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Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 35

If I didn't know there was a sequel, I'd be dying right now.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the sequel :)

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 33

Good Lawd...I need a cool drink!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 32

I loved what Emmett said to her!!  So perfect.  I also like the less serious side of Edward Jake seems to be drawing out.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

Well done.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

So sweet.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

*sniff*

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well...blow me down (ha,ha).  Great job.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow...they're making progress.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Jake...a slave to his imprint.  I hope Edward gets on board with him.  Thank you for sharing this great story!

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh, that poor baby!  I'd love to give him a hug.  Great job, Lady!

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Things are progressing well!  Love it.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Jasper.  I hope they find him in time.  Great job.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

I knew he'd live...this story has 30-odd chapters, and it wouldn't be an E/J story if E died in chapter 9!!  Well done!

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Date: 30 Jul 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, poor Jacob!!  How awful.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see how this one plays out!  Great original idea!!

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 35

I loved this. Well, okay, so maybe not the ending -- it's still a bit raw to think about it from a writer's perspective yet. But the fic as a whole was beautiful. The slow-burn pace was perfect and so realistic and the reactions of both Jacob and Edward to the imprint were so in character. You wrote them and their relationship perfectly.

Now, I must go turn lights on. I've been sitting here in the dark for an hour because I didn't want to interrupt the story to get up.

Thank you so much for writing this. I can't wait to start on the sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and found the characters realistic. Hope you will enjoy the other parts of the story :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 35

Looking forward to the sequel. im so sad though.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, even though the ending was so sad. :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 34

This was so sad . It broke my heart.

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 29

Such beautifil vows, igot all chocked up. Love this story.

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's a relief!! :). Excited to read it!  

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 35

Well, I'm at least happy Jacob took that bitch Kate with him.  Please don't tell me they reattached her head!  I really have enjoyed this story until the last two chapters which just made me sad.  Since I'm indeed a glutton for punishment ;), I'll be sticking around for the sequel.  It does sound intriguing.  I'm crossing my fingers for a happy ending on the next one.  :)

 

Believe me when I say, I am okay, just sad about the boys ending.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it apart from the sad ending. They will get their HEA in the sequel, I promise :) I'm hoping to get the first chapter posted tomorrow.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hey, my email is rivera.mia@gmail.com, I didn't type it correctly in the other review, you can also find me on ff as Mina Rivera.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 35

Oh! You are writing a sequel! THAT'S AWSOME!

This chapter however was heartbreaking, but I'm glad Jacob took down Kate, the bitch deserved to die.

Looking forward to reading the sequel!

xoxo

Mina

PS. Do you want me to make you a banner for the sequel? I could put something siple and pretty like the one I did for this one if you want me to. If you got any pictures you would like me to use, don't be afraid to email me: river.mia@gmail.com

 



Author's Response:

Hi Mina

I'm glad you liked the end, even if it was heart-breaking. I loved writing this story and had planned that there would be a sequel before I started.

I would LOVE it if you could make me a banner please, I was actually trying to PM you on here earlier but I couldn't get it to work. I'll look for some pictures later on today. 

Thanks so much

Sarah

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 34

I'm so bummed!! :(



Author's Response:

Sorry it was such a sad one :(  Bear with me. One more chapter, but as impossible as it seems, there is a sequel ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm still crying... oh Edward... oh Jacob... oh Jasper... *wails*

Nah, just kidding... I'm a very tough cookie, so don't worry.



Author's Response:

Glad you are a tough cookie - one last chapter to go and it will be very sad too :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMFG! YOU KILLED EDWARD!

YOU BASTARD!

And that was my South Park moment...

Damn, girl... a warning would have been nice, y'know?

You owe me a box of tissues... js.

 



Author's Response:

Oh dear, I'm sorry :(  There was meant to be a warning as well, I had one on my Fanfic one but it didn't copy for some reason!  

More tissues will be needed for Chapter 35, which will be the last one. :(

 

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 33

What a way to christen the new home!!  ;)



Author's Response:

Hehe, the best way, I think!  Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 33

Now that's what I calla party. The alone part, not the one with all the people in the house... LOL

Mmm... I don't trust Kate, and honestly, I don't trust Rose either.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the private party ;)

Kate is definitely not one to be trusted! Hoping to have the next chapter up Thursday.

Sarah

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 32

Ugh, I really hate this Rosalie, I still don't trust her, I have no doubt she would turn her back on Edward and Jake the first chance she gets, that selfish bitch.

