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Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 15- The Story of Our Epilogue

This was such a great story for me, I loved Dead like me and think ist was a great idea to mix the stories.  Thanks so much.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 15- The Story of Our Epilogue

U did not check this story as completed although It say this chapter as epilogue. so I am confused is this story completed or not??????? I truely have enjoyed reading a story with truely different story line from so many others out there!!! I understand how much time & effort is involed in writting a story. This was truely beathtaking beautifully well written!! It truely is an intriguing story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I forgot to check it as complete.

 

I appreciate you reading! < 3

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 15- The Story of Our Epilogue

Great job. Edward sounds like heaven to me too. Thanks for a great story

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13- The Story of Margaret Saunders

Oh no you didn't!!!  Now how sre you going to fix this?  haha. Still a fan. Can't wait for the rest!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing along the way, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 13- The Story of Margaret Saunders

Noooooooooo!  What about Edward?  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 11- The Story of Us

Love this story and all the possibilities it offers. Thanks for the update. I realized after reading that I needed to check out some of your other stories. I remember reading Savage last year. Will check out the others. I'm a big fan of your writing so keep it coming. Have a great weekend



Author's Response:

Thank you so much (for all the stories you read today)

 

Teaser 12 Teaser
I was unsure of what I expected from Bella’s family. They weren’t conventional, but neither was mine. We had both forged families out of those around us with like minds and similar goals. Those things eventually turned into affection, and then into a familial love. They were still working out their kinks, they had not been bound as long as my family and I had been, but after meeting Charlie, I knew that they were solid.

 

Mike, however, could be replaced, but I sometimes felt the same about Rosalie. Rosalie had, however, never spied on me in my underwear, the same couldn’t be said about Mike and Bella. I wasn’t thrilled that my first glimpse of Bella undressed had been through another man’s eyes, but I decided to give him the benefit of the doubt. I did, however, wonder if I could get away with killing him, just once. To protect her honor, of course. The tiny smile crept up over my lips.

 

 

 

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 10- The Story of Free Will

I wounder what Edward think after bella tells him that she's Jasper's reaper 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.

 

Teaser for CH 11

EPOV

Having infinite time had always made me patient. But waiting to see Bella again, it felt much longer than any decade I had lived. A classmate would have a passing thought about her and I found myself listening that much more intently to catch a glimpse of her morning.

 

I was seeing Bella in a new light. She was no longer a fragile human who needed to be protected from our kind. Now she was a capable woman, an immortal in her own right, and while she was still fragile, a slip wouldn’t rob her from me forever. I had no intention to purposefully drain her, she had explained to me just how painful it was, but having the knowledge that it wouldn’t kill her soul made it easier for me somehow. I wasn’t afraid to try, to be her friend and possibly someday more.

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 10- The Story of Free Will

I just love this story!  Thanks for another great update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.

 

Teaser for CH 11

EPOV

Having infinite time had always made me patient. But waiting to see Bella again, it felt much longer than any decade I had lived. A classmate would have a passing thought about her and I found myself listening that much more intently to catch a glimpse of her morning.

 

I was seeing Bella in a new light. She was no longer a fragile human who needed to be protected from our kind. Now she was a capable woman, an immortal in her own right, and while she was still fragile, a slip wouldn’t rob her from me forever. I had no intention to purposefully drain her, she had explained to me just how painful it was, but having the knowledge that it wouldn’t kill her soul made it easier for me somehow. I wasn’t afraid to try, to be her friend and possibly someday more.

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 9- The Story of Marie, No...Bella.

Another great chapter. Thanks for the update. Hope you know how much I enjoy this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Teaser for CH 10

My eyes widened at the words before me, it took only a moment to realize what the words meant. Leaving the post-it to float away with the summer’s breeze, I turned expecting to find someone being killed before my eyes. Indeed I saw a woman, but she wasn’t being killed. Had the post-it been wrong? Would another appear in front of me saying rescheduled?

 

Somehow I knew that wouldn’t happen. He wouldn’t pass her up. My gut told me that she would die today. I had known that as soon as I first saw her. She was exactly his type, she was standing out in the middle of nowhere, as if she was just waiting for him to end her life. She was brunette and had a kind of resigned look about her. Did she know she was going to die today?

