Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
I like the story so far but I have so reservations. It'll be interesting to see where you take your characters.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
I like your story. But Bill and Rose scare me. Why do they insist on invading her personal space? I know it will come out in time. If they are there when Rob isnt they could hurt her. Bill has already stepped over the line. I`ll shut up know. Thanks for writing.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sooo. What was in that shot?? Love all the different story characters coming together in this one. Looking forward to next update. Thanks
Date: 30 Jan 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow, didn't see that coming. Really liking this story. Please keep writing.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow didn't see that coming. Love your style of writing. Please update soon. Thank you.
Date: 19 Jan 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh shit what a twisting chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I love to keep my readers on their toes.
Date: 19 Jan 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, didn't see that coming. So are we going to find out that Rob is not the good guy we thought he was?
Author's Response:
All I can say is to keep reading.