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Reviewer: MsTorres Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:32 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Can you say traick wreck? This is exactly that! Shit is about to get real for the morning after that's for damn sure!

Reviewer: KCPup1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 12:20 PM Title: Bad Days, Clarity, and Going Home

Great Story! I liked the whole 'reading fan fiction together' I liked it even more when I realized it was a scene from your story 'The Perfect Submissive'. I just wanted to let you know that you do amazing work. I'm on my way to read this story from the other POV. As always thank you for sharing your brilliant talent.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:54 PM Title: Bad Days, Clarity, and Going Home

Okay, I don't know what happened to Edward's POV but I got Bella's POV twice. *shrugs*

I still enjoyed the story and thanks for sharing.  I've favourited The Perfect Submissive so I'll be catching up with that one some time in the future.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:15 PM Title: Vacations and Fan Fiction

Yep, it's official, they need their heads banging together, maybe Jake or Riley will do it for them.  It looks like Edward's going to have to step up, be the man and confess his feelings.

Jane x

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 4:44 AM Title: Bad Days, Clarity, and Going Home

:) loved this

Reviewer: jatani33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 6:18 PM Title: The Morning After

cant wait for that conversation and to know what Bella thinks of everything....

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 11:57 PM Title: The Morning After

Well that was even more revealing.  I'm glad that Jake has said his feelings for Bella are more as a friend and sister, I don't think it would have ended well for Edward if Jake had romantic feelings for Bella.  I loved how Jasper rang Alice asking for advice for Edward, lol, it was too fucked up for him to deal with once he learned it was two guys and one girl and not the other way round, hehe!! They all would have saved themselves a lot of awkwardness if they'd talked the morning after even though it would have been uncomfortable.  Oh, oh, what about Edward and the BDSM fan fiction?  That boy so wants to tie Bella up and down. *phew, fans self*  I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this and TNIWNF.

Jane x



Author's Response:

I don't know if I will add that here or not. For some odd reason I always write my Edward to be a little dominant. LOL You should check out The Perfect Submissive....my BDSM story. Edward does tie Bella up with a slid of Jasper at first. It is one chapter away from completion. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Morning After

Yippie jakes out...great update!

Author's Response:

Thanks and yeah, he's out of the picture. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 7:58 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Oh my, that was very revealing.  I can't believe how long Edward's liked Bella and boy he didn't like Jake being involved in their shenanigans did he.  It sounded like Jake wasn't too thrilled either so that answers one question, yes Jake does have feelings for Bella.  Hmmm, will he be happy taking a back seat because I'm sure he's noticed the way Bella looks at Edward and the way she tended to favour Edward over him during their little escapade.  Lol, I loved Charlie's talk before they left for college and the way the guys tried to run off all of Bella's interested men.  The next chapter's going to be interesting.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yeah, I haven't written from Jake's aspect of things. I think he was hopeful, but with Edward makes moved, and Bella responding more to him. He kind pulls away and looks in other directions. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 12:16 AM Title: The Morning After

Loved EPOV :D



Author's Response:

Thanks... so far you are the only one reviewing... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:22 AM Title: The Night My Life Began

I wonder just how this is going to go....are they going to remember anything I sure hope so waking up with two other naked people in your bed might be a bit confronting if you don't remember the night before. I hope they all cope with it. I wonder if Jake has feelings for her too....can't wait to read more of your story...great job so far :D



Author's Response:

At first, Bella doesn't remember anything. She figures it out soon though. Thanks for reading and reviewing. You where the first for this story. Thanks!!

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