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 8- The Story of an Enigma

Oh so good!  Keep them coming



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Teaser for Chapter 9

 

My family’s thoughts had been screaming at me through the cafeteria as I grabbed Bella’s arm and told her she was sitting with me. None of them could discern what I was doing; I could hear them arguing with hushed voices about why I would take the new girl to the table to talk about weather. Alice had been the one to say that it was my feeling of loss over Marie, that I was trying to replace her with Bella. It was a convenient enough excuse to allow me to do some more digging on who Bella or Marie really was. I wasn’t ready to share everything with my family quite yet. I wouldn’t have even known where to start.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 6:48 PM Title: Preface-The Story of Death

Don't think so. Janet Renfro Ake. Posted the link to your story on a couple of Fanfiction sites on Facebook this morning. Hope you get some more readers good luck. 

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6- The Story of Two Faces

Another great chapter. Hope you don't mind if I pimp this around to some of the groups on Facebook. Thanks again



Author's Response:

Of course not! What is your name on Facebook? are we already friends?

 

Thanks so much for reading

 

There is another teaser on the Facebook update page,

Chapter 7

 

BPOV

Jasper left immediately; waiting would only put us at even more of a disadvantage. If the male was truly after revenge, he wouldn’t wait long. The room was quiet save for the sounds of the thoughts around me. When Alice’s mind when quiet, I knew what was coming. Another vision.

 

The blonde vampire’s head jerked to the side, sensing something. With a sinister grin he headed to the right. I watched him run and pounce on....nothing.

 

Marie.

 

My eyes flashed to Alice’s and then I was out the door.

 

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 5- The Story of New Beginnings

Thanks for the update. Really, really enjoying this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

As a little treat, I’m giving you a teaser from both POV’s this week. Enjoy!

 

Chapter 6 Teaser.

 

BPOV

Black eyes.

Thirsty eyes.

A killer’s eyes.

Out of all the freaking Cullens, why couldn’t Jasper have been the one with those eyes today? Wasn’t it bad enough that they had A. Marks’ appointment rescheduled? Did the greater...whatever they were, enjoy watching me get drained by vampires?

Earlier that day, I saw that Edward wanted to sink his teeth into my skin, the moment I’d seen his eyes. For the first half of class, I’d wondered where Charlie was. Surely, if he was going to drain me, he’d have to kill the witnesses, right?

 

EPOV

It was hard to get used to the obvious fact that the Marie Swan I saw was not the same one everyone else saw. I scanned through the minds of every student in Forks high school, along with the faculty, searching for someone else who had seen the heart-shaped face and uneven lips. I came up empty and I found it frustrating.

 

I focused so hard on her appearance that it was almost an entire day later I realized there was something else off about her as well. I couldn’t hear a single thought in her head. People tend to think there aren’t a lot of thoughts going on in a teenage girl’s head, but the truth is they never shut up in there, it’s just rarely interesting.

 

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 5- The Story of New Beginnings

Oh this getting good and Alice can't see them in her vision just round them and got Edward interested in why is that and in Bella. And Bella angry at all the Cullan. Will she ever give in to Edward?



Author's Response:

Thanks!

As a little treat, I’m giving you a teaser from both POV’s this week. Enjoy!

 

Chapter 6 Teaser.

 

BPOV

Black eyes.

Thirsty eyes.

A killer’s eyes.

Out of all the freaking Cullens, why couldn’t Jasper have been the one with those eyes today? Wasn’t it bad enough that they had A. Marks’ appointment rescheduled? Did the greater...whatever they were, enjoy watching me get drained by vampires?

Earlier that day, I saw that Edward wanted to sink his teeth into my skin, the moment I’d seen his eyes. For the first half of class, I’d wondered where Charlie was. Surely, if he was going to drain me, he’d have to kill the witnesses, right?

 

EPOV

It was hard to get used to the obvious fact that the Marie Swan I saw was not the same one everyone else saw. I scanned through the minds of every student in Forks high school, along with the faculty, searching for someone else who had seen the heart-shaped face and uneven lips. I came up empty and I found it frustrating.

 

I focused so hard on her appearance that it was almost an entire day later I realized there was something else off about her as well. I couldn’t hear a single thought in her head. People tend to think there aren’t a lot of thoughts going on in a teenage girl’s head, but the truth is they never shut up in there, it’s just rarely interesting.

 

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 3- The Story of Moving

Great story!!  Nice change of pace from the usual and well written. Looking forward to more. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 

Chapter 4 Teaser

I had had a pretty good run, but it always seemed like there was something or someone out there testing me. Edward had been a big help to me, after he got over the fact that Alice had stolen his room. I wasn’t sure how she’d gotten away with it, and when I asked him, he wasn’t sure either. He’d seen the fight they were going to have in her mind and then when he saw himself lose, he just gave up. He and I were fast friends and I truly felt blessed to have him and the other Cullens in my life. For the first time, I found that I was content with my station. I didn’t need any more than I had, with the exception of a dose of better control.