Can't wait to read happens next, the silence from teh Volturi has me worried, and lately I've been wondering if Alice is really dead... Rosalie was supposedly the one that saw her die, but did she really? what if the Volturi never burned her parts?

Or maybe I'm just reading too much into things...

Great chapter, hon.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews, glad you enjoyed the latest :)

 

The Volturi will make their presence know eventually, it's just a question of when ;)  Alice really is dead though.

 

Next chapter should be out in the next couple of days :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 31

Well shit, that was like a bucket of cold water... damn, I'm not liking your Carlisle, and I'm usually all over his junk! LOL

 



Author's Response:

He is being a bit of a jerk, but he'll get over it - some of them on both sides take longer to come around to it than others ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 30

Aw, that was perfect! Really, so happy they were able to share all that on their wedding night. I'm so happy for them!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed, I wanted them to have the perfect wedding night :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 31

The boys never seem to catch a break from the others except Jasper of course.



Author's Response:

They'll get a bit more support in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 30

Well, that was fun!  :)



Author's Response:

Hehe, glad you enjoyed! ;)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 29

That was beautiful!!

i totally missed this update until now.  :(



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved how Edward stood up to Carlisle!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

*swoon* That was perfect! :) Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

awwwwwww loved it!!!!!!!!! simple and sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

NOOOOO YOU TOTALLY COCKBLOCK US!!! *wails*

Nah, just kidding. That was beautiful actually. Their vows were perfet and I'm so happy Jasper was there for them.

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next one!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It was an awful place to leave it but I'm glad you enjoyed their wedding. 

Wedding night in the next chapter; hopefully it won't be too long :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 28

oh, I like that you made the vampires less indestructible. So Paul has done a 180, adn Rose is gone for the moment. I can't wait to read what happens next! xoxo ~Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Glad you liked this chapter. I decided that if wolf teeth can hurt a vampire then a bullet would certainly at least crack them. Wherever it hit it wouldn't really do any damage, just cause pain, but Edward taking it certainly got Paul over his attitude problem :)  Next chapter they will marry :D

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

I loved this chapter! Jake and Edward's love is so heartwarming. The way Jacob tried to keep Edward calm while Carlisle removed the bullet brought a smile to my face.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed this one. They will get married in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm so glad Edward is alright!  I didn't think he'd be harmed, I liked how you changed it up.  I'm also relieved Paul is finally laying off the boys!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. Wedding in the next one :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 27

Well, the others were pretty upsetting with the way they spoke to Jacob about what he wants.  The 3 vamps were awful to Jacob but I was worried he'd phase and kill one.  I hope things will work out with Edward and Jacob's plans.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. The next couple of chapters will be much happier for Edward & Jacob :)  Hopefully the next chapter will be out before Christmas.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 27

gotta love Jasper, the voice of reason and cupid himself, mr. emo man.....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I was pleased to bring Jasper back into the story :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

awww together at last......



Author's Response:

Thank you for readng - glad you're enjoying it so far :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

So sad.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

I really hope Paul doesn't bring trouble to Jake, that's the last thing he needs right now. And I wasn't expecting that little lemon zest at the end, but it was very wecomed! LOL

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Paul will pull himself together soon, promise! Glad you enjoyed the little lemon ;)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Paul disgusts me. Does he secretly want to be friends with a vampire or something because his hatred, when the Cullens have proved to be nothing but friendly, is odd and extremely misplaced. The rest of the pack is fine, but Paul continues to spew his hatred.

I'm glad Jake will be able to live at the Cullens and receive the support he needs. Seth was so adorable when he thought Jake might leave the pack.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Paul just needs to get over himself and he will before too much longer. :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm very happy to see most of the pack accepted Jacob's decision.  I'm also relieved that Jacob took the Cullen's up on their offer. :)



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing - glad that you liked the latest developments :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

I feel so bad for Jake. :(



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. He's really going to need Edward's comfort now :(

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 25

So sad for Jacob!  I'm so glad he has Edward.  :/

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Poor Jake, going to need plenty of comfort :(

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 24

Awww, poor Jacob!  I hope Billy will be okay.  :/



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Poor Jacob will have a hard time with Billy sick, but at least he has Edward at his side to help him deal :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 24

Poor Jacob! I'm glad Edward is there for him. I also like how the Cullens are more and more accepting of Jacob, especially Carlisle and Emmett. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; Jacob is going to need Edward's comfort with his Dad so sick :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh no.... Poor Billy, poor Jacob :'(

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what comes next.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Poor Jacob will be pretty anguished with his Dad so sick, but at least he has the comfort of Edward. Next chapter in a couple of days! :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

