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Reviewer: WIX Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

You really made me want to throttle her father in this one.  Transposing his issues with what his wife felt towards the life as an ARMY wife, to what Bella will feel if she was one herself, was assinine on his part.  I was so proud of her when she slapped him and didn't talk to him for months.  Some may think that was childish, not this reader.  I felt it was strength shining strong there.  For him to presume such a horrid thing was mind boggling.  Especially with her already having lived a life moving all the time.  She knows this life, better than a person just enlisting.  Sheesh.  All that lost time and his injury can be blamed on one General Swan.  I'm glad that they are getting away from him and closer to Edward's family.  Smart move.  I liked that Bella handed him the letters and that he read them out loud.  

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not my cup of tea but I took a chance and liked it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

You two did a nice job of collaboration here! It made me want to slap Edward for listening and punch Charlie for demanding, but it turned out all right! Bella was raised in the army and knew exactly what the life entailed, so why would her father think she didn't know what she was getting by falling in love with a soldier? Edward shouldn't have decided without Bella's input, either! Guess it's a block-headed guy thing! All turned out well, so they are forgiven!

Reviewer: SophiaMarie5639 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Heartbreaking at first but the happy ending made up for it. I love a good soldier angsty story! : )

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was really amazing. 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: Slayerskey Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome. 

Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

nice story,

 

Thank you

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful story. Great job.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) loved this

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, Charlie should have realized that his daughter didn't have anything from her mother!!!!

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, great O/S... :)

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

beautiful made me cry would Love it if you would continue this story thank for writing

Reviewer: smdev Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow ... just ... wow ...

you ladies sure know how to pack a story full of heart, heartbreak, heartache and heartwarming moments!!!

thank you for sharing your beautiful story, great job!

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