AM Title: Outtake 2: Gettin' Our Honeymoon On

Wonderful way to spend a honeymoon! I will surely miss these two love birds.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 1:16 AM Title: Outtake 2: Gettin' Our Honeymoon On

very sweet!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 12:35 AM Title: Outtake 2: Gettin' Our Honeymoon On

good job



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 11:15 AM Title: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

whew.....that was a welcomed homecoming for Edward....lol

Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

I loved this story and now that it is over, I will miss the updates! Please continue writing more stories.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!  :)  I have one well on the way to being completed that I will post soon, I promise!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 4:27 AM Title: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

"This is heavy on the smut...but I figured you wouldn't mind. ;)" ...who in their right mind would complain????? *evil, wicked grin*



Author's Response:

Hahaha Thanks.  ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 10:20 PM Title: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

Very hot!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 8:10 PM Title: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

great



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 7:58 PM Title: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

Well... that was just HOT!  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

LOL  Thank you.  :D

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 7:52 PM Title: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

That was definetly hot!!!!!  They always are....



Author's Response:

Thank you.  ;)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

really enjoyed this story! thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

awesome ending!!!! loved it, great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I'll post the 2 outtakes soon.  :)  I really appreciate all the reviews!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 46

i can't believe it's almost over :(

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 45

loved the vows! so beautiful!! where are they going????

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 43

too funny!, B & E have the right idea going to Vegas!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 41

what a way to ring in the new year....lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 40

nice gifts!!! i can't wait to see the puppies!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 39

nice family Christmas :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 38

loved that proposal!!!! :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 36

i don't think any amt of cleaning would get me to stay in that apt anymore

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

very personal stuff......i see a hidden message in that act

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 34

uh oh.....something happened to her store.......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 31

TP is a great game :) glad it all went so well

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 28

awww, he's so caring, i'm glad they exchanged keys and now she's got the security system

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 25

freaky Laurent, bet you James sent him.......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

yay! that was perfect :) and the ILY's, so happy!

Author's Response:

hehe Thank you for your continued reviews!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 23

give Bella a little alcohol and lookout! lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

excellent

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 36

HOPEFULLY HE IS STILL IN PRISON AND LAURENT WILL BE BACK THERE SOON

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

hot



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

poor Bella, i hope James can never get out......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 21

whew! steamy :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

cool! he has a mountain lion tattoo! he's so good to her, i hope she continues to let him in

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review.  :)  I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

A+

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

In real life the guy would want reciprocation



Author's Response:

Hah  Of course he would! But this is fantasy world.  ;)  haha Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

nice date

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

awwww

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

yes 1st kiss

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

A lovely end to a wonderful story, thank you so much for all your hard work and creativity.  I will miss your updates (after the outtakes).



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)  I'll have a new story soon!  :D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

you must have some ALice in you, lots of shopping details



Author's Response:

Haha  I would do that part all differently if I were writing it now. Ah well. The things we learn in two years!  Thanks for your reviews so far!  :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

wtg, Bella will meet her beloved and his family

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

great start

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

This is absolutely, hands down, one of the best stories I have read.  Thank you for sharing your amazing talent, and I can't wait to read more from you!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you very, very much!  :D  Keep an eye out, because my next fic is in the works now, and there will be 2 outtakes from this one soon.!  :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Wow. when they decide to have kids they go all out. Four kids in a little over four years. I hope she has help at the store. Did she turn the apartment upstairs into a daycare for all of the Cullen babies, so they can be around them all day while they work?



Author's Response:

Hahaha  Benefit of being the bosses, huh?  :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Hate to see it end.  Hmmm...guess I'll have to start over at the beginning and just read it again!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: mingaling Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

I loved it!! It was such a cute story that makes  me hopeful:) Thank you for all your hardwork! I hope to read another story by you soon!!

Erin



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Fantastic ending to a fantastic story.  Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

So cute, please please do an out take with edward, bella and their kids, u just give a little snippet of them and thats it.... Great story from start to finish. Im waiting to see what your going to do next to get my attention like this story has. Keep the awesome work your doing up.



Author's Response:

I'll certainly think about it.  hehe  I need a bit of a break though, because I wrote the 2nd outtake in about 6 hours overnight.  Oi! haha  Thank you!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 46

so sweet..... Hard to say good bye to these two..... Maybe a future daddyward/ momella out take, cause they have to have at least one child, or maybe two, a mini edward and mini bella...... Loved this story from start to finish. Keep up the awesome work, looking forward to seeing what ur going to do next.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :) I'll take that into consideration.  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 46

Very fitting honeymoon for these two love birds... I'll be sorry for the story to end but I enjoyed it very much!  I look forward to the epilogue.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 46

Such a lovely story!  Worth the wait.  Looking forward to the epilogue and (hopefully) a few outtakes!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: wolfpackjo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

WOW.... Great chapter! Please don't stop :)



Author's Response:

Hehe Keep reading!  :)  Lots more after chapter 24!  Thanks.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) great date! they can have dinner every night!

Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thanks.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

*squee* so cute! yay!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D  hehe

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

so sad....hope Edward can cheer her up! so glad she threw the card away

Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

it's gonna be so sad when they leave :(

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella's in for a surprise :)

Author's Response:

hehe Thanks for the reviews.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

they are so cute! can't get any better than him saving her *swoon*

Author's Response:

Hehehe Very Twilight-esque, no?  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

they are such good friends, i know saying goodbye will be so painful :(

Author's Response:

It will. But they'll see each other again.  :)

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