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Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Such a sweet story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

I have truly loved and enjoyed reading your story. Loved their journey to happiness. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 39 - epilogue 3

Love how things are turning out for them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 38 - epilogue 2

I have always wonderedif we would ever see or hear from Jane again. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 37 - epilogue 1

Love this picture! !!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 36

4 epilogues?? Can't wait. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 35

If they know that they are it for each other why don't they just go ahead and get married. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 34

I just knew we were going to find out she was pregnant in this chapter.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 33

AgainI love Lainie.  She is sneaky. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 32

I'm glad they are taking things slow in front of Lainie.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

LOL!!!!!!!!!LOVE LITTLE  LAINIE! !!!!!!!! She is too funny.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 30

Love love love this chapter! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 29

Wild and crazy sex!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 28

FINALLY! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

I busted out laughing at Emmett 's comment.  Maybe they will have a little fun tonight without Lainie being there.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

Lol. Love that she takes him under. Glad that Edward had the support of his family. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

I just knew they were finally going to kiss this time.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

They are a family. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 23

II am thinking that Edward is checking on "his girls ".

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

I think they both want to be each other's  own personal  blankies. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

I knew the job offer was coming  but not the moving in . I did not expect that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

I knew she was going to have money problems come summer.  Maybe she can be Edward's babysitter.  Oh I mean Lainie's babysitter for the summer.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Lol. A slip here a little  slip there. Next it will be a kiss on the lips. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

I am glad Bella is getting better  but what is going on happen when summer gets here.  I know she can go back to the coffee shop but will it be enough.  It wasn't last time.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

I think Edward wants more than friendship. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

Can't wait to see how this goes. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, keep telling yourself that Edward. .......just friends.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

That is so sweet of Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad that Edward is so concerned about Bella's health. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 11

I am,so glad that she was honest with him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow,  85 pounds.  I have a friend that weighs that.  She is fighting several health problems herself.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

So Bella already knows Edward's mom. Interesting. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love that they can talk so easy to each other.  I am worried about Bella's health. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bless Bella's heart. She is just having bed luck. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

Now we know about Lainie's mom

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hope things get better for Bella quickly.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

I imagine Edward was a little  shocked with that conversation.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well, she pulls no punches. I am surprised she was so blunt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

I live a story with daddyward in it. Hope Lainey is really part of the story and not just mentioned every now and again. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Sarra Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

just amazing...and exactly what i needed to read!

thank you!! you're an amazing writer but i think you know that already!lol

can't wait to read more of your work!

love from france!

sarra

Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

I wish for all of us to be that happy.  This was a beautiful story.  I loved the ending but nearly cried, thinking of how little Lainie brought them together.  Sometimes when you're at your lowest is when your new beginning is on the near horizon.  That's why they say, "Never give up".  Thank you for sharing your talent with us.  Take care!

Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 31

That was priceless.  Lainie is so cute.  I'm glad these two finally got together.  Hurray!  Love your story.  Great job.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Wow so awesome its nice to read a story with no angst in it  ;) thanks so much for completing it ;D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

what a great story

 

sometime an angst free story is just what I need

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

poor Bella

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Wonderful story!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Thank-you so much for writing this wonderful story. I loved every single word. =) xoxo Kelly

I noticed that the review count doesn't add up to the reviews I submitted. I just wanted you to know that your story was appreciated, and that I reviewed every chapter and rated each one with a 10. =) Thanks again! I hope you even see this. O.o

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 36

=) I loved your story so much. I'm a romantic sap, and a sucker for your stories. I love the down and dirty ones too! ;) Thanks for writing. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh why does the doubt always creep in? I can't wait to see who makes the first move. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Just friends? Pffffft. We'll see how long that lasts. =) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

I actually got a bit teary eyed for her. Poor kid. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awww, he's such a good guy. =) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

Aww, poor starving Bella got sick. I should have known that was coming. Poor baby. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

How sad. Life sure can suck sometimes. I'm glad that Edward has full custody of Lainie, or who knows what could have happened. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Only the teacher, huh? That's what you think! teehee! =) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Cute, funny, and sweet. =) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Zing! xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love the name Lainie. :) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Loved it thanks so much!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 39 - epilogue 3

Sweet

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 38 - epilogue 2

Poor thing

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 - epilogue 1

<3

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 36

Wedding?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 35

Smart people never are smart about their BC. Sometimes

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 34

Ok pop the question now!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 33

I <3 lainie

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 32

They are sweet together!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 31

Love her!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

Hot!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yeah!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

Sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 27

Emmett is sooo right!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love rose and emmett

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 25

Come on open your eyes!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

Make your move!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

Sweet time!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

So close

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

Come on you two!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yeah!  Good thinking Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Funny...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Nope!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

Come on Ed you want her for more than that!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

Sweet :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Stop worrying about the age difference!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

You are a sweet smart man Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Esme to the rescue!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

How sad but I think she has found her knight in shining armor!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ed is sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh boy you better help her Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Kids hear a lot that we don't think they do

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

Children are so sweet poor girl...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Ed :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Come on Ed you need Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh Ed...

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