[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really do hope you up date and finish this story
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
jasper pov is funnier than sometimes em. Wow bella really is beating his ass. I wonder if What rose thought of seeing him for the first time in long time. Something tells me edward and royce are in on this together. Please continue this story loving it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok funny part with dad look at my dick and gay talk all in one. I think a clause of don't drink when reading this. I am coughing up a storm from the funnys in this.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
OOOO em em em. First you have to call your mom to bail you out. Second she catches you with your hand on your dick with cream. blushing. Last really now you are going to have to make it up to bella. I do wonder could of edward be with vol and planted something in the clock too. Maybe they aren't to far off on that part.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jasper and em have played gay that would of been interesting.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
You know how these people are. Write your story because it is in your head and you are a good writer. I am in this hope you update often.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
looking foward to more
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
I do love the give and take you have written between Emmett and Jasper! Excellent. I enjoyed all the chapters and I'm looking forward to going forward in the story. Thanks for all your work.
Author's Response:
Awww that is so sweet. You have made my day.
Thank you for reading me and I hope you contiue to enjoy those silly hot boys.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well poor Bella Edward is just using her. Emmett thinks about Rose. So..
Author's Response:
Edward will get what's coming to him. Rose...there is no hope with her.
Thank you for reviewing!!!
xoxoxo PG
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward ot more
Author's Response:
I get all excited when someone wants to read me.
Thank you for reviewing too!!
xoxoxo PG
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh goodness these guys are too much
man em and jasper where did you guys do your training
too funny
looking forward to seeing what the arrangement is between bella nd edward and jane and edward
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
You have got my interest I need more please!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading me. I am posting the next chapter.
I hope you continue to enjoy Jasper and Emmett.
Date: 29 May 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
now this is funny. It probably is a clock not a bomb.
Author's Response:
Sh.....it's a secret. You are just to smart LOL!!!!!!
I hope you continue to enjoy our Em!!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh my god bella is going to kill em
i have a feeling it wasn't a bomb but maybe a real nice clock
oh em i don't think you should be a spy by your friends and family seems you keep messing up
loving it and can't wait for more
Author's Response:
When I read your review, I was giggling to myself. You are right about what it really is.
Thank you sooo much for reading me and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
loving the story it is a hoot
Author's Response:
Thank you. I like to make people laugh and most things I write have humor to them.
Date: 29 May 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading me. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 26 May 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
ok lets see what you do here.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading me. I hope you contiue to enjoy Emmett.