Alice and I fit in well with our new family, but I still had the hardest time with the bloodlust. I could feel the difference in control between me and the rest of the Cullens and I put hope in the idea that I would progress to that stage as well. I wanted to be able to go out in public and function without the stress of wanting to eat everybody in sight.  It didn’t seem fair that there was always someone throwing their blood at me, so to speak. Alice said I was overreacting but there were times where I swore my slips broke the skin on purpose.

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 3- The Story of Moving

Lol so Alice finally joins and try's to help Jasper But is going to happen to Bella now?



Author's Response:

Lots is going to happen to Bella. : )

Chapter 4 Teaser

I had had a pretty good run, but it always seemed like there was something or someone out there testing me. Edward had been a big help to me, after he got over the fact that Alice had stolen his room. I wasn’t sure how she’d gotten away with it, and when I asked him, he wasn’t sure either. He’d seen the fight they were going to have in her mind and then when he saw himself lose, he just gave up. He and I were fast friends and I truly felt blessed to have him and the other Cullens in my life. For the first time, I found that I was content with my station. I didn’t need any more than I had, with the exception of a dose of better control.


Alice and I fit in well with our new family, but I still had the hardest time with the bloodlust. I could feel the difference in control between me and the rest of the Cullens and I put hope in the idea that I would progress to that stage as well. I wanted to be able to go out in public and function without the stress of wanting to eat everybody in sight.  It didn’t seem fair that there was always someone throwing their blood at me, so to speak. Alice said I was overreacting but there were times where I swore my slips broke the skin on purpose.

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 2- The Story of Being Undead

Huh? I thought Bella was turned in to vampire? So I'm a little confused

Author's Response:

Nope, Jasper killed her. : )

thanks for reading

 

Teaser

 

I recognized her as soon as she came in. She was pale white, her movements too graceful; the only thing off about her was her expression. She didn’t have that look, the one I was used to seeing from her type. Despite the hopeful eyes with the odd coloring and calm expression, I could see what she was, a vampire. My heart sped up a tiny bit, but not from the fear that she would kill me. I’d died enough times by now to get past that fear. No, I feared she would cost me my current body before I could get what little was saved in my coin purse back to my temporary home.

 

The petite woman sat at the counter, in my section. It was as if destiny was laughing in my face. I didn’t see any of the familiar tell-tale signs of a reaper sitting amongst the rest of the diner so I knew she wouldn’t kill any of the humans, for now. That didn’t mean she wouldn’t drain me. With one steadying breath, I began to approach her while hoping she wasn’t here for dinner.

 

 

 

 

                                                      

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1-The Story of being Killed

I love it!  Poor Bella - still a better choice than marrying that creepy old guy!  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

LOL- Your comment is almost what's in the teaser!

 

Teaser for Chapter 2

 

I refused to believe what my senses were telling me. “I’m here-- so that back there, that wasn’t me. That couldn’t be me because then I’d be-”

 

“Dead?” the semi-familiar voice caused my head to jerk up. She was sitting on a wood pile with her head cocked to the side.

 

“I’m not dead!” I screamed, the anger rising from within.

 

She was the stranger-- that stupid, rude woman who had interrupted my peace earlier that morning, and now here she was, trying to cause even more trouble.

 

“Of course you are, Isabella, but at least you’re not tied to that creepy old pervert who was waiting for you at the church, right?” She paused, but I didn’t know how to answer her. Here she was, one moment saying I’m dead and the next joking about how pathetic my life was going to be anyway?

 

 

 

 

                                                      

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 9:58 PM Title: Preface-The Story of Death

Interesting!  Is the "him" she never would have met without Japer, Edward?



Author's Response:

:) it could be.

Reviewer: chelleb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:21 PM Title: Preface-The Story of Death

Interesting premise.  Glad it's not Eddie she's following around. I could use a change.  Also, I never heard of this show. Now I'm going to have to order it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading hon. It is a B/E pairing story, but there is much more to the journey than just the romance part of this one.

Reviewer: Arc Morpheus Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 8:46 AM Title: Preface-The Story of Death

b25;♥b25;♥b25;♥b25;♥b25;♥ :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

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