TOUCHDOWN! LOL Sorry, I had to say it ;)



Author's Response:

Hehehe! Excellent! :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 22

SO  VERY HOT HOT HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the next step of their relationsip :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 22

Excellent chapter!  The Cullens need to visit more often!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - they still have 3 more days to enjoy before the others get back at least :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Jacob and Edward are adorable! :) I'm glad Jake put Mike in his place. He's always so annoying and stupid.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I never liked Mike, haha :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

That really does suck for Jacob about his house.  As always, loving the boys getting even closer!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

Moving right along. How long will the pack leave them alone. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. The pack will be ok so long as Jacob being with Edward doesn't affect the tribe, but Jacob's going to be discussing things with some of the pack members soon ;)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

Aww! I'm so happy for them! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

well, that was... um, unexpected. Good and fucking hot, tho! LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed their step forward! :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

I really liked this chapter...a lot!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Finally they are moving forward :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

I was excited to see this update!  I like that Edward seems to be loosening up with Jacob even more.  More please?!?!??  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the update :) More to follow soon!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

So, baby steps, huh? God, what I wouldn't give to hear from Edward, such a mystery to what the hell is going through his mind!

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next.

~Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Baby steps indeed, it'll take them a while yet to get much further. 

Sarah

Reviewer: thesagalover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm so glad that didn't drag out between the guys.  Also, who'd of thought that Emmett would be the advise giver.  :)



Author's Response:

I didn't want to torment them long. Now they can move forward again. Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well, t least it was just a small freak out, I was afraid Edward would push Jake away. I'm glad he didn't.

Thanks for updating! Loved the chapter.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Ed's feeling the effects of the imprint too much for a major freak. Now they can get back to kissing :D

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow!  Love this story!!  I apologize for not reviewing before but I was so engrossed by the story I had to keep going.  I really like how you've progressed Edward and Jacob's relationship in a realistic way, even for imprinting...hehe!  :) That kiss was hot btw.

 

How often do you update?  I'm craving more already!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing, glad that you are enjoying the story so much. I am updating two or three times a week at the moment, sometimes a bit less as I am working on another story at the same time which is almost finished. I should have another chapter of this one posted tomorrow hopefully :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 17

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Jake. :(



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They will be ok again soon, Edward just needs to get his head straight (or NOT straight, haha).

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Aw, poor Jacob. Edward si just confused, I bet. Thanks for the update and I'm glad you liked the banner, though could I ask if you could please put somewhere in your summary the banner was made by Mina Rivera? Just so that people now that I made it and come to me if they want a banner too.

Can't wait to read more!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing - poor Edward still has part of his head stuck in 1918 and he's worrying about what people, especially his parents, would have thought of him. 

I'm just going to edit my summary now - so sorry for not just doing that as a matter of course, that was remiss of me. I do love the banner!

HL

xxx

 

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

My poor Jake! Hopefully Edward will start to feel the way J does. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Jake won't suffer for long, I promise.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loving the story so far, please tell me you will update soon! LOL

Btw, I made you a banner, but I don't know where to send it to, I can't PM you here, but here is a link of the banner so you can download it.

BANNER: http://i849.photobucket.com/albums/ab52/MayumiR/Banners/UWFbanner.jpg

Hope you like it!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much for going to such trouble! I really appreciate it, it's an awesome banner! Had a bit of trouble figuring out how to load it onto the story, but got there in the end! :D

 

Thank you for reviewing too, glad you are enjoying the story so far. I aim to update 2 or 3 times a week and am working on the next chapter today.

 

HL

xxx

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

Luving you story! All the twists and turns for this one have kept me wanting more! LOL!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, so happy you like it!

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

OH BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! Glad to hear that you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Lovingyou-4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Nooooo..... Don't stop here... 

Writing is super as always... Love your stories... Keep writing...



Author's Response:

I couldn't resist a small cliffhanger :) Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

THIS IS THE BEST STORY.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm happy you like it so much :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

GREAT STORY.



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE  LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :D

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

WOW, WHERE IS THE LITTLE PIXIE, WHEN YOU NEED HER.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

She will make a surprising appearance in the next chapter. Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

this is one of your best stories. i just love it. cant wait for the next update, keep up the goodwork!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you very much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so much :)  The next chapter is in progress at the moment, should be done in the next day or so.

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

What a way to tell his friend, crying out in pain. Damn! Im really liking this one keep it up. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

Looking forward to see where you take this one. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, hope you enjoy what I have planned :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love this story. Such an Intriguing idea.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm happy you like it :